G__Anakin posted:Great job Earthknight!
Lola64 posted:Talk about a marathon chapter. Sorry for the delay but I had to have time to get through it all in one sitting. Alema and Tahiri on a mission together. Wow. I feel really bad for Torres. He's going to have his hands full with those two. I'm just saying. Great background on Saeon. Dark guys are never born dark, are they? A tragic life but Merlin shouldn't blame himself. How could anyone have forseen what would have happened? Yay. Cloud is back. I wonder if they'll be taking him along on their trip or will he stay behind? I hope he gets to go. It'll make it all the more interesting. Story is coming along nicely Earthknight.
VaderLVR64 posted:I hope I can leave a longer review later, but in just in case I don't, I'll say this:
G__Anakin posted:Great job!!
Mira_Jade posted:Getting VERY interesting. Alema turned and looked at her. “You heard me. A blonde…shoeless…womprat.” She said at Tahiri. “Oh…Oh…Oh that tears it! You know what you are, Alema!! You are nothing but a whiny…hair brained…low down piece of voxyn poodoo!!!” shouted Tahiri. LOL, bravo with that. I miss seeing Tahiri like this, and you wrote Alema perfectly. More latter, I have to get off of the computer now. ~MJ
Courtney_Solo posted:Great update! Alema & Tahiri fighting ... me likey.
Jedi-Ant posted:Alema & Tahiri.... [Review to be inserted here at a later date. Watch this space.] Thanks for the PM! I will review later, I promise!!! Ant.