Author Topic: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 4-20-08!!
dawn7191  56 posts
Registered: Jul '07
46345_Ahsoka Tano (3162)
Date Posted: 11/5/07 6:30am Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07!
Nooooo! I reached the last post already. shock cry Please put me on your pm list. I must read more.More,more,more.

 

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The_Burberry_Ewok  146 posts
Registered: Oct '06
Date Posted: 11/5/07 3:10pm Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07!
Flowerlady: Thanks!

Hey!!!! I'm so glad to see this back!

Hee Hee, me too! It was a long battle over real life, but I prevailed! (Or maybe just gave up on it mischief )

I liked the tension in the meeting and Davert was as funny as always.. I really enjoy his character.

Thanks! Actually, he's my first OC, so I'm really glad that people like him just as much as I do. dancing

Oh, I wonder what will happen with Wyn's visit with Vetter.

This may or may not be a direct Legacy tie in...

Good luck with that paper....yuck!!!

Thanks. Honors classes seemed like such a good idea at the time...

How it actually turned out:

nerd thinking confused sleep coffee skull

In a nutshell. (No, I really like school...there's just a lot going on right now)

Dawn7191: Thanks!

I must read more.More,more,more.

More is coming! grin

Please put me on your pm list.

Your name has been added to that august, all-important honor roll. No, I don't have delusions of grandeur...

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Thanks!
-BBE

 

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Jaina-Sticks-Fel  131 posts
Registered: Oct '07
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Date Posted: 11/5/07 3:44pm Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07! - Date Edited: 11/5/07 3:44pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Jaina-Sticks-Fel
I'm so glad this came back! I dying to see how this all turns out. Looking forward to the future.

J-S-F

 

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The_Burberry_Ewok  146 posts
Registered: Oct '06
Date Posted: 11/7/07 11:13am Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07!
Jaina-Sticks-Fel: Thanks!

I'm so glad this came back!

Thanks. I really feel quite bad about the long hiatus... doh!

I'm dying to see how this all turns out

Dying, huh? devil That's a dangerous word to use when I'm in the middle of a chapter, looking for some action to put in...

Looking forward to the future.

<Must resist Yoda quote> Me too!

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By the way, the frequent author replies aren't a shameless attempt at upping (Really!). I just know that if I don't do them quickly, I won't do them at all. mischief

Thanks!
-BBE

 

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Jaina-Sticks-Fel  131 posts
Registered: Oct '07
6420_Mandalorian Patch
Date Posted: 11/7/07 12:47pm Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07!
I'd be honored to add a little spice to the next chapter! Put me in and kill me off if you want a spontaneous character to kill. grin

 

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Solo_and_Fel  832 posts
Registered: Apr '04
49847_H457: Jack Skellington
Date Posted: 11/7/07 9:43pm Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07!
Glad you were able to make it back!

It is rather unfortunate that Syal has a point. sad

 

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Lanta  63 posts
Registered: Oct '07
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Date Posted: 11/14/07 9:43am Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07!

I really like this happy A very entertaining & interesting story.

I love the character of Davert, even if I do think he's rather insubordinate at times for the Empire! Oh, and I love how Han & Soontir are the ones getting along, while Jaina & Syal argue... so many fics have it the other way around.

Do you have a PM list? If so, could you add me to it please? happy

 

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Jaina_Solo_59  2837 posts
Registered: Aug '04
7740_Tahiri and Anakin
Date Posted: 11/14/07 12:24pm Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07!
Hi,
I really like this story, it's very interesting.
Could you add me to your pm list?
Thanks,
~Kathleen

 

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Maggy  3264 posts
Registered: Oct '04
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Date Posted: 11/14/07 12:56pm Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07!
Hi ya, Burberry!

I have read your 'fic some days back but forgot to drop a line or two blush tongue

Just saying I think this is awesome and I like how Jag and Jaina are working with each other wink grin
it is also great that Soontir and Syal are getting some screentime and that Wyn and Cam are not forgotten.
Quite shocking that you killed Gilad shock


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well, he couldn't live forever, no?



keep up this great work applause grin applause

may I ask for update PMs?

thanks for sharing this!


~ Mags ~

 

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Jaina_Solo_Goddess  352 posts
Registered: Aug '07
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Date Posted: 11/17/07 1:01pm Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07!
I just did a marathon read of this, and it was definitely worth it! Can you add me to the PM list please? And are Syal and Jaina cooperating yet? Just curious. All in all, this is a phenomonal story and I can't wait for it to be continued!

~Jaina

 

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The_Burberry_Ewok  146 posts
Registered: Oct '06
Date Posted: 12/3/07 11:23pm Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07!
And I'm back! It's hard to believe that it's been over a year since I started this story. This may be the longest that I've kept at ANYTHING! (Barring of course the long, geographically induced hiatus)

Anyway, thanks for a year of reading and reviewing!

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Solo_and_Fel: Thanks!

Glad you were able to make it back!

Thanks. Good to be back! grin

It is rather unfortunate that Syal has a point.

Well, at least it's better that she stops them now...

Lanta: Welcome!

I really like this A very entertaining & interesting story.

blush Thanks!

I love the character of Davert, even if I do think he's rather insubordinate at times for the Empire!

There's got to be at least one smart aleck in the Empire- although I don't think it's any accident that he was stationed to a dead-end world until Jag got there. wink

Oh, and I love how Han & Soontir are the ones getting along, while Jaina & Syal argue... so many fics have it the other way around.

Yeah, I also noticed how many fics have it the other way around. I wanted to do something different. Besides, Syal is married to Soontir, the sister of Wedge, raised five(six) children, and thrived in an alien culture- she's got to have some fire. Besides, it's much more fun to write sarcastic Corellians than snippy Corellians.

Do you have a PM list? If so, could you add me to it please?

No problem!

Jaina_Solo_59: Thanks!

I really like this story, it's very interesting.
Thanks!

Could you add me to your pm list?

Certainly!

Maggy: Thanks!

I have read your 'fic some days back but forgot to drop a line or two

I'm just glad you decided to!

Just saying I think this is awesome and I like how Jag and Jaina are working with each other

Thanks. And for Jaina and Jag, I just think they work better together. (And I mean that statement in any way that it can be construed! tongue )

it is also great that Soontir and Syal are getting some screentime and that Wyn and Cam are not forgotten.

More Fels = More Fun!

Quite shocking that you killed Gilad
well, he couldn't live forever, no
?

Would it be odd to say that I killed him because I liked his character? The old admiral deserves a better ending than slipping away quietly. Here, his death is going to propel his protege to bigger and better things...

may I ask for update PMs?

You surely may, and you shall get them.

thanks for sharing this!

Happy to!

Jaina_Solo_Goddess: Thanks!

I just did a marathon read of this, and it was definitely worth it!

Wow, I'm impressed! This thing racks up almost 75 pages in Word! Thanks for taking the time.

Can you add me to the PM list please?

Sure.

And are Syal and Jaina cooperating yet?

Cooperating? Sorta... Willingly? Not really... Friendly? Not hardly.

All in all, this is a phenomonal story and I can't wait for it to be continued!

blush blush Thanks...and the next posts will be up soon!

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I'm working on the next post, but I thought that I would post a teaser before I put the rest up tomorrow night.

Enjoy!
-BBE

 

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The_Burberry_Ewok  146 posts
Registered: Oct '06
Date Posted: 12/3/07 11:29pm Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) UPDATED 11-4-07!
A teaser to whet your appetite for tomorrow night's larger post!

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If Jacen hadn’t been so worried about keeping up his appearance as the commander of the GAG, he would have slouched through the halls of the Jedi Temple. It was the last place in the Galaxy that he wanted to be. There were Corellian insurgents on the planet, minor skirmishes were being fought in the skies of a dozen worlds, and now there was the news that his sister had apparently joined the revitalized Empire. A meeting of the complacent, shortsighted Jedi masters was not even on his radar.

Again, Jacen decided against the Jedi robes. Instead he wore the matte black uniform of the Guard, supplemented by a long black cape that shimmered as it caught the light. As he stalked through the corridors, a door to his right slid open and a teenaged padawan stepped out. The apprentice stopped dead still as he caught sight of the Jedi Colonel approaching, cape swirling behind him. The young man took a step back as Jacen passed and jerked back even further to avoid being brushed by his cape. Jacen smiled.

I’m taking care of Allana’s training, he thought to himself, amused. Skywalker’s apprentices are afraid of a cape. My daughter’s better than that.

His amusement died as he turned the corner to the Council chambers and saw Mara Jade Skywalker and Kyp Durron deep in discussion. He frowned. Those two were his biggest opponents on the Council- and the two that he least wanted to see. However, he would have to pass by them to enter the chamber, and he wasn’t yet secure enough in his position to ignore the presence of the other masters.

He approached. “Master Skywalker, Master Durron.” No inflection accompanied his greeting, no bows of respect, no smiles of camaraderie.

Mara half turned away from Kyp. “Jacen,” she said evenly, the informality just as calculated as his greeting.

Kyp followed suit. “Solo.”

Jacen moved to brush by them into the council chamber, but thought better of it. It would look better if he entered after the rest of the masters.

He inclined his head toward the open door. “After you.”

“Thank you, but no,” Kyp said. “I won’t be attending this meeting.”

“Really,” Jacen replied, his tone mild. “I wasn’t informed of any missions requiring the presence of a master.”

Mara interjected before Kyp could respond. “Masters are allowed to have private lives, Jacen.” She glanced at his black uniform, the uniform he was scarcely seen without. “But I’m not sure that the Guard knows what a private life means.”

A brief vision of grey eyes ran through Jacen’s mind before he pushed it away. “So you say." He changed the subject, darkly curious about Kyp's abrupt departure. "Where are you going? And when are you returning?” Jacen asked.

Kyp opened his mouth, but again Mara interjected. “I really don’t see how that is any of your business. This isn't an interrogation.” Kyp closed his mouth and listened to Mara, somewhere between amusement and defeat. She continued, “Luke has granted him leave and the rest of the Council will find out just as soon as the meeting begins. Which you’re holding up.” With that, she pushed past both men into the Council chamber.

Kyp looked at Jacen and shrugged his shoulders. Lifting the duffle bag that had laid unnoticed at his feet to his shoulder, he walked away in the direction of the hangar bay.

Jacen watched him go. Lifting his hand, he activated his comlink. “Major Tarson.”

“Yes, sir?” came the prompt response of his private communications officer, a Chandrilan by the name of Sarl Tarson.

“Track a ship leaving the Jedi Temple. Under the name of Kyp Durron.”

“Yes, sir.” There was no hesitation considering the order.

Without another word, Jacen thumbed his comlink off. Squaring his shoulders to ensure that his cape fell right, he strode into the Council chambers. The doors closed behind him in a hydraulic hiss.

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Enjoy!
-BBE

 

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The_Burberry_Ewok  146 posts
Registered: Oct '06
Date Posted: 2/11/08 10:58pm Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) TEASER 12-4-07
And I come slinking back. No, I have not fallen off the face of the earth. I have not joined a hippie commune and destroyed all my technology. I have not turned Trekkie and forsaken my Star Wars ways.

Sorry for the incredibly long delay. And I mean REALLY long delay. At the risk of forcing a movie quote, it's not my fault. My computer crashed and I lost the story. It's taken me a while to rewrite what I lost, but I'm getting there. This is just a note to say that there will soon be another update filling this thread!

Thanks for being patient with me!

-BBE

 

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Solo_and_Fel  832 posts
Registered: Apr '04
49847_H457: Jack Skellington
Date Posted: 2/12/08 5:19am Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) AUTHORS NOTE 2-11-08
Oh no! That's tragic!
PM me when you post! (And best of luck with the restoration.)

 

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BigFatty  2362 posts
Registered: Mar '05
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Date Posted: 2/15/08 5:25pm Subject: RE: Foreign Shores Unknown (Post-Tempest AU, J/J, H/L, Jacen, etc.) AUTHORS NOTE 2-11-08
Sorry to hear you're experiencing techinical difficulties, but I'm glad you're rebuilding the fic instead of just scrapping it. We'll be here when you're ready to post again. happy

 

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