Author Topic: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Now with COVER ART| April 6, 2008
SWpants666  1122 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/07 1:47pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
They settled down together on a large boulder before he began to speak. "I want to talk to you about Vinjera."


Shae felt sick. This couldn't be good


No, no it's not.


Tionne waved her hand. "Oh, never mind. It's not possible."

*waves hands* listen to the Force, you know it to be possible wink


"Can I come in?" Vinjera's voice was as sickeningly sweet as the sweetener substitute that she had often seen her mother add to her caf.

laugh I can see Mara needing sugar.
Is Vinjera Force sensitive? Please say no grin


Looking forward to the girls' plan

 

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Idrelle_Miocovani  8992 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/07 1:48pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
Urrgh... I hope Shae and Sera can get something done about Vinjera soon.


"Part of our family?"


"Yeah."


Shae gave him a grin that she hoped he couldn't tell was fake. "I think it's an excellent idea! It's awe inspiring."


"Really?" Well, it's going better than I thought it would, Luke thought, until –


"Yes! I've always wanted a big sister. It's so sweet of you to want to adopt Vinjera." Shae plastered a huge fake smile on her face.


laugh laugh laugh

That's originally in the movie, isn't it? grin Love it! Shae's hilarious!

And glad that Tionne knows. I think Shae needs someone who she can talk to and doesn't have to hide her real identity from.

Excellent update, Nat and Liz! applause

 

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Irish_Jedi_Jade  1018 posts
Registered: Jul '07
Date Posted: 10/21/07 2:30pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
Shae put on her best Jade look. "Crystal."

Loved that line!!!!

Awesome new development!! Perfect that Tionne knows...I'd have told her too grin

Lovin' it!!!

 

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Jedimaster_JainaSolo  998 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/07 3:34pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
You're right, I do hate her even more! I love how you altered the "money" issue to be a "power" issue, nicely done. And i liked the Tionne scene, she needed to tell someone. Great update!! Loved it! Even more so because it means very soon the story will get exponentially greater...when Mara comes to the academy... grin Keep it up!

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ccp  2453 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/07 4:34pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
Great update!

 

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Meredith_Kenobi  2228 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/07 4:57pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
Vinjera, you have no idea what you just got youself into. skull laugh

 

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Jedi-Roxy  634 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/07 5:59pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
oh dang! Someone needs to knock that woman down a few notches... hmmmm, will Sera and Mara come to the rescue?

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MirandaFair  2371 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/07 7:20pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
Ok...I know I should be finishing up my theories papers...but I saw you girls updated. dancing

I am so happy and I loved this chapter. I love the spunk Shae has and I can see she has a lot of Mara in her. Lot's of goodies within this chapter. The daughter vs. the fiancé was brilliant and I can't wait for more of that! Luke is completely in the dark but Tionne knows. So exciting. I can't wait for more! grin

Thank you for breaking up my long night of writing the not-so-fun stuff. wink hugs

 

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PHGS_Weyr  1066 posts
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Date Posted: 10/22/07 1:26am Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
Oh dear.... I really don't like that Vinjera (i know i'm not supposed too)!!!

Loved the Tionne Scene its was great!!!

This is great!!

Thanks for the PM!!

PHGS Weyr

 

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Jade_Max  5777 posts
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Date Posted: 10/22/07 7:30am Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
thinking Hmmm, I was wondering what our young woman saw in Luke. I love the explanation since it can't be "millions" like in the movie *grin*

I'm eagerly looking forward to next Sunday when things start to unravel for the twins and they're on the path to be reunited. devil


Mara's reaction should be priceless when she finds out she's got the wrong daughter wink

 

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Mira_Jade  1446 posts
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Date Posted: 10/22/07 5:36pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
Wonderful couple of updates. This is moving along great. grin

~MJ rose

 

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Trickster-Lead  177 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/07 8:06am Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
Wow I just found this and i really like it... It's a neat idea, really

 

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Tatooine_Ghost  1760 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/07 10:09am Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
loved it. can not wait for the next part of the story.

 

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Flowerlady  3400 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/07 1:11pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
I just read the last two posts... applause

Wow... she really is a witch!!! angry ....I'd have said something else but alas TOS won't allow it, but it nicely rhymes though... tongue

Great two chapters, I hope those girls can act fast.


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Emelin  62 posts
Registered: Jun '07
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Date Posted: 10/26/07 7:24pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 12 - BAD News | October 21, 2007
Wow . . . Vinjera is a creep. And a jerk. &c. Anyway . . . I can't wait for Shae to go after her. Shae put on her best Jade look. "Crystal." I love this line. She's her mother's daughter! and Mara is my hero. I just wonder where Shae will start. Great update. applause Cheers!

 

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