Author Topic: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) New fic 5/30/08!
YodaKenobi 
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Registered: May '03
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Date Posted: 4/25 3:54pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Completed 4/11
Whitey: 50?!

It might be less tongue I don't remember where you left off.





Wedge: Yep, even made a pic to commemorate this event.

laugh

If only they listened to Ackbar...

No one ever seems to sad

And here I thought it would've been "Return of the Attack of the Phantom OC Empire"

I'll save that for the last fic tongue

Heh, yeah I even checked to see how many words and pages there were. Empire of the Hand came in at 129,836 words and 325 pages; Age of Heros clocked in at 280,228 words and 682 pages; Exodus came in at 307,504 words and 711 pages. No footnotes were counted, however.

Roughly the same counts I get tongue

I think J.K. Rowling may have some serious competition at this rate.

lol. Not financially silly

Sweet.
Probably better that it's one of the Sky/Solo clan than this guy:


lol! Yes. Spoiler: The person leading the 501st will not be House.

SWEET!
Now if only I could figure out who the Last Cylon is in BSG...


I'm sure you'll figure it out eventually tongue

White'ika!

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Teasers in a minute! grin

 

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YodaKenobi 
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Registered: May '03
23685_Anakin
Date Posted: 4/25 4:06pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Completed 4/11 - Date Edited: 4/25 4:51pm (3 edits total) Edited By: YodaKenobi
Okay, here's the first of many teasers about the next fic, "The Lands of the Dead." Unlike the space between Age of Heroes and Exodus (1 month), the events in The Lands of the Dead take place 6 months after the end of Exodus. A lot has changed in that time, and you'll see what I mean in a minute.

The basic structure of Lands of the Dead is two main storylines: One focuses on events in Raithian Space, told through the eyes of prisoners (like Luke), captors, and rescuers (that's right, anothe rescue attempt!). The other, focuses on the descent of two brothers to the dark side of the Force, their growing emity, and ultimately, their attempt to destroy each other.

Here's the dramatis personae for Lands of the Dead, which I think holds some clues and some big surprises:


Aero Gin; bounty hunter (female, unknown species)
Alema Rar; Sith Acolyte (female Twi'lek)
Anakin Solo; Jedi Knight (male human)
Ayddar Nylykerka; Galactic Alliance intelligence director (male Tammarian)
Baliss Phlora; Jedi Apprentice (female human)
Ben Skywalker; Jedi Student (male human)
Boba Fett; bounty hunter (male human)
Booster Terrik; captain, Errant Venture (male human)
Brosh; commander of Thrawn's houshold phalanx (male Chiss)
C-3PO; protocol droid
Cakhmaim; Leia Solo's bodyguard (male Noghri)
Callista Ming; Sith Acolyte (female human)
Cilghal; Jedi Master, prisoner (female Mon Calamari)
Corssa; Imperial Commander (female Chiss)
Dorrin Kogg; senate speaker (male Sermarian)
Emala; war profiteer (female Squib)
Evlyn Tabory; agent of the Chief Syndic (female human)
Faybol; Darth Malig's Hand (male Kuhr)
Ferani; Tenel Ka's Chamberlain (female human)
Fyor Rodan; Chief of State of the Galactic Alliance (male human)
Garm Bel Iblis; general (male human)
Ghost; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human)
Gijjle Vo Mio; Lord of Treasure (female Twi'lek)
Grees; war profiteer (male Squib)
H'sishi; crewmember, Wild Karrde (female Togorian)
Han Solo; captain, Millennium Falcon (male human)
Harrow; Sith Alchemist (male Rezor)
Hunter; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human)
Jacen Solo/Darth Hâvok; Sith Apprentice, General of the Raithian Armies, and First King of the Hapes Consortium (male human)
Jagged Fel; CEDF Commander, Vanguard Squadron (male human)
Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (female human)
Jorj Car'das; former smuggler (male human)
Jysella Horn; Sith Acolyte (female human)
Kenth Hamner; Jedi Master, prisoner (male human)
Kirana Ti; Jedi Master (female human)
Khrom; Lord of Law (male, unknown species)
Kurol; shared consciousness of Faybol's brood
Kyle Katarn; Jedi Master (male human)
Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (male human)
Kyrn; Colonel, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (female Chiss)
Lando Calrissian; entrepreneur (male human)
Leia Organa Solo; Jedi Knight (female human)
Lorra Klorne; Commander, Galactic Alliance Fourth Fleet (female human)
Lowbacca; Sith Acolyte (male Wookiee)
Luke Skywalker; Jedi Master, prisoner (male human)
Malig; Dark Lord of the Sith (male, unknown species)
Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master (female human)
Malachor; prisoner (male human)
Marekk; Lord of Lords (male human)
Meewalh; Leia's bodyguard (female Noghri)
Mirax Horn; art dealer (female human)
Nyll; Commander of Raithian Elite Commandos (male human)
Na'rul Thun; smuggler (male Gotal)
Oaxley; Lieutenant, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (male Chiss)
Octa Ramis; Jedi Master (female human)
Orad Guthree; farmer (male human)
Otakahn Rai; Lord of Occultism (male humanoid)
Pyke; prisoner (male Zabrak)
R2-D2; astromech droid
Raynar Thul; Sith Acolyte (male human)
Reevor Dactoy; Lord of Machines (male Kel Dor)
Relequy A'kla; senator (female Caamasi)
S1-D1; Tendrando Arm's decoy droid
S2-D4; Tendrando Arm's decoy droid
Saba Sebatyne; Jedi Master (female Barabel)
Salo; prisoner (male, unknown species)
Sayge; captain, the Exodus (male human)
Sha; Lord of Creed (female Spindo)
Shada D'ukal; Talon Karrde's business associate (female human)
Sligh; war profiteer (male Squib)
Soontir Fel; Chief Syndic Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (male human)
Strack; colonel, Raithian Army (male, species unknown)
Streen; Jedi Master (male human)
Strafe; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human)
Ta'a Chume; former Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium (female human)
Ta'laam Ranth; Minister of State (male Gotal)
Tahiri Veila; Jedi Knight, prisoner (female human)
Talon Karrde; independent information broker (male human)
Tekli; Jedi Knight (female Chadra-Fan)
Tenel Ka Djo; Jedi Knight and Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium (female human)
Tionne; Jedi Master (female human)
Tesar Sebatyne; Jedi Knight (male Barabel)
Than Ulgran; director, Galactic Alliance Security (male human)
Thrawn; former Imperial Grand Admiral (male Chiss)
Traest Kre'fey; Admiral, Galactic Alliance Fifth Fleet (male Bothan)
Tresina Lobi; Jedi Master, prisoner (female Chev)
Triebakk; senator (male Wookiee)
Trima-ogo Iamodi; Lord of Science (male Glyphix)
Valin Horn; Jedi Knight (male human)
Vergere; former Jedi Knight (female Fosh)*
Vigorn; Head of the Queen Mother's Royal Guard (male human)
Voss Parck; Admiral, Empire of the Hand (male human)
Wampa; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human)
Wedge Antilles; retired general (male human)
Wrev Caster; Jedi Knight (male human)
Zekk; Sith Acolyte (male human)
Zil Bahete; Lord of Wisdom (female human)



Pretty long tongue Lots of new characters. Kudos to anyone who can figure out who the all the "Lords" are mischief 5-10 characters might not make it in the fic depending on a few things I haven't decided yet. There may also be some late additions, and there are at least 2 names I'm keeping off the dramatis intentionally because their appearance is a surprise whistling

 

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Whitey 
Registered: Jan '03
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Date Posted: 4/25 5:13pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
Holy long ass DP. I see nothing's changed. tongue

I may never be able to finish this, though. sad

 

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Registered: May '03
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Date Posted: 4/25 6:00pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
Hmmmm....there is a lot of information in that DP! shock

Looking forward to the start date! hugs Will you PM when we start back up, please?

 

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canadianjedimama 
Registered: Jan '08
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Date Posted: 4/25 8:50pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/26 5:56am (1 edits total) Edited By: canadianjedimama
Wedge: Your badassedness with Photoshop knows no bounds. House as Vader is truly an act of the darkside! laugh

Yoda: So...I'm cruising through your DP, and I'm all like "Hmmm,..okay...yes...okay..." and then BAM! Zekk (Sith Acolyte) comes up and I'm all like "What the kriff?!" So now I'm having a huge moment where I'm wondering if I have fic-Alzheimer's. Not cool. shame_on_you So on top of my who-is-Malig homework (which I haven't started on yet tongue ) now I have to go back and see what the frak Zekk has been up to.

frustrated

Guess I know what I'm doing this weekend... tongue


Cyn

EDIT: Okay, I admit it, I was having fic Alzheimers. Zekk got captured in the first post doh! . I swear to Kyle, the closer it get to thirty, the more my memory goes. On the acutal day, in about seven weeks, I think I'll probably be catatonic. tongue
thinking That's interesting...so you mean to tell me that every Jedi that has been captured has folded like a cheap deck of cards to the Dark Side. I know that Malig is pretty manipulative and convincing, but come on!
Didn't anyone tell him to get bent?
Unless Sith Acolyte is Raithan for "Jedi Prisoner of War". raised_brow

Okay, back to my Malig-homwork. laugh

Cyn

 

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Date Posted: 4/25 10:12pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
Having just completed the story, I will give my review: This fic has reached new heights. All f your stories have been surpassed by their sequal. I really didn't think it was possible for "THe Age of Heores" to be beaten. I guess I was wrong.

First, I"d like to compliment you on the epilogue. It was a work of genius. Emotions were high. it sets the stage for the next story nicely, and it has some major twists.

Second, I'd like to compliment you on Jacen. The authors have bucthered his chracter in LOTF. He has always been my favorite Solo child, mostly because of his peace loving ways. I'm glad to say you have done his chracter a great justice. His fall to the Dark Side was convincing, you could actually believe it. He was probably my favorite chracter in this story.

Third, the space battles. Now, I'm the kind of person who doesn't really enjoy battle scenes as much as I like dialogue, but your battles give me an adrineline rush. It's so perfectly described, I visualize it so perfectly.

Fourth, That Dramtis Personae is frakkin awesome! Severel chracter jump out at me, including Boba Fett(who I don't believe has been in any of your stories so far),Jorj Car'das, Evlyn Tabory, Soontir Fel, Thrawn, and especially a prisoner named Malachor! Maybe KOTOR has something to do with these stories after all?


My last Darth Malig prediction for "Exodus" is a man who is smarter then any person, who can kill people without flinching, and who controls the game. Yes, you guessed it, I'm talking about none other than Benjamin Linus!

 

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Registered: Mar '06
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Date Posted: 4/26 12:09am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/26 9:29am (1 edits total) Edited By: Clone_Cmdr_Wedge
Frak that is one long DP. tired

Guess my comments will be just as long. devil

Aero Gin; bounty hunter (female, unknown species)

No surprise there...


Alema Rar; Sith Acolyte (female Twi'lek)

*Blinks* Dang, sorry Alema, guess some things never change... plain


Ayddar Nylykerka; Galactic Alliance intelligence director (male Tammarian)
Baliss Phlora; Jedi Apprentice (female human)
Ben Skywalker; Jedi Student (male human)


Nothing out of the ordinary there...


Boba Fett; kick-arse bounty hunter (male human)

</Han> Boba Fett? Boba Fett! Where!

Somehow I get the feeling he isn't going to be helpful here... mischief


Booster Terrik; captain, Errant Venture (male human)
Brosh; commander of Thrawn's houshold phalanx (male Chiss)
C-3PO; protocol droid
Cakhmaim; Leia Solo's bodyguard (male Noghri)


Nothing new. Next...


Callista Ming; Sith Acolyte (female human)

OMG that's...what we knew all along. tongue


Corssa; Imperial Commander (female Chiss)
Dorrin Kogg; senate speaker (male Sermarian)
Emala; war profiteer (female Squib)
Evlyn Tabory; agent of the Chief Syndic (female human)


Nice to see Evlyn again...


Faybol; Darth Malig's Hand (male Kuhr)

Right or left hand, I wonder... thinking


Ferani; Tenel Ka's Chamberlain (female human)
Fyor Rodan; Puppet Chief of State of the Galactic Alliance Wishing He Was Having A Really Bad Dream (male human)


All's normal there too...


Garm Bel Iblis; general (male human)
Ghost; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human)


Nice, Garm Bel Iblis. I was wondering if he was going to show up...


Grees; war profiteer (male Squib)
H'sishi; crewmember, Wild Karrde (female Togorian)
Han Solo; captain, Millennium Falcon (male human)


Nothing new here either...


Harrow; Sith Alchemist (male Rezor)
Hunter; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human)


Sith Alchemist? Rezor? That's a new one, I think... thinking


Jacen Solo/Darth Hâvok; Sith Apprentice, General of the Raithian Armies, First King of the Hapes Consortium, and Person With the Longest List of Jobs That Makes It Seem He's Covering for a Deficientcy (male human)

Now that's a mouthful... tired


Jagged Fel; CEDF Commander, Vanguard Squadron (male human)
Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (female human)
Jorj Car'das; former smuggler (male human)


Awww, Jag and Jaina together, as it was ment to be... love

Hey, someone was bound to notice that eventually tongue


Jysella Horn; Sith Acolyte (female human)

I want to say I'm surprised, but not. Poor little brainwashed girl. Someone's dad really wants to kick some sense into his daughter right now... plain


Kenth Hamner; Jedi Master, prisoner (male human)
Kirana Ti; Jedi Master (female human)
Kurol; shared consciousness of Faybol's brood


Nothing new here. Move along, move along...


Kyle Katarn; Jedi Master (male human)

And the Awesomness meter has just exploded. grin cool


Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (male human)
Kyrn; Colonel, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (female Chiss)
Lando Calrissian; entrepreneur (male human)
Leia Organa Solo; Jedi Knight (female human)
Lorra Klorne; Commander, Galactic Alliance Fourth Fleet (female human)


Wonder how long Klorne's going to be with the Alliance...


Lowbacca; Sith Acolyte (male Wookiee)

Now that's something I haven't seen: A Sith Wookiee. I'd definatly stay out of his way... worried


Luke Skywalker; Jedi Master, prisoner (male human)
Malig; Dark Lord of the Sith (male, unknown species)
Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master (female human)


Nope. Nothing new here...


Malachor; prisoner (male human)

*Blinks. Looks at it again. Blinks* Malachor shock ? That's an...interesting name. raised_brow Why the heck would someone be named Malachor? That's almost like calling yourself Iwo Jima...

Now he could have an interesting story...


Meewalh; Leia's bodyguard (female Noghri)
Mirax Horn; art dealer (female human)
Nyll; Commander of Raithian Elite Commandos (male human)
Na'rul Thun; smuggler (male Gotal)
Oaxley; Lieutenant, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (male Chiss)
Octa Ramis; Jedi Master (female human)
Orad Guthree; farmer (male human)


More nothing...


Pyke; prisoner (male Zabrak)
R2-D2; astromech droid


Not much here either...


Raynar Thul; Sith Acolyte (male human)

There goes another one. plain


Relequy A'kla; senator (female Caamasi)
S1-D1; Tendrando Arm's decoy droid
S2-D4; Tendrando Arm's decoy droid
Saba Sebatyne; Jedi Master (female Barabel)
Salo; prisoner (male, unknown species)
Sayge; captain, the Exodus (male human)


Interesting, but not greatly so. Yet.


Shada D'ukal; Talon Karrde's business associate (female human)
Sligh; war profiteer (male Squib)
Soontir Fel; Chief Syndic Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (male human)


Nice...


Strack; colonel, Raithian Army (male, species unknown)
Streen; Jedi Master (male human)
Strafe; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human)
Ta'a Chume; former Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium (female human)
Ta'laam Ranth; Minister of State (male Gotal)
Tahiri Veila; Jedi Knight, prisoner (female human)
Talon Karrde; independent information broker (male human)


Well, I don't know if Karrde is strictly independent anymore... tongue


Tekli; Jedi Knight (female Chadra-Fan)
Tenel Ka Djo; Jedi Knight and Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium (female human)
Tionne; Jedi Master (female human)
Tesar Sebatyne; Jedi Knight (male Barabel)
Than Ulgran; director, Galactic Alliance Security (male human)


Next...


Thrawn; former Imperial Grand Admiral (male Chiss)

*Cues up Imperial March* cool


Traest Kre'fey; Admiral, Galactic Alliance Fifth Fleet (male Bothan)
Tresina Lobi; Jedi Master, prisoner (female Chev)
Triebakk; senator (male Wookiee)
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Valin Horn; Jedi Knight (male human)


Not much here...


Vergere; former Jedi Knight (female Fosh)* chicken

Dear god NO! shock *Gets flamethrower* Who wants some KFV? devil skull


Vigorn; Head of the Queen Mother's Royal Guard (male human)
Voss Parck; Admiral, Empire of the Hand (male human)
Wampa; Imperial Stormtrooper (male human)


Hmm...


Wedge Antilles; retired general (male human)

Bet he doesn't stay retired wink . Are we sure this fic can contain the amount of Awesomeness that has been seen so far?


Wrev Caster; Jedi Knight (male human)

He's still a Jedi? Now that's a surprise. tongue


Zekk; Sith Acolyte (male human)

Poor Zekk. Guess he's off of Jaina's list of potential boyfriends. silly


The basic structure of Lands of the Dead is two main storylines: One focuses on events in Raithian Space, told through the eyes of prisoners (like Luke), captors, and rescuers (that's right, anothe rescue attempt!).

Oh great, another rescue attempt. Hopefully it will go better this time... worried

The other, focuses on the descent of two brothers to the dark side of the Force, their growing emity, and ultimately, their attempt to destroy each other.

Gee, I wonder who those two brothers can be... whistling

If this was Del Ray, I wouldn't give $.02 for the chances of seeing anyone with 'Sith Alcolyte' in their title make it through the end of this series. But since this is YKU some of them might live... *</Whispers> I hope>*

Gijjle Vo Mio; Lord of Treasure (female Twi'lek)
Khrom; Lord of Law (male, unknown species)
Marekk; Lord of Lords (male human)
Otakahn Rai; Lord of Occultism (male humanoid)
Reevor Dactoy; Lord of Machines (male Kel Dor)
Sha; Lord of Creed (female Spindo)
Trima-ogo Iamodi; Lord of Science (male Glyphix)
Zil Bahete; Lord of Wisdom (female human)


Hmm that's eight Lords (technically five Lords and three Ladies. So I'm the son of a lawyer. Sue me tongue ) I'm betting that this is the Council of Lords that we've heard about. If we add Jacen, who I think is on it too, that would be nine... *Insert Ringwraith joke here*

Weird random thought: Darths Sion, Nihilus, and Traya were known as the Lord of Pain, Hunger, and Betrayal (I think) respectively. Possible connection?


Edit: Because it was late and I didn't notice these:

5-10 characters might not make it in the fic depending on a few things I haven't decided yet.

If they don't make it, maybe they can be included in the Lands of the Dead: Extended Edition. Kinda like what happened with AoH. wink


There may also be some late additions, and there are at least 2 names I'm keeping off the dramatis intentionally because their appearance is a surprise

</HK-47> Conjecture: The fact that these two individuals are being kept off the dramatis indicates that they are known quantities and have been seen before.


canadianjedimama :Your badassedness with Photoshop knows no bounds. House as Vader is truly an act of the darkside!

laugh Thanks!

 

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Dark_Lord_Jax 
Registered: Nov '02
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Date Posted: 4/26 5:47am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/26 6:05am (1 edits total) Edited By: Dark_Lord_Jax
YodaKenobi posted:
Again, the Dark Lord of the Sith ignored his reaction, instead, reaching over for the rack on the table while Jacen noted absently that Malig was left handed, and placed the spider inside another test tube.


Who do we know is lefthanded?

 

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Caedus93 
Registered: Oct '07
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Date Posted: 4/27 6:00am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
Alema Rar; Sith Acolyte (female Twi'lek)
Callista Ming; Sith Acolyte (female human)
Jysella Horn; Sith Acolyte (female human)
Lowbacca; Sith Acolyte (male Wookiee)
Raynar Thul; Sith Acolyte (male human)
Zekk; Sith Acolyte (male human)


So how many of these will make it to the fourth fic alive?

 

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Pelranius 
Registered: Apr '03
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Date Posted: 4/27 10:58am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
Oh, but where's Pellaeon?

 

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YodaKenobi 
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Registered: May '03
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Date Posted: 4/28 4:23pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
Whitey: Holy long ass DP. I see nothing's changed.

Yeah, I still have the same problems sad tongue

I may never be able to finish this, though.

No worries peace It's really long.






TSF: Hmmmm....there is a lot of information in that DP!

Yeah, I think it's the most informative DP I've ever made tongue

Looking forward to the start date!

Glad to hear it grin I'm really excited about this one.

Will you PM when we start back up, please?

Of course! hugs







canadianjedimama: Your badassedness with Photoshop knows no bounds. House as Vader is truly an act of the darkside!

Wedge has mad skillz, yo.

Yoda: So...I'm cruising through your DP, and I'm all like "Hmmm,..okay...yes...okay..." and then BAM! Zekk (Sith Acolyte) comes up and I'm all like "What the kriff?!"

Alema, Callista, Lowbacca, Raynar Thul, and Jysella also bear the title "Sith Acolyte" whistling

So now I'm having a huge moment where I'm wondering if I have fic-Alzheimer's. Not cool. So on top of my who-is-Malig homework (which I haven't started on yet ) now I have to go back and see what the frak Zekk has been up to.

Chapter 1 and 14, IIRC, are the only ones with Zekk.

Guess I know what I'm doing this weekend...

hugs

EDIT: Okay, I admit it, I was having fic Alzheimers. Zekk got captured in the first post .

He was also in the chapter title "The Prisoner" ( I think it was 14) in which we see him being badly tortured by Rénin...

I swear to Kyle, the closer it get to thirty, the more my memory goes. On the acutal day, in about seven weeks, I think I'll probably be catatonic.

LOL! Sorry to hear that. Maybe Malig will be able to revive you mischief

That's interesting...so you mean to tell me that every Jedi that has been captured has folded like a cheap deck of cards to the Dark Side. I know that Malig is pretty manipulative and convincing, but come on!
Didn't anyone tell him to get bent?


Yep, not all the Jedi are following Malig. Luke, Tahiri, Tresina Lobi, Kenth Hamner, Cilghal, and others have not joined him. The characters who have become "Sith Acolytes" have specific reasons. Some you can probably figure out, others might be more difficult. I'm sure if you look back to chapter 41 (I think) when Lowie is mentioned and what's going on, it will be fairly easy to see why he now follows Malig.

Unless Sith Acolyte is Raithan for "Jedi Prisoner of War".

lol, not quite tongue

Okay, back to my Malig-homwork.

Good luck peace






corran: Good to see you!

Having just completed the story, I will give my review: This fic has reached new heights. All f your stories have been surpassed by their sequal. I really didn't think it was possible for "THe Age of Heores" to be beaten. I guess I was wrong.

Wow, thanks so much blush That's very kind of you to say.

First, I"d like to compliment you on the epilogue. It was a work of genius. Emotions were high. it sets the stage for the next story nicely, and it has some major twists.

Thanks again. There was a lot to pack in there and I thought it was better to leave some things unsaid. Glad it all worked for you.

Second, I'd like to compliment you on Jacen. The authors have bucthered his chracter in LOTF. He has always been my favorite Solo child, mostly because of his peace loving ways. I'm glad to say you have done his chracter a great justice. His fall to the Dark Side was convincing, you could actually believe it. He was probably my favorite chracter in this story.

Thanks so much for that grin Jacen is definitely the main character in this one and I'm glad you're finding his fall believable. It was really important to me that the character didn't do a 180 and become evil. I want to stay true to who Jacen is while doing the gradual slide into darkness. He's choosing the dark side because he honestly believes its the true way for a Force-user now, not because he's angry, or fearful, or greedy. Jacen still has his conscience intact.

Third, the space battles. Now, I'm the kind of person who doesn't really enjoy battle scenes as much as I like dialogue, but your battles give me an adrineline rush. It's so perfectly described, I visualize it so perfectly.

I get bored during space battles sometimes too, so I try and make them like any other fight and give them more purposes than just two sides clashing. Glad you find them so exciting.

Fourth, That Dramtis Personae is frakkin awesome!

grin

Severel chracter jump out at me, including Boba Fett(who I don't believe has been in any of your stories so far),

You're right. I was originally going to use Boba in this Jedi Academy fic I was considering writing back in 2004, but the idea got tossed out in favor of focusing on this series. Boba was actually going to break Ganner Rhysode's leg on the Rapture. I kept the Rapture, at least tongue

Jorj Car'das, Evlyn Tabory, Soontir Fel, Thrawn, and especially a prisoner named Malachor! Maybe KOTOR has something to do with these stories after all?

"Malachor" is a definite clue. It may not be the character's real name wink

And I would say part of my motivation for writing this was telling a story that tied the whole Star Wars saga into one whole. That includes KotoR, so don't be surprised if there are some major connections wink

My last Darth Malig prediction for "Exodus" is a man who is smarter then any person, who can kill people without flinching, and who controls the game. Yes, you guessed it, I'm talking about none other than Benjamin Linus!

laugh

That would be awesome. Ben's evil geniusness is a constant source of inspiration for me when writing Malig mischief

Thanks so much for reading through this whole thing and replying grin





Wedge: Frak that is one long DP.

I know tongue

Guess my comments will be just as long.

cool

No surprise there...

There will be some surprises with Aero...

*Blinks* Dang, sorry Alema, guess some things never change...

Fate can be cruel...

Nothing out of the ordinary there...

Yeah. Well, Ben is listed as "Jedi Student" now instead of "Child." tongue Minor upgrade.

</Han> Boba Fett? Boba Fett! Where!
Somehow I get the feeling he isn't going to be helpful here...


Depends on what you mean by "helpful" mischief I'm sure he'll be helping someone.

OMG that's...what we knew all along.

Yeah, least surprising change in title ever, I guess tongue

Nice to see Evlyn again...

I think so whistling

Right or left hand, I wonder...

"Back," actually beatup

All's normal there too...

laugh cry

Nice, Garm Bel Iblis. I was wondering if he was going to show up...

He was in AoH very briefly. Haven't seen him in a long, long time.

Sith Alchemist? Rezor? That's a new one, I think...

Yep, a new villain devil I think you'll like him.

Now that's a mouthful...

laugh

I know, when I was typing those I thought, "should I cut some of these off?" But then I thought it might be confusing in the fic for new readers if I didn't list them and then Jacen goes to Hapes... tongue


Awww, Jag and Jaina together, as it was ment to be...
Hey, someone was bound to notice that eventually


Yeah... I'm a little surprised it was you though silly

I want to say I'm surprised, but not. Poor little brainwashed girl. Someone's dad really wants to kick some sense into his daughter right now...

Or at least ask for his cool lightsaber back not_talking

And the Awesomness meter has just exploded.

When I posted I accidently had a typo saying Kyle was a "female human" laugh I'm glad I edited before anyone noticed tongue

Wonder how long Klorne's going to be with the Alliance...

Good question.

Now that's something I haven't seen: A Sith Wookiee. I'd definatly stay out of his way...

Think back to what happened to Lowie and shouldn't be that hard to figure out why, given the fact that he's a Wookiee whistling

*Blinks. Looks at it again. Blinks* Malachor ? That's an...interesting name.

It is, isn't it? mischief

Why the heck would someone be named Malachor? That's almost like calling yourself Iwo Jima...

But that's what I'm going to name my first child. Little Iwo Jima Kenobi sad

Anyway, "Malachor" might not be the character's real name...

Now he could have an interesting story...

You could say that whistling

There goes another one.

Raynar has a connection to Callista going back to the 8th Cortex and The Living Force, but we'll get into that later.

Well, I don't know if Karrde is strictly independent anymore...

Point tongue

*Cues up Imperial March*

Yep. I've been dying to bring him back into the story, and I promise he comes in with a bang mischief

Dear god NO! *Gets flamethrower* Who wants some KFV?

laugh

Colonel Wedgers?

Bet he doesn't stay retired . Are we sure this fic can contain the amount of Awesomeness that has been seen so far?

Wedge will probably be confined to a relatively small role in this one, I'm afraid. But larger in fic 4!

He's still a Jedi? Now that's a surprise.

Won't be the last surprise from Wrev in this one whistling

Poor Zekk. Guess he's off of Jaina's list of potential boyfriends.

Unless she likes bad boys silly

Oh great, another rescue attempt. Hopefully it will go better this time...

Well, it's going to be alike a million times more dangerous devil

Gee, I wonder who those two brothers can be...

Spoiler: William and Alec Baldwin.

If this was Del Ray, I wouldn't give $.02 for the chances of seeing anyone with 'Sith Alcolyte' in their title make it through the end of this series. But since this is YKU some of them might live... *</Whispers> I hope>*

Have to wait and see on that one wink

Hmm that's eight Lords (technically five Lords and three Ladies. So I'm the son of a lawyer. Sue me )

I know, I know, I was thinking about that. I wasn't sure whether to change the actual title and just have them referred to as "Lady Vo Mio" and so on or not. Afraid having "Lady of Treasure" might sound inappropriate tongue But seriously, I'm afraid it will make "Council of Lords" seem slightly off.

I'm betting that this is the Council of Lords that we've heard about.

Yep!

If we add Jacen, who I think is on it too, that would be nine... *Insert Ringwraith joke here*

tongue

Rénin was the "Lord of War." A position Jacen is supposed to fill.

Weird random thought: Darths Sion, Nihilus, and Traya were known as the Lord of Pain, Hunger, and Betrayal (I think) respectively. Possible connection?

It would have been a nice one if I had remembered that sad

Edit: Because it was late and I didn't notice these:
If they don't make it, maybe they can be included in the Lands of the Dead: Extended Edition. Kinda like what happened with AoH.


I'll be sure to keep ahold of the outtake then laugh

</HK-47> Conjecture: The fact that these two individuals are being kept off the dramatis indicates that they are known quantities and have been seen before.

Or perhaps their affiliation would be spoilerific? Something to consider.

Thanks for your thoughts grin








Dark_Lord_Jax: Who do we know is lefthanded?

Tahiri, for one. And all of the right-handers if Malig is from some mirror universe...

I think that Tahi pointed this out somewhere in the thread, can't remember what I told her...






Caedus: So how many of these will make it to the fourth fic alive?

A great question! One I can't answer though tongue






Pelranius: Oh, but where's Pellaeon?

Sorry, no real plans for Pellaeon in this one. It's more focused on the Chiss and Empire of the Hand instead of the Remnant. The 4th fic will show the two sides comes together though and the imminent Thrawn/Pellaeon reunion. I promise we'll see them aboard the Chimaera together mischief








Thanks again, everyone. I'll have a blurb-type teaser up this Friday to give a sort of summary of the plot and next week will probably have a full trailer dancing

 

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Date Posted: 4/29 4:29pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/29 4:30pm (1 edits total) Edited By: TelannaTani
Gah! What a DP. I'm going to keep my conjectures to myself, as usual, but needless to say, I am intrigued. I must say, however, if there was a complete, Word/PDF version of this fic, I would be much more willing to dig into the details and guess. But I know you keep everything in your email or something equally nuts like that, so I won't ask. I'll just let those with alot less on their plates rummage through the 65 pages of story and response, and I'll read their conjectures. I enjoy the read!

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Date Posted: 4/30 11:55am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/30 11:57am (1 edits total) Edited By: Morgoth_The_Enemy
Okay... wow. not sure what to say and I'm limited with my time here so I'll just settle for a shock applause cool hypnotized

Yes...that should sum up how I feel at the moment. Lol. Sorry i'm late Yoday, I've been battling Darth Real Life and his minions. They take a lot out of you. Anyway, I'm at Uni at the moment so I'll write a better review for your posts and paste it here when I'm online Saturday. Keep up the great work man, I can't wait to see the next batch of stuff, if this fic was anything to go by it's gonna be awesome!

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Date Posted: 4/30 11:09pm Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08 - Date Edited: 4/30 11:10pm (1 edits total) Edited By: flowerbee
That last line just wasn't fair. tongue But I can't wait for the next one... promises to be quite interesting.

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Date Posted: 5/1 9:08am Subject: RE: Exodus (Post-NJO AU: Jaina, Jacen, Anakin Solo, H/L, L/M, Tahiri, Jag, Kyp, more) Teaser 4/25/08
YodaKenobi posted:
Whitey: Holy long ass DP. I see nothing's changed.




And thank goodness for that. love




YodaKenobi posted:
Thanks again, everyone. I'll have a blurb-type teaser up this Friday to give a sort of summary of the plot and next week will probably have a full trailer dancing





Keep me on PM please! grin

 

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