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Jedi-Ant Registered: Jan '07	Date Posted: 8/29/07 7:07pm Subject: Holocaust NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina + Others} - Thanks for the Noms! - Date Edited: 6/29 2:59pm (19 edits total) Edited By: Jedi-Ant
	Title: Holocaust Author: Jedi-Ant Timeframe: Mid to late NJO Era. Genre: Action, angst, drama, adventure, romance – a bit of everything. Characters: Tahiri, Ganner, Jag, L/M, H/L, Kyp, Zekk, Tenel Ka, Anakin, Jaina… plus a heap of other characters from the GFFA! Summary: After a devastating loss at Myrkr, the Jedi and their allies are struggling to pick up the pieces. The Yuuzhan Vong, however, are reveling in their shock victory, and take this sudden advantage over their enemies with a blow so low, it will change the shape of the galaxy forever. Status: WIP Notes: This is a sequel to my first ever epic, Sacrifice. But not to worry... those who haven’t read it will be able to pick the plotline up fairly easily. For those of you who have never read Sacrifice, or those of you who have forgotten, here’s a quick re-cap: Previously in Sacrifice... The journey began with Sith Lord Jacen Solo, his Dark Apprentice Tahiri Veila at his side, attempting to put an end to the long-raging civil war between the Galactic Alliance and the Corellian insurgents. At first, things were going well for Solo and his soldiers; the rebels were falling, and victory seemed to be within his grasp. Unfortunately for him, he’d put his trust in the wrong person. Ben Skywalker had betrayed him, and waiting just beyond the borders of hyperspace was a trap even the mastery of a Sith Lord couldn’t break. The Galactic Alliance was losing, and Tahiri’s allegiance was wavering. In a desperate move, Jacen confronted his apprentice and his parents, killing them all in a fit of uncontrollable rage. Revolted by what he had done, Jacen clutched at the last of Tahiri’s life, vowing to make things right and stop the evil transformation that had destroyed a galaxy. With that promise in mind, a cleansed Jacen Solo returned to the point his dark path had begun, taking a flow walk back to Myrkr, with an older Tahiri at his side once more. From this, they were able to transfer some of the older Tahiri’s memories to her younger counterpart, leaving her to guide the young Jacen to a sacrifice he should have always made. Now knowing the outcome of the Myrkr mission, the young Tahiri pushed the strike team in a different direction, and subsequently took the amphistaff wound to the abdomen that was meant for her boyfriend, Anakin. The battle meld fell into disarray; the darkness was everywhere, and their trust in each other had long since evaporated. Tahiri’s meddling with the mission had resulted in more deaths than before, and more unease than she’d ever thought possible. On top of everything else, Jacen Solo’s darkside descent had started early, and Tahiri’s trust in him crumbled until it was nonexistent. His choice already made up, Jacen continued on with his plan, plunging head on into the jaws of the voxyn queen and sacrificing himself for the survival of his siblings, his parents, and the galaxy. Jacen’s sacrifice did not come without a price. His siblings, enraged with grief and loss, left the strike team behind to make a last ditch-effort to save his life. This rash decision sealed their fate, and together, Jaina and Anakin dove into a swarm of Yuuzhan Vong warriors, determined to go down fighting, just like their brother. The remaining members of the strike team, now in the control of the decoy leader, Ganner Rhysode, took the battered Tachyon Flier and left the Myrkr system, leaving behind perhaps the galaxy’s greatest hope since Luke Skywalker himself. Dramatis Personae Anakin Solo - Jedi Knight Alema Ra - Jedi Knight Jaina Solo - Jedi Knight Jacen Solo - Jedi Knight Tahiri Veila - Jedi Knight Ganner Rhysode - Jedi Knight Luke Skywalker - Grand Jedi Master Mara Jade Skywalker - Jedi Master Leia Organa Solo - Co-pilot of the Millennium Falcon and former diplomat Han Solo - Captain of the Millennium Falcon Zekk - Jedi Knight Tenel Ka - Jedi Knight and Queen Mother of Hapes Tesar Sebatyne - Jedi Knight Lowbacca - Jedi Knight Raynar Thul - Jedi Knight Tekli - Jedi Healer Cilghal - Jedi Healer Corran Horn - Jedi Master Kyp Durron - Jedi Master Saba Sebatyne - Jedi Master Jagged Fel - Colonel and Vanguard Squadron Leader Cal Omas - Chief of State Valin Horn - Jedi Padawan Ben Skywalker - Infant Nen Yim - Master Shaper Nom Anor - Executor Tsavong Lah - Warmaster Vergere - Tsavong Lah's familiar Supreme Overlord Shimrra - Supreme Overlord of the Yuuzhan Vong Onimi - Shamed One ** More to be added as the fiction progresses. These will fit as the main characters of the story. Please note that some of the members on that list don't actually appear in "body"... Teaser Trailer # 1: the soft crescendos of twinkling strings and a lone flute play in the background as the glittering green of the Lucas Films logo appears on the screen, the quickly disappears in a flash of blinding white from amongst the bright white comes a voice, loud, desperate and piercing “Anakin!” the white transforms into a brilliant flash of gold, followed by brief glimpses of various scenes, a single drum beat signalling the change of each scene flash, almost like a heartbeat [Opens with a trio of X-wings emerging from a ball of golden flames, the leader shooting straight forward and the other two curving to avoid a searing projectile.] [Cuts to a Yuuzhan Vong coral skipper colliding with an X-wing and both explode on impact, scattering red-hot debris across the black of space.] [Cuts to the face of Tesar Sebatyne, his reptilian mouth opened wide as if he were bellowing, his scaled hands clamped down firmly on the yoke of his fighter. The yoke and his hands jerk suddenly to the left.] [Cuts to Zekk and Raynar running through the Myrkr forest, guns blazing at a shadow speeding close behind them.] [Cuts to a mass of Yuuzhan Vong warriors charging a group of Jedi with lightsabers raised across their chests, a handful of cowering, crying children sheltered behind them.] the drum beating stops and there is silence Cal Omas: We cannot win this war. cue Imperial March [Cuts to Luke Skywalker, Cal Omas and a legion of political advisors striding through a brightly lit corridor in the offices on Mon Calamari, their faces set hard with concentration.] [Cuts to Nen Yim bowing over a broken body at her feet and lashing out with a quick slice of a coufee.] the Imperial March cuts out to a low drone Luke: I will not consent to genocide. Cal Omas: Then the galaxy will die. a loud, resonating boom sounds out, then the screen is bathed once more in pure white light the soft strings and flute begin playing again like a whispered hum Holocaust a Jedi-Ant fiction Coming to Beyond the Saga, September 1st 2007. Teaser Trailer # 2: There is no music this time, only the intermittent beats of a single drum, pounding away each flashing scene [A flash of bright light cuts to the first scene, of a young Valin Horn lying in a large bed covered in white sheets. A girl in tattered robes with dirty blonde hair is at his side, clutching at one of his frigid hands.] [Another flash, this time of Ganner Rhysode, standing tall on the command deck of a Star Destroyer, his determined gaze staring out to space.] [Cuts to a scene of Zekk and Tenel Ka, huddled together in a tight crevasse and smiling shyly.] [Another flash of light, followed by a frantic Jagged Fel in the cockpit of his clawcraft, punching at the control panel and pulling up hard on the stick.] [Cuts to a scene of a small black ship hurtling towards the earth and exploding into a ball of liquid orange and gold flames upon impact.] The pace of the drum beats quicken, and the scenes flash by more quickly [Flash – a battered Tsavong Lah, raising his amphistaff above his head and slicing down through organic armour.] [Flash – Han and Leia running through a smoky corridor with Ben Skywalker in their arms.] [Flash – Nen Yim bowing before the Supreme Overlord.] [Flash – a Yuuzhan Vong skip in the docking bay of a Star Destroyer, surrounded by a squadron of armed guards.] [Flash – a blue finger traces lightly over the newly-joined skin on Ganner Rhysode’s mechanical hand.] [Flash – Jacen Solo, gently cupping Tahiri’s chin in one hand as he wipes away a single tear.] The drum beats to a stop, and there is silence for a split second Cutting through the silence, a lone violin plays one long, eerie string, piercing and scratchy When the violin stops playing, a voice cuts into the stillness; deep and mysterious, yet definitely female Mysterious Woman: "The question is, dear girl... how far are you willing to go to save the people you love?" [A flash of black robes, then nothing but the glow of red light, as the title, HOLOCAUST, appears in brick red text, golden flames lapping at the base.] [The tagline appears on the screen after the title drifts away in the dark smoking cloud.] "Trust no one." The journey begins, September 1st, 2007. Expect the unexpected. A Jedi-Ant Fiction. unveils the official cover art for Holocaust PM List: YodaKenobi Jedi_Scribe DancerPadme Earthknight Tahi iamobiwan1970 shahid_chestro PHGS_Weyr Jade_eyes star_writer24 Ceillean Darth_Vastor pregnantpadme Kidan corran2 JediMasterArmada -----signature----- Solar Eclipse - Twilight/SW X-Over: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28626695/p1/?0 And it grew both day and night, Till it bore an apple bright, And my foe beheld it shine, And he knew that it was mine. - A Poison Tree, William Blake.
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Tahi Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 8/29/07 9:39pm Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina/Jag/Luke + Many Others} - Date Edited: 8/29/07 9:50pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Tahi
	I'm first. Ha ha. Looks extremely cool, Ant. Mysterious Woman: "The question is, dear girl... how far are you willing to go to save the people you love?" Oooh - tantalising. -----signature----- Anahiri #6 http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/18446448/p33 The magazine for A/T fans Many Happy Returns http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/11018706/p81/?2011 Master to THE_PIED_PIPER
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Ceillean Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 8/30/07 2:04am Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina/Jag/Luke + Many Others}
	This sounds very interesting. Could you put me on the PM list, please? -----signature----- "The Queen of Kyp has delivered again " -- Robimus I'm having trouble dealing with the fact that Kyp Durron is a fictional character.
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PHGS_Weyr Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 8/30/07 2:09am Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina/Jag/Luke + Many Others}
	ok i am terrified by your trailers Ant! PHS Weyr -----signature----- Fics in Bio! No longer on Hiatus "Facts, exact numbers, reassurance... a Jedi seeks not these things." - Kyp Durron Padawan to Flowerlady!
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Darth_Vastor Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 8/30/07 4:24am Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina/Jag/Luke + Many Others}
	Yeah, it's me. Been a while, I know. I finally got around to looking upp your teasers for this new story, and wow, it looks like its going to be great! Please add me to the PM list, if it's not too much trouble. -----signature----- The Shadow of Vader-A ROTS AU-The Fall of Obi-Wan Kenobi - http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20537595/?7 "In the unlikely story that is America, there has never been anything false about hope." Barack Obama '08
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Jedi-Ant Registered: Jan '07	Date Posted: 8/30/07 10:32pm Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina/Jag/Luke + Many Others}
	Tahi: I'm first. Ha ha. Looks extremely cool, Ant. Thank you. Oooh - tantalising. Thanks. Ceillean: This sounds very interesting. Thank you. Could you put me on the PM list, please? No problem, you’re on the list. Thanks for your interest. PHGS_Weyr: ok i am terrified by your trailers Ant! I’m glad Sorry, I just felt like being evil. Darth_Vastor: Yeah, it's me. Been a while, I know. I finally got around to looking upp your teasers for this new story, and wow, it looks like its going to be great! Aww, thanks! And thank you also for your lovely comments on the last chapter of Sacrifice They really made my day! Please add me to the PM list, if it's not too much trouble. It’s no trouble at all, you’re on the list. Thanks for your interest, and I’ll reply to your response in the other thread when I get home from work this evening. Thanks for the interest and enthusiasm, guys!! It means so much to me. Hopefully the first post won’t disappoint – it’s the prologue, so it’s only short, but I’ll have the very first chapter up the week after, as it’s already completed. Oh, and only two more sleeps to go… Ant. -----signature----- Solar Eclipse - Twilight/SW X-Over: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28626695/p1/?0 And it grew both day and night, Till it bore an apple bright, And my foe beheld it shine, And he knew that it was mine. - A Poison Tree, William Blake.
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Jedi-Ant Registered: Jan '07	Date Posted: 9/1/07 1:27am Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina/Jag/Luke + Many Others}
	A/N: Here it is - September 1st is here (maybe only for half and hour, but it's here!), and so is the very first post of Holocaust. It's only a very short one this week, but the first chapter is significantly longer, and jumps straight into the think of things from the get-go, so I hope you'll all enjoy the ride. Thanks for your interest. Ant. Prologue: The little ship sailed through the vast nothingness of space, passing stars, planets, and great supernovas of burning white light. Crystalline luminescence glittered through the wide transparent viewport, casting speckles of tiny golden balls dancing across the control panel and cockpit. The beauty of such a sight was lost on the handful of life forms aboard the battered vessel. They cared for only one thing; to look upon just thing… home. Never in their short existence had they ever missed something as much as they missed home: the familiarity of their surroundings, the smell of their soft pillow as it rested under their heads and the voices of their loved ones as they whispered in their ears. It was almost too much for these young warriors to fathom; these Jedi, that had spent their entire lives fighting for a cause they knew little about, would, in a few short hours, be home, for the first time in what seemed like years. Normally, such joyous news would warrant a celebration, or at least, ecstatic cries; however, for these Jedi, they could do nothing but weep. Not all of the brave souls who’d risked their lives on the planet Myrkr would be returning home like they’d wanted: Ulaha, Eryl, Krasov, Jovan and Bela were all gone, and more recently, Alema Ra, Jacen, Jaina and Anakin Solo. All lost; all casualties of a war that had spanned their lifetimes, and still raged on in their absence. So that was why the survivors sat, huddled together on the cold durasteel floor, their spirits broken, and their thoughts focused on the soothing comforts of home. Thoughts of home, after all, were they only things keeping them all going following such a horrific ordeal. After what seemed to them like an eternity, but had actually been little more than a day, the tiny freighter Tachyon Flier touched down in docking bay of the Jedi Temple on Ossus. Random faces mixed with the familiar ran to meet them as they trudged down the lowered landing ramp, gasps of shock and anguish meeting the sight of their tattered robes and blood red skin. The leader disembarked first, his handless arm wrapped in a loose tourniquet of ripped jumpsuit material. Following him were the Barabel and Wookiee, the latter of whom was holding a very delicate body with a short mop startling blonde. The rest of the motley crew came then; alien and human alike, all with the same vacant expression on their faces, the fire that usually resided in their soulful eyes long since extinguished. It was an awful sight to behold; so young, yet so broken. To heal such ingrained wounds would take years, and unfortunately for these young Jedi, they had mere days to collect themselves, before they would once again be shipped off to fight in a war they no longer cared whether they won or lost. The scars from that fateful mission to Myrkr would be with them forever, and the outcome of that final day - the day they had lost not just one, but four beautiful friends - would forever dominate their destiny. Only time would tell which way this great loss would sway their futures. TBC. -----signature----- Solar Eclipse - Twilight/SW X-Over: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28626695/p1/?0 And it grew both day and night, Till it bore an apple bright, And my foe beheld it shine, And he knew that it was mine. - A Poison Tree, William Blake.
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PHGS_Weyr Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 9/1/07 2:59am Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina + Many Others} - Updated 09/01
	Dude!!! No thats a cool prologue, very dark! I'm actually terrified! OHH and FIRST! PHGS Weyr -----signature----- Fics in Bio! No longer on Hiatus "Facts, exact numbers, reassurance... a Jedi seeks not these things." - Kyp Durron Padawan to Flowerlady!
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iamobiwan1970 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 9/1/07 3:45am Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina + Many Others} - Updated 09/01
	WOW! Great prologue, teasers etc..... I'm so ready for this sequel! -----signature----- Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there, with open arms and open eyes.
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Ceillean Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 9/1/07 10:57am Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina + Many Others} - Updated 09/01
	Great prologue. I have to agree, very dark. I really like it so far. Can't wait for more. Good job. -----signature----- "The Queen of Kyp has delivered again " -- Robimus I'm having trouble dealing with the fact that Kyp Durron is a fictional character.
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YodaKenobi Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: May '03	Date Posted: 9/1/07 1:10pm Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina + Many Others} - Updated 09/01
	Yay, it's begun I've been looking forward to this [/Dooku] Love the artwork and the trailers, as you already know Now to get down to the good stuff: The little ship sailed through the vast nothingness of space, passing stars, planets, and great supernovas of burning white light. Crystalline luminescence glittered through the wide transparent viewport, casting speckles of tiny golden balls dancing across the control panel and cockpit. Wow, what a beautiful opening Not all of the brave souls who’d risked their lives on the planet Myrkr would be returning home like they’d wanted: Ulaha, Eryl, Krasov, Jovan and Bela were all gone, and more recently, Alema Ra, Jacen, Jaina and Anakin Solo. All lost; all casualties of a war that had spanned their lifetimes, and still raged on in their absence. Well, Jaina and Anakin are still alive at least. And I still think flow walking Sith-Jacen is lurking around The leader disembarked first, his handless arm wrapped in a loose tourniquet of ripped jumpsuit material. Teh Ganner! It was an awful sight to behold; so young, yet so broken. To heal such ingrained wounds would take years, and unfortunately for these young Jedi, they had mere days to collect themselves, before they would once again be shipped off to fight in a war they no longer cared whether they won or lost. The scars from that fateful mission to Myrkr would be with them forever, and the outcome of that final day - the day they had lost not just one, but four beautiful friends - would forever dominate their destiny. Only time would tell which way this great loss would sway their futures. Amazing start, Ant Really enjoyed the prologue. It's nice to see at least some of the Myrkr team make it home. I was afraid the Flier wouldn't make it out of the system. Looking forward to seeing what became of Anakin and Jaina. They were in a pretty dire situation when we left them a month ago I have a feeling the Vong are going to take them prisoner and we're going to see some Traitor-esque torture going on. Can't wait for more. Beautiful writing! -----signature----- FADA Therapist The Lands of the Dead: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28522077/p1/ Blood Trail: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28636429/p1 "We're Jedi, not assassins."— Anakin Solo
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pregnantpadme Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 9/1/07 1:41pm Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina + Many Others} - Updated 09/01
	I got down to the PM list and was so hurt and...distraught...that I couldn't go on. How am I not on that list? Nah...I'm kidding. About the hurt and distraught part anyway. And now that I've teased you about that, I'm going to go play tennis and then, after a dinner party come home nad read the prologue. And yes, I would like to be on the PM list, I know I haven't been around much ( work and real life have been whipping me) but I do check in from time to time. PP -----signature----- "What happens if you need a diplomat who can also practice philosophy, fight with a lightsaber, and levitate small objects? Who else are you going to call but us?" Mara Jade Skywalker, Destiny's Way
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Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 9/1/07 2:44pm Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina + Many Others} - Updated 09/01
	Wow... so now instead of being fired up and revved up... hopelessness and despair and apathy dominate.... That's no way to fight a war and certainly no way to win. It robs even a victory of any meaning. Where's the fire, the drive gonna come from???? And the title.... Holocaust shudder! -----signature----- Luke/Mara, most melty, moving of soulmates Stoked to beta their stuff Mush's so nummily nice, I give one of these twice! Squee! Squggles!
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Jedi-Ant Registered: Jan '07	Date Posted: 9/2/07 1:17am Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina + Many Others} - Updated 09/01 - Date Edited: 9/2/07 1:19am (1 edits total) Edited By: Jedi-Ant
	PHGS_Weyr: Dude!!! No thats a cool prologue, very dark! Thank you. I actually changed the prologue about 4 times, and I’ve changed the order the first few chapters are in just about the same amount of times! Glad you liked it. I'm actually terrified! LOL! Sorry about that, but part of me is actually glad you’re a little scared.. OHH and FIRST! Thanks for reading! iamobiwan1970: WOW! Great prologue, teasers etc..... Thank you. I'm so ready for this sequel! Yay! I’m glad! The first chapter will be posted next Saturday. Thanks for reading. Ceillean: Great prologue. I have to agree, very dark. Thanks. Yes, it was a bit dark, and a lot of the fic is going to follow that path, I’m afraid. I like angst. I really like it so far. Can't wait for more. Good job. Thank you very much! More will be coming next Saturday. Thanks for reading and jumping on board with this one. YodaKenobi: Yay, it's begun I love your enthusiasm! I've been looking forward to this [/Dooku] LOL! Love the artwork and the trailers, as you already know Yes, thank you. Now to get down to the good stuff: Wow, what a beautiful opening Aww, thanks. Well, Jaina and Anakin are still alive at least. And I still think flow walking Sith-Jacen is lurking around Well, I’ll just say that you’ll find out all of the answers to who’s alive and who’s still walking around in due course… one person who we’re not sure made it through the severe injuries will appear in the next update. Teh Ganner! Indeed! I can’t not kill him and then not use him.. he’ll be around quite a bit in this one. Amazing start, Ant. Really enjoyed the prologue. It's nice to see at least some of the Myrkr team make it home. I was afraid the Flier wouldn't make it out of the system. Aww, thank you! I’m so happy you enjoyed this does a little happy ant dance And yes, I had to have some of them make it home at least, but whether they stay there for very long is another thing… Looking forward to seeing what became of Anakin and Jaina. They were in a pretty dire situation when we left them a month ago I have a feeling the Vong are going to take them prisoner and we're going to see some Traitor-esque torture going on. You could be spot on there, but I think something of what becomes of those two will surprise you quite a bit. I’m not sure what chapter that will appear in yet, as it’s still all in note form, and I keep changing what numerical order everything is in. Can't wait for more. Beautiful writing! Thank you so much! I’m really happy that you enjoyed it!! Thanks for reading! pregnantpadme: I got down to the PM list and was so hurt and...distraught...that I couldn't go on. How am I not on that list? Oh, I’m sorry! I didn’t want to hassle everyone on the old list with PM notification for the new one in case they didn’t want any, so I just figured they would come to me. Oops. Nah...I'm kidding. About the hurt and distraught part anyway. And now that I've teased you about that, I'm going to go play tennis and then, after a dinner party come home nad read the prologue. Ok, I hope you enjoy it! And I hope you have fun at tennis and the dinner party. And yes, I would like to be on the PM list, I know I haven't been around much ( work and real life have been whipping me) but I do check in from time to time. Don’t worry, I totally understand the lack of time thing. I guess that’s why you’ve been so quiet on Fear & Love? And of course I’ll add you… you’re now on the list. Thanks for stopping by. Jade_eyes: Wow... so now instead of being fired up and revved up... hopelessness and despair and apathy dominate.... That's no way to fight a war and certainly no way to win. It robs even a victory of any meaning. Yes, it does indeed. I know it all seems hopless now, but never fear, the fire will be back sooner than you think… in fact, I have a feeling you’ll see quite a bit of fire and passion from Tesar and Zekk in around chapter 4 Where's the fire, the drive gonna come from???? I can’t say, but you’ll find out soon. And the title.... Holocaust shudder! Yeah. It’s a very apt title for this fic, actually, and it’s the first title I’ve been so happy with right from the beginning. Lots of darkness in this one, that’s for sure, but I’ll find a way to fit in some mush somewhere. Thanks for reading! Wow! The response to Holocaust has been great so far, I’m really over-whelmed! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, you guys! It’s amazing, and I hope I don’t disappoint with what’s to come. Thanks again! Ant. -----signature----- Solar Eclipse - Twilight/SW X-Over: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28626695/p1/?0 And it grew both day and night, Till it bore an apple bright, And my foe beheld it shine, And he knew that it was mine. - A Poison Tree, William Blake.
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shahid_chestro Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 9/2/07 11:21pm Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina + Many Others} - Updated 09/01
	Hi Good prologue. make chapters longer and please include more of the other characters. plz make this one like the Revel Dream duology where all the non-jedi characters also had great roles. update soon. PS>>>> remember... WE WANT JACEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Earthknight Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 9/3/07 9:49am Subject: RE: Holocaust - The Sequel to Sacrifice NJO AU {Tahiri/Anakin/Jaina + Many Others} - Updated 09/01 - Date Edited: 9/4/07 12:20am (1 edits total) Edited By: Earthknight
	I read the prologue. Great start, Ant. -----signature----- Master to jacensolofangirl2007 Our philosophy: We strive for a 100 in awesomeness. And if we get a 90, it's still cool. ~My Fanfiction Stories~ The Guardians of Light- http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=259245
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