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Author	Topic: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Completed 8/01/08
Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 7/30/08 8:13pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/28 - Date Edited: 7/30/08 9:22pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Flowerlady
	Here's the much awaited for beach scene... By the way, I'm working on an adult addition to this... It will be in my LJ in a few days. Or I can PM you with it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Later Jaina thought she had her breath taken away when she first saw Jag’s estate when she arrived, coming toward it from the ocean. But as she and Jag took a glass enclosed turbolift down the cliff side, she realized she was amazed again. The Azure Sea got its name because of its deep sapphire blue, and the late afternoon sky blended so well in the east that you couldn’t tell were one began and one ended. Even the clouds and the white capped waves meshed. It was an incredible illusion and for someone who spent as much time in the void that made up the sky, it was exhilarating. They didn’t speak and Jaina knew that Jag was feeling the same about the view. The drop down the kilometer to the narrow beach was over in only a few moments and soon they were standing on the warm white sand of the secluded and completely private beach. To the north, the beach ended in jagged rocks where the cliff met the water; to the south, it ended in the magnificent waterfall and the lagoon it came crashing into. “Oh, Jagged, this is so beautiful,” Jaina breathed as she dropped the bag of towels and the blanket they’d use to sit on the beach to have dinner. He smiled and sat the basket down on the sand. The sun was past it zenith, and the cliff cast the beach in welcome shade. The afternoon had been rather warm. Standing and pointing toward the waterfall, he said, “Behind the fall is a grotto.” She looked up at him and asked, “Can we go there?” He grinned as he pinned her with his gaze. “I was hoping I could convince you to go in there with me. It had always been there that I’d go to think about you. No one else here even knows its there.” “You’d go there to think about me?” He laid his hands on her shoulders to turn her toward him. Jaina lost her breath at the emotion she suddenly felt coming from him and mixing with hers. He slowly slid his hands from her shoulders to her face. Using his right hand, he brushed the loose hairs that fluttered in the slight breeze over her forehead. In an emotion ridden voice, he whispered, “Jaina, there hasn’t been a day in the past fifteen years that I haven’t thought of you. I love you.” “Jag…” she breathed as a tear ran down her cheek. “I—I love you. I always have, even while married to Zekk. I loved you both.” Jag brushed the tears away and tenderly smiled. “I know. Jaina, we both knew. I’m not jealous of Zekk’s time with you. Hope wouldn’t have come into my life if you hadn’t been with him. And I’ve grown to love her as my own. But I’ll never let her forget her father.” He became thoughtful for moment, and Jaina said, “Jag, I know about what you and Zekk agreed to before you left.” At his expression of surprise, she added, “Mom overheard your conversation. She told me before I came here.” She looked away and quietly added, “Somehow I know Zekk…” “Jaina…” she looked up at him and he smiled, “I know he’s out there somewhere happy for us. He loved you and he knew that I loved you. I don’t want to take away from what you had with him. I only want the chance to have the same.” Before she could respond, he covered her lips with his. The kiss was tender, but as his tongue licked her upper lip, she moaned and opened her mouth to him. With a groan, he buried his hands into her hair, pulling the band with which she held it into a tail out. Jaina wound her arms around his neck and gasped when he plundered her mouth with his tongue, causing her knees to go weak and her heart to race as her insides turned to hot liquid. The kiss went on and on, passionate, demanding and giving, promising. And neither of them wanted it to ever end, but the need for air couldn’t be denied. With a growl from Jag and a moan from Jaina, they breathlessly separated. He pulled her to his chest and she clung to him with her head on his heaving bare chest. Over the rush of blood in her ears, she could hear his heart race and suddenly never felt so at peace. After a long moment, they both got their desire under some semblance of control. Jag gently pushed her away as she let go of him. Huskily he said, “I think we should go for a swim before we have dinner. Then I’ll show you the grotto.” She nodded and agreed, “Yeah, I think we both need to cool off a little.” Jag laughed, shattering the tension as he wrapped his arm around her waist. “I’ve wanted to kiss you since that morning you opened the door before we went to the zoo that first time.” She blushed and for the first time was perfectly honest with him, and with herself. “Me too.” They came to the water’s edge and she turned to him. “Jag, thank you for taking this so slow. I just needed time to come to grips with everything.” He brushed her cheek with the back of his fingers and said, “I know. And I had my own issues. But now we only have to worry about us.” The refreshing water lapped around their ankles and Jaina laughed. “When in the galaxy could we only worry about us, Governor Fel? Or should I say future Grand Moff, or maybe King? You are the king of Kuan, right?” He chuckled. “I’m no king, but once Ephim retires, I do hope to become the next Grand Moff. I have some good ideas about the Empire. But what about you and your Jedi academy, Master Solo?” “See. We will never just be us. But,” Jaina wound her arms around him again, “as long as we have each other, I’ll be happy.” “Me too.” Jag kissed her again and she felt as if she was flying. After breaking off, he said, “C’mon. Let’s get in.” She looked out over the calm water and spotted a sizable rock protruding from the surface. As she removed the delicate lacy sarong, she said, “Hey, I’ll race you that rock.” He raised his brow as he looked back at her. “Okay, but no cheating.” She balled up the lacy thing and gave it a Force assisted toss back to the basket and bag sitting further up on the beach. Turning back, she sniggered. “Now, would I ever do that?” But before he could answer, she took off and ran into the deeper water. “Jaina!” he laughed and called after her as he splashed in after her. They both laughed as they swam to the jutting black rock. She reached the rock and used the Force to propel her out of the water and onto the rock. “You cheated,” Jag accused as he gracefully climbed onto the rock to sit beside her. She shrugged. “I didn’t use the Force.” “No, but you had a false start. That’s cheating. Now, I know where Hope got it.” She playfully punched him. “And you’re a sore loser.” Then she looked out over her shoulder at the vast blue ocean behind them. “There’s no big, human eating fish in here, is there?” “Emmm…not sure. But there are a few sea monsters.” She turned back to him. “Really?” She didn’t sound too convinced. “Oh, yeah. Big ones.” She looked back over her shoulder and suddenly found herself being bodily picked up and flung off the rock into the water. “You have to watch out for those sneak attacks!” “Jag!” she got out just before going under. He laughed as she came up sputtering. “That’s what you get for putting me down on the ground today.” “I’m gonna get you!” He arrogantly raised his brow. It was the worst thing he could have done. Before he knew what was happening, he landed in the water after Jaina used the Force to lift him from his lofty perch. He came up gasping and she knew she was in trouble. Laughing she tried to swim away but didn’t get far. She giggled as he caught her around the waist and threw her over his shoulder into the cool blue water. She never felt so carefree before in her life. ~ After they played and explored the sea bottom for the next hour or so, they got out and had their supper of spiceloaf sandwiches and raw locally grown fruits and vegetables, washing it all down with the bottle of wine. The sun was making its way down in the west behind the cliff, and the sky in the east over the ocean was darkening. Soon the first evening stars would be coming out. They eat in comfortable silence, content to watch the waves, the bright green feathered sea birds that scavenged on the water’s edge or dove for fish in the shallows for their own evening meal. Occasionally, a large fish would dive out of the water to prey upon the unlucky bird that got too far out from shore. Finally, Jag said as he stood, “I think it’s time I showed you the grotto.” She willingly took his hand, but said, “Won’t it be too dark in there now that the sun’s going down?” He only smiled and replied, “Come on, you’ll see.” They climbed up and over the ledge of rock at the side of the waterfall. Water slashed over them as it hit the lagoon. Jag squeezed Jaina’s hand and said loudly to be heard over the crashing water, “Careful. We’ll have to get in and scale the side around the fall. Right here the undertow isn’t as bad.” Jaina nodded and followed Jag into the water. She was surprised at how strong the current was. Only her touching the Force and Jag’s strong hand on hers kept her from being swept under. Jag shouted, “Hang on!” She grabbed onto the rocks at the edge and yelled, “How do you ever find this?” Jag shook his head and shouted back, “I’ll tell you once inside.” They got around the fall and made their way into the darkened cave behind the it where thousand of years of water erosion had cut out the black rock. Once they got far enough in where the water calmed, they swam to the rock ledge deeper inside. Jag climbed out and Jaina jumped onto the smooth wet rock. ”I had read a reference about the secret cave. Actually, there are a series tunnels and a lift that leads here from the house. The royal family could come here if they were ever attacked and hide.” “Can you still access this from up top?” Jaina looked around at the beauty of the backside of the waterfall. The waning light showed through the water, turning it sparkling white and sending a soft glow into the cave opening. Jag smiled. “Actually, I can. That’s how I found this actually. I stumbled upon the tunnel access near the hangar not long after moving here. And after discovering the grotto, I decided not to tell anyone else about it. This became my safe haven.” “Away from Raleen?” He stared at her for a moment before looking away and nodding. “Yeah. Moving in with her and asking her to marry me wasn’t one of my smarter moves.” She squeezed his hand and laid her other one on his cheek. “You were lonely.” He took her into his arms and said, “I wanted you. But since I couldn’t have you, I went after a woman who was the least like you. In the end, it only made me want what I had with you all the more.” He kissed her gently and whispered against her lips, “I have this rule when I’m in here.” “What’s that?” “I can only think about you. I never think of anyone else. If you want to talk about Raleen later, we can, but not here.” She grinned. “I really don’t ever want to talk about her.” He laughed, kissing her forehead. “Good. Then we won’t.” He then led her deeper into the dark cave. The light from the opening soon was replaced with lichen that eerily reminded her of what the Vong had used for lighting in their ships. The light was soft and had a golden glow to it. Like candles, she suddenly thought. As if Jag read her mind, he said, “It’s called candle glow or golden glow. It’s very common in this part of the world.” “It’s really pretty.” They moved along in silence for a while, until Jag stopped and said, “Now, you need to close your eyes.” “A surprise?” He grinned. “Maybe. If you behave.” “I’ll try,” she said with a smirk as she closed her eyes and allowed him to lead her around the bend. She could hear the trickling of water and felt the warmth hit her cooling cheeks as the bitter scent of minerals filled her senses. “Okay,” he whispered next to her ear, his warm breath causing her to shiver, “open your eyes.” Jaina slowly opened them and instantly sucked in a breath. The grotto was beautiful. The golden glow from the lichen flickered over a pool of steaming water near the center. The floor was covered with plush carpets near the mineral water filled pool. On the corner of one sat a small cooling case, on top were two glasses, beside it were a pile of blankets and towels. “Oh, Jag, it looks wonderful.” “Come on,” he led her to the water’s edge. There they sat down next to the cooler. Jag let go of her hand and reached behind the small unit. When he brought his hand back before her, he held a small battered looking box. With his other hand, he took hold of hers again, entwining her shorter, slender fingers with his longer, leaner ones. Meeting her suddenly puzzled, but excited gaze, he cleared his throat and huskily said, “Jaina, I know this is sudden and I know you might not be ready, but I just want you to know where I want this to go. “I love you. Force, I’ve never been happier than I’ve been the past few months.” “Jag…I…” “No,” he interrupted her, lifting her their joined hand and kissing her fingers tips, “please, let me finish.” She nodded and he went on, his voice cracking from the emotion in it, “I never want this feeling to end. Goddess, will you marry me?” Movement of his hand that held the box drew her attention to it. She gasped when she saw the diamond and ruby ring set in an exquisite silver setting. “You don’t have to answer me today. Just wear this to remember that this is where I want to see us.” “How…” her voice cracked and she started again as she looked back at his moist eyes. “How long have you had this?” “Since Hapes. I planned to propose to you the day after you left. I’ve carried it ever since.” “You even had it…” “I’ve had it since Hapes, everywhere,” he repeated with meaning, and she suddenly realized how much this man loved her. It made her heart wrench. “Jag…I’m sorry.” She instantly felt his heart break as he turned away. She quickly placed her trembling hand on his cheek, turning his face to her again. “I didn’t mean…Jag, I meant: I’m sorry for all the pain I’ve caused you. I love you. But before I can say yes to you, there’s something you should know. “I probably will never be able to have another child. I had three miscarriages before I had Hope and couldn’t become pregnant again afterward. Master Cilghal said that one of my ovaries had been damaged somewhere along the way during one of my many battle injuries. Are you okay with this? Can you be content with only ever having Hope?” “Jaina...” he breathed as he took her into his arms. Tenderly he kissed her forehead and then looked into her eyes again. She had never seen Jag cry, she suddenly realized, as a single tear escaped and ran down his cheek. She brushed it away with a trembling hand and he kissed hers away. “Oh, my love, I already love her. If she’s all we’ll be able to have, then I’ll love her all the more.” She closed her eyes as she let go of the years of denying her true feelings. When she opened them, she said, “Then my answer is yes.” He didn’t move for several moments, he only stared at her with his love and joy filling the Force around them. “Jaina, you’ve just made every dream I’ve ever had come true.” “I know,” she whispered and let him place the ring on her third left finger. She stared at the beautiful ring and quietly said, “A perfect fit. I’ll treasure it always.” She turned her gaze back to his and his hand moved from her hair to feather her jaw line. With a sudden fire burning in his green eyes, he murmured, “I seem to remember something else being a perfect fit.” And then carefully pushed her back onto the plush carpet and devouring her lips with his. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Should I start putting goo alerts at the top? Sara -----signature----- I used to dream of Kyp or Jag, now it's Edward Cullen...I blame Cyn and Saber.. Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr
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canadianjedimama Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 7/30/08 9:17pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	Flowerlady posted: She turned her gaze back to his and his hand moved from her hair to feather her jaw line. With a sudden fire burning in his green eyes, he murmured, “I seem to remember something else being a perfect fit.” And then carefully pushed her back onto the plush carpet and devouring her lips with his. Goo alert? Ha! How about one of Sab's patented Jag Fel drool buckets. I love it! It struck just the right note between them: happy, honest, carefree. Great post! And I'd like the other part... Cyn -----signature----- Lucky member of the Jagateers, my e-sister's of Jag-love! Death of The Calrissian Pimp-Cane 43 ABY May tha playa rest in peace, yo.
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SWpants666 Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 7/31/08 5:34am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	Please PM me with the more adult scene The beach sounds gorgeous I don’t want to take away from what you had with him. I only want the chance to have the same.” Before she could respond, he covered her lips with his. Aw yeah! She looked back over her shoulder and suddenly found herself being bodily picked up and flung off the rock into the water. “You have to watch out for those sneak attacks!” That's great! And adorable! I love your Jag He kissed her gently and whispered against her lips, “I have this rule when I’m in here.” “What’s that?” “I can only think about you. I never think of anyone else. If you want to talk about Raleen later, we can, but not here.” Hehe that's cute. No talking of exes, that's not allowed The ring sounds gorgeous “Oh, my love, I already love her. If she’s all we’ll be able to have, then I’ll love her all the more.” Awwww! I didn't expect him to say anything else since the bond he & Hope have is awesome. Poor Jaina, but I'm glad she has Hope With a sudden fire burning in his green eyes, he murmured, “I seem to remember something else being a perfect fit.” Oh really? That was awesome!! -----signature----- ~MTFBWY~ **Holder of the Straw of Disaster** All I want is to be in the light
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 7/31/08 5:34am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	Great update! Jag is quite the romantic. -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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melino Registered: Apr '08	Date Posted: 7/31/08 6:07am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	ahhhhh major goo alert!!! Loved every word of it!!!!! Please send me the PM only version as well Those were the sweetest Jaina/Jag moments .... i love how they just click and understand each other so well. Great work! -----signature----- Jaina and Jag belong together when will Canon get it right? My First fanfic is called "Good Intentions" J/J AU please check it out! http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29561459/p1/?0
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Trickster-Lead Registered: Aug '07	Date Posted: 7/31/08 6:35am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	I want the other part! Great job... Can't wait for more. -----signature----- How come I get the girl gun?- Jane Smith Happenings at Coruscant High- http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28236916/p1 The Serious Dilemma of Princess Jaina Solo and General Jagged Fel- http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/2850
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MiralukaJedi Registered: May '08	Date Posted: 7/31/08 6:58am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	Very nice. Cann't wait to see how you end it. Cheers. -----signature----- The balance is weighted and found wanting ~ Winston Churchill Lessons and Memories~ Jysella Horn, OCs, Post NJO Call and Answer~ http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28668422/p1/?3 I, Exile~ http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29148129
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TelannaTani Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 7/31/08 10:32am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	What a beautiful scene! It's great to see it all coming together - FINALLY!! Will you be addressing the "Emperor Fel" and "Imperial Knight" thing or is that separate from this wonderful world you've created here? -----signature----- John 8:31-32 Callsign: "Voz" Padawan to BigFatty
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iamobiwan1970 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 7/31/08 1:34pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	Oh! What beautiful romance! I loved it! There wasn't a word I disagreed with, it was the most splendid scene with them playing and then finding the grotto and Jag's litle surprise. Oh, and the sweet proposal and Jaina's worries. It's just totally powerful with the knowledge that they are not ordinary citizens, truly they are more like royalty. "See. We will never just be us. But,” Jaina wound her arms around him again, “as long as we have each other, I’ll be happy.” And that is the essence of what will soon become a very public relationship. they better enjoy and remember that day always. PM the steamy version or PM that you have it on Live journal if possible. I would be interested. Thanks! Great Mush! -----signature----- Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there, with open arms and open eyes.
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/31/08 5:02pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	Flowerlady posted: Here's the much awaited for beach scene... By the way, I'm working on an adult addition to this... It will be in my LJ in a few days. Or I can PM you with it. Duh...PM please. LOL She turned her gaze back to his and his hand moved from her hair to feather her jaw line. With a sudden fire burning in his green eyes, he murmured, “I seem to remember something else being a perfect fit.” And then carefully pushed her back onto the plush carpet and devouring her lips with his. Yeah baby!!!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And just for Cyn, I give it four out of four drool buckets! I'm sure it will get five out of four when I read the PM!!! Nummy! -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! "Writers block is when your characters get tired of everything you do to them and go on strike." Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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carr3107 Registered: May '08	Date Posted: 7/31/08 5:07pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	Oh, the mush. It makes my teeth ache. In a good way. Can I have the PM too? Thx.
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cheersweetie27 Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 7/31/08 8:06pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	Coming back out of lurkerdome to say I loved it as always...and that I would love a PM version too!! -----signature----- She's Every Woman (L/M)-http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=26738997&brd=10477&replies=0 Too Young (J/Z)- http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=22666120&brd=10477&replies=0 Tattered Memory (L,M,B)- http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?
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Solo_and_Fel Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 7/31/08 9:19pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	Its nice to see them so carefree for once. Jag's too good to be true. Oh, wait. He's fictional. -----signature----- "Hurling black lightning is one thing, but quoting Kyp Durron puts me lower than I ever expected to get." To Suffer & Be Strong: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28435487&brd=10477 Check profile for more fics.
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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 8/1/08 6:33pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
	canadianjedimama Flowerlady posted: The turned her gaze back to his and his hand moved from her hair to feather her jaw line. With a sudden fire burning in his green eyes, he murmured, “I seem to remember something else being a perfect fit.” And then carefully pushed her back onto the plush carpet and devouring her lips with his. Goo alert? Ha! How about one of Sab's patented Jag Fel drool buckets. Well that too... I love it! It struck just the right note between them: happy, honest, carefree. Great post! Thanks...that was my goal... SWpants666 The beach sounds gorgeous Thanks... I don’t want to take away from what you had with him. I only want the chance to have the same.” Before she could respond, he covered her lips with his. Aw yeah! She looked back over her shoulder and suddenly found herself being bodily picked up and flung off the rock into the water. “You have to watch out for those sneak attacks!” That's great! And adorable! I love your Jag I like him too... He kissed her gently and whispered against her lips, “I have this rule when I’m in here.” “What’s that?” “I can only think about you. I never think of anyone else. If you want to talk about Raleen later, we can, but not here.” Hehe that's cute. No talking of exes, that's not allowed Nope...but it's a good rule. The ring sounds gorgeous “Oh, my love, I already love her. If she’s all we’ll be able to have, then I’ll love her all the more.” Awwww! I didn't expect him to say anything else since the bond he & Hope have is awesome. Poor Jaina, but I'm glad she has Hope I'm glad too...Hope was a lot of fun... With a sudden fire burning in his green eyes, he murmured, “I seem to remember something else being a perfect fit.” Oh really? That was awesome!! Thank you... ccp Great update! Jag is quite the romantic. Thanks...yeah he is a romanic...at least that's how I see him. melino ahhhhh major goo alert!!! Loved every word of it!!!!! Please send me the PM only version as well Those were the sweetest Jaina/Jag moments .... i love how they just click and understand each other so well. Great work! Thanks so much for your kind words.... Trickster-Lead I want the other part! Great job... Can't wait for more. Thanks...coming right up... MiralukaJedi Very nice. Cann't wait to see how you end it. Cheers. Thank you...the last part's coming right up. TelannaTani What a beautiful scene! It's great to see it all coming together - FINALLY!! Thank you... Will you be addressing the "Emperor Fel" and "Imperial Knight" thing or is that separate from this wonderful world you've created here? Well, sort of introduce Emperor Fel but don't go into detail of how he got there...the last post jumps ahead several years. iamobiwan1970 Oh! What beautiful romance! I loved it! There wasn't a word I disagreed with, it was the most splendid scene with them playing and then finding the grotto and Jag's litle surprise. Oh, and the sweet proposal and Jaina's worries. It's just totally powerful with the knowledge that they are not ordinary citizens, truly they are more like royalty. Thank you.... They aren't regular people and that is what makes them so fun to write. "See. We will never just be us. But,” Jaina wound her arms around him again, “as long as we have each other, I’ll be happy.” And that is the essence of what will soon become a very public relationship. they better enjoy and remember that day always. PM the steamy version or PM that you have it on Live journal if possible. I would be interested. Oh I can only imagine the publicity around them...with Jag's recent breakup with an important heiress to become engaged almost immediately to Jaina Solo. that would be a holoreporter's dream story.... Thanks! You're welcome... Great Mush! Thank you... jadesabre75 Flowerlady posted: She turned her gaze back to his and his hand moved from her hair to feather her jaw line. With a sudden fire burning in his green eyes, he murmured, “I seem to remember something else being a perfect fit.” And then carefully pushed her back onto the plush carpet and devouring her lips with his. Yeah baby!!!!! HEHEHEHE... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And just for Cyn, I give it four out of four drool buckets! I'm sure it will get five out of four when I read the PM!!! Nummy! Thanks for reading, Sab...yeah the bucket might be needed... carr3107 Oh, the mush. It makes my teeth ache. In a good way. Can I have the PM too? Thanks for reading.... cheersweetie27 Coming back out of lurkerdome to say I loved it as always...and that I would love a PM version too!! Thanks...glad that you enjoyed it....[face_hugs] Solo_and_Fel Its nice to see them so carefree for once. It was fun writing them as carefree... Jag's too good to be true. Oh, wait. He's fictional. LOL...isn't that the truth... Thanks for reading...[face_hugs] Sara -----signature----- I used to dream of Kyp or Jag, now it's Edward Cullen...I blame Cyn and Saber.. Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr
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Jag4Me Title: C&G and FFC Game Hostess Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 8/1/08 7:02pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/30
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