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Jaded_Girl Registered: Aug '01	Date Posted: 5/7/07 3:27pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/6/07
	I didn't bash him too much... did I? Oh, darn. Snaps fingers Oh no! You did much better than last time! Last time you bashed Jag to the degree that it made more-or-less neutral parties (such as myself, or at least, such as I was) rather uncomfortable. It is SOOOO much better this time! See? Applause! ---> Luke turned his head fractionally to the side. "It's starting." I abruptly imagined the two- and three-way conversations that he must have with Michiru and Setsuna. I mean, those three are all about the random, symbolic utterances that leave everyone around them scratching their heads. -_-; Tahiri's head tilted to the left and up, allowing her green eyes to look at Setsuna. "But you're not glad for the same reasons I'm glad.” It wasn’t a question. Yay for Tahiri's insight! ^_^ Michiru shook her head, sending her aquamarine hair bouncing about. "I don't care. I still owe you, and I'll pay you back somehow." She reached out and ran her fingers through the hair on Lowie's right arm. Holding her fingers to her chin in thought. "What sort of conditioner do you use?" Still one of the BEST lines in the ENTIRE fic!!! Zekk smirked. "Will you be all right in there?" Great line! As well as the two after it. Hotaru turned and looked back at her, her eyes turning ancient within seconds. shiver Creepy/cool! Sannah looked over at him and pointed to her yellow eyes. "I think I'll be right there with you two, unless those people can truly look me in the eye." It's anime Tokyo! You'll be fine! optimistic Michiru looked at him, uncertain if he was all right. She reached out to him through the Force and sent a mild probe into his mind-but she immediately hit a mental wall more powerful than any she'd ever encountered. She stumbled back and felt dizziness, but two strong hands broke her fall. That's right! Because Luke is THE MAN! Uh huh! does little "Luke is the awesomest" dance Up! We gotta "change" those men! ^_^ -----signature----- L/M since reading HttE in '96. The Avengers' battle cry is "Avengers Assemble!" The Fantastic Four's is "Johnny WAIT!" ~Mark Waid Jaded_Girl exits, pursued by a bear
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Noelie Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 5/7/07 4:31pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/6/07
	The Elven Jedi Master closed her eyes and shook her head. "No, Numa. You two must work together. A Jedi is never alone, and must learn to use teamwork to its fullest." She motioned back at the rock. "Please, work together, And lift this rock from the ground." Gee Whiz I wish the Jedi had thought this way at the Qui-Gon/Obi-Wan/Maul thingy. He slowly sat up. "I broke up a smuggling ring two weeks ago and, well, you won't believe it, but I teamed up with Boba Fett to take down some slavers," he chuckled. Jaina's brown eyes widened in surprise. "Boba Fett? You teamed up with that kriffin' lowlife scum?" She looked away from him and blinked, feeling moisture gather in her eyes. "I thought you weren't gonna be like him. I thought-" At leasst Jaina feels a great deal like I do! Michiru looked at him, uncertain if he was all right. She reached out to him through the Force and sent a mild probe into his mind-but she immediately hit a mental wall more powerful than any she'd ever encountered. She stumbled back and felt dizziness, but two strong hands broke her fall. I guess this little girl is learning some big lessons! Good update. -----signature----- The relationship that has been created in this unique universe is so memorable, and so beautiful. It makes the heart ache. As far as I'm concerned, it's canon.~Ratna on the Noelaverse Proud member of the UPR
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biganimefan Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 5/12/07 11:46pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/6/07
	Very nice update! So, Hotaru and Anakin are finally together again. That's great. Only problem I see is Tahiri. Just speaking as a Star Wars fan, I've really wanted Tahiri and Anakin to become a couple ever since I read the JJK books. However, this being a Sailor Moon/Star Wars story I see a lot more in common between Anakin and Hotaru. Partly due to the fact that the legacy both of them carry. Hotaru has the power to, quite easily, destory a planet. While Anakin will forever live with what happened to his grandfather with the same name. Not to mention that Anakin is definitely one of the more powerful jedi of his generation. Anyways, great update and look forward to more from you very soon!
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RK_Striker_JK_5 Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 5/13/07 5:25pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/6/07
	Taeniaea-Thank you! Noelie-Thank you for the bump. The Jedi will think that way when I rewrite the prequels. And yup, she's learning some big lessons. SSM12-Aww, thanks. I wish I could do it like in canon, too. But this way, it's actually almost a writing exercise. Yup, Hotaru's head-over-heels in love. Jaded_Girl-Okay, cool. Wipes forehead I'm glad I wrote him better, there. Yes, those three would seriously be cryptic. Ah... why is that one of the best lines in the fic? LOL! Glad you liked that line, there. Yeah, Sannah's got little problem belnding in. ANd Luke is the man. Imitates Jaded_Girl in her cool little dance baf-Thanks! yeah, Tahiri is a problem. Trust me, if it wasn't for Hotaru, Tahiri and Anakin would be together. Hotaru and Anakin just seemed to... fit, you know? Now, then... Luke, Setsuna and Michiru! The three sit down at a table, Michiru with tea, Setsuna with coffee and Luke with hot chocolate Michiru-The tea is disturbed. A storm is coming. Setsun-Time cannot be turned back. The storm cannot be stopped, but it can be survived. Luke-It must be survived, for there is no other reason. He takes a sip of hot chocolate Such is the fate of every member of Red Sox Nation. The camera pans back, revealing them in Red Sox jerseys and little pennants in their hands ;) Here we go! ***** Chapter Five: Unexpected Arrivals Two days later Luke and Mara stood and watched three Hapan cruisers descend through the atmosphere to the Great Temple. Two were Stinger-class patrol ships, while the third one was a modified passenger cruiser called the Steel Dragonp. Luke reached out with his mind and smiled as he felt both Jacen and Tenel Ka aboard. He sent his nephew a telepathic message. It's good to see you again, Jacen. A ‘reply‘ came almost immediately after. Hey, Uncle Luke! How is everything? I got some new jokes for you. Luke's face broke into a wide grin, causing Mara to look at him askance. "Is the prospect of more jokes from him that tortuous?" Luke shrugged. "I'm just glad to see that he's following my advice." The Steel Dragon opened up and Princess Tenel Ka and Jacen Solo disembarked. Mara noted that instead of her usual lizard-skin armor, Tenel Ka wore a pair of slacks and a dress shirt with her long, red hair tied up in a ponytail and a tiara resting on her forehead. Jacen also wore clothes more formal than his tastes, but he seemed a bit more at ease than Tenel Ka did. The Hapan princess walked over to Luke and Mara with long, purposeful strides and bowed in front of them. "Master Skywalker, Mistress Jade, it is good to see you again." Mara smirked as she returned the bow. "Is that a fact?" Tenel Ka half-smiled, showing a bit of her teeth. "Indeed, it is." She then turned her head and looked up at the two patrol vessels, contacting them with a comlink on her belt. "Vigilance, Watchdog, I shall no longer require your assistance. Please return to Hapes Prime under my authority." A female voice came over the tiny speaker grille. "Password, your majesty?" Tenel Ka sighed and rolled her eyes. "In the name of the Force, I shall punish you." Mara's eyebrow shot up in wry amusement at her password. "Have you done any punishing lately?" Tenel Ka turned to Mara, not quite meeting her eyes . "Ever since gaining Senshi powers, the Hapans have been treating me as a goddess incarnate, even though I haven’t transformed since gaining my new arm.” She held her arm up and clenched it, as if she didn’t know quite what to make of it. Jacen stepped up to his uncle and gave him a hug. "How are things here at the old folks home?" Luke let out a belly laugh, but his expression then took on one of seriousness. "We must hurry to the Grand Audience Chamber," he said before he and Mara turned around and speed-walked up the Great Temple's steps, followed by Jacen and Tenel Ka. He suddenly stopped in mid-stride, causing Jacen to bump into him and fall back. Tenel Ka's arms snaked out and caught her beloved before he struck the ancient steps and fractured his skull. Luke glanced up at the sky, a puzzled expression on his face. "What are they doing here?" he asked, his head tilting somewhat. Jacen got to his feet and looked at Luke with a puzzled expression on his face. "Uncle Luke, are you okay?" Luke nodded, then pointed to a shiny dot in the sky. Tenel Ka, Jacen and Mara tracked his finger to the rapidly growing dot. The three Jedi reached out with their senses and quickly discovered its identity. Mara's eyes lit up with confusion. "What's Leia, Han and Chewie doing here?" By now the it had grown into the distinctive disc shape of the light freighter Millennium Falcon. Luke's comlink chirped and he pressed a button on it. "Han, old buddy! What are you doing here?" The slightly rough voice of Han Solo came over loud and clear. "Hey, Luke! Ah, this is kinda odd. Maybe I better put Leia on." The voice switched from Han's rough voice to Leia's melodious tone. "Luke, this is gonna sound odd, but I've been having some odd dreams lately. Does the name 'Galaxia' mean anything to you?" Luke spoke again, clearly startled. "Please land and meet us in the Grand Audience Chamber, okay? Everything will be explained there." He turned back to the Great Temple, but paused before saying, "It'll be good to see you three again." And with that, they ran up the stairs to the meeting. ***** Five minutes later, Luke watched as Leia Organa Solo, Han Solo and Chewbacca walked into the Grand Audience Chamber. He, Mara, and Setsuna stood on the main stage while Jacen and Tenel Ka sat in the front row. Leia walked over up onto the stage and gave Luke a quick hug. "I'm glad to see you." Luke nodded and returned the hug before saying, "So am I." He motioned to Setsuna with a free hand. "Jacen and Tenel Ka were about to be filled in about a threat in the Senshi's home galaxy." Setsuna bowed to Leia, who returned the gesture. The guardian of time then turned to Han and Chewie and bowed to them as well. Han gave her a curt nod. "Ma'am, I'm not sure if it's good to see you again, but I'm glad you're well." Chewie barked his agreement. [Agreed, Honor Brother.] Setsuna cleared her throat, then began speaking. "Thank you.” Her ancient eyes, which have seen all, swept across everyone as she spoke. “In our reality, there too is a Dark Side. However, it has been embodied in an avatar known as Chaos. Chaos seeks the complete destruction of all that is good and pure. To that end, it has possessed the most powerful Senshi of our reality, Sailor Galaxia." At that, Tenel Ka spoke up. "It is a fact that the Dark Side can be combated, but not fully destroyed. Are you proposing we fight evil itself?" Setsuna shook her head, sending her dark green hair flowing around her head. "Chaos can be sealed away, but it is incredibly difficult. Galaxia has also gathered an army around herself, and we are outnumbered and outgunned." Tenel Ka stood up from the stone bench she sat on. "I shall aid you as you aided me." Jacen also stood up, his mouth a line. "I'm going too." He looked over at Tenel Ka with his brown eyes and abruptly smiled. "You can't get rid of me that easily." Leia cleared her throat. All eyes turned to her as she said, "I'll help." Setsuna paused for a moment. "Is that wise? Aren't you the Chief of State?" Leia simply chuckled and waved her off. "I resigned about a month after you all left. Triebakk of Kashyyyk is now Chief of State." Han abruptly raised his hand and waved it. "Ah, I'm not sure what's going on, but there's no way I'm staying behind." He turned to his wife and flashed her his trademark half-smile. "And don't even think about arguing." Leia shrugged. "I wouldn't think of it, honey." She stood up and kissed Han on the cheek, causing the former smuggler to blush. Her alert eyes then focused on Setsuna. "When do we leave?" Setsuna looked at Mara, who shrugged. "We're traveling to the hyperspace instability the Rock Dragon hit two years ago, so as soon as possible." Her emerald eyes flickered in amusement. "We were only going to take one ship, but now I think we'll need two." Leia's eyes suddenly glazed over and she stiffened visibly, causing Luke, Han and Jacen to scramble to her. "We'll need another ship." Leia's trance ended just as suddenly as it had begun. She blinked several times, then looked around at her family. "I hate Jedi visions," she mumbled. “Luke, how do you deal with this kriffin’ junk?” ***** An hour later, the Millennium Falcon and Jade Saber sat on the landing field, ready for launch. Han, Leia, Chewie, Jaina, Zekk, Michiru, Tahiri, Sannah, Jacen and Lusa would go on the Falcon, while Mara, Luke, Luna, Ami, Setsuna, Tionne, Haruka, Hotaru, Anakin, Tenel Ka and Lowie would ride on the Jade Saber. Mara and flipped a switch on the control panel, activating the comm. "Han, is that hunk of junk ready to fly?" A lour roar came over the speaker, causing Luke and Mara to both smile. "I'll take that as a yes," she deadpanned. She flipped some other switches on the panel and the Saber's engines powered up, sending vibrations through the ship. The sleek, gray-hulled cruiser lifted off the jungle floor, pointed straight up and shot into space. Han watched as his sister-in-law's ship exited the atmosphere before sitting back and turned to his copilot. "Everything set?" Jaina nodded excitedly. She loved piloting the Falcon, but she loved it even more when she flew with her father. She checked the instruments and gave him a thumbs up. “All set, Dad.” Han nodded and flicked a switch on the control panel, and the Falcon began hovering off the ground. The former smuggler pulled back on the control stick and shot his beloved freighter out of the atmosphere. The sky changed from blue to deep purple, then to endless black. Jaina did a quick scan of the surrounding area and found the Jade Saber right off port. She contacted the ship. "Jade Saber, this is Millennium Falcon. Do you copy?" Mara's voice came over. "This is Jade Saber. ETA to the anomaly?" Jaina thought for a moment. "It'll probably only be about two hours." She paused for a moment before saying, "See you on the other side." Mara nodded, then turned her head to the third occupant of the cockpit. "You ready?" Ami's blue eyes half-closed while she reviewed the hyperspace coordinates again before nodding. Mara smiled. "It's good to have a human navicomputer." Luke nodded, then turned around to the blue-haired genius. "Nice job, Ami." He then reached out and pulled down on the hyperspace activation levers. Outside, the stars turned to streaks of light, then turned into a reddish smear as the two ships entered hyperspace. ***** Anja Gallandro wiped away sweat from her brow. Her arms were coated with engine grease and her stung from engine fumes. Her ship, the Second Chance, hung in hyperspace like a wounded bantha. She slammed her hydrospanner to the deck in frustration and let out a strangled scream. It was all going so well, too! Anja was once a spice addict and in the employ of the Black Sun criminal organization. Then she met Jacen and Jaina Solo and, with their, help, freed herself from spice addiction and got a job running cargo for Lando Calrissian. She even had an apartment on Cloud City and was feeling at home there. And now her hyperdrive motivator had to fail during her trip to Coruscant and a well-deserved vacation… Shivers suddenly ran up and down her spine. She didn't know what it was, but she seemed to have the ability to get better and better deals lately. She also avoided a band of pirates in the Tatooine Sector-the first to do so in over a month. Anja brushed a lock of hair out of her eyes as she studied the burnt out hunk of metal once known as a KDY 3,000-series motivator. Anja rolled her eyes again, then got up and headed to the cockpit. She entered and checked the distress beacon, not knowing if anyone would be able to find her. The odds of rescue were infinitesimal, but she had to try nonetheless-no, as the Jedi would say, she had to do. Her eyes drifted over to the sensors-and widened as she saw not one, but two ships approaching. Anja let out a whoop of delight, then opened communications. "Approaching ships, this is the freighter Second Chance. Is there any chance you could help out a fellow spacer? Over." On board the Falcon, Jaina wrinkled her brow as she placed the voice. Finally, it came to her. "Anja, is that you?" The voice came over the comm again, this time with a mixture of surprise and happiness. "Jaina Solo? Holy nerf! Yeah, this is Anja. My hyperdrive motivator blew, and my ship's kinda stranded in space." Her voice took on a pleading tone. "I've got money to pay you, but not on me." A sudden clanging sound could be heard, followed by an exasperated, "oh, shavit…" Han suddenly spoke up. "Anja, this is Han Solo. What's going on?" Anja’s voice came on again, sounding desperate. "The cooling system’s just failed. This ship's gonna go up like a Corellian candle in three minutes! Is there any-what was that?" On the Second Chance, Anja looked out the viewport and saw what it was. "Anja, the Jade Saber is attempting to dock with you,” Han said. “I suggest you go there." On the doomed freighter, Anja nodded. "I hope I see you later," she said before dashing for the airlock. The lights flashed red, and the ship started shaking violently. She half-stumbled to the airlock and saw the indicator light go from red to green before slapping the door release and running into the connecting tube. On the other side, she found a woman in a dark red skirt with long, dark green hair and a piercing gaze. "I am Setsuna," she said. "Are you all right?" Anja nodded as she grabbed Setsuna by the shoulders. "I'm fine, now let's get the kriff out of here!" The two women ran out of the docking tube and, as soon as they were clear, Setsuna reached out with the Force and telekinetically closed the hatch and also shoved the dying freighter away. A half-minute later, the deck plating vibrated slightly with the impact of the Second Chance’s shockwave. Anja slumped down to the deck, unshed tears stinging her eyes as she felt her life's work sail away. In the Saber's cockpit, Mara contacted Setsuna. "Is she all right?" Deep in the hold, Setsuna activated her belt-mounted comlink. "She's fine physically. Mentally might be different." The guardian of time knelt down and placed a reassuring hand on Anja's shoulder. "I am sorry for your loss." Anja looked up into her dark green eyes and shrugged. "Ah, it's only a ship," she said, her voice quavering a bit. "I-I didn't even have time to customize it yet." With a sigh, she quickly got to her booted feet and held out her hand. "Thanks." Setsuna nodded and clasped Anja's hand. "You are welcome, but you might not want to thank us just yet. We're on an important mission and won't be able to-" She abruptly stopped talking and looked down, to her right. Anja tracked her movement and saw a small four-legged animal sitting there. It was all black, except for an odd crescent-shaped mark on the forehead. The animal walked up to Anja and sat down, staring at her with piercing yellow eyes. Anja shifted nervously. "Ah, does it usually do that?" she asked. Setsuna half-smiled. "Why don't you ask her?" Anja narrowed her brown eyes to slits. "Okay." She leaned forward and asked, "Do you usually stare at people?" To her surprise and utter shock, it spoke! "Sorry about that," Luna said. Anja stood up in shock. "Ah!" she screamed. Setsuna covered her face to hide her chuckling while Luna merely stared at Anja. I feel something from her. Could she be... ***** The Jade Saber accelerated away, on course for the anomaly. Ami checked the course. "We're two minutes away." Mara nodded and powered up the Jade Saber's weapons. "One proton torpedo ought to open that up, eh?" At Ami’s nod, she contacted the Falcon. "Han, we'll ready to open the anomaly and go through. Anja's safe, but it looks like we'll have to take her with us." As she spoke, the two ships approached a large, black splotch. It looked incredibly out of place against the red backdrop of hyperspace, making it an easy target for Mara. A single torpedo shot out and impacted the anomaly, splitting it open and letting both ships slip right through. Setsuna and Tenel Ka, meanwhile, filled Anja in on their mission. The three ladies sat in the main hold at a table with several ales in front of them. Anja took a swig from her mug and set it down-hard. "So we're off to an alternate reality, and you people are going to fight evil itself?" Tenel Ka nodded and took a sip from her ale before saying, "That is a fact." The ship vibrated slightly, and Mara's voice came over the intercom. "We've passed through the anomaly and have dropped out of hyperspace. Course set for Earth." Mara's voice suddenly came over again, this time laced with urgency. "Setsuna, Tenel Ka, Tionne, get to the cockpit!" Setsuna and Tenel Ka glanced at one another, then at Anja. "Go ahead," she said, waving them off. "I'm sure it's important scout business." Both Setsuna and Tenel Ka paused in mid-stride, turned back to Anja and simultaneously said. "It's Senshi, not scout." Tionne caught up with Setsuna and Tenel Ka outside of the cockpit, looking worried. "I feel something bad." The cockpit door slid open and Setsuna's green eyes widened as she saw Luke doubled over on the deck floor. His ice-blue eyes were shut tightly, and he mumbled constantly. Setsuna looked over at Mara, who was steering the Jade Saber towards a blue planet nearby. "He just let out a scream and collapsed," she mumbled. "I tried to help him, but he just…shut me out." Mara then motioned to Ami. "He whispered something to Ami about needing to get to Earth right away. We need to sailor teleport." Setsuna nodded, but then looked around. "Who would fly the ship, then?" Anja appeared in the hatch. "Need a pilot?" Mara motioned to the pilot's chair. "The course is set. Follow the Falcon in and you'll be fine. Just watch out for that space station in orbit." Mara’s brow furrowed. “Where did that come from?“ Ami spoke up from the aft of the cockpit. “It’s the Watchtower, headquarters for the JLU. J’onn J’onzz will be contacting us shortly” Anja sat down. “Okay, I’ll remember that.“ She then glanced at Luke, who was still curled up. "Is he all right?" Anja asked Mara. The former Emperor's Hand looked down at her husband with a scared and helpless look. "I don't know." The five ladies went into the hallway outside the cockpit. "I have these for you," Ami said, holding out four earpieces. "They're translators that will allow you to speak and understand Japanese." Mara took it and looked it over. "It's pretty small," she said in admiration just before fitting it into her ear. “Pretty comfortable too.“ Setsuna, Tionne, Mara, Ami and Tenel Ka then looked at each other and nodded. They held their right hands to the sky and concentrated, summoning their transformation wands. They then shouted to the heavens. "Pluto Crystal Power Makeup!" "Yavin Power Makeup!" "Coruscant Power Makeup!" "Mercury Crystal Power Makeup!" "Dathomir Star Power Makeup!" A bright light enveloped each woman. When it faded after a half-second, they were now Sailor Senshi, guardians of love, justice and the Force. They linked hands and concentrated on Earth. "I feel something," Sailor Mercury said. Her blue eyes suddenly looked to the deck plating. "Makoto and Minako are in trouble!" Sailor Coruscant nodded. "Can you sense where they are?" Ami closed her eyes and reached out. "Yes. We can teleport right there" All five Senshi joined hands and concentrated. A diffuse glow soon enveloped their bodies and an unnatural wind picked up. Anja stole a glance, then did a double take. "What the hell are you doing?" she exclaimed. Sailor Dathomir shouted. "Sailor…" And Anja's mouth opened as she spoke. "…Teleport!" The five Senshi vanished in a flash of light and Anja sat back in her seat, drained. She looked down at Luke and shivered. “Please heal, Master Skywalker…” A sudden beeping from the console surprised her. She turned back and noted an incoming signal from the watchtower. “Ah… this is-” A deep, melodic voice weighted with age emerged from the speaker grille. “This is J’onn J’onzz of the Justice League: Unlimited. Unidentified freighters, please state your name and reason for entering the Terran System.” Anja swallowed and gripped the control stick. “Ah, this is the… Jade Saber. We come in peace?” There was a pause before, “We have just detected a sailor teleport from your bridge, Jade Saber. That and my telepathic powers tell me that you’re allies. Please follow this course to a valley outside Tokyo. And good luck with your internal matter.” A small sigh escaped Anja’s lips as she steered the Saber through the atmosphere. Her eyes suddenly narrowed as a stray thought bounced around. “Wait… telepathic powers?” She opened a channel to the watchtower again, but J’onn spoke before she could say anything. “I’m a Martian. We're telepathic.” Anja closed the channel and leaned back in her seat, massaging her temple. “Don’t read my mind now,” she muttered. “You wouldn’t like my thoughts.” ***** To let everyone know, that'll probably be the last JLU reference in the fic. Please read and review. The next post will be on the 20th. Up! -----signature----- E-married to the wonderful DarthIshtar. Now also her Padawan. Member of the Y.J.K. Revolution Staring into the Darkness http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27537567/p1/?23
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Taeniaea Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 5/13/07 5:45pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/13/07
	I Love The story!! -----signature----- Light withinDarkness & DarknesswihinLight FireflyofDarkness aka Hotaru Tomoe also knowen as Sailor Saturn
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Stookymalarkey Registered: Apr '07	Date Posted: 5/13/07 9:06pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/13/07 - Date Edited: 5/13/07 9:08pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Stookymalarkey
	Dang it, no Batman?! Then again, if you did include 'em, then Superman would show up and squish the baddies faster than Megatron stomped Vergere. All well, at least this story/stories is moving quiet smoothly and is a fun read, even if I've never watched an episode of Sailor Moon. Good thing you opted for background info eh? BTW, when are you going to update Decepticon Rex (did I spell that right?) -----signature----- Do or do not, there is no spoon! Fanfiction: cause If George Lucas doesn't care about EU canon, why should you.
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SuperSaiyaMan12 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 5/13/07 10:27pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/13/07
	Nice convo with J'onn! Love the JLU cameos in this fic even more now. So now the GFFAers are back on Earth...I wonder what will happen when they discover that, thanks to Wayne Industries, Kryptonian Technology, Martian Knowhow, and Thanagarian Technology, Earth has developed their own Hyperdrive...? Anyway, awesome chapter. Loved every sentence of it, and it's cool to see Anja.
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Noelie Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 5/14/07 4:50pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/13/07
	You know ..with all of that mind-reading, force sensing ect skill going on.. what does a normal guy like Han do for fun in the midst of all the Jedi/Senshi? That just occurred to me with everyone either talking familiarly in their minds, or even folks that aren't part of the "group" reading minds. He can't hide very much lol -----signature----- The relationship that has been created in this unique universe is so memorable, and so beautiful. It makes the heart ache. As far as I'm concerned, it's canon.~Ratna on the Noelaverse Proud member of the UPR
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Jaded_Girl Registered: Aug '01	Date Posted: 5/15/07 6:35pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/13/07
	Awww! Luke, Michiru and Setsuna are baseball fans! How cute! Thanks for the amusing digression, Striker! ~A female voice came over the tiny speaker grille. "Password, your majesty?" ~Tenel Ka sighed and rolled her eyes. "In the name of the Force, I shall punish you." I'm not a nice person. Such character humiliation unhesitatingly puts a broad grin on my face. Jacen stepped up to his uncle and gave him a hug. "How are things here at the old folks home?" Impertinent whipper-snapper! The voice switched from Han's rough voice to Leia's melodious tone. "Luke, this is gonna sound odd, but I've been having some odd dreams lately. Does the name 'Galaxia' mean anything to you?" sigh The phrase "the Force is strong in my family" just keeps becoming more and more of an understatement... ^_^;;; Han gave her a curt nod. "Ma'am, I'm not sure if it's good to see you again, but I'm glad you're well." Perceptive. "Jaina Solo? Holy nerf! Okay, I had a "Cola-spitting" moment there... wipes off computer screen To let everyone know, that'll probably be the last JLU reference in the fic. Aw! But it was lovely to have what we had! "...We come in peace?" Ack! Poor opressed Luke! Must fix him quickly! And must know what is happening to Minako and Mako-chan! Hurry down before Kyp's future is ruined! Up! -----signature----- L/M since reading HttE in '96. The Avengers' battle cry is "Avengers Assemble!" The Fantastic Four's is "Johnny WAIT!" ~Mark Waid Jaded_Girl exits, pursued by a bear
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Earthknight Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 5/17/07 7:43pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/13/07
	Great update! The story is coming along smoothly . -----signature----- Master to jacensolofangirl2007 Our philosophy: We strive for a 100 in awesomeness. And if we get a 90, it's still cool. ~My Fanfiction Stories~ The Guardians of Light- http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=259245
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biganimefan Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 5/20/07 4:48pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/13/07
	Great post! I love it that Jacen never changes all that much, it's just how it should be. It's great that Tenel Ka is being treated like a goddess on Hapes. LOL! Great password! And since she is considered a goddess I wouldn't be to worried about the Hapans accepting Jacen. Besides...who would want an angry goddess? For the life of me though, I can't remember who Anja is...she's from YJK series right? Looking forward to more!
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RK_Striker_JK_5 Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 5/20/07 7:29pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/13/07
	Taeniaea-Thank you. Stooky-LOL. Nope, no Batman. Glad it makes sense to you, and by the time you read this, Rex will be updated already. It's every Tuesday for it. SSM12-Thanks. Yup, back on Earth. And shame they won't find out about that. Andn yeah, Anja's been rescued from EU limbo. Noelie-Han? He just sits back and is cool, like Han is. Jaded_Girl-LOL yup. It just made sense to me, there. Glad Tenel Ka's humiliation is amusing to you. Just a bit of an understatement there... And glad you like the reference, but I don't want the SM characters overshadowed, you know? Earthknight-Thank you. Smooth is good. baf-Thanks. Yeah, she's got it made mostly. Anaj'a from the YJK, yes. The final arc. She was a spice addict, but was cured with help from the YJK and Cilghal. IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENTS!!! PLEASE READ!!!!!!!! 1. The new novel Sacrifice is coming out. There are spoilers in the sticky thread in the lit. boards that are accessible. Now, please, no one post anything from the book!!! There are people here who I know are waiting to read it and don't want to be spoiled! I am serious here, folks. No spoilers period! Nothing, nada. 2. I ask that you refrain from posting spoilers about the older version of this fic as well. At least black them out. There are many people here who haven't read them and don't wish to be spoiled about what happens. Thank you. Here we go! ***** A war waged inside Luke‘s mind. From a spot in infinity, he observed a lone figure in the distance. The vaguely-humanoid shape approached, shifting from one form to another-first Darth Vader, then Lumiya, then Freedon Nadd. It eventually stopped taking on the shapes of Sith Lords and changed into a cruel-looking woman in a lavender dress with long, red hair and pointed ears. The figure spoke. "I have been waiting for someone like you, Luke Skywalker." Luke stared the being right in its red eyes. "Who are you?" he asked, his voice echoing strangely in the emptiness. The being shifted form again, this time into a beautiful woman clad in golden armor shaped rather like a Senshi uniform. "I am the alpha and the omega. I am life and death, but mostly death. I am Chaos." The being raised an arm and shot off a pulse of energy. Luke suddenly realized where he was. I'm in my mind. This is all taking place in my head. He abruptly raised his hands, deflecting the pulse away. Luke then concentrated and summoned his lightsaber. He ignited it, sending forth a brilliant green plasma blade. "You won't win!" he shouted. Chaos laughed. "You will not survive, scion of the Jedi. I shall scavenge your starseed from your body, just like I did my army." Luke's blue eyes widened as he realized the implications of that statement. Chaos stopped laughing as it realized that it let vital information slip. It scowled and raised its hands. "You shall die here!" it yelled before firing off a dozen energy blasts. They sped toward Luke, and all he could do was watch them fly right at him… "Luke, you all right?" Luke's eyes slowly opened. Blurry images danced before him, soon resolving into the form of Han, Leia and Chewie. Chewie barked out a question. [Is he all right?] "I don't know," Han answered. He suddenly wiped his eyes. "I'm just glad he's back." Leia bent down and wrapped her arms around Luke's neck for a hug. "Don't you ever do that again!" Luke rose to his feet and looked around. He stood in a field on a planet-Earth, he thought. The Millennium Falcon and Jade Saber were parked nearby, nestled between a set of hills. Everyone was there-no, everyone wasn't there. He did a quick scan through the Force and found five people missing. Leia picked up on his thoughts and cleared her throat. "Tionne, Mara, Setsuna, Ami and Tenel Ka did that teleport thing and are now in a city called Tokyo." Luke nodded. "We should find the other Senshi," he said. Han looked at his brother-in-law with a bit of skepticism. "Are you sure?" The Jedi Master nodded, still a bit wobbly on his feet but more steady with each passing moment. "The upcoming battle will prove to be a fine test of whether we can work together or not." He looked over at Michiru, who was emerging from the Millennium Falcon. "I also need information on something called 'starseeds'. Galaxia stole them from her army, and I feel that they're going to be very important in the coming war." ***** Ten minutes earlier Makoto and Minako walked down the streets of Jubaan, partially oblivious to the world around them. Minako yakked away on a cell phone with her agent. "I need to take the next two weeks off," she begged. "Please, Lee! I need some…personal time." Minako listened for a bit, then her blue eyes brightened. "Thanks!" She switched off her phone and looked at her friend. "I'll be free for two weeks, so we'll have plenty of time to beat Chaos!" Makoto nodded, then stretched and let out a sigh of exhaustion. Her right arm was in a light cast, and her leg still had a slight limp to it. Her eyes darted around furtively as she searched for Galaxia's army in the shadows of passing alleys. Suddenly, she stopped dead in her tracks. "Minako!" she whispered, pointing across the street. The blond singer stopped and looked where Makoto was pointing. She let out a swear before saying, "That's Petz!" Sure enough, the eldest Phantom Sister stood window shopping among the trendy clothing stores. Her sharp green eyes traveled from dress to dress, admiring all but buying none. Petz walked among the crowd, slipping past people in an almost casual hurry. Minako and Makoto dashed across the street, narrowly avoiding traffic. Makoto limped behind her friend. "Wait up!" she shouted. “My leg’s bum!“ The blond Senshi turned her head around and held a finger up to her mouth, shushing the taller and stronger Senshi of lightning. By the time they reached the opposite sidewalk, Petz had disappeared down an alleyway. Minako ran after her, followed by a still-limping Makoto. The second that they entered, both had a terrible feeling of dread. "This was a bad idea," Minako whispered. Makoto rolled her eyes. "You think?" She reached into her pocket and pulled out her communicator, but before she could open it, a leathery strand came out of nowhere and hit her right arm, knocking the communicator away. Minako turned around to the entrance of the alleyway. There, Berthier, Koan and Calaveras stood cutting off the entrance. Calaveras' whip was coiled around her left arm. "Whoops," she shrugged, uncoiling the whip again. "I was actually aiming for your throat." The two Senshi backed up before they held their arms to the sky and concentrated. An ornate rod appeared in each of their hands while Koan and Berthier stepped forward. They raised their arms and also concentrated, summoning their attacks. Koan's arms were wreathed in blue fire, while watery energy twirled around Berthier's lithe form. Minako shouted, "Venus Crystal Power Makeup!" Makoto simultaneously shouted, "Jupiter Crystal Power Makeup!" Both were enveloped in a column of light. Half a second later it faded, revealing Sailor Venus and Sailor Jupiter. They looked over just as a blue fireball and a dozen blue energy beams shot at them. The two Senshi leapt into the air, narrowly avoiding the attacks. Venus bounded to the rooftop of the building to their right, followed by Jupiter. The Senshi of lightning landed on the concrete roof and immediately rolled while Venus looked around-then froze. "Uh-oh." Jupiter's green eyes looked up at Venus, then slowly turned to where she was staring. “Uh-oh is an understatement, Minako.” Petz, En and Ali stood there. "Prepare to die!" Petz shouted. She raised her gloved fist and summoned onyx lightning bolts. At the same time, Berthier, Calaveras and Koan landed on the rooftop opposite of Petz and the aliens. "It looks like these two Senshi will die today," Berthier said coldly. Venus raised her arm and shouted, "Venus Love-Me Chain!" A golden chain appeared in the palm of her hand and she snapped it at the three Phantom Sisters. Meanwhile, Jupiter crossed her arms in front of her chest and shouted, "Supreme Thunder!" Bluish lightning bolts streamed across her gloved arms before shooting at Petz and the aliens. Ali and En raised their arms and concentrated, forming a translucent barrier around their team. Calaveras' whip intercepted Venus' chain and deflected it away, sending it into a maintenance shed and destroying it in a medium explosion. And Jupiter's lightning had even less success. The bolts skittered around En and Ali's shield, but the barrier held. Jupiter finally dropped her gloved arms in exhaustion and let out a ragged breath. "I can't keep it up," She panted. Petz sneered. "Good. Then you can die." She raised her gloved hand and shouted, "Dark Lightning!" En's violet eyes, meanwhile, narrowed as she clenched her fist and fired off a telekinetic shockwave. And at the other side of the rooftop, Koan's violet eyes widened as she shouted, "Dark Fire!" Blue flames leaped from her manicured hands and shot at Jupiter and Venus. Jupiter's eyes closed as she accepted her inevitable death… A few seconds later, Jupiter's green eyes opened up. Why aren't I dead? she thought. She suddenly tensed as a hand was placed on her shoulder. She looked up and saw Sailors Mercury and Pluto standing by her side. "It's good to see you again," Pluto smiled. Jupiter got to her feet and looked around at three unfamiliar Senshi also on the rooftop. Her mind slowly dredged up the name of one of them. "That's…Tenel Ka, right?" she asked, pointing to the redheaded Senshi in a red skirt and high heels. “Wait… what the hell’s up with your left arm?“ The Senshi of balance had her arms out in front of her that was projected a crystalline barrier a half-meter in front, deflecting Petz's lightning and En's shockwave. The left arm below the elbow had blue fire dancing around it, the flames arcing out before rebounding back into the arm. “I always wondered what would happen,” she grunted out as Petz’s lightning skittered across her barrier. On the opposite side, another Senshi held off Koan's fire. Her hair was similar to Sailor Dathomir's, but she was definitely older and had an even more intense look on her face-if that was possible. The barrier she formed was also different, a green hemisphere projected about a meter in front of her gloved hands. All three attacks finally ceased after a few minutes. Petz shouted at them, "Who the hell are you?" Berthier looked over them with her cold blue eyes and held her hand up to chin in thought. "I don't think that they're all human." She motioned to Sailor Yavin. "She has pointed ears and silvery eyes." Yavin smiled and unclipped her lightsaber. "Actually, I don't even know what my species is. And I don't care." She posed with one hand on her hips and pointed at Berthier with her blade. "I am the Senshi of wisdom, Sailor Yavin!" The other two Senshi dropped their shields. "I am the Senshi of balance. I am Sailor Dathomir," the younger redhead said. The final Senshi posed with her right hand on her forehead in a V-shape and her left in front of her chest. "I am Sailor Coruscant, the Senshi of hope! You shall never defeat us!" She looked to Jupiter and Venus. "Are you all right?" Venus nodded. “Yeah, but we've got to get Makoto out of here." Calaveras cracked her whip, sending out a sonic shockwave that buffeted the Senshi. "You're not going anywhere!" She cracked her whip again, winding it around Coruscant's hand. The former Emperor's Hand smirked, then leapt into the air and landed in front of the three Phantom Sisters. Coruscant's right fist coiled back before shooting forward and connecting with Berthier's chin, knocking out the evil genius. She turned to Calaveras and threw another punch, but it was deflected away. Calaveras grimaced, tightened her grip on her whip and sent an electric pulse through it. Yellowish tendrils of electricity wound their way around Coruscant's arm and her right side, sending her into spasms and dropping her to the floor with her groaning in pain. Yavin shouted, "Mara, no!" She crossed her arms in front of her and shouted, "Fog of Truth!" A gray cloud rose from the ground, enveloping Calaveras and Coruscant. Calaveras' brown eyes blinked as images sprang up around her. She saw her and her sisters when they were healed and leading happy lives as businesswomen. The grip on her whip slackened, allowing Sailor Coruscant to crawl away. Koan saw that and reached into the fog. "Calaveras, snap out of it!" she shouted, jostling her about by the shoulder. Suddenly, the bracelets Calaveras wore glowed brightly. Yavin's fog dissolved and the two Phantom Sisters strode forward. Venus raised her arm, pointed at Koan and yelled out, "Crescent Beam!" A golden-colored laser shot from her finger and struck Koan in the shoulder, spinning her around and dropping the youngest Phantom Sister right to the ground with a smoking hole in her body. Yavin nodded in approval. "Nice shot." Venus smiled, but that smile turned to shock as Koan rose to her feet. Koan glanced down at her rapidly healing shoulder wound. "That messed up my outfit!" she growled, violet eyes glowing with anger. Sailor Coruscant tried to get to her feet, but Calaveras sent another jolt of electricity through her whip. Ali and En focused on Sailor Dathomir and smirked. The elven beings raised their hands and fired off several more wavy telekinetic pulses at the redhead. The Hapan princess felt them coming and shouted, "Hapan Wall of Protection!" A translucent barrier formed around her and her friends again. She then concentrated for a second and then shouted, "Dathomir Heatwave!" Bluish flames streamed down her arm before collecting in her hand and erupting in a stream of fire that battered at their shield, blistering their arms. Petz clenched her fist tightly and snarled, "Dark Lightning!" Black bolts streamed from her fist and hit Dathomir's barrier, punching through and entwining around her gloved arms. Dathomir let out a shriek of pain as she went to one knee. Sailor Pluto saw her friend go down and snarled. She leveled her time staff at them and whispered, "Dead Scream." A roiling sphere of violet energy built up around the tip and shot off. Ali and En tried to deflect it away, but the energy plowed right through their weakened barrier and knocked them back like two rag dolls. Petz dodged out of the way and ran at Pluto. The Senshi fired off another Dead Scream, but Petz rolled to the left and dodged it. Before Pluto could react, Petz got to her feet and dashed at Pluto, her right hand connecting with her stomach and her left elbow cracking her jaw. Pluto's green eyes crossed, and blood streamed down her chin as she staggered back. Petz's green eyes flashed with malevolent glee as she grabbed Pluto's right arm and flipped her to the ground. Mercury's blue eyes glanced around quickly. Except for Yavin, Venus and herself, all the other Senshi were injured. The three slowly backed up. "You two have any ideas?" Venus said. Mercury tugged on her ear, activating her visor. She scanned the approaching Phantom Sisters and her mouth slowly opened in surprise at the data flowing across the translucent screen. She suddenly activated her lightsaber and jumped at Calaveras, Berthier and Koan, swinging her sapphire blade at them. "Hi-yah!" Venus blinked several times as Mercury launched her attack. "What's she doing?" she shouted. Yavin glanced at the approaching Petz. "I don't know, but we have to stop that woman." She raised her silvery lightsaber high and took a defensive stance. "You will not pass!" Petz bared her shiny white teeth in the smile of a predator as she cracked her knuckles. "What will you do, blind me with your fog?" Yavin lowered her lightsaber and stared ahead. Her silvery eyes looked around the rooftop. She's right. My Fog of Truth can't really stop her… I need more power! At that moment, Yavin felt an incredible surge of energy rush through her. Her entire body was engulfed in a diffuse glow. Mercury deflected an attack from Berthier and skewered Koan before glancing over and shouting, "That's your Star Power, Tionne! Summon your transformation wand and shout 'Yavin Star Power Makeup!'" The Elven Jedi nodded and concentrated for a half-second. Her transformation wand appeared before her and dissolved and reformed itself with a different style. She grabbed it and shouted, "Yavin Star Power Makeup!" A bright light engulfed the Senshi, and when it faded, Sailor Yavin stood there in a slightly altered Senshi uniform. The ribbon trailing from the small of her back was now double-pleated, and a small neckband encircled her neck. She pointed at Petz and said, "I am the Senshi of wisdom, Sailor Yavin. You have injured my friends, and I can't forgive you for that! In the name of the Force, I‘ll punish you." As she spoke, a silvery band of energy encircled her petite waist. It split off and wound its way around her arms and, when they reached her wrists, the glow faded, leaving two silver chains. Yavin deactivated her lightsaber and raised her arms, holding them palm up. Petz clenched both fists tightly and growled. "Dark Lightning!" Onyx bolts engulfed her before speeding off at Yavin and Venus. Sailor Yavin's mother-of-pearl eyes glittered as she spoke softly. "Chain of Annihilation!" The two chains rattled a bit before speeding off toward Petz. The chain from her left arm ended in a three-fingered claw, while the right ended in a spiraling drill bit. Petz gasped and shot off her lightning, but before the bolts could cross the relatively short distance, Yavin's chains reached her and sliced right through her uniform-and the flesh beneath. The Phantom Sister’s mouth opened in a soundless cry as the chains ripped into her flesh. Yavin's silvery eyes went wide in horror. She mentally recalled the chains "I go from fog to disemboweling my enemies?" she asked in disbelief. As the chains ripped free from Petz, the Phantom Sister dropped to the ground like a sack of dirt. Yavin turned back and looked at Venus, who had her hand over her mouth and was valiantly trying not to wretch. Across on the other side of the rooftop, Sailor Mercury glanced back over. "She's not dead! Heck, she wasn't even alive in the first place." Venus looked over as confusion shone in her eyes. "Ami, you might wanna rephrase that. Petz seemed quite alive to me." Mercury ducked a swing from Berthier, then impaled the Phantom Sister right in the stomach. Berthier's already pale face turned ashen as she fell to her knees. She pulled out her lightsaber from the wound and swung the plasma blade from side to side, striking the golden bracelets encircling Berthier's wrists. The bracelets splintered along the point of impact, shattering and clattering to the ground. Berthier's head dropped to her chest, and her breath came out in ragged gasps. "What's…happening to me?" she gasped out. A diffuse glow surrounded her rapidly fading body. Mercury kept her blue eyes glued onto the translucent Phantom Sister. "These…things have no starseed." She looked up at the shocked Koan and Calaveras and said, "You are all nothing more than empty shells. The real people are prisoners of Galaxia." Koan shook her head, sending her long, violet hair twirling about. "No, that's impossible!" Mercury's blue eyes flashed. "I'm sorry, but it's true." She motioned to Berthier-or rather, the spot where Berthier was. All that remained of the genius was a pair of shattered bracelets, their golden color fading to gray. Petz let out a strangled scream. "What did you do to my sister?" Anger swept over her face and entire being. "I'll kill you for that." Black-tinged lightning danced around her body, but it faded as two hands clasped her shoulders. She looked to her sides and saw En and Ali standing there. "We must regroup," En said. Petz looked back at the Senshi, twin trails of tears falling from her eyes. "I will have my vengeance," she said before vanishing along with Ali and En. Koan picked up Berthier's shattered bracelets before following her elder sister. Calaveras glanced at Sailor Mercury. "Thank you," she whispered before teleporting out of there. Mercury's eyes widened in shock. "'Thank you'?" She looked over at Coruscant, who was lying on the floor. She hurried over and knelt beside her. "Are you all right?" Coruscant let out a grunt as she sat up. The former Emperor's Hand slipped into a partial healing trance, leaving her conscious. "I‘ve been through worse. Go check on everyone else." Mercury nodded before running off to her friends. Sailor Dathomir knelt beside Jupiter and looked up at the approaching Senshi. "She is weak, but other than that, I believe she'll be fine." Mercury nodded and looked up at the approaching Sailor Pluto. The Senshi of time was massaging her aching jaw, but she appeared fine otherwise. "Our enemy has no soul," she said. It wasn’t a question. Mercury nodded. "Yes. It appears that Chaos will stop at nothing." Dathomir rose to her feet, a puzzled expression on her regal face. "I am sorry, friend Ami, but what is a starseed?" The blue-haired genius thought for a second. How could you put something so esoteric into words? After a minute, she began talking. "A starseed is your soul after it has been removed from your body, but it has yet to become one with the Force. If it is removed from the body, the body dissolves like Berthier's did." She paused for a second to gather her thoughts before continuing. "However, the starseed can manifest a new body for itself if freed from whatever prison it was put into. The problem is finding it." Dathomir nodded. "Ah, aha. So all we must do is find Galaxia, take out her army, seal away Chaos and then release the starseeds." Mercury nodded. "That is a fact, Tenel Ka." Sailors Venus and Yavin walked over, Both ladies chatting up a storm. "So you're a teacher? But you seem so cool." Yavin shrugged. "The students feel the same way, sometimes." She looked over at the group. "Is everyone all right?" Coruscant shouted from her position. "I'm fine. Say, will I get a neat chain like that when I hit Star Power?" Yavin glanced over, her eyes glassy. "Perhaps you'll be able to control it better than I did mine." Mercury spoke up, her head shaking. "It doesn't matter. I don't think we have to hold back against the enemy now." Venus nodded. "Right." She suddenly looked up and began walking to the edge of the rooftop. "Someone's out there," she murmured. She turned back and raised a clenched fist. "We must go to them!" All six Senshi looked at Venus, then looked at each other. "Do you have any idea what she's talking about?" Yavin asked Pluto. Pluto shrugged as she picked up the time staff. "Not even I can puzzle out what Minako says at times." Coruscant levered her self to her feet and concentrated. A bright green light engulfed her as she reverted back to Mara Jade Skywalker. "Come on," she said, motioning to a ladder protruding from the fire escape. "I wanna find out where Luke and the others are." She gingerly stepped over the side and began climbing down. Dathomir looked around, then quickly reverted back to Tenel Ka. Everyone else soon followed, leaving Sailor Venus behind for a minute. "Hey, wait for me!" she shouted, scrambling over to the fire escape. ***** Please read and review. The next post will be on the 27th. Up! -----signature----- E-married to the wonderful DarthIshtar. Now also her Padawan. Member of the Y.J.K. Revolution Staring into the Darkness http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27537567/p1/?23
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Taeniaea Registered: Feb '07	Date Posted: 5/21/07 5:41am Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/20/07
	I Love The Story!!! -----signature----- Light withinDarkness & DarknesswihinLight FireflyofDarkness aka Hotaru Tomoe also knowen as Sailor Saturn
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Stookymalarkey Registered: Apr '07	Date Posted: 5/21/07 8:05am Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/20/07
	Nice action sequence but my only gripe is that you underused the lightsabers in that sequence, which is a shame since it's a really potent weapon against the projectiles being fired out, especially the lightning. Other than that, keep up the good work. -----signature----- Do or do not, there is no spoon! Fanfiction: cause If George Lucas doesn't care about EU canon, why should you.
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Noelie Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 5/21/07 7:15pm Subject: RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/20/07
	Well I for one promise not to tell anything A better response will follow in a couple of days thanks for the PM! -----signature----- The relationship that has been created in this unique universe is so memorable, and so beautiful. It makes the heart ache. As far as I'm concerned, it's canon.~Ratna on the Noelaverse Proud member of the UPR
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