jedi_of_ennth posted: That was adorable. Thank-you Jaina nodded, and her small eyebrow cocked in a way that was entirely her mother. “What about you?” She asked, genuinely not understanding her father's reasoning. “I'm your dad.” Han said. “I don't count.” She nodded again, smiled and looked at Zekk. “Can I keep Zekk too?” Han fought the urge to glare, and inwardly he thought, Great, my daughter shows early signs of one of the problems of the worst kind. “For now.” He answered her though. Loved the characterization. Han was perfect. Thank-you “Zekk, do yourself a favor. Stay away from girls.” Zekk nodded his understanding, yet worry flooded his eyes. “Except for Jaina right?” Too cute! Thank-you Leia still glared yet their was a fond glow in her eyes. “Shove it Han.” She smiled, and upon seeing his wounded look she said. “Haven't you heard that boys have cooties?” Leia always has to have the last word! And you better believe it! Fun little vig. Thanks for sharing. I'm gald you enjoyed it. Thanks for being the first to reply!
VaderLVR64 posted:I agree, adorable! Thanks! Surprisingly it was Zekk who answered, “They have cooties.” Jaina looked aghast. “Oh yeah? Well boys have extra nasty cooties!” Zekk took this literally. “How can there be worse cooties? Cooties are cooties.” Glad you enjoyed!
emeraldshadow posted:“You both have cooties. So drop it!” Daddy Han was great. Parenting brings out the wor- ahem I mean, best in everyone. LOL. The fuuny side at least. Nice job with the quote and the characterization; the story was adorable. Thanks! Characterizations are always a pain . . .[/quote] Healer_Leona posted:Who the hell can resist a fic called Cooties. I read it and laughed and immediately clicked the story. Ingenius title? Awe shucks, I knew that would bring people in. LOL That was just a wonderfully delightful viggie. Love papa Han trying to keep the kids innocent. We all wished we could. Don't we all. Meredith_Kenobi posted: Incredibly funny. And Healer_Leona's right. That title is irresistible . Thanks! Quotations_Roulette posted:That was so sweet and funny! Thanks! For the challenge as well. It was awesome! Han decided to intervene before the age old fight of 'boys vs. girls' got out of hand. “You both have cooties. So drop it!” The ending was great, too, and I love how you used the quote. Excellent work! That good? [face_applause] Jaded_Rose posted:Cooties! Ha! Oh, poor Han trying to impart wisdom. This was absolutely hilarious. I'm making it my goal to reply to every one of these Simpsons Challenges, and I love them all. Great work! Wonderful goal, and a free reply for me. I definately support that goal. LOL I'm glad that you enjoyed! J_Ro [quote=Jade_Max] Han, Han, Han... *laughs* You've got him down! Thanks. For me he is one of the hardest characters to write. No idea why. I loved the young J/Z interaction and Han's reaction to it lol! He's so overprotective sometiems *snicker* Sometimes? His pieces of wisdom were pricelss too! Stay away from boys and stay away from girls *snicker* The way each made exception only for the other was classic! Is that the J/Z in you coming out? I'm glad you enjoyed it, I just love writing kids.[/quote] [quote=verybusy] [face_laugh] That was really funny [face_laugh] [face_laugh] Thanks! ..and I learned a new word "cooties", I really had to check with my dictionary before I finally understood the story. Eek, sorry about that, yet I'm happy that you learned something new. See, Star Wars is good for more than one thing . . . cheers, VeryBusy
Healer_Leona posted:Who the hell can resist a fic called Cooties. I read it and laughed and immediately clicked the story. Ingenius title? Awe shucks, I knew that would bring people in. LOL That was just a wonderfully delightful viggie. Love papa Han trying to keep the kids innocent. We all wished we could. Don't we all.
Meredith_Kenobi posted: Incredibly funny. And Healer_Leona's right. That title is irresistible . Thanks!
Quotations_Roulette posted:That was so sweet and funny! Thanks! For the challenge as well. It was awesome! Han decided to intervene before the age old fight of 'boys vs. girls' got out of hand. “You both have cooties. So drop it!” The ending was great, too, and I love how you used the quote. Excellent work! That good? [face_applause]
Jaded_Rose posted:Cooties! Ha! Oh, poor Han trying to impart wisdom. This was absolutely hilarious. I'm making it my goal to reply to every one of these Simpsons Challenges, and I love them all. Great work! Wonderful goal, and a free reply for me. I definately support that goal. LOL I'm glad that you enjoyed! J_Ro
ZekksGoddess posted:[face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] Han smiled and leaned back with his interlaced hands behind his head. “It's a simple thing really. Just don't trust wide eyed farm boys, and wizened old Jedi Masters looking for passage to Alderaan.” “What's wrong with cinabon hair, Han?” [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] Great job! I loved it! Thanks!
brodiew posted:This was a lot of fun, Mira. I enjoyed the kids and Han's interesting set of rules to get through life. You prenseted to kids well. I loved the short attention span followed by the cottie fight. Thanks, I just took my little sisters, and then a fight back from kindergarten, then presto, a fic was born. Han smiled and leaned back with his interlaced hands behind his head. “It's a simple thing really. Just don't trust wide eyed farm boys, and wizened old Jedi Masters looking for passage to Alderaan.” Zekk looked confused. “Why not?” “Because.” Han answered as if it were the most obvious thing in the world. “It'll only lead to Princesses with giant cinabon hair.” This was fantastic.[face_laugh] Very well done. the kids have no idea Han is talking about their mother and Uncle Luke! Then they'd find it really funny. Or maybe I am just twisted . . . Jaina glared, and before she could reply a voice sounded behind her, “What's wrong with cinabon hair, Han?” Han grimaced, and fought the urge to curse, and turned to look down at the kids before addressing his clearly agitated wife. “You see what I mean about girls, Zekk?” The little boy nodded, and Han smiled and patted his head. “Good, now run along, I have to deal with my own girl.” Somehow, I knew Leia was gonna show up. Excellent section and ending. It's the mom radar. It goes for husbands as well as kids. LOL. My mom's dose anyway. It's creepy . . . I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and thanks for the lovely review!