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Dear Qahsa – The Yuuzhan Vong Strike Back [Diary 2007 - OC, Tahiri] - 09/28 - Happy b-day Blue
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Maggy
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1/7/07 3:52pm
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Dear Qahsa – The Yuuzhan Vong Strike Back [Diary 2007 - OC, Tahiri] - 09/28 - Happy b-day Blue
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9/28 10:40am (17 edits total)
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Title: Dear Qahsa – The Yuuzhan Vong Strike Back
Author: Maggy
Characters: OCs, Tahiri, Tekli, Danni, Zonama Sekot, ...
Timeframe: after NJO
Genre: Challenge Entry
Summary: The qasha entries of the young Yuuzhan Vong warrior, Kshatra, Domain Kraal.
Author’s Notes: Written for the Dear Diary 2007 Challenge:
There really wouldn't be very many rules and regulations here, but it would go through the entire year of '07. The premise is to write diary entries from the point of view of one character, preferably an OC. You don't have to write every day, although you could write as often as you want. A minimum of two (maybe one a month) would be okay. We all know about DRL and how unsympathetic he (or she) can be toward our muses.
Sure, your POV character should be an OC, but you can use as many canon characters as you want in the supporting cast. Any era is acceptable, and your lead character can be anything you can think of from a great Jedi Master to the Republic's most ordinary citizen. Perhaps a ruthless bounty hunter or a beautiful dancer, or anything in between. Like I said whatever you dream up.
SW belongs to George Lucas except those OC’s they are mine 
Thanks to Spike2002 for helping with title and giving it a look over (at times at least) 
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Maggy
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Date Posted:
1/7/07 3:53pm
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RE: Dear Qahsa – The Yuuzhan Vong Strike Back [Diary Challenge - OC, Tahiri, others]
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The war is over and now the proud warriors of the Yuuzhan Vong are trapped on this living planet. Not only that, we are watched by Jeedai.
Female Jeedai.
What a shame that is!
The gods have left us for Shimrra’s betrayal. They would never have allowed the infidels to rule over us.
This Jeedai and this planet are trying to establish a new system. One without hierarchy. We, the proud warriors of Yun-Yammka shall now be gardeners, weed like the shamed ones.
But there are no shamed ones anymore. They are still shamed but it’s not allowed to call them like that anymore.
It is also strange for a warrior to write a qahsa at all but I feel like writing down what’s going on.
I’m Kshatra from Domain Kraal. This alone is not really honourable and not something I’m proud of but it is not changeable.
Most of my Domain fought in the skies of Borleia and died there. The remaining ones were greatly discredited for the loss of the planet to the infidels.
I was too young to fly with them and now it is too late to fight. Secretly I train but there is no chance that I ever am able to fly.
My working shift is going to start – later more about those Jeedai.
One day the proud Yuuzhan Vong will conquer this galaxy and then they can weed!
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Spike2002
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Date Posted:
1/7/07 4:21pm
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RE: Dear Qahsa – The Yuuzhan Vong Strike Back [Diary Challenge - OC, Tahiri, others]
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Great start Maggy.
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Thrawn McEwok
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Date Posted:
1/7/07 5:28pm
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RE: Dear Qahsa – The Yuuzhan Vong Strike Back [Diary Challenge - OC, Tahiri, others]
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*grins* Really, really good...
- The Imperial Ewok
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G__Anakin
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1/7/07 5:31pm
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Looks good!
Please PM me with updates!
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Maggy
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Date Posted:
1/9/07 2:26pm
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RE: Dear Qahsa – The Yuuzhan Vong Strike Back [Diary Challenge - OC, Tahiri, others]
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1/9/07 2:28pm (2 edits total)
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Spike:
thank you
Wollknäuel:
 thank you
*grins back at*
G__:
I'm going to pm you
thank you
~ Mags ~
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PRINCESSCAMBRIA
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1/9/07 2:49pm
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Really nice start...Can't wait to see where this goes. 
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YodaKenobi
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Date Posted:
1/9/07 3:17pm
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RE: Dear Qahsa – The Yuuzhan Vong Strike Back [Diary Challenge - OC, Tahiri, others]
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Good start, Maggy Hurry up and post some more!
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SilSolo
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Date Posted:
1/9/07 3:25pm
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Please write more Yuuzhie goodies soon
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Maggy
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Date Posted:
1/11/07 12:15pm
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Cam:
Are you okay with being called Cam?
Really nice start...Can't wait to see where this goes.
thank you
I’m looking forward to see where it leeds me too
Yobs:
Good start, Maggy Hurry up and post some more!
thanks
Working on it, working on it!
Sil:
Please write more Yuuzhie goodies soon
I’ll try
You can be assured there will be more Yuuzhan Vong at least
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Maggy
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Date Posted:
1/11/07 2:32pm
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RE: Dear Qahsa – The Yuuzhan Vong Strike Back [Diary Chal - OC, Tahiri, others] - update 01-11
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1/11/07 2:33pm (2 edits total)
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Note This part is not beta-readed
and English isn't my native language
[Edited because of language]
I didn’t want to start with a rant! But weed for a whole day - a week – dunno how long - and stay sane!
Your whole body turns stiff from this low work. Shall the Jeedai weed! Hell, they just overlooked and advised how to handle a shovel - a metal abomination after all. Those are truly shameful days for the Yuuzhan Vong.
To be fair, there was only one Jeedai, a blonde one, rather ugly if you take Yuuzhan Vong standard. Blonde hair, even skin, no scars nor tattoos! That they consider that beautiful?! Those infidels are strange!
Rumours spread that this planet had been once Yuuzhan’tar. If this is true how dare it to fight against its children?
Yun–Harla is really playing with us!
This blonde Jeedai, it is said she reformed our own growing against us is now working with shapers. They always had been better ones. They don’t need to weed. And yes, this weeding is getting to me.
I haven’t seen the other two Jeedai yet but they can’t be far away.
Rumours spread that there will be soon a travel through dark space.
The last battle was over merely one of those infidel months and they depart us already. And they call that peace!
We are nothing more then slaves now but my opinion doesn’t count at all.
I wish I have my amphistaff back – at least I would die fighting and not as a weeding worm!
A priest announced in the late afternoon that it is about time that we form groups which shall go hunting and fishing.
I’m sure Sekot will not be happy about that. She – can a planet even have a gender? - It will surely interfere with the plan at some point with “plants are enough to feed beings”.
I have to be in one of those groups – like every warrior wants to.
Darn Shimrra and his betrayal!
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kecen
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Date Posted:
1/11/07 3:18pm
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RE: Dear Qahsa – The Yuuzhan Vong Strike Back [Diary Chal - OC, Tahiri, others] - update 01-11
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I actually think the choppy language adds something to the storytelling (sorry if it wasn't your intent!)
What do the Yuuzhan Vong consider an "ideal woman"?
(wait weren't there female warriors, like in Balance Point?)
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Very nice update.
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1/12/07 6:16am
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This is a very nice thing you have going here, you really convey the warrior's frustrated thoughts well. The short sharp paragraphs make them appear all the more snappy and discontended with their situation.
Can't wait to read more 
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Great Chapter
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Date Posted:
1/13/07 7:46am
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kecen:
I actually think the choppy language adds something to the storytelling (sorry if it wasn't your intent!)
the choppy language was intended
My main worry is always grammar and word confusion … you might read here “dairy entries” instead of “diary entries” 
What do the Yuuzhan Vong consider an "ideal woman"?
(wait weren't there female warriors, like in Balance Point?)
the ideal woman? 
Tattooed and scared skin, maybe split lip, damaged nose, amputated fingers? Dunno?
Vector Prime posted:
He found Danni, as he did all humans, quite repulsive, for while Yomin Carr's people, the Yuuzhan Vong, resembled humans in form - though they were on average a dozen or so centimeters taller and quite a bit heavier and had less hair on their heads, both face and scalp - their ways were hardly similar. Even if Yomin Carr might admit that Danni was somewhat attractive physically - though how could she be, with not a single scar or tattoo to mark her rise toward godhood! - those tenet differences, attitude differences, made him consider any union with her with disgust.
Does that help to image the ideal woman?
SilSolo:
Very nice update.
thank you
Blue_but_beautiful:
This is a very nice thing you have going here, you really convey the warrior's frustrated thoughts well. The short sharp paragraphs make them appear all the more snappy and discontended with their situation.
Thank you
I hope I can keep it up
Can't wait to read more
I hope I have soon an idea what’s gonna happen next – can’t let him weed a year long, can I?
G_:
Great Chapter
Thank you
~ Mags ~
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