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All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Short Story - Far-Future Romance *~COMPLETED 12/15~*
verybusy
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Date Posted:
12/1/06 5:18am
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RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Short Story - Far-Future Romance *~UPDATED 11/29~*
Great update....
I really loved the conversation between Gavin and Jaina and I really like it that you let them work this out before she is meeting with Jag again.
Anyway, I cannot wqait for the next update now
....
cheers,
veryBusy
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TelannaTani
,
OOOO I loved the Gavin/Jaina scene, I really enjoy that the tension here is the emotional type over that from imminent peril, yet all the details and tech really make it feel so SW. And good for Gavin to not be won over by one conversation, but for Jaina's sake I hope he does eventually accept her.
Watch out Jag... you buy a
Falcon
class (loved that) ship - you are always going to need a Solo to fix it.
Wonderful update.
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TT
Loads of good details here. From the post before which was a great introduction to the rest of Jag's family--Cala's nuances was a great addition. Nothing breaks the ice better than a child..
As for the talk between Jaina and Gavin---details again, the rellafield is great, as well the discussion about having a means of protecting Jedi agains the Sith.
I can't wait for the Jaina Jag discussion.
Awesome job
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Score one for Jaina! Well, two actually. She stuck it to Gavin and got to see Jag. Woot!
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So tired.
Can't post, must sleep. *large yawn*
Post first thing tomorrow. Thanks for your patience!
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Replies!
Lyne:
Thank you! It's always great to hear that I'm being realistic about it. Because most of the time I'm not sure I am. So that's great encouragement. Thanks for stopping by.
JainaJag14:
Well, Jag at least. More details in the next post. As for Jaina and Gavin, I think it did, but we'll have to see. As for the last line, it was totally unintentional; just kinda showed up. I think it turned out well! Thanks reading - we're almost done!
ccp:
Thanks, Cowboy. I don't think rolling over is in the nature of any Fel man. Thanks for reading.
Solo_and_Fel:
Wow, thanks for the great compliment. I hope you feel the same way now that I've made you wait an extra day. I was just WAY to wiped to post last night. Doing these replies is important to me - and I still needed to tweak the post. What I think is funny about Gavin and Jaina is they are actually a lot alike - which is why they butt heads. And I'm glad the technology came off without being cheesy. I always have enjoyed the technicaly aspect of SW and wanted to incorporate a little of that.
As for the ending, I have to have SOME sort of cliffy.
Without action, we'd all be bored without it. Don't worry, we're nearing the end, so not much more to go!
oldjedinurse:
Why thank you! That something we have in common then. When I write, I am trying to describe to you the movie running through my mind's eye. If you join me in the "theater" then I've done my job. That's great to hear!
Yes, I think Jag has a LOT of explaining to do. One reason I haven't posted yet. It still needs... tweaking. Thanks for your continued support!
padawanlost:
Well worth the wait!
Thank you!!
Jaina had a great point: there isn't anyone in the galaxy better qualified to deal with a stubborn Corelian than she is.
Exactly my thinking!
Interesting little hideaway the Fel's have built here. Great details on the shield, and I loved the hint of pride in Gavin's voice as he described it to Jaina. I wonder where this is going to lead our heroes? Should I be looking over my shoulder for the Sith?
You know, I have never intended this [short] story to end up an action story. Mostly because some of my writing weaknesses is plot. But as I continue to expand, I could definitely see stories expanding out from this. I love connecting generations. Look in the epilogue for connections to my other fic (and Legacy) -
Smoke and Shadow
verybusy:
You know, your name reminds me of... me! I hate being late to post, but DRL has just been overwhelming lately! Thanks for your comments. I really thought it was important for them to bash it all out before Jag got involved. We get to see the "kid" side of Gavin in the next post. Thanks for reading!
jaynasolofel:
I really enjoy that the tension here is the emotional type over that from imminent peril, yet all the details and tech really make it feel so SW.
What a fantastic compliment. That made my day!
Thanks you!
And good for Gavin to not be won over by one conversation, but for Jaina's sake I hope he does eventually accept her.
I think the foundation has been laid. Only time will tell. I don't know taht we'll get to see that, though. There's only one post more and an epilogue!
Glad you like the Falcon class ship. I thought it was something fitting that the manufacturer would do. As for the Solo fixing it, now all we need is a Wookie! Thanks for reading!
jade51999:
Good to see you, my friend! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I really thought that Cala was just perfect. Another one of those last minute additions that just fell into place, ya know? I'm really glad the techno-talk went over well. Being the daughter of a long time mechanic - and married to a part-time one - I get it alot. I wanted it to be realistic. I hope the Jaina/Jag discussion is all you want it to be.
Thanks, Jade!
Master_Vicky:
Jaina's had quite the day, hasn't she. And to think it all started out with a leisurely walk.
Should get really interesting next post. Thanks for reading, Vicster!
Well all, we're winding it on down. I will be posting the final post (sans epilogue) later today, but the more I think about it, the more tweaking I need to do. So please bear with me -I want it to be worth your wait. Should be up today. I just don't want any holes in it! See you soon!
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A/N: Yes, folks, we are nearing the end of this beautiful journey. This is currently set to be the last post of the story (not counting the epilogue), but who knows where my muse may take me. I want to thank all of your for riding through this with me. Your comments and encouragement have helped me keep going. This one’s for you.
~~
“Good. Send her down with the hydrospanner.” Jagged Fel was tired of working on this mechanical mess. Cherith insisted on flying the
Night Hawk
like a starfighter and not the aging freighter it was. The tendency probably stemmed from too many hours spent in a simulator from the time she was able to walk. When she happened to marry the son of the YT-4300’s designer, Jag had known that the rickety, old freighter would once again be in his life. The problem was, the YT-4300 had the same quirks as the original
Falcon
. Hence why Jag was now entangled in the depths of the ship’s access hatch.
A quick movement behind him caught his attention. The only sound was a soft thud, almost mistaken for a heartbeat, but Jag instinctively knew he was no longer alone. He disengaged himself from the actuator assembly and turned to look at the new arrival. Shock was not a common emotion for Jagged Fel; in fact, he could think of only a handful of instances in his entire life that would have qualified for the term. This was definitely one of them.
“Hydrospanner?”
The first thought that came as his mind jerked back into motion was how typically Jaina the whole situation was. The second thought was his response. “That explains the entrance, I suppose.” Not the best greeting in history, but the only one that spilled out. Still suffering from a shock-induced haze, he took the hydrospanner from her hand and turned back to the actuator. He was satisfied with her silent response – hoping it caused her some distress in return. After adjusting a bolt, he turned back to face her. “Are you here to help or stand there and admire the scenery?” That seemed to jar her out of her daze.
“Well the scenery was quite engaging.” He ignored where her eyes shifted at the comment and moved back towards where he had been working. Around the equipment he could see her move to the other side of the actuator and begin to move her critical eye over the assembly and his repairs. “Quite the mess you’ve made here, Fel.” Jag was disappointed to hear her pick up that old nickname her father had graced him with so many years ago. Not a good sign.
Wait a minute… shouldn’t I be the one that’s bitter and distant here?
“If there’s a mess, it’s
your
doing.”
“Me? And why is that, exactly?”
“You were the design consultant. Did you purposely put all the quirks and idiosyncrasies of the
Falcon
in this thing?” He was careful to hide the playful smirk that threatened to make an appearance before switching to a more somber tone. “The actuator assembly was fried during re-entry. I think my lovely daughter was trying to fly the
Hawk
like a starfighter again.”
“The
Hawk
?”
“Yes, the
Night Hawk.
Early on in design discussions, it was deemed that to further honor the
Falcon
, all of the ships in this class should be named for birds of prey. This particular bird is a native of Drall.” He paused to look at her. “You didn’t know that?”
Jaina shrugged. “I forgot that part. Your son didn’t mention the name of the ship.” Now fully entrenched in the assembly herself, she began her ministrations in earnest. “Well, you’ve got that actuator mostly patched up already, but it looks like you’ve lost all of your hydraulic fluid – which explains the mess. We’re going to need some more. There’s also a crack in the relay here. You don’t happen to have one of those on hand do you?”
“I’m not sure.” He twisted so he could see up the access hatch. “Gavin? Are you done eavesdropping?”
Jag turned to wink at Jaina during the silence that followed. She smiled and shook her head in mock shame. By then, Gavin had recovered. “I wasn’t eavesdropping, Dad. Just waiting for instructions.”
“Well you heard the lady. We need some new hydraulic fluid – probably two quarts. And look around and see if we’ve got another electromagnetic relay lying around up there.” He turned to Jaina. “Anything else?”
“Throw down a ten millimeter tratera wrench while you’re at it,” she shouted from her position.
“Got it,” came Gavin’s reply. His son was obviously not thrilled about being the designated tool flunky, but Jag knew he would do the job. Knowing Gavin’s disposition towards his relationship with Jaina, Jag was surprised that he was the one who had brought her. Then again, knowing the rest of the children, it probably wasn’t his idea.
“If he can’t find that relay, we’ll need to fabricate some sort of patch. But I’m sure we can make something work.” Jaina said, not missing a beat. “If nothing else we can have something brought in to the Temple complex.” Jag scooted around the main actuator towards Jaina. The actuator itself had been pulled down from its base position in the ceiling the access shaft, so to work on it you had to move around it. To make things quite interesting, it was nearly butted up against one of the main access tunnels that moved horizontally from the main access area – the one they needed to get to replace the relay. Jaina now lay in the side tunnel assessing the fractured relay. As Jag heaved his aging body into the tunnel next to Jaina, he marveled at the dirt and grime already covering his clothing. That line of thinking was easier than reflecting on the woman beside him.
An hour later, they were elbow deep in grease and grime. The relay had been patched, but would need to be replaced once the Fel family arrived back on Corellia. As they moved on to the next mechanical failure, Jag knew he needed to start addressing the major questions that had long formed in his mind. He began scanning the relay repair with a sensor and tried to ignore just how much of their bodies were touching in the close quarters of the access tunnel. Why was she here? Why now? How long had she known he’d been here? He opened his mouth to begin, but she beat him to it.
“Quite the compound you have here, Jag. Just how long were you going to camp up here before you told me about it?” There was no reproach in her voice, just curiosity.
“Well, I had a whole timeline laid out, but you’ve managed to uh…debunk it. We were only a couple of weeks away.”
She continued to adjust the relay’s patch job. “Really.”
“Really.”
“And just what were you trying to accomplish?” She put down the wrench and propped herself up on one elbow so she could turn and face him. Jag adjusted so he was in the same position.
“Well, first, I wanted to protect those important to me: my family and you – even if you didn’t want me. This compound and the defense contract with Protechnologies served that purpose.”
“And just how are you wrapped up in this defense company?” Jaina asked with an inquisitive glare.
“Gavin and Jak are the co-founders. I just happen to sit on the Board of Directors.”
“Ah.” Jaina nodded as if pieces were falling into place. “And so you decided to build this place. You know, some could construe it as a threat.”
Jag nodded. “I knew that would be a concern, especially with the large scale plans involved. That’s why I contacted Ben first.”
“Ben? Ben knows about all this?” She shot up from where she’d been laying, only to have her head contact the machinery above. The impact didn’t slow her tirade against her cousin. “That little two-faced, lying, piece of Hutt slime!”
Jag couldn’t help but smile. “I take it you didn’t know about his involvement?”
“I think that’s a fairly safe bet, don’t you, Jag?” Her mock betrayal was easy to discern. She rubbed her head as she continued. “So why all the room, all the space?”
Jag stopped working momentarily to look at the tool in his hand. “I wanted the Jedi to have a stronghold no one knew about.”
“And that would win me back, huh? A hidden stronghold and a defense contract?”
Jag shrugged, ignoring her mounting hostility. “I told you. I want to prove to you that you’re wrong, that we can make this work. When you left, I was devastated, but still… convinced. Realistically, I also know that you are the most strong-willed, stubborn woman in the galaxy.” He fixed her with an accusatory glare. “I knew I couldn’t
make
you love me. So I figured that even if you wouldn’t have me, I would take every precaution I could to keep you – and by extension the Jedi – safe. That’s what I’ve always done. And I wanted to be here, close, if you needed me or wanted to come back.” He paused again. “We’re not as different as you think, Jaina; we just have a lot of issues to work through.” He swallowed and was encouraged to find her still listening. “I know I said some wrong things…”
“No, Jag, you didn’t.” She cut him off. “The fault was entirely mine.” She scooted her body out from the access tunnel and sat up, stretching tired muscles as she perched on the side. She was a glimpse of youth lost as her feet swung back and forth beneath them. Jag moved next to her as she continued, somewhat surprised at her self-accusation. “I was scared, Jag. For the first time in I can’t remember how long, I was happy. And worse yet, it was you: the man I long thought was out of my life. And it wasn’t just you I had to impress; it was your family too. I was so scared they would hate me – which Gavin still might – and all the emotional baggage that would come with it.” She took a deep breath. “And I was scared that we were moving forward. I was scared to take that step and what it would mean.” Her big, brown eyes stopped searching the floor below and came to meet his. “I was scared to hope, Jag.”
Jag broke eye contact and searched his shoes for solace. For the first time in six months, he was scared. “And now?”
“Now, I finally know what I want. Believe it or not,” she began, “Gavin’s resistance – and Cherith’s support – was just what I needed. When I left the praxeum this morning, I was determined to at least contact you and make sure you were breathing…” she paused with mischief in her eyes. “But when I met Cherith and Meri and Jak and Gavin and little Cala… Oh, my heart was just so full, Jag, you can’t imagine!” She was standing now, unable to hold her excitement. She was perfect height: from where Jag was sitting, they were face to face. “I realized I wasn’t scared of your family any more. Gavin is tough – like you – but we have a lot in common, too, and I know we can get along. I fell in love with your family today, Jag. I don’t want to throw that away.”
Jag sat there, listening to his dream come true. He never realistically thought she’d be won back quickly, that she’d be so determined and sure of herself so soon. But here she was before him, standing tall and proud and strong – as usual. Gone was the irrational young woman that he’d known before. This was a woman refined by years of hardship, joy, pain, battle and peace. Like a fine wine, she was aged to perfection. She was ready and willing to admit her mistakes and move forward. That was the Jaina he knew and loved completely. He searched his heart, but found it too full for words. So he did the only thing he thought appropriate: he kissed her.
It wasn’t the soft, tentative kiss of a year ago. This kiss was full of all of the love, passion, fear, and acceptance the past six months had heralded. His hands quickly moved to her face and pulled her to him, so that her body was pressed up against the access tunnel between his knees. She didn’t resist, but joined with her own joy and love. It was a reunion sweeter than any Jag had ever experienced. It was full of love, commitment and, for the first time, hope.
Finally needing air, he pulled back from her lips and placed his forehead on hers, relishing the smell of her, the touch of her hair as it hung in his face and faint taste of grease that he’d found on her lips. “I love you, Jaina Solo.”
“I love you, Jag – with all my heart.” She seemed to fall into the Force for a moment, then refocused. “You too, Gavin - even if you eavesdrop.”
Jag’s soaring heart spilled out in a deep laugh as he heard Gavin fumbling around as if trying to scurry away from his own guilt. Yes, things were definitely looking up.
~~
Two Fel men and a Solo woman emerged from forest trail completely filthy. As Cherith watched from the baby’s room on the upper floor of the main house, she could see her father holding hands with Jaina Solo; a smile on his face for the first time in months. Beside the pair, her normally grim brother was trying not to laugh. Several hours had passed since he’d left to take Jaina to the hangar. From the look of things, more than the ship had been repaired. Cherith couldn’t help but smile at the joy that radiated from her father’s entire demeanor – as if the weight of the galaxy had been lifted from his shoulders. It was a beautiful thing to see.
“Who’s that, Cala?” She said to her daughter as she picked her up. “Is that Grampie Fel and Gramma Jaina? Yes, it is!” She turned and headed out the door and down the stairs to gather their new family together for the first time.
Together at last.
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Snag!
Bravo!
Excellent ending. Can't wait to see what you do next.
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I like happy endings
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*Happy Tears*
“Is that Grampie Fel and Gramma Jaina? Yes, it is!”
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!
What a beautiful ending! Gavin the eavesdropper... he needs some stealth lessons.
This was a wonderful story, Voz. I absolutely enjoyed every chapter. The characters you've created here--Jag's family--fit perfectly with Jag and Jaina themselves. It's not difficult to envision this family in this house built from love.
Fantastic job, Voz!
*Waits patiently for the Epilogue, and anything else you feel like writing*
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“Who’s that, Cala?” She said to her daughter as she picked her up. “Is that Grampie Fel and Gramma Jaina? Yes, it is!” She turned and headed out the door and down the stairs to gather their new family together for the first time.
I'm beaming right now. Perfect ending, can't really say more. It's everything we could hope for both of them, and the family.
I hope an epilogue is in order if we have reached the end of our journey. I desperately want to learn more about Cala. You've really made a great family here.
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I liked how you had them working on the ship together. Loved Gavin getting busted for eavesdropping.
Beautiful story. Can't wait for the epilogue.
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AWWW
Voz
! I love it- he's her lobster! The best part for me was Gavin and his big ears - that was a great little addition that made the scene so much more sweet and that Cherith she's a smart one - good for her.
It is so nice to have a happy, emotional ending for my favorite couple!
Thanks for sharing this story!!!
'night
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Don't worry about the delay again,
Telanna'Tani
. Not only is it worth the wait again, but I've been having computer troubles so I couldn't even check in on time this week anyay.
The first thought that came as his mind jerked back into motion was how typically Jaina the whole situation was.
“I’m not sure.” He twisted so he could see up the access hatch. “Gavin? Are you done eavesdropping?”
Jag turned to wink at Jaina during the silence that followed. She smiled and shook her head in mock shame. By then, Gavin had recovered. “I wasn’t eavesdropping, Dad. Just waiting for instructions.”
Jag Fel doesn't need the force.
If he can’t find that relay, we’ll need to fabricate some sort of patch. But I’m sure we can make something work.” Jaina said, not missing a beat.
Do I sense a double-meaning? (Or am I just reading too far in?)
Gone was the irrational young woman that he’d known before. This was a woman refined by years of hardship, joy, pain, battle and peace. Like a fine wine, she was aged to perfection. She was ready and willing to admit her mistakes and move forward. That was the Jaina he knew and loved completely.
I like this Jaina. You've really used the age thing to her advantage here. I really do think Jaina would be all those things.
"I love you, Jag – with all my heart.” She seemed to fall into the Force for a moment, then refocused. “You too, Gavin - even if you eavesdrop.”
A small reprieve from the mush. Nothing like bringing the humour back in towards the end.
I have to admit I'm a little sad that this story is ending. I feel like it just started. That was really a beautiful and sweet ending. It was adventurous of you to go with the older J/J and you did a great job with it. I look forward to the epilogue.
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RE: All These Years: J/J Post-DNT AU Short Story - Far-Future Romance *~UPDATED 12/7~*
Simply beautiful. I love it, I love it, I love it.
“Is that Grampie Fel and Gramma Jaina? Yes, it is!”
Great ending, Jess. I can't wait for the epilogue.
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Jagged Fel will rise again!
Proud 'shipper of J/J, Benella, and Siriwan
Anything is possible...
Just Enough (AU, J/J)
http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24966015/p1/?7
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