Author Topic: I Want to be Your Knight (Ben, Jysella, Seha - post-LotF) - Chapter 32 -- 07/25
TelannaTani 
Registered: Jun '05
44418_Jarael
Date Posted: 8/13/08 3:23pm Subject: RE: I Want to be Your Knight (Ben, Jysella, Seha - post-LotF) - Chapter 32 -- 07/25
Ah, another Kidan masterpiece of addiction. happy

I love the characters you've built here, and the tension between them all. You've done a great job building the story, filling in the holes while creating new mysteries to uncover. Did I mention I love the characters? The personalities are great. The story is tragic and desperate, yet there is a faint hope of redemption. Fantastic. And the easy first-person feel is so comfortable. Great, great story, Kidan.

A couple of questions: I know that this story is focused on Ben and his current state, but you have divulged the fates of several of our favorite characters, while remaining "mum" on the majority. In the context of this story, will we ever know what happened to Luke? To Han & Leia? To Corran?

Oh, and when is the next update? grin

Again - amazing read. I can't wait for more.


 

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star_writer24 
Registered: Aug '06
19058_Tahiri
Date Posted: 8/13/08 10:44pm Subject: RE: I Want to be Your Knight (Ben, Jysella, Seha - post-LotF) - Chapter 32 -- 07/25
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I swore I responded to this, but apparently not. doh!
WOW! Poor Jysella, I am wondering how Ben's going to handle this...
it seems he and Jys have a lot more to work through then I originally
believed. Looking forward to the next update! hint hint wink

 

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Griffins_Ember 
Registered: Jul '02
40046_Evil Penguin
Date Posted: 9/6/08 6:24am Subject: RE: I Want to be Your Knight (Ben, Jysella, Seha - post-LotF) - Chapter 32 -- 07/25
MUST have update!!!!

PLLLEEAAAASSSEEEEE???!!!!

 

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everyone who retrieved pieces of my X-Wing,
and especially those who sorted them out correctly."
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JediMike2372 
Registered: Jun '08
Date Posted: 10/19/08 7:46pm Subject: RE: I Want to be Your Knight (Ben, Jysella, Seha - post-LotF) - Chapter 32 -- 07/25
This is a really great story. One of the best Ben/Jysella stories I have read.

 

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Jainasolorocks 
Registered: Nov '06
42014_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 10/27/08 7:19pm Subject: RE: I Want to be Your Knight (Ben, Jysella, Seha - post-LotF) - Chapter 32 -- 07/25
ok, it is WAY past time for an update. pls, pls, PLS update soon!

 

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i dont need people to tell me im crazy and weird. i know i am, and i luv it!
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"How's this for a system malfunction?" Jaina Solo
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JediMike2372 
Registered: Jun '08
Date Posted: 10/27/08 8:14pm Subject: RE: I Want to be Your Knight (Ben, Jysella, Seha - post-LotF) - Chapter 32 -- 07/25
I really like this story. Would love to see a conclusion. Put me on your PM list please.

 

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