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Jade_eyes
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Oh, yes Liz is right!!! This is the new & improved, seriously improved COPL!!!!! Totally!!!! Huggles!!!!
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Jedi_Liz
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where's our dear authoress? NaNoWm is over now....and the holiday season is wrapping up, too.
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Jedi_Kassandra
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I'm back! I had a few things to tidy up with my novel..editing etc. I have a little teaser bit for you guys today, and the next chapter by the beginning of next week.
Hope you enjoy it!
~Kass
Han set the Millennium Falcon down about forty kilometers from a large human settlement. He had gotten a decent sensor reading on the area before powering down his ship, and he hoped it was enough to go by.
“Han!”
He winced as Leia’s furious voice reached his ears. He rose from his seat and left the cockpit, heading for the cargo hold. “The camo sheets are in the hold.”
“No, they’re not!”
He rounded the bend, sighing as he saw Leia searching the always cluttered hold. He bent over and popped open one of the many smuggling compartments, pulling the large camouflage sheets onto the decking. “They’re in the hold.”
Leia huffed angrily, storming off, dragging the sheets behind her. She was joined by Isolder and Chewie, the latter looking back apologetically at Han. C-3PO came up behind him, asking in his tinny voice, “What is wrong with Mistress Leia? She seems very put out.”
Han shook his head. “That’s an understatement.” He strode out of the hold, leaving a very confused protocol droid behind him.
“Hey, princess!” Han called as he exited the Falcon. “Let me give you a hand with those sheets.”
Leia scowled at him, “I’ll do it myself.” She tossed the camo sheet up, trying to catch it on the Falcon’s hull. It dropped back to the ground and she let out a huff of frustration.
Han came up behind her, sliding his arms around her waist as he guided her hands to make the shot. The net landed securely on the hull, and he winked roguishly. “I told you to let me help.”
I'll definitely get the next bit up soon...sorry it's taken so long, but my whole family was here for Christmas also, and my head stopped spinning like, yesterday.
~kass
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Alrighty...here is the next chapter. I'm sorry it's so short, but I'll have a longer one up soon. My whole school situation is a little wobbly right now, and I don't have much stability and time to focus.
Chapter Nine:
Han set the Millennium Falcon down about forty kilometers from a large human settlement. He had gotten a decent sensor reading on the area before powering down his ship, and he hoped it was enough to go by.
“Han!”
He winced as Leia’s furious voice reached his ears. He rose from his seat and left the cockpit, heading for the cargo hold. “The camo sheets are in the hold.”
“No, they’re not!”
He rounded the bend, sighing as he saw Leia searching the always cluttered hold. He bent over and popped open one of the many smuggling compartments, pulling the large camouflage sheets onto the decking. “They’re in the hold.”
Leia huffed angrily, storming off, dragging the sheets behind her. She was joined by Isolder and Chewie, the latter looking back apologetically at Han. C-3PO came up behind him, asking in his tinny voice, “What is wrong with Mistress Leia? She seems very put out.”
Han shook his head. “That’s an understatement.” He strode out of the hold, leaving a very confused protocol droid behind him.
“Hey, princess!” Han called as he exited the Falcon. “Let me give you a hand with those sheets.”
Leia scowled at him, “I’ll do it myself.” She tossed the camo sheet up, trying to catch it on the Falcon’s hull. It dropped back to the ground and she let out a huff of frustration.
Han came up behind her, sliding his arms around her waist as he guided her hands to make the shot. The net landed securely on the hull, and he winked roguishly. “I told you to let me help.”
Leia stormed off, clambering up the hull to spread the net around. When the ship was sufficiently covered, she climbed back down. Han’s luck was complete when she tripped on a loose piece of machinery, falling directly into his arms. He grinned at her, stealing a quick kiss before she shoved him away. He pretended to mope, but then winked cheekily at her.
“Aw, come on, Princess, you know you like it.”
Leia glared at him, repeating the words that had worked so well last time. “I’d just as soon kiss a Wookiee!”
Han stared at her retreating back, sincere hurt tightening his chest. She loved him, he knew that, she just needed to remember.
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Mara sat with Luke in silence, still trying to grasp all that had happened since her injuries. Luke had filled her in on all the Galactic happenings two days ago, and she was still attempting to connect the news with a memory. She had had little success.
“There’s something in the back of my head,” she said finally. “Some memory that I know I have, I just can’t find it. It’s there, at the tip of my brain, but it’s like it’s covered in a blanket and I can’t see it.”
Luke nodded sympathetically. “I know what you mean. There’s not a whole lot we can do about it now, though. Leia should be here soon, so we might as well start working out a plan for when they arrive.
Mara agreed. “Well, we know they still have their ship, because we would have seen the explosion. That means that there’s a working ship on this planet, which also means Gethzerion is going to try and get it. We need to get the Falcon into the mountain before the Nightsisters.”
Luke nodded. “Augwynne sent Teneniel and Kirana Ti out early this morning to see if they could find them. They took a couple rancors with them.”
“You should be able to sense when Leia shows up, right? She’s Force-sensitive.”
“Yes, I’ll be able to. I’ve been shielding myself, but if I drop it long enough I should be able to find her.”
Mara grinned. “It’s kinda pointless to shield yourself on the mountain, Jedi Boy. Gethzerion already knows you’re here.” *And I can still read your thoughts when the shield is up.*
Luke smiled sheepishly. *Oops, I forgot.*
He dropped his shield, reaching out with his senses to find his sister. He located her in a matter of moments, her Force signature burning in his mind like a beacon. He identified three other glowing Force signatures—those of Kirana, Teneniel, and the third sister they had taken. Han, Chewie, and Isolder were there, but their signatures were dull, without the brilliance of a Force-sensitive.
He frowned. They were moving at a decent pace, nothing wrong there, but he couldn’t shake this niggling feeling that something was not right. He turned to Mara and noticed the furrow wrinkling her brow. Then he sensed the Nightsisters.
A group of them was advancing upon Teneniel’s party, their blackened Force signatures exuding decay. A cackling voice sounded in his head, and he felt that inexplicable tug coming from Gethzerion. The Nightsister was getting stronger.
“Come to me, Skywalker,” she crooned. “Come to me.”
Luke staggered slightly, closing his eyes and trying to rebuild his shield. Suddenly the voice was gone and he was on his knees. Mara stood beside him, concern written on her face. Luke carefully tested the shield around him, realizing that Mara had probably saved his life. He had been unprepared for Gethzerion’s mental assault, and it would have cost him his freedom if Mara hadn’t been there.
“Thanks,” he managed to say.
She smiled, but her eyes were still worried. “Anytime, Jedi Boy.” She reached out a hand, helping his to his feet. “I guess teh shield was a good idea." She gestured out the window. "We should warn them.”
Luke shook his head. “We can’t drop the shield. We need to go ourselves.”
Mara shrugged. “That works too.”
They hurried out of the mountain after grabbing their gear, clambering onto the rancor Augwynne had prepared. Mara guided the rancor, Tosh, into a swift lope, heading for the point of intersection between the Nightsisters and Teneniel.
Luke closed his eyes and held on to the saddle, praying that they would make it in time to save his sister.
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Leia walked behind the two rancors, smoldering with anger. Isolder and Han both had their hands bound, and were trudging along behind Leia. Chewie, who had gone into a rage the moment the Dathomirians appeared, was tied to a rancor’s back, unconscious.
One of the women walked beside Leia, keeping a watchful eye on the surrounding area. Leia saw her freeze slightly, then begin barking orders in a strange language. Instantly, Leia was swept onto the back of a rancor, and Han and Isolder landed unceremoniously on the second. The woman leapt up behind Leia, shouting a command to their mounts.
The rancors began running, their huge clawed feet tearing into the jungle ground. Leia struggled to hold on to the leather saddle while the woman behind her shouted more orders to the two other women. Confusion filled Leia’s mind…until she reached out with her rudimentary knowledge of the Force and felt the dark shadows closing in on them.
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I'll be back soon!
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RebelMom
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1/16 8:44am
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I hope that Leia's group has faster rancors than the nightsisters. 
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Jedi_Liz
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wait........did Leia and her group get found by Kirana Ti & Teneniel Djo or were those nightsisters that captured them?
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Jedi_Kassandra
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Oops, it was Kirana Ti & Co. Sorry!
~kass
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I would think those rancors can cover alot of ground quickly. They can also give a pretty intense physical defense. Since they have never been used by the Nightsisters as beast of burdens against thier will, I have to think that they would not be affected by thier Dark Side Force abilities. Just hope Luke and Mara get there in time to help. That Tosh is a fine mount. Luke would definitly be a distraction to the Nightsisters since they really want him as a mate. Can not say that I can blame them. I wonder what is more important to the Dark Siders. Luke or a working ship. Great post and glad to see you back. Holidays can be abit much sometimes. Great job and thanks. 
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Run! Can't wait to see if they get away - or a confrontation!...
Great update. Good Luck with all your work.
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Great work! I just find this recently...
PM plese?
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Bad news...Microsoft Word died on my computer. My friend is working on it, but as of today I can't open any of my documents. I'll let you all know as soon as it gets fixed, and I'll write like crazy to make up for it.
Julia-Wan, you're definitely on the list!
~Kass
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Put me on the PM list for this story, please. This is very good so far. Interesting how you brought Mara into this as well.
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Oww too bad. Hope u computer will works again soon!
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Hope you'll get Word to work again. There are alternatives out there - OpenOffice is a word processor and I think it can open Word files. Hopefully you'll get it fixed soon.
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Up :P
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