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Emelin Registered: Jun '07	Date Posted: 10/29/07 3:14pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 13 - Emergency \| October 28, 2007
	So much fun, as always. I love how only Luke is completely clueless about what's going on. (At least, he seems to be.) That does seem rather Luke-ish. I was a little surprised that Mara was willing to see Luke again. Is she just telling herself that she just needs to swap back daughters? Or did Sera tell her about Vinjera and I just missed it? So, they're meeting in a fancy hotel- that should provide all sorts of opportunities for trouble making! Great update. Cheers!
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Tatooine_Ghost Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 10/30/07 10:57am Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 13 - Emergency \| October 28, 2007
	wow, loved it. can not wait for the next part of the story. -----signature----- And the psychological benefits of driving a battleship up the Tigris and parking it in the middle of Baghdad has got to be useful.-Jello WJFC means never having to say you're sorry.
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Jade_Max Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 10/30/07 6:46pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 13 - Emergency \| October 28, 2007
	The artoo cartoon was hilarious... and Mara's reaction was just what I was hoping for! I cannot wait to see what Mara and Luke's reactions are like since Luke has no clue that Mara's going to be there And Kam was hilarious. Low-cut black dress for seeing her ex indeed! -----signature----- You'll Like me when I'm Dead - V/P Dark Drama - http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29236355 Don't think, write. And have faith that your subconscious mind is smarter than you.- lazy RIP my babies; Nibbler, Boo & Mister Magoo
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 11/1/07 6:57pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 13 - Emergency \| October 28, 2007
	So the proverbial crap is about to hit the fan I take it. Great update! -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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xXJordanXx Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 11/3/07 3:02am Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 13 - Emergency \| October 28, 2007
	I love this!!!
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Sera_and_Shae Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 11/3/07 6:18am Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 13 - Emergency \| October 28, 2007
	SWpants666: Thanks Glad you enjoyed!! You won’t have to wait much longer Idri: Me too Thanks!! Jedi-2B: Oh, definitely not the whole truth. NJR: You’ll see SilSolo: You’ll see Irish_Jade_Jedi: Thanks!! It’s something I thought Mara would do PHGS_Weyr: Thanks!! MirandaFair: Thanks!! Glad you liked JediMasterJessica: Thanks!! And you’re welcome By the way, great sig Jedimaster_JainaSolo: Thanks!! Yeah, she does, so we’ve changed it a little Jedi-Roxy: Jade_eyes: Thanks!! Glad you love it Mira_Jade: Thanks!! Glad you it Emelin: Yeah, it’s his farmboy naïve-ness – he doesn’t have a clue No, Mara doesn’t know, and she’s in for quite a surprise – you’re correct, she thinks that she’s just going to meet with Luke to switch back daughters. Thanks!! Tatooine_Ghost: Thanks!! Jade_Max: Oh, it’s going to be good Well, he’s got taste cpp: Oh, very much so Thanks!! xXJordanXx: Thanks!! Glad you like :) Liz will be posting Chapter 14 tomorrow. -----signature----- Sera Skywalker - Daughter of Luke Skywalker Shae Jade - Daughter of Mara Jade Our Story Star Wars: The Parent Trap Now Playing! http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27224607/p1/?24
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mara_jade_rox Registered: Jun '07	Date Posted: 11/3/07 7:36am Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 13 - Emergency \| October 28, 2007
	yay!!! -----signature----- What happens when everyone you love leaves? Do you waste your time grieving? Do you love others? Even when the don't love you? What happens?
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Sera_and_Shae Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 11/4/07 5:30pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 14 - Meetings \| Nov 4, 2007
	Chapter 14: Meetings Shae paced nervously across the lobby of the Coruscant Arms Hotel. Her father was checking into their rooms – his, hers and Tionne's, and Vinjera's separate one. Thank goodness, Shae thought fervently. She was interrupted when her father came over, practically dragging another woman in his wake. "Sera, your aunt Leia is here!" Shae recognized her aunt from Sera's holos. She immediately hugged the woman; she had caught on by now to the fact that Sera hugged everyone as a greeting. "Hi, Aunt Leia," she said, as the other woman hugged her back. Leia pulled away after the embrace and frowned as she observed her niece. Shae gave her a winning smile, desperately hoping that her aunt wouldn't notice something odd and say something to her father. Leia must have decided to ignore it, because she settled with saying, "Hello, sweetheart. How was camp?" "Great," Shae replied, relieved that Leia hadn't poked deeper. Luke rubbed his hands together. "We're all checked in; Han is helping Vinjera with her bags. Why don't we," he gestured to Shae and Tionne, "go get settled in, and meet you by the pool in half an hour?" Leia smiled. "Sounds good. We'll see you then." * The speeder pulled up in front of the Coruscant Arms Hotel, and Sera popped out as soon as it came to a stop. She was so excited that she could barely sit still. She raced through the revolving doors and into the building without waiting for her mother and Kam Mara, on the other hand, was far more nervous. She was struggling with the fact that she was about to see the father of her children, the man she had once loved, for the first time in eleven years. Even though Sera had said that he was excited to see her, she was more nervous than she could ever remember being. She had intended to meet Luke on Yavin IV, but Sera had said that Luke and Shae were visiting Leia on Coruscant, so they plotted a course for the capital. Mara had allowed a begging Sera to make hotel arrangements, with help from Karrde, but she wondered why Sera had picked this particular hotel, which was famous for fancy, high-profile weddings. "It's okay," Kam whispered as they got their bags and headed into the building. "Don't worry." Mara tried to give him a reassuring smile that just made her look more nervous. "I'm fine," she lied. * Sera searched the lobby, trying to find her sister. Shae had said that she would meet her down there. She leaned against a wall near the lift, attempting to look nonchalant. "Hi, honey." Sera looked up; her father was standing in front of her, smiling. "Dad!" she cried, throwing herself against him in a hug, almost knocking him off balance. "Woah," he said, wrapping his arms around her and steadying himself with the Force. "What's this all about?" "I'm just happy to see you," she replied, her voice muffled by his chest. Luke frowned. "You just saw me a few minutes ago." "I know. I'm just . . . happy to see you again so quickly," she faked, hoping that her father wouldn't question it. "Okay." Luke patted her shoulder. "Didn't you go upstairs with Tionne?" "Uh, yeah. I came back down to find you." "I just finished helping Uncle Han get Vinjera's things. She's still outside; would you mind waiting for her and telling her that I've gone upstairs?" "Uh, sure, Dad." Luke turned to leave, but then turned back and asked, "Were you wearing that on the flight here?" Sera looked down at her – Shae's – outfit. "I changed," she improvised. "Oh, okay," he accepted. As soon as Luke left, she made a face. She didn't even know what Vinjera looked like. Her problem was quickly solved when a tall, leggy blonde came over and demanded, "Where's your father?" Sera was shocked. "Are you talking to me?" "Of course I'm talking to you! Who else would I be talking to?" Sera eyed her up and down. "Oh, you're Vinjera." "What?" Vinjera asked with a frown. "Never mind. Uh, I think he went upstairs." "Good." Vinjera pressed the button on the lift, but when it opened, Luke was already inside. "Sera, I – oh, Vinjera, good." Vinjera stepped inside the lift. "Why don't we go upstairs?" she asked in a suggestive tone. "I want to rest before we meet up with your sister." Sera wrinkled her nose as Vinjera wrapped her arms around Luke and leaned in for a kiss. * Shae and Tionne got off the lift and saw Sera standing by the one across the lobby. They headed toward her, dodging a man carrying a huge bouquet of flowers that went higher than his face. * Mara looked around the lobby, trying to find Sera. She was so distracted that she didn't pay attention to where she was going, and bumped into a man who could barely see around a huge bouquet of flowers. "I'm sorry," she apologized, and moved around him. Her eye caught the closing doors of a lift, and she saw a tall blonde wrap her arms around Luke. Luke, however, saw her, and looked completely shocked. All Mara could do was raise her hand and give him a tiny wave. *** Mara marched down the hall. She was absolutely furious with Sera at the moment. Her daughter had lied; Luke had definitely not been expecting her. She stopped, looking between two rooms that were situated across the hall from each other. She had told Kam to go ahead of her, and now she couldn't remember which room was hers. Well, there's an easy way around that. "Sera!" she yelled. Both doors opened, a redhead in each. "Mom!" they both cried. Mara's anger was put aside for the moment as she looked at her beautiful daughters together for the first time in eleven years. "The both of you? Together?" -----signature----- Sera Skywalker - Daughter of Luke Skywalker Shae Jade - Daughter of Mara Jade Our Story Star Wars: The Parent Trap Now Playing! http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27224607/p1/?24
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SilSolo Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 11/4/07 5:44pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 14 - Meetings \| Nov 4, 2007
	c'mon girls work yer magic -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27517284/p1/?11 Like this quick sketch: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32848083/ ? Then commission me. Prices are negotiable.
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SWpants666 Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 11/4/07 5:59pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 14 - Meetings \| Nov 4, 2007
	his, hers and Tionne's, and Vinjera's separate one. Thank goodness, Shae thought fervently. yeah, right? Thank the Force for small favors. yeesh She immediately hugged the woman; she had caught on by now to the fact that Sera hugged everyone as a greeting that's great. Gotta love the girl Sera wrinkled her nose as Vinjera wrapped her arms around Luke and leaned in for a kiss. yeah, very gross. blech. Luke, you have to stop the madness! Mara marched down the hall. She was absolutely furious with Sera at the moment. Her daughter had lied; Luke had definitely not been expecting her. hehe, nope Mara's anger was put aside for the moment as she looked at her beautiful daughters together for the first time in eleven years. "The both of you? Together?" Aww that makes me so happy for Mara -----signature----- ~MTFBWY~ **Holder of the Straw of Disaster** All I want is to be in the light
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Jedimaster_JainaSolo Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 11/4/07 6:21pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 14 - Meetings \| Nov 4, 2007
	Aww, thats cute. I love the both of them together. I enjoyed the post! great job. Jaina -----signature----- Excited padawan of NYCitygurl Behind the Durasteel Mask: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28439445 "Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young..." 1 Timothy 4:12
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 11/4/07 6:46pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 14 - Meetings \| Nov 4, 2007 - Date Edited: 11/4/07 6:48pm (1 edits total) Edited By: ccp
	Great update! I can't help but wonder what Han is going to contribute to this situation. -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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PHGS_Weyr Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 11/5/07 2:24am Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 14 - Meetings \| Nov 4, 2007
	Ha! That was a great post as always! Great Job! Thanks for the PM! PHGS Weyr -----signature----- My first comment after finishing Omen: "Most fanfics are better than this"
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Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 11/5/07 2:42pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 14 - Meetings \| Nov 4, 2007
	Vinjera's like the gum you accidentally step on but can't scrape off. Love the scene in the lobby where Sera runs into Luke LOL The ending where Mara sees Sera and Shae together was touching!! -----signature----- Spock/Nyota, woven forever together in gorgeous bonds of Nyota's "Cherished Moments" diary's gonna be hawt, hawt, melty! Squggles! [face_melting into 10 buckets!]
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Jade_Max Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 11/5/07 5:43pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: The Parent Trap Special Edition (L/M AU) Chapter 14 - Meetings \| Nov 4, 2007
	rubs hands together eagerly Oooooooo and so the plot thickens and the fun begins.... Luke's reaction to seeing Mara was just priceless - what do you bet his fiancée throws a tantrum? grin Working in the two twins was an echo of the movie with Luke caught off guard by two girls in different sets of clothes. It's just awesome. Seeing his reaction to both twins together should be just priceless Loving this! -----signature----- You'll Like me when I'm Dead - V/P Dark Drama - http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29236355 Don't think, write. And have faith that your subconscious mind is smarter than you.- lazy RIP my babies; Nibbler, Boo & Mister Magoo
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