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Author	Topic: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Short Story - Far-Future Romance ~COMPLETED 12/15~
Jedi-Jade Registered: Nov '99	Date Posted: 10/31/06 11:56am Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	That was such a sweet post! Great job. -----signature----- Nov. 19th
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jaynasolofel Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 10/31/06 1:24pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	Voz, By the way, I forgot to mention that I checked out that song after you replied -- it is so perfect for them. Another emotional update, I am impressed with "older" Jaina and her ability to let go of her worries (now there is a lesson I have to repeatedly re-learn). Also, her speech on what went wrong and how it no longer mattered was fitting... certainly after 30 years they have let it go. Yet, the tension leading up to it was right, too. Awesome work with the setting and details, sounds like the dream dinner date to me. It is so nice to see my favorite SW character receive a little "wooing", who would have thought it? I can't wait to see where this goes.... 'noon jaYna -----signature----- Marriage is not the end.... they have an Empire to build.
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darkladypurplepencil Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 10/31/06 1:34pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	Love it! The Morning After... YAY!!!! I can't wait! DL Purple Pencil -----signature----- Dark Lady Purple Pencil and her EVIL Penguin Minions salute you! I am the Ultimate Ninjedi smell of the grease paint, roar of the crowd. Proud to be a Hoosier http://www.playlist.com/playlist/15832398347
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JainaJag14 Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 10/31/06 1:55pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	That was beautifully written TT. The description of dinner was great, and their transition to dancing was perfect. I loved it. I can't wait for the next post. Thanks for the PM. -----signature----- Jagged Fel will rise again! Proud 'shipper of J/J, Benella, and Siriwan Anything is possible... Just Enough (AU, J/J) http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24966015/p1/?7
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oldjedinurse Registered: Oct '03	Date Posted: 10/31/06 3:56pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~ - Date Edited: 10/31/06 3:57pm (1 edits total) Edited By: oldjedinurse
	Voz, you've captured a perfect evening--a reunion befitting two aging lovers long parted. There is a maturity to your writing that is just right for your middle-aged J/J and you continue to capture their emotions so very well. Bravo!! I'll be watching for more! oldj -----signature----- Confidence is the feeling you have before you understand the situation.
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 10/31/06 5:33pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	This is excellent. When is he going to introduce her to the kids? I wonder how his son will react? We haven't seen much of him. -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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Lyne Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 10/31/06 7:39pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~ - Date Edited: 10/31/06 7:40pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Lyne
	Aww, I think I smiled all through this post. They definitely interacted in this post didn't they.
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padawanlost Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 10/31/06 8:47pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	Wonderful update! I loved Jaina thinking of her mother as she looked for something to wear. I'm glad she learned to appreciate some of Leia's less-Jedi talents as she grew older. I loved Leia's advice on picking dresses You have captured their mature selves very well. I appreciate how much you consideration you've given their adult personalities. I can't wait to see what the morning brings them -----signature----- Proud member of Charon Force. Check out our NJO AU: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27537567/p1/?23
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Master_Vicky Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 10/31/06 11:22pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	Am I the only one who has a bad feeling about the morning after? For some reason I can't help but think something might go wrong. I hope I'm just being overly paranoid. -Vicster -----signature----- "Don't tell me it's not possible." FDR in Pearl Harbor "I am a Band nerd. I just never joined Band." Jim in American Pie 2 Band is a contact sport. The Conductor of TKL's Lomin Ale Wraiths God loves you.
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darth_dragon666 Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 11/1/06 4:36am Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	NIce one of the best J/Js i ever read -----signature----- Star wars was simple when-Jacen wasn't all weird-Anakin was alive (and with Tahiri)-and when Jaina was with Jag I ship A/T, J/TK(rarely), J/J, Benella, Im finally bacdk after a i think 10-6 month hiatus
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Solo_and_Fel Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 11/1/06 3:49pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	oldj's right... You definitely do have an air of maturity wafting through this story. Not only was that very sweet, but I found it very well metered. They took their time getting close again, but it wasn't so long that I felt a need to yell at either of them. And there's a bit of a subtly to the whole thing. I'm curious to see if Jag and Jaina cross paths again in the upcoming profic and if so, what their reactions will be to each other.... or if it is really going to take them 30 years to be able to say "that's all in the past." Nice job again. -----signature----- "Hurling black lightning is one thing, but quoting Kyp Durron puts me lower than I ever expected to get." To Suffer & Be Strong: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28435487&brd=10477 Check profile for more fics.
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G__Anakin Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 11/1/06 4:35pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	-----signature----- Master to tahiriveilax - - - My fanfic - - - Fate of the Jedi - Abyss : http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/30246540/p1/ Yeah, I used the real title for the next book. Beware Omen Spoilers.
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Madame_Solo Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 11/1/06 8:22pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	Ah Voz, this story is adorable!! I agree with Oldj, you definitly have this maturity sound in your writing which is perfect! As I read this story I kept thinking of Oldj's drawing of an aged Jaina and Jag, it just so beautifully reflects their age. I would love to added to your PM list if you don't mind Can't wait for more! -Flygirl -----signature----- See my profile for my fanfiction writings ^-^ I am happy to be the Padawan of TKeira_Lea! Take that! Jag's back
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Chimpo_the_Sith Title: FanForce CR FF Poland Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 11/2/06 7:06am Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Far-Future Romance ~UPDATED 10/31!!~
	Well I see that they started consuming their reunion I can't wait to read about morning after Great story so far -----signature----- You can read this? Good you don't need glasses
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TelannaTani Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 11/2/06 3:28pm Subject: RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Short Story - Far-Future Romance ~Author replies 11/2~
	Wow, everyone. I am continually amazed and honored by the response to this story! I hope I can keep up the good work and don’t disappoint you! From the bottom of my heart, thank you for reading! Replies: Verybusy: Thank you so much for reading, VB. I’m so glad you like it! Jedi-Jade: Thanks! I’m glad you liked it. Jaynasolofel: By the way, I forgot to mention that I checked out that song after you replied -- it is so perfect for them. I’m glad you looked it up. I’m contemplating including the various songs that inspire these chapters in the author’s notes, just as an added bonus. Knowing that you looked up the song encourages that line of thought. What do you think? Thank you for your kind words. I’m glad to see them get a bit of whooing too, even if it’s long over-due in this story. I’m just not sure you’re going to like where it goes next… Darkladypurplepencil: I’m glad you like it! I just hope you’re still enthusiastic after this next post… JainaJag14: The description of dinner was great, and their transition to dancing was perfect. I loved it. Thank you! I was actually concerned about that particular tranisition, so it’s great to know that it worked. And you’re very welcome on the PM. Thanks for wanting it! Oldjedinurse: Thank you so much for your kind comments, Oldj. It’s so wonderful to know that the maturity they have here shines through my writing. That’s such a great compliment – I am truly honored. Thanks again for reading. I hope you like this next post. It’s very… mature, even if it’s not our ideal turn of events. Ccp: Thanks for your comments, Cowboy. I’m glad you’re liking it. You actually helped me through a bit of writer’s block I was experiencing in writing the last few posts to this story. Thanks for the help!! Lyne: Glad to see someone shared my smile. And yes, there was some DEFINITE interaction, huh! You called it… Thanks for reading! Padawanlost: Yeah, I have to admit, the dress bit was an idea adapted from some advice from my leadership teacher, way back in high school. Whenever we asked how long an essay should be, he would always respond with this: “An essay should be like a good dress. Long enough to cover the important parts and short enough to keep your attention.” It’s always stuck with me and so I was excited to include it! Thank you for your comments, compliments and continued patronage. And I hope you like the morning… Master_Vicky: No comment. I’ve said enough. Darth_dragon: Wow! Thank you for such high praise. I’m so honored. Thank you for taking the time to read. I hope you continue to enjoy this story. Solo_and_Fel: Thank you for you kind words. I can’t tell you how much they mean to me. Not only was that very sweet, but I found it very well metered. They took their time getting close again, but it wasn't so long that I felt a need to yell at either of them. And there's a bit of a subtly to the whole thing. I’m so glad you think so. I was worried about that, and put a lot of thought into it. Just how fast was too fast? Well, that’s a question that’s yet to be answered, I think. Time will tell. I too can’t wait until they meet again in Profic. Jag’s way to cool of a character for them to give up, IMO. And the Legacy comics made the reunion promising… Thanks for reading! G_Anakin: A man of few words, I see. Nonetheless, your response is just as appreciated. Thanks for reading! Madame_Solo: A new reader! Thanks for stopping by, Flygirl! I can’t believe you all love this so much. It’s so great to see an idea and story you’ve harbored in your head and heart for so long be enjoyed by others, isn’t it? And I thought of Oldj’s drawing too! Pretty fitting, huh?! You’ve definitely been added to the PM list! Chimpo: Comsuming or Comsumating the reunion?? Maybe a bit of both? The morning should definitely be interesting. Thanks for reading! Again, thank you guys for reading. I’m so honored by your comments and responses. Thank you for sticking with it. I can say with reasonable certainty that we’re about half way through, so there’s lots left to come! Look for more tomorrow. Telanna’tani -----signature----- John 8:31-32 Callsign: "Voz" Padawan to BigFatty
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