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ChissGoddess
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2/20/07 11:31am
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“Not a chance, Lieutenant,” Jag replied, amused at how quickly they had dropped out of their roles and back into military respectfulness. “He’s too afraid I’d hunt him down and kill him.”
Damn that's hot.
Wonderful update though. I like how you're tying things in. My question though...is how come the Ascendancy is so weak? I mean they're basically cowaring at Jag's feet...surly they wouldn't need to rely on the hand that much would they? Maybe I'm just confused by the situation...could you maybe shed a little more light on it for me?
And Admiral...nice.
He certainly is intersted in the Solo family all of a sudden...can't wait to see what you do with that next. You've got amazing insight into cannon.
cya next tuesday ^_^
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Flowerlady
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2/20/07 12:18pm
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Wow...I love the edgy, dangerous Jag...beard and all....
Great chapter...I really like where this is going.
But I agree with everyone else...Considering Leia is the one who shot him down he is suddenly very concerned for her and hers....
I can't wait until next Tuesday and Exile!!!!
See ya on the 6th...
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YodaKenobi
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2/20/07 2:53pm
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Chapter 5:
“I’ve done it before.” Formbi shook his head. “Luke Skywalker is too trusting for his own good.”
Understatement of the century.
“Dukat Gray has caused nothing but trouble since he arrived. It’s no wonder the Hapans became a matriarchy if all their men are such idiots.”
Before Soontir could reply, Jag’s comlink trilled with an urgent message. “Duty calls,” Soontir said from the viewscreen. “We’ll speak later.”
“Affirmative,” Jag said
Such warmth
Jag found himself staring at his own reflection in the smooth, polished tile of the refresher wall. His green eyes were bloodshot, his hair disheveled, his skin pale. His body, which slumped limply on the floor in a corner of the small room, trembled with the dry heaves that clenched sharply, painfully, on his empty stomach.
Is this because Zekk acted as though he'd been dating Jag
Interesting that Jag was setting himself up to be disgraced I agree with his father, that's very Thrawn Will be neat to see how that plays out behind the scenes. Also seems pretty clear he's warming up to Karri as a matter of convenience
Good post
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obsessedwithSW
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So begins the bounty hunter persona!
Jag seems to be enjoying his new role and building the Empire.
I love the explanation for Alma's reappearance and how she escaped. I am glad Jag is still a man of integrity and is concerned for the solos.
I see what Jaina is so attracted to, Force blind and all!
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2/20/07 6:26pm
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I like clandestine Jagged Fel the way you write him. Delish!
Skullduggery was exciting in its own way, but for Jag nothing could beat a crisp uniform and the sharp precision of superior military units.
Now THAT'S Soontir's son!
"...There had better not be a blue face in sight when they get there.”
Ooh. I like ADMIRAL Fel even better!
Lex you've done a great job of "explaining" Jag's meeting with the Solos in Tempest! While I'm really going to miss a new TMOAE post next week, I can appreciate your reasons. No matter what happens with the canon/AU situation, this will remain one of my fav stories!
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jedi_princess18
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2/22/07 3:22am
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Another fantastic update. So Jag's an Admiral now....and the Chiss seem to be subordinate to the Empire of the Hand. I'd like to hear more about how that came about.....
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TahiriSoloFan
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2/22/07 12:24pm
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Always fun to see Jag in command. Did I miss something? When did he become Admiral? And buying his own armada? Never does anything on a small scale does he?
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2/24/07 7:51am
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I really like the idea of Jag steathily buying up star destroyers. That can't be that easy to do.
Jag sat down at the communications console in his cabin, and smiled. Yes, it would definitely be good to be back at Central Command.
Then, finally, he could shave.
Heh. My favourite part. A small detail yet I could see being all gruff making Jag squirm a bit in his own skin.
Sorry for the short review. It's been quite a week. Good post though. Looking forward to when the story returns.
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Lyne
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I love the part where Jag is bossing Formbi.
Great chapter, looking forward to the next.
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YodaKenobi
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2/26/07 4:05pm
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Chapter 6:
He tapped the button, playing the sequence in slow motion. He followed one of the starfighters with the red dot. “This is Jaina Solo.”
Karri glanced over at him. “How do you –”
“Trust me. It’s her.”
A pause. “She’s not flying lead in her trio.”
“Like I said, it makes no sense.” Jag sped up the playback as the attack runs commenced. “There isn’t a single Jedi Knight in the entire Order with more combat flight or squadron command experience than Jaina. But she’s deferring to someone.”
Awesome I wouldn't have thought of that. Great way of showing Jag there's something not as it seems about the attack on Thargo.
“And the GA’s military leadership is such a disaster that an Alderaan survivor has appointed an Imperial Grand Admiral as the Supreme Commander of their forces.”
I'd never thought of it that way either
“As a courtesy I will inform Pellaeon of my intentions before we launch our strikes. I trust him not to reveal that information to the politicians – or anyone else in the Alliance who might warn the Killiks.”
But Pellaeon tells Kenth Hamner, IIRC. Or it winds it's way back to Hamner somehow Big mistake, Jag
“No,” she insisted, tugging him by the hand as she headed up the steps toward the exit at the back of the amphitheater. “Now, come on. You’ve been hiding in here all day. The least you can do is have dinner with me before you start a war.”
“Actually,” Jag said, staying rooted in place, “the least I can do is go off and start the war, and leave you to dine alone.”
What a jerk
“Besides, I haven’t eaten since this morning.” They were almost to the back of the room, and he released her hand to reach for the door panel. He hit the button, and the door slid open. “As a wise man once said, never begin hostilities hungry.”
“Who said that? Thrawn?”
“No. Me.”
“You’re an idiot,” she muttered, and strode out into the bright corridor.
Great post, Lex Really enjoying this. I wonder why Jag feels bad if he knew ultimately that Lowie would continue to fight for the Killiks and dishonor him. Did he not see that Jaina would be with him as well, or was there just a part of him that was hoping she wouldn't?
Anyway, really enjoying this so far
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Darth_Lex
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2/27/07 2:49pm
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ccp: Hm, it seems that Jag is awfully concerned about the life of Leia Solo and her family.
Or is he just concerned with making sure his bait lives long enough to serve as bait…
Voz: Not only does it keep my thoroughly enthralled, but being the Jag-fan that I am, it's awesome to see his character as I believe he should be.
Thanks! I’m really enjoying writing Jag’s military commander side – with, now, a touch of undercover operative starting to appear, too.
Despite all that has taken place between the Solos and himself, he will still place every resource at his disposal to dispel this threat. Certainly with Jag there is much more behind this action than simply old sentimental feelings, and I'm interested to see what those reasonings are.
Well, if you look back at the previous chapter, it may be that his reasoning is the other way around. He told Pellaeon he was none too pleased that Raynar was left alive and Alema only presumed dead. He already knew before this scene that Alema was alive, but then he learns of a way to find her. So perhaps his primary motivation is to hunt down (and kill ) Alema, and protecting the Solos is secondary (because they happen to be her targets). Guess you’ll have to keep reading to find out which way it is…
RedGold: still, great work on this, I think I’d rather read this than LOTF
Thanks! I sure wouldn’t mind if there was more Jag in LOTF, either.
ChissGoddess: Damn that's hot.
My question though...is how come the Ascendancy is so weak? I mean they're basically cowering at Jag's feet...surly they wouldn't need to rely on the hand that much would they? Maybe I'm just confused by the situation...could you maybe shed a little more light on it for me?
A few things. A couple chapters back, we had the conversation where Soontir revealed that the Ascendancy needed the Empire of the Hand to save their butts during the Vong war, and Soontir had “convinced” them to join the EOTH as the price. So in my version of things, the Chiss joined the EOTH (not the other way around), which means, ultimately, they take orders from the Fels. Also, in the last chapter we saw Pellaeon’s remark about not committing the GA fleet into the Battle of Tenupe on Luke’s suggestion, so that in being chastened a bit by their heavy losses the Chiss would rely more on their friends after the war. So ironically, Luke’s suggestion has made the Ascendancy more dependent on the EOTH than ever…
And Admiral...nice.
Acquiring a great set of new capital ships for the fleet is good for earning a promotion.
Flowerlady: I love the edgy, dangerous Jag...beard and all....
You can thank Troy for that one. Since I’m setting up the undercover operative side of Jag here, I figured it would make sense to integrate the beard into the disguise.
But I agree with everyone else...Considering Leia is the one who shot him down he is suddenly very concerned for her and hers....
Wouldn’t be the first time a Corellian scoundrel has denied his real feelings.
Yobi: Understatement of the century.
I thought you might appreciate that line.
Is this because Zekk acted as though he'd been dating Jag
Poor Jag!
Will be neat to see how that plays out behind the scenes.
Some of the effects will be unexpected, I hope.
Awesome I wouldn't have thought of that. Great way of showing Jag there's something not as it seems about the attack on Thrago.
While I do tend to think that Formbi’s mostly a professional liar I did think that his explanation that Jag recognized Jaina’s flying style had a definite ring of truth to it. It’s a testament not just to how well he knows Jaina, but also to his insight as a starfighter commander and tactician. Even way back in Dark Tide: Ruin, after all, he was cunning enough to be able to identify the skill levels of opposing pilots and pick them off in order of talent.
I'd never thought of it that way either
What can I say, I like irony.
Or it winds it's way back to Hamner somehow
Wasn’t from the Imps…
I wonder why Jag feels bad if he knew ultimately that Lowie would continue to fight for the Killiks and dishonor him. Did he not see that Jaina would be with him as well, or was there just a part of him that was hoping she wouldn't?
Actually, his “bad feeling” in that scene isn’t about Lowie and Jaina, or his impending exile. That part of his plan has gone exactly as expected. It’s about something else. Or, really, two things.
obsessedwithSW: So begins the bounty hunter persona!
Exactly.
I love the explanation for Alema's reappearance and how she escaped.
Yeah, I thought it would be much funnier (and more ironic) if it was the Chiss who were responsible for letting her escape.
I see what Jaina is so attracted to, Force blind and all!
You’re in good company in this thread, I think.
OJN: I like clandestine Jagged Fel the way you write him. Delish!
He’s Corellian, after all. Not to mention all the acting genes he gets from his mother…
Now THAT'S Soontir's son!
Yep. A little bit of both parents in this chapter.
you've done a great job of "explaining" Jag's meeting with the Solos in Tempest!
With more to come…
jedi_princess18: See my reply to ChissGoddess above.
Auntie: Did I miss something? When did he become Admiral?
Offscreen. In the previous chapter he was still a Captain. In the first scene of this chapter, he muses about getting a command position when he’s done with the undercover gig. Turns out, that included a promotion.
And buying his own armada? Never does anything on a small scale does he?
The Fels never do. It does seem like something an Emperor might do, though, doesn’t it?
Solo_and_Fel: I really like the idea of Jag steathily buying up star destroyers. That can't be that easy to do.
Nope. That’s why Soontir had to assign the mission to someone he could unconditionally trust to do it right.
A small detail yet I could see being all gruff making Jag squirm a bit in his own skin.
Heehee! I think so, too. Poor Jag, I torment him so.
Lyne: I think Jag probably enjoyed getting to boss around some Chiss for a change, too.
Thanks for all the great replies, everyone!
I’m busily reading Exile! Once I’ve had a chance to digest the story developments, and the Jag scenes in particular, I’ll post my plans about the upcoming chapters of TMOAE.
And remember, new post a week from today!
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TelannaTani
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So, Lex.
It's Tuesday.
Lex posted: And remember, new post a week from today!
Why, that's... today!!
I know you've read Exile.
So here's a little [poke] for you.
*fingers tap together mischieviously*
Update today??
Voz
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IceFire27
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3/6/07 5:27pm
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Lex please we need more! soon?
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Darth_Lex
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3/6/07 5:58pm
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Voz: I know you've read Exile.
Busted!
See the news below.
IceFire27: As soon as I can.
First, a scheduling announcement:
Unfortunately, there won’t be a post tonight. I’ve been battling a nasty headcold since Saturday, and I simply haven’t had the energy to finish off the post. Too much sinus congestion and sleeping, not enough concentrating on fanfic.
I will do my absolute best to get the post up as soon as I can. Possibly tomorrow, more like Thursday. With any luck… And I’ll certainly be aiming to post again next Tuesday, too.
Thanks for understanding, everybody.
Now, the “real” news…
AUTHOR ANNOUNCEMENT
I’ve finished reading Exile. In light of the events and characterizations in the book, I’ve decided to continue with The Making of an Emperor as canon speculation through the events of the novel.
I anticipate three to five posts taking place as “missing scenes” during the LOTF series. It’s probably not a surprise that the first three will account for the events of Betrayal, Bloodlines, and Tempest. Then one or two chapters, I think, to account for Exile. (Which, by the way, gets us past the spoilers period – so I shouldn’t have to clog the thread with too many warnings. )
After that, another four or five chapters from the post-LOTF era, ending with the coronation of Emperor Fel I.
Which should conclude the story around the end of April – well in advance of Sacrifice no doubt making this whole thing AU at the end of May.
See you back as soon as I can…
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He fibs...he finished Exile and couldn't stop speculating. That's why he hasn't finished the post. I'll wrangle up the wayward author shortly, folks.
Just kidding Talk all the time you need.
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