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SilSolo 
Registered: Mar '04
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Date Posted: 11/17/06 1:41pm Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 6 is up 11-17-06
Oooh butt-kicking

 

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CassaSoloDaughterOfA 
Registered: Jul '06
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Date Posted: 11/17/06 10:08pm Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 6 is up 11-17-06
It appears that Leia butt kicker is on the move... grin

 

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Healer_Leona 
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Registered: Jul '00
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Date Posted: 11/18/06 1:33am Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 6 is up 11-17-06
Gah, miss a post. Only good thing about it is getting to read more than one.

Ha, love the idea of Leia undercover. grin grin

 

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Darkwriter 
Registered: Jan '06
Date Posted: 11/18/06 12:58pm Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 6 is up 11-17-06
Going great so far!

 

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Courtney_Solo 
Registered: May '05
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Date Posted: 11/20/06 4:55pm Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 6 is up 11-17-06
Wow, great update!
Can't wait for more! grin

 

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ZebulaNebula 
Registered: Feb '05
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Date Posted: 11/21/06 9:58am Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 6 is up 11-17-06
RK_Striker_JK_5 posted:
Self-sealing stem bolts? laugh laugh laugh

Hmm, Leia on an infiltration mission. Aesomeness. And glad to hear it won't be too one-sided. Always a plus.


I knew you'd get a kick outta the stem bolts ... and besides, it wouldn't be my work without in-jokes out the wazoo. Leia's mission will be getting interesting real soon. And you'll soon find out why the battle was one-sided, or at least part of it.

SilSolo posted:
Oooh butt-kicking


Well, there's plenty more where that came from.

CassaSoloDaughterOfA posted:
It appears that Leia butt kicker is on the move... grin


Yeah, and pulling a 007 to boot.

Healer_Leona posted:
Gah, miss a post. Only good thing about it is getting to read more than one.

Ha, love the idea of Leia undercover. grin grin


No worries. And with me posting irregularly, it's all too easy to miss. You won't be disappointed with Leia's mission.

Darkwriter posted:
Going great so far!


Thanks.

Courtney_Solo posted:
Wow, great update!
Can't wait for more! grin



You won't wait long. I'm on a roll.

 

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ZebulaNebula 
Registered: Feb '05
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Date Posted: 11/21/06 10:51am Subject: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 7 is up 11-21-06
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Season of Pain

Chapter Seven: All too Easy

"That's more than enough candles, Ben. You'll set off the fire suppression system if you light any more." Zoe Afyon scowled at her best friend, frustrated at his antics. "What is it with you and fire?"

"I like fire, and it likes me." Ben grinned mischievously as he telekinetically accelerated the molecules in the air near another taper, causing the wick to sprout into flame. "Nobody else can control it like I can."

"Maybe that's because you're such a hothead." Rolling her black eyes, Zoe sighed. "You really need to cool down." The door chime interrupted the argument, much to Zoe's relief. "Enter."

Jacen and Tenel Ka walked into the stateroom, taking the seats the adolescent apprentices offered them. After a brief exchange of pleasantries, Tenel Ka voiced the reason for the visit. "During yesterday's battle, I felt a strange sensation, almost as if someone were trying to boost my skill and confidence, a sensation felt also by Jacen and Master Durron. I was wondering if you felt it as well, my padawan."

"No, master." Zoe replied, her puzzlement evident on her round face.

"What were you doing during the battle?" Jacen asked gently.

"I got scared and was meditating." Fidgeting nervously with her jet black hair, the girl answered. "But my meditation did not go normally, all I could think about was the battle and how it was going."

"Fascinating," Tenel Ka responded, raising an eyebrow. "I think you may have a rare gift, young one. I'm sure you've heard of Battle Meditation, and it's ability to affect entire armies. It seems you instinctively used it yesterday, allowing for the ease of our victory."

"But ... how can that be ... Battle Meditation is something out of legends and ballads. No Jedi is said to have used it in centuries ... and it never manifest itself in one as young as me." Eyes wide with disbelief, the apprentice gasped every word.

"And that is why you must learn to use your gift more effectively." Jacen managed. "To waste this would be criminal."

"Lucky you, Zoe." Ben chimed in, irreverent. "You get to play with vast fleets ... all I get is the power to burn stuff."



 

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Healer_Leona 
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Date Posted: 11/21/06 11:17am Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 7 is up 11-21-06
Battle Meditation?? That's quite the Force gift! shock Would come in most hadny for the Republic.

"Lucky you, Zoe." Ben chimed in, irreverent. "You get to play with vast fleets ... all I get is the power to burn stuff."



LOO, sassy Ben.

 

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SilSolo 
Registered: Mar '04
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Date Posted: 11/21/06 1:04pm Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 7 is up 11-21-06
Looks like Jacen's got himself another student

 

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RK_Striker_JK_5 
Registered: Jul '03
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Date Posted: 11/21/06 2:49pm Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 7 is up 11-21-06
Ben's a pyro... that struck me as funny, for some reason.

Yes, your injokes, as usual, rock heavily. And Zoe's got battle meditation. Cool! She'd better get that trained up right.

Awesome, dude. As always.

 

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CassaSoloDaughterOfA 
Registered: Jul '06
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Date Posted: 11/21/06 4:47pm Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 7 is up 11-21-06
*headdesk*

Ben's a pyro...and Zoe gets the rare and special talent of increasing a fleet's abilities through meditation..Ben's a hothead...Zoe is a mellow wise and young acheiver. These two are gonna end to together aren't they?

 

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ZebulaNebula 
Registered: Feb '05
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Date Posted: 11/21/06 8:45pm Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 7 is up 11-21-06
Healer_Leona posted:
Battle Meditation?? That's quite the Force gift! shock Would come in most hadny for the Republic.

"Lucky you, Zoe." Ben chimed in, irreverent. "You get to play with vast fleets ... all I get is the power to burn stuff."



LOO, sassy Ben.



Indeed, and it will be quite useful. And yeah, Ben's developed a smart-mouth sense of humor.

SilSolo posted:
Looks like Jacen's got himself another student


Not really, Zoe's still Tenel Ka's padawan.

RK_Striker_JK_5 posted:
Ben's a pyro... that struck me as funny, for some reason.

Yes, your injokes, as usual, rock heavily. And Zoe's got battle meditation. Cool! She'd better get that trained up right.

Awesome, dude. As always.


I've always seen Ben as a pyro ... heck, I've written him fishing with explosives before. Thanks ... glad someone's enjoying them. J/TK are gonna train Zoe's Battle Meditation any way they know how ... along with a little help from Kyp and Cheriss.

CassaSoloDaughterOfA posted:
*headdesk*

Ben's a pyro...and Zoe gets the rare and special talent of increasing a fleet's abilities through meditation..Ben's a hothead...Zoe is a mellow wise and young acheiver. These two are gonna end to together aren't they?


Yeah ... but not right away. I created them to balance each other perfectly.

 

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Earthknight 
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Date Posted: 11/22/06 1:37am Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 7 is up 11-21-06
I read both chapters. I loved them both. It's good to see Leia getting in on the action. And Ben being a pyro is interesting. I have to say I'm quite intrigued by Ben thinking . I can't wait to see where you take his character.

Anyway, good job, Zeb!

 

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Darkwriter 
Registered: Jan '06
Date Posted: 11/22/06 3:51pm Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 7 is up 11-21-06
Ooh, Zoe and Ben get cool powers. Zoe's gift is fascinating, really cool, but honestly I'd rather have Ben's gift...maybe becuase most of my friends are distined to be future arsenists.

Great chapter!


Janet

 

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Courtney_Solo 
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Date Posted: 11/24/06 7:47am Subject: RE: Renewal III: Season of Pain chapter 7 is up 11-21-06
"Lucky you, Zoe." Ben chimed in, irreverent. "You get to play with vast fleets ... all I get is the power to burn stuff."

laugh

 

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