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YodaKenobi Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: May '03	Date Posted: 4/25 3:54pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Completed 4/11
	Whitey: 50?! It might be less I don't remember where you left off. Wedge: Yep, even made a pic to commemorate this event. If only they listened to Ackbar... No one ever seems to And here I thought it would've been "Return of the Attack of the Phantom OC Empire" I'll save that for the last fic Heh, yeah I even checked to see how many words and pages there were. Empire of the Hand came in at 129,836 words and 325 pages; Age of Heros clocked in at 280,228 words and 682 pages; Exodus came in at 307,504 words and 711 pages. No footnotes were counted, however. Roughly the same counts I get I think J.K. Rowling may have some serious competition at this rate. lol. Not financially Sweet. Probably better that it's one of the Sky/Solo clan than this guy: lol! Yes. Spoiler: The person leading the 501st will not be House. SWEET! Now if only I could figure out who the Last Cylon is in BSG... I'm sure you'll figure it out eventually White'ika! Teasers in a minute! -----signature----- FADA Therapist The Lands of the Dead: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28522077/p1/ Blood Trail: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28636429/p1 "We're Jedi, not assassins."— Anakin Solo
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YodaKenobi Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: May '03	Date Posted: 4/25 4:06pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Completed 4/11 - Date Edited: 4/25 4:51pm (3 edits total) Edited By: YodaKenobi
	Okay, here's the first of many teasers about the next fic, "The Lands of the Dead." Unlike the space between Age of Heroes and Exodus (1 month), the events in The Lands of the Dead take place 6 months after the end of Exodus. A lot has changed in that time, and you'll see what I mean in a minute. The basic structure of Lands of the Dead is two main storylines: One focuses on events in Raithian Space, told through the eyes of prisoners (like Luke), captors, and rescuers (that's right, anothe rescue attempt!). The other, focuses on the descent of two brothers to the dark side of the Force, their growing emity, and ultimately, their attempt to destroy each other. Here's the dramatis personae for Lands of the Dead, which I think holds some clues and some big surprises: Aero Gin; bounty hunter (female, unknown species) Alema Rar; Sith Acolyte (female Twi'lek) Anakin Solo; Jedi Knight (male human) Ayddar Nylykerka; Galactic Alliance intelligence director (male Tammarian) Baliss Phlora; Jedi Apprentice (female human) Ben Skywalker; Jedi Student (male human) Boba Fett; bounty hunter (male human) Booster Terrik; captain, Errant Venture (male human) Brosh; commander of Thrawn's houshold phalanx (male Chiss) C-3PO; protocol droid Cakhmaim; Leia Solo's bodyguard (male Noghri) Callista Ming; Sith Acolyte (female human) Cilghal; Jedi Master, prisoner (female Mon Calamari) Corssa; Imperial Commander (female Chiss) Dorrin Kogg; senate speaker (male Sermarian) Emala; war profiteer (female Squib) Evlyn Tabory; agent of the Chief Syndic (female human) Faybol; Darth Malig's Hand (male Kuhr) Ferani; Tenel Ka's Chamberlain (female human) Fyor Rodan; Chief of State of the Galactic Alliance (male human) Garm Bel Iblis; general (male human) Ghost; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human) Gijjle Vo Mio; Lord of Treasure (female Twi'lek) Grees; war profiteer (male Squib) H'sishi; crewmember, Wild Karrde (female Togorian) Han Solo; captain, Millennium Falcon (male human) Harrow; Sith Alchemist (male Rezor) Hunter; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human) Jacen Solo/Darth Hâvok; Sith Apprentice, General of the Raithian Armies, and First King of the Hapes Consortium (male human) Jagged Fel; CEDF Commander, Vanguard Squadron (male human) Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (female human) Jorj Car'das; former smuggler (male human) Jysella Horn; Sith Acolyte (female human) Kenth Hamner; Jedi Master, prisoner (male human) Kirana Ti; Jedi Master (female human) Khrom; Lord of Law (male, unknown species) Kurol; shared consciousness of Faybol's brood Kyle Katarn; Jedi Master (male human) Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (male human) Kyrn; Colonel, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (female Chiss) Lando Calrissian; entrepreneur (male human) Leia Organa Solo; Jedi Knight (female human) Lorra Klorne; Commander, Galactic Alliance Fourth Fleet (female human) Lowbacca; Sith Acolyte (male Wookiee) Luke Skywalker; Jedi Master, prisoner (male human) Malig; Dark Lord of the Sith (male, unknown species) Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master (female human) Malachor; prisoner (male human) Marekk; Lord of Lords (male human) Meewalh; Leia's bodyguard (female Noghri) Mirax Horn; art dealer (female human) Nyll; Commander of Raithian Elite Commandos (male human) Na'rul Thun; smuggler (male Gotal) Oaxley; Lieutenant, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (male Chiss) Octa Ramis; Jedi Master (female human) Orad Guthree; farmer (male human) Otakahn Rai; Lord of Occultism (male humanoid) Pyke; prisoner (male Zabrak) R2-D2; astromech droid Raynar Thul; Sith Acolyte (male human) Reevor Dactoy; Lord of Machines (male Kel Dor) Relequy A'kla; senator (female Caamasi) S1-D1; Tendrando Arm's decoy droid S2-D4; Tendrando Arm's decoy droid Saba Sebatyne; Jedi Master (female Barabel) Salo; prisoner (male, unknown species) Sayge; captain, the Exodus (male human) Sha; Lord of Creed (female Spindo) Shada D'ukal; Talon Karrde's business associate (female human) Sligh; war profiteer (male Squib) Soontir Fel; Chief Syndic Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (male human) Strack; colonel, Raithian Army (male, species unknown) Streen; Jedi Master (male human) Strafe; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human) Ta'a Chume; former Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium (female human) Ta'laam Ranth; Minister of State (male Gotal) Tahiri Veila; Jedi Knight, prisoner (female human) Talon Karrde; independent information broker (male human) Tekli; Jedi Knight (female Chadra-Fan) Tenel Ka Djo; Jedi Knight and Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium (female human) Tionne; Jedi Master (female human) Tesar Sebatyne; Jedi Knight (male Barabel) Than Ulgran; director, Galactic Alliance Security (male human) Thrawn; former Imperial Grand Admiral (male Chiss) Traest Kre'fey; Admiral, Galactic Alliance Fifth Fleet (male Bothan) Tresina Lobi; Jedi Master, prisoner (female Chev) Triebakk; senator (male Wookiee) Trima-ogo Iamodi; Lord of Science (male Glyphix) Valin Horn; Jedi Knight (male human) Vergere; former Jedi Knight (female Fosh)* Vigorn; Head of the Queen Mother's Royal Guard (male human) Voss Parck; Admiral, Empire of the Hand (male human) Wampa; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human) Wedge Antilles; retired general (male human) Wrev Caster; Jedi Knight (male human) Zekk; Sith Acolyte (male human) Zil Bahete; Lord of Wisdom (female human) Pretty long Lots of new characters. Kudos to anyone who can figure out who the all the "Lords" are 5-10 characters might not make it in the fic depending on a few things I haven't decided yet. There may also be some late additions, and there are at least 2 names I'm keeping off the dramatis intentionally because their appearance is a surprise -----signature----- FADA Therapist The Lands of the Dead: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28522077/p1/ Blood Trail: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28636429/p1 "We're Jedi, not assassins."— Anakin Solo
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Whitey Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 4/25 5:13pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
	Holy long ass DP. I see nothing's changed. I may never be able to finish this, though. -----signature----- "I really didn't rub against his bicep? I mean, it had an elbow."
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TahiriSoloFan Registered: May '03	Date Posted: 4/25 6:00pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
	Hmmmm....there is a lot of information in that DP! Looking forward to the start date! Will you PM when we start back up, please? -----signature----- Auntie & the Chickens ~ currently on location in Egypt, Da'Nile! What's your favorite RotS scene? Member of TKL's Wraiths! AKA ~Auntie ~ Chicken Wrangler Extraordinaire~ Josh 1:9
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canadianjedimama Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 4/25 8:50pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/26 5:56am (1 edits total) Edited By: canadianjedimama
	Wedge: Your badassedness with Photoshop knows no bounds. House as Vader is truly an act of the darkside! Yoda: So...I'm cruising through your DP, and I'm all like "Hmmm,..okay...yes...okay..." and then BAM! Zekk (Sith Acolyte) comes up and I'm all like "What the kriff?!" So now I'm having a huge moment where I'm wondering if I have fic-Alzheimer's. Not cool. So on top of my who-is-Malig homework (which I haven't started on yet ) now I have to go back and see what the frak Zekk has been up to. Guess I know what I'm doing this weekend... Cyn EDIT: Okay, I admit it, I was having fic Alzheimers. Zekk got captured in the first post . I swear to Kyle, the closer it get to thirty, the more my memory goes. On the acutal day, in about seven weeks, I think I'll probably be catatonic. That's interesting...so you mean to tell me that every Jedi that has been captured has folded like a cheap deck of cards to the Dark Side. I know that Malig is pretty manipulative and convincing, but come on! Didn't anyone tell him to get bent? Unless Sith Acolyte is Raithan for "Jedi Prisoner of War". Okay, back to my Malig-homwork. Cyn -----signature----- Lucky member of the Jagateers, my e-sister's of Jag-love! Current avatar is a homage to my first ban.... I stink at Shelf of Shame! But I'm playing again!!!
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corran2 Registered: May '06	Date Posted: 4/25 10:12pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
	Having just completed the story, I will give my review: This fic has reached new heights. All f your stories have been surpassed by their sequal. I really didn't think it was possible for "THe Age of Heores" to be beaten. I guess I was wrong. First, I"d like to compliment you on the epilogue. It was a work of genius. Emotions were high. it sets the stage for the next story nicely, and it has some major twists. Second, I'd like to compliment you on Jacen. The authors have bucthered his chracter in LOTF. He has always been my favorite Solo child, mostly because of his peace loving ways. I'm glad to say you have done his chracter a great justice. His fall to the Dark Side was convincing, you could actually believe it. He was probably my favorite chracter in this story. Third, the space battles. Now, I'm the kind of person who doesn't really enjoy battle scenes as much as I like dialogue, but your battles give me an adrineline rush. It's so perfectly described, I visualize it so perfectly. Fourth, That Dramtis Personae is frakkin awesome! Severel chracter jump out at me, including Boba Fett(who I don't believe has been in any of your stories so far),Jorj Car'das, Evlyn Tabory, Soontir Fel, Thrawn, and especially a prisoner named Malachor! Maybe KOTOR has something to do with these stories after all? My last Darth Malig prediction for "Exodus" is a man who is smarter then any person, who can kill people without flinching, and who controls the game. Yes, you guessed it, I'm talking about none other than Benjamin Linus! -----signature----- He changed the rules-Benjamin Linus MacCain/Palin 08! God Loves You! Current TV Show I'm viewing on DVD: The X-Files Season 4 Currently Reading- Bag Of Bones By Stephen King
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Clone_Cmdr_Wedge Registered: Mar '06	Date Posted: 4/26 12:09am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/26 9:29am (1 edits total) Edited By: Clone_Cmdr_Wedge
	Frak that is one long DP. Guess my comments will be just as long. Aero Gin; bounty hunter (female, unknown species) No surprise there... Alema Rar; Sith Acolyte (female Twi'lek) Blinks Dang, sorry Alema, guess some things never change... Ayddar Nylykerka; Galactic Alliance intelligence director (male Tammarian) Baliss Phlora; Jedi Apprentice (female human) Ben Skywalker; Jedi Student (male human) Nothing out of the ordinary there... Boba Fett; kick-arse bounty hunter (male human) </Han> Boba Fett? Boba Fett! Where! Somehow I get the feeling he isn't going to be helpful here... Booster Terrik; captain, Errant Venture (male human) Brosh; commander of Thrawn's houshold phalanx (male Chiss) C-3PO; protocol droid Cakhmaim; Leia Solo's bodyguard (male Noghri) Nothing new. Next... Callista Ming; Sith Acolyte (female human) OMG that's...what we knew all along. Corssa; Imperial Commander (female Chiss) Dorrin Kogg; senate speaker (male Sermarian) Emala; war profiteer (female Squib) Evlyn Tabory; agent of the Chief Syndic (female human) Nice to see Evlyn again... Faybol; Darth Malig's Hand (male Kuhr) Right or left hand, I wonder... Ferani; Tenel Ka's Chamberlain (female human) Fyor Rodan; Puppet Chief of State of the Galactic Alliance Wishing He Was Having A Really Bad Dream (male human) All's normal there too... Garm Bel Iblis; general (male human) Ghost; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human) Nice, Garm Bel Iblis. I was wondering if he was going to show up... Grees; war profiteer (male Squib) H'sishi; crewmember, Wild Karrde (female Togorian) Han Solo; captain, Millennium Falcon (male human) Nothing new here either... Harrow; Sith Alchemist (male Rezor) Hunter; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human) Sith Alchemist? Rezor? That's a new one, I think... Jacen Solo/Darth Hâvok; Sith Apprentice, General of the Raithian Armies, First King of the Hapes Consortium, and Person With the Longest List of Jobs That Makes It Seem He's Covering for a Deficientcy (male human) Now that's a mouthful... Jagged Fel; CEDF Commander, Vanguard Squadron (male human) Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (female human) Jorj Car'das; former smuggler (male human) Awww, Jag and Jaina together, as it was ment to be... Hey, someone was bound to notice that eventually Jysella Horn; Sith Acolyte (female human) I want to say I'm surprised, but not. Poor little brainwashed girl. Someone's dad really wants to kick some sense into his daughter right now... Kenth Hamner; Jedi Master, prisoner (male human) Kirana Ti; Jedi Master (female human) Kurol; shared consciousness of Faybol's brood Nothing new here. Move along, move along... Kyle Katarn; Jedi Master (male human) And the Awesomness meter has just exploded. Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (male human) Kyrn; Colonel, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (female Chiss) Lando Calrissian; entrepreneur (male human) Leia Organa Solo; Jedi Knight (female human) Lorra Klorne; Commander, Galactic Alliance Fourth Fleet (female human) Wonder how long Klorne's going to be with the Alliance... Lowbacca; Sith Acolyte (male Wookiee) Now that's something I haven't seen: A Sith Wookiee. I'd definatly stay out of his way... Luke Skywalker; Jedi Master, prisoner (male human) Malig; Dark Lord of the Sith (male, unknown species) Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master (female human) Nope. Nothing new here... Malachor; prisoner (male human) Blinks. Looks at it again. Blinks Malachor ? That's an...interesting name. Why the heck would someone be named Malachor? That's almost like calling yourself Iwo Jima... Now he could have an interesting story... Meewalh; Leia's bodyguard (female Noghri) Mirax Horn; art dealer (female human) Nyll; Commander of Raithian Elite Commandos (male human) Na'rul Thun; smuggler (male Gotal) Oaxley; Lieutenant, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (male Chiss) Octa Ramis; Jedi Master (female human) Orad Guthree; farmer (male human) More nothing... Pyke; prisoner (male Zabrak) R2-D2; astromech droid Not much here either... Raynar Thul; Sith Acolyte (male human) There goes another one. Relequy A'kla; senator (female Caamasi) S1-D1; Tendrando Arm's decoy droid S2-D4; Tendrando Arm's decoy droid Saba Sebatyne; Jedi Master (female Barabel) Salo; prisoner (male, unknown species) Sayge; captain, the Exodus (male human) Interesting, but not greatly so. Yet. Shada D'ukal; Talon Karrde's business associate (female human) Sligh; war profiteer (male Squib) Soontir Fel; Chief Syndic Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (male human) Nice... Strack; colonel, Raithian Army (male, species unknown) Streen; Jedi Master (male human) Strafe; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human) Ta'a Chume; former Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium (female human) Ta'laam Ranth; Minister of State (male Gotal) Tahiri Veila; Jedi Knight, prisoner (female human) Talon Karrde; independent information broker (male human) Well, I don't know if Karrde is strictly independent anymore... Tekli; Jedi Knight (female Chadra-Fan) Tenel Ka Djo; Jedi Knight and Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium (female human) Tionne; Jedi Master (female human) Tesar Sebatyne; Jedi Knight (male Barabel) Than Ulgran; director, Galactic Alliance Security (male human) Next... Thrawn; former Imperial Grand Admiral (male Chiss) Cues up Imperial March Traest Kre'fey; Admiral, Galactic Alliance Fifth Fleet (male Bothan) Tresina Lobi; Jedi Master, prisoner (female Chev) Triebakk; senator (male Wookiee) ** Valin Horn; Jedi Knight (male human) Not much here... Vergere; former Jedi Knight (female Fosh)* Dear god NO! Gets flamethrower Who wants some KFV? Vigorn; Head of the Queen Mother's Royal Guard (male human) Voss Parck; Admiral, Empire of the Hand (male human) Wampa; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human) Hmm... Wedge Antilles; retired general (male human) Bet he doesn't stay retired . Are we sure this fic can contain the amount of Awesomeness that has been seen so far? Wrev Caster; Jedi Knight (male human) He's still a Jedi? Now that's a surprise. Zekk; Sith Acolyte (male human) Poor Zekk. Guess he's off of Jaina's list of potential boyfriends. The basic structure of Lands of the Dead is two main storylines: One focuses on events in Raithian Space, told through the eyes of prisoners (like Luke), captors, and rescuers (that's right, anothe rescue attempt!). Oh great, another rescue attempt. Hopefully it will go better this time... The other, focuses on the descent of two brothers to the dark side of the Force, their growing emity, and ultimately, their attempt to destroy each other. Gee, I wonder who those two brothers can be... If this was Del Ray, I wouldn't give $.02 for the chances of seeing anyone with 'Sith Alcolyte' in their title make it through the end of this series. But since this is YKU some of them might live... </Whispers> I hope> Gijjle Vo Mio; Lord of Treasure (female Twi'lek) Khrom; Lord of Law (male, unknown species) Marekk; Lord of Lords (male human) Otakahn Rai; Lord of Occultism (male humanoid) Reevor Dactoy; Lord of Machines (male Kel Dor) Sha; Lord of Creed (female Spindo) Trima-ogo Iamodi; Lord of Science (male Glyphix) Zil Bahete; Lord of Wisdom (female human) Hmm that's eight Lords (technically five Lords and three Ladies. So I'm the son of a lawyer. Sue me ) I'm betting that this is the Council of Lords that we've heard about. If we add Jacen, who I think is on it too, that would be nine... Insert Ringwraith joke here Weird random thought: Darths Sion, Nihilus, and Traya were known as the Lord of Pain, Hunger, and Betrayal (I think) respectively. Possible connection? Edit: Because it was late and I didn't notice these: 5-10 characters might not make it in the fic depending on a few things I haven't decided yet. If they don't make it, maybe they can be included in the Lands of the Dead: Extended Edition. Kinda like what happened with AoH. There may also be some late additions, and there are at least 2 names I'm keeping off the dramatis intentionally because their appearance is a surprise </HK-47> Conjecture: The fact that these two individuals are being kept off the dramatis indicates that they are known quantities and have been seen before. canadianjedimama :Your badassedness with Photoshop knows no bounds. House as Vader is truly an act of the darkside! Thanks! -----signature----- “You cannot play God then wash your hands of the things that you've created. Sooner or later, the day comes when you can't hide from the things that you've done anymore.”-Admiral Adama, 'Battlestar Galactica' "All warfare is based on deception." -Sun Tzu,
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Dark_Lord_Jax Registered: Nov '02	Date Posted: 4/26 5:47am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/26 6:05am (1 edits total) Edited By: Dark_Lord_Jax
	YodaKenobi posted: Again, the Dark Lord of the Sith ignored his reaction, instead, reaching over for the rack on the table while Jacen noted absently that Malig was left handed, and placed the spider inside another test tube. Who do we know is lefthanded?
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Caedus93 Registered: Oct '07	Date Posted: 4/27 6:00am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
	Alema Rar; Sith Acolyte (female Twi'lek) Callista Ming; Sith Acolyte (female human) Jysella Horn; Sith Acolyte (female human) Lowbacca; Sith Acolyte (male Wookiee) Raynar Thul; Sith Acolyte (male human) Zekk; Sith Acolyte (male human) So how many of these will make it to the fourth fic alive?
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Pelranius Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 4/27 10:58am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
	Oh, but where's Pellaeon? -----signature----- Fleet Junkie and Proud! Fics: Destiny's Inferno (TTT/DE AU) And the Skywalker Saga KOTOR Style Updated 7/24/06 see bio for details
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YodaKenobi Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: May '03	Date Posted: 4/28 4:23pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
	Whitey: Holy long ass DP. I see nothing's changed. Yeah, I still have the same problems I may never be able to finish this, though. No worries It's really long. TSF: Hmmmm....there is a lot of information in that DP! Yeah, I think it's the most informative DP I've ever made Looking forward to the start date! Glad to hear it I'm really excited about this one. Will you PM when we start back up, please? Of course! canadianjedimama: Your badassedness with Photoshop knows no bounds. House as Vader is truly an act of the darkside! Wedge has mad skillz, yo. Yoda: So...I'm cruising through your DP, and I'm all like "Hmmm,..okay...yes...okay..." and then BAM! Zekk (Sith Acolyte) comes up and I'm all like "What the kriff?!" Alema, Callista, Lowbacca, Raynar Thul, and Jysella also bear the title "Sith Acolyte" So now I'm having a huge moment where I'm wondering if I have fic-Alzheimer's. Not cool. So on top of my who-is-Malig homework (which I haven't started on yet ) now I have to go back and see what the frak Zekk has been up to. Chapter 1 and 14, IIRC, are the only ones with Zekk. Guess I know what I'm doing this weekend... EDIT: Okay, I admit it, I was having fic Alzheimers. Zekk got captured in the first post . He was also in the chapter title "The Prisoner" ( I think it was 14) in which we see him being badly tortured by Rénin... I swear to Kyle, the closer it get to thirty, the more my memory goes. On the acutal day, in about seven weeks, I think I'll probably be catatonic. LOL! Sorry to hear that. Maybe Malig will be able to revive you That's interesting...so you mean to tell me that every Jedi that has been captured has folded like a cheap deck of cards to the Dark Side. I know that Malig is pretty manipulative and convincing, but come on! Didn't anyone tell him to get bent? Yep, not all the Jedi are following Malig. Luke, Tahiri, Tresina Lobi, Kenth Hamner, Cilghal, and others have not joined him. The characters who have become "Sith Acolytes" have specific reasons. Some you can probably figure out, others might be more difficult. I'm sure if you look back to chapter 41 (I think) when Lowie is mentioned and what's going on, it will be fairly easy to see why he now follows Malig. Unless Sith Acolyte is Raithan for "Jedi Prisoner of War". lol, not quite Okay, back to my Malig-homwork. Good luck corran: Good to see you! Having just completed the story, I will give my review: This fic has reached new heights. All f your stories have been surpassed by their sequal. I really didn't think it was possible for "THe Age of Heores" to be beaten. I guess I was wrong. Wow, thanks so much That's very kind of you to say. First, I"d like to compliment you on the epilogue. It was a work of genius. Emotions were high. it sets the stage for the next story nicely, and it has some major twists. Thanks again. There was a lot to pack in there and I thought it was better to leave some things unsaid. Glad it all worked for you. Second, I'd like to compliment you on Jacen. The authors have bucthered his chracter in LOTF. He has always been my favorite Solo child, mostly because of his peace loving ways. I'm glad to say you have done his chracter a great justice. His fall to the Dark Side was convincing, you could actually believe it. He was probably my favorite chracter in this story. Thanks so much for that Jacen is definitely the main character in this one and I'm glad you're finding his fall believable. It was really important to me that the character didn't do a 180 and become evil. I want to stay true to who Jacen is while doing the gradual slide into darkness. He's choosing the dark side because he honestly believes its the true way for a Force-user now, not because he's angry, or fearful, or greedy. Jacen still has his conscience intact. Third, the space battles. Now, I'm the kind of person who doesn't really enjoy battle scenes as much as I like dialogue, but your battles give me an adrineline rush. It's so perfectly described, I visualize it so perfectly. I get bored during space battles sometimes too, so I try and make them like any other fight and give them more purposes than just two sides clashing. Glad you find them so exciting. Fourth, That Dramtis Personae is frakkin awesome! Severel chracter jump out at me, including Boba Fett(who I don't believe has been in any of your stories so far), You're right. I was originally going to use Boba in this Jedi Academy fic I was considering writing back in 2004, but the idea got tossed out in favor of focusing on this series. Boba was actually going to break Ganner Rhysode's leg on the Rapture. I kept the Rapture, at least Jorj Car'das, Evlyn Tabory, Soontir Fel, Thrawn, and especially a prisoner named Malachor! Maybe KOTOR has something to do with these stories after all? "Malachor" is a definite clue. It may not be the character's real name And I would say part of my motivation for writing this was telling a story that tied the whole Star Wars saga into one whole. That includes KotoR, so don't be surprised if there are some major connections My last Darth Malig prediction for "Exodus" is a man who is smarter then any person, who can kill people without flinching, and who controls the game. Yes, you guessed it, I'm talking about none other than Benjamin Linus! That would be awesome. Ben's evil geniusness is a constant source of inspiration for me when writing Malig Thanks so much for reading through this whole thing and replying Wedge: Frak that is one long DP. I know Guess my comments will be just as long. No surprise there... There will be some surprises with Aero... Blinks Dang, sorry Alema, guess some things never change... Fate can be cruel... Nothing out of the ordinary there... Yeah. Well, Ben is listed as "Jedi Student" now instead of "Child." Minor upgrade. </Han> Boba Fett? Boba Fett! Where! Somehow I get the feeling he isn't going to be helpful here... Depends on what you mean by "helpful" I'm sure he'll be helping someone. OMG that's...what we knew all along. Yeah, least surprising change in title ever, I guess Nice to see Evlyn again... I think so Right or left hand, I wonder... "Back," actually All's normal there too... Nice, Garm Bel Iblis. I was wondering if he was going to show up... He was in AoH very briefly. Haven't seen him in a long, long time. Sith Alchemist? Rezor? That's a new one, I think... Yep, a new villain I think you'll like him. Now that's a mouthful... I know, when I was typing those I thought, "should I cut some of these off?" But then I thought it might be confusing in the fic for new readers if I didn't list them and then Jacen goes to Hapes... Awww, Jag and Jaina together, as it was ment to be... Hey, someone was bound to notice that eventually Yeah... I'm a little surprised it was you though I want to say I'm surprised, but not. Poor little brainwashed girl. Someone's dad really wants to kick some sense into his daughter right now... Or at least ask for his cool lightsaber back And the Awesomness meter has just exploded. When I posted I accidently had a typo saying Kyle was a "female human" I'm glad I edited before anyone noticed Wonder how long Klorne's going to be with the Alliance... Good question. Now that's something I haven't seen: A Sith Wookiee. I'd definatly stay out of his way... Think back to what happened to Lowie and shouldn't be that hard to figure out why, given the fact that he's a Wookiee Blinks. Looks at it again. Blinks Malachor ? That's an...interesting name. It is, isn't it? Why the heck would someone be named Malachor? That's almost like calling yourself Iwo Jima... But that's what I'm going to name my first child. Little Iwo Jima Kenobi Anyway, "Malachor" might not be the character's real name... Now he could have an interesting story... You could say that There goes another one. Raynar has a connection to Callista going back to the 8th Cortex and The Living Force, but we'll get into that later. Well, I don't know if Karrde is strictly independent anymore... Point Cues up Imperial March Yep. I've been dying to bring him back into the story, and I promise he comes in with a bang Dear god NO! Gets flamethrower* Who wants some KFV?* Colonel Wedgers? Bet he doesn't stay retired . Are we sure this fic can contain the amount of Awesomeness that has been seen so far? Wedge will probably be confined to a relatively small role in this one, I'm afraid. But larger in fic 4! He's still a Jedi? Now that's a surprise. Won't be the last surprise from Wrev in this one Poor Zekk. Guess he's off of Jaina's list of potential boyfriends. Unless she likes bad boys Oh great, another rescue attempt. Hopefully it will go better this time... Well, it's going to be alike a million times more dangerous Gee, I wonder who those two brothers can be... Spoiler: William and Alec Baldwin. If this was Del Ray, I wouldn't give $.02 for the chances of seeing anyone with 'Sith Alcolyte' in their title make it through the end of this series. But since this is YKU some of them might live... </Whispers> I hope> Have to wait and see on that one Hmm that's eight Lords (technically five Lords and three Ladies. So I'm the son of a lawyer. Sue me ) I know, I know, I was thinking about that. I wasn't sure whether to change the actual title and just have them referred to as "Lady Vo Mio" and so on or not. Afraid having "Lady of Treasure" might sound inappropriate But seriously, I'm afraid it will make "Council of Lords" seem slightly off. I'm betting that this is the Council of Lords that we've heard about. Yep! If we add Jacen, who I think is on it too, that would be nine... Insert Ringwraith joke here Rénin was the "Lord of War." A position Jacen is supposed to fill. Weird random thought: Darths Sion, Nihilus, and Traya were known as the Lord of Pain, Hunger, and Betrayal (I think) respectively. Possible connection? It would have been a nice one if I had remembered that Edit: Because it was late and I didn't notice these: If they don't make it, maybe they can be included in the Lands of the Dead: Extended Edition. Kinda like what happened with AoH. I'll be sure to keep ahold of the outtake then </HK-47> Conjecture: The fact that these two individuals are being kept off the dramatis indicates that they are known quantities and have been seen before. Or perhaps their affiliation would be spoilerific? Something to consider. Thanks for your thoughts Dark_Lord_Jax: Who do we know is lefthanded? Tahiri, for one. And all of the right-handers if Malig is from some mirror universe... I think that Tahi pointed this out somewhere in the thread, can't remember what I told her... Caedus: So how many of these will make it to the fourth fic alive? A great question! One I can't answer though Pelranius: Oh, but where's Pellaeon? Sorry, no real plans for Pellaeon in this one. It's more focused on the Chiss and Empire of the Hand instead of the Remnant. The 4th fic will show the two sides comes together though and the imminent Thrawn/Pellaeon reunion. I promise we'll see them aboard the Chimaera together Thanks again, everyone. I'll have a blurb-type teaser up this Friday to give a sort of summary of the plot and next week will probably have a full trailer -----signature----- FADA Therapist The Lands of the Dead: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28522077/p1/ Blood Trail: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28636429/p1 "We're Jedi, not assassins."— Anakin Solo
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TelannaTani Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 4/29 4:29pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/29 4:30pm (1 edits total) Edited By: TelannaTani
	Gah! What a DP. I'm going to keep my conjectures to myself, as usual, but needless to say, I am intrigued. I must say, however, if there was a complete, Word/PDF version of this fic, I would be much more willing to dig into the details and guess. But I know you keep everything in your email or something equally nuts like that, so I won't ask. I'll just let those with alot less on their plates rummage through the 65 pages of story and response, and I'll read their conjectures. I enjoy the read! LotD can't get here quick enough, IMO. -----signature----- John 8:31-32 Callsign: "Voz" Padawan to BigFatty
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Morgoth_The_Enemy Registered: Sep '03	Date Posted: 4/30 11:55am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/30 11:57am (1 edits total) Edited By: Morgoth_The_Enemy
	Okay... wow. not sure what to say and I'm limited with my time here so I'll just settle for a Yes...that should sum up how I feel at the moment. Lol. Sorry i'm late Yoday, I've been battling Darth Real Life and his minions. They take a lot out of you. Anyway, I'm at Uni at the moment so I'll write a better review for your posts and paste it here when I'm online Saturday. Keep up the great work man, I can't wait to see the next batch of stuff, if this fic was anything to go by it's gonna be awesome! Morgoth -----signature----- That which is done out of love always takes place beyond good and evil FADA member My New Fic Homecoming is up!!! please read!!! see the link below! http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27880392/p1/?0
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flowerbee Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 4/30 11:09pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/30 11:10pm (1 edits total) Edited By: flowerbee
	That last line just wasn't fair. But I can't wait for the next one... promises to be quite interesting. ... don't do it, Anakin.
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THE_PIED_PIPER Title: Chapter Rep Knoxville, TN Registered: Jun '06	Date Posted: 5/1 9:08am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
	YodaKenobi posted: Whitey: Holy long ass DP. I see nothing's changed. And thank goodness for that. YodaKenobi posted: Thanks again, everyone. I'll have a blurb-type teaser up this Friday to give a sort of summary of the plot and next week will probably have a full trailer Keep me on PM please! -----signature----- "I'm going to be like Leia." - Me at age four "You're the Yen to my Yang." - My husband Roan Fel's badassery knows no bounds! Jagged Fel
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