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iamobiwan1970 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 5/7 4:30am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 05/06
	So sad! Here is Zekk, dead, and Jaina mourning and liking Jag, but unable to have him due to his "duty" and his fiancee. Fortunately, I have trust in you to make it all work out, but I'm glad we get to make the journey to get there. -----signature----- Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there, with open arms and open eyes.
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TelannaTani Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 5/8 1:13pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 05/06
	EVil, evil, evil. You are a very evil author-lady. I was SURE you would have knocked the baron-less out of the picture by now. Shame! It does make for better story this way - conflict and angst and all that. Hope is adorable. I love her - and how much he's her father's daughter. How fitting. More soon? -----signature----- John 8:31-32 Callsign: "Voz" Padawan to BigFatty
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PHGS_Weyr Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 5/14 4:13am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 05/06
	Great Job master! This was a lovely post, incredibly mushy just the way we like it! Thanks for the PM! PHGS Weyr -----signature----- Fics in Bio! No longer on Hiatus "Facts, exact numbers, reassurance... a Jedi seeks not these things." - Kyp Durron Padawan to Flowerlady!
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JainaJag14 Registered: Apr '06	Date Posted: 5/14 8:10pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 05/06
	How come I haven't found this before now? It's absolutely brilliant. I love your characterizations of Jaina, Jag, and especially Zekk, and little Hope is adorable. Would you put me on your PM for this? I want to see where you take this wonderful story. Thanks. JJ14 -----signature----- Jagged Fel will rise again! Proud 'shipper of J/J, Benella, and Siriwan Anything is possible... Just Enough (AU, J/J) http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24966015/p1/?7
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MiralukaJedi Registered: May '08	Date Posted: 5/16 1:39pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 05/06
	Just new to the site and decided to post to this story first. It's quite good. More please ? -----signature----- The balance is weighted and found wanting ~ Winston Churchill Lessons and Memories~ Jysella Horn, OCs, Post NJO Call and Answer~ http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28668422/p1/?3
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SITH_MAYO Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 5/18 12:22pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 05/06
	For some reason I thought I was update to-date with this story, but apparently not, and I apologize. I haven't finished or caught up entirely, but I love where this is going. Hope is adorable!!! Keep up the work, and I'll keep catching up, lol. Thanks Sara. And great work... -----signature----- Fanfics in bio.. Fan of: K/J, L/M, J/TK, Benella and wild parties! "SPACE WEATHER!!!" ~ Blue Harvest Me: I'm hot, are you hot? [thinking temperature..] My Mum: . . Yeah, I always look this good...
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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 6/6 8:39pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 05/06
	canadianjedimama Okay, Sara....I'm supposed to be writing and yet I'm lured into checking here and bam...there's a new post. sighs I know the feeling, happens to me all the time...hehe And it's wonderful. Thanks... And as for me and what I've read recently...I wasn't surprised that they did it, just surprised at who did it. That was a Star Destroyer out of left field! Yep!! Great update. Thanks again for reading... jadesabre75 Argh! You're killing me! LOL Awesome post. My eyes teared up when Jaina caught sight of the pic next to the couch. And when Jag started talking about how he would never love that woman. LOL Absolutely beautiful. I do hope, however, that Jag never marries that shrew. LOL Thanks... I got teary eyed writing it... As for Ralene...she's coming up. Yay! Great job! Thank you!!! ccp Find a new daddy someday?” Today Daddy will be gone for a year. Mommy is sad. Can you make her happy again?” From the mouths of babes. Great update! Thanks for the PM. You better believe it... Thanks!!! and you are welcome.... Jedimaster_JainaSolo amazing... That was awesome! I loved the interaction...the talk...and I have a feeling I'm going to like where this is going I hope so anyway. Thank you... Hope is adorable! Yes she is...I loved coming up with her character... Aww That is so sweet! but has to be hard on Jaina...man! Hope just doesn't understand... to her the pratical answer is to replace Zekk...and yes, that simplicity would be hard on anyone, but is so logical to little children. Precious! She is sooo cute, and very perceptive. I love Jag's response as well. There's a hint of promise in there... We will see... Oh of course there is.. but this is a FL fic so angst will abound first... Right answer, Jaina, right answer. Yes it was... although I hope Jag gets to have kids. He deserves them. Emm...Well, since this story takes Legacy comics in as canon, I'd say the chances are pretty high... Great post! I loved it! Thanks!!! angry_bendu1 Awww! I adore Hope, she reminds me so much of my niece it's crazy! She is a lot like my one cousin when she was little... Poor Jag seems so conflicted as well, I am really rooting for a good resolution to all this. He is conflicted, you will get to see that next post... Thanks for the pm and great post! You're welcome... and Thanks!! SWpants666 Again she stretched the truth; she had only spoken to Jag twice in all the years since he left her apartment after the end of the war. Ah, children need to be lied to sometimes Yep... Jaina then proceeded to search the living room, starting with the corner that was dedicated to Hope’s collection of TIE fighters, X-wings, a few flashy air speeders, a toy replica of the Millennium Falcon and her dolls, doll furniture and doll clothes. ah children. I love that she has a toy Falcon that's sweet I remembered that being talked about in TJK I think, the Killiks were making them. Although, I doubt Hope's Falcon was made by the bugs.... Hope then leaned in and said just loud enough for Jaina to hear, “Today Daddy will be gone for a year. Mommy is sad. Can you make her happy again?” Jag looked up to find Jaina staring at him. He answered, never taking his eyes from hers, “I would like to try.” Awwwww!!!! I hope Jag can make her happy again (and I'm sure he will!) I'm sure he will too.... “She is very much Zekk’s child. Besides looking like him and having his height, she’s practical and forgiving.” I just really like that line. It's so sweet and speaks a lot about how much Jag respected Zekk. You will get to see more of that next post.... Thanks for reading!! Jag4Me]Great update...I want to get rid of Ralene. Hope and Jag seem to have taken to one another just fine and he wanted kids. The Baroness does not deserve Jag! How typical of Jag and Jaina to ignore how much they want each other...argh!! Thank you...Oh Ralene...everyone wants to get rid of her... Poor girl. And yep, it is very typical of them. jacensolofangirl2007 that was really sweet. great update! I feel so sorry for Jag, but i'm sure they'll figure it out. Hope is so cute! Thanks... iamobiwan1970 So sad! Here is Zekk, dead, and Jaina mourning and liking Jag, but unable to have him due to his "duty" and his fiancee. Yep.. it is sad...and so typical of J/J... Fortunately, I have trust in you to make it all work out, but I'm glad we get to make the journey to get there. Awww...thanks I hope that I make the journey an interesting one... TelannaTani EVil, evil, evil. You are a very evil author-lady. Of course!!! I was SURE you would have knocked the baron-less out of the picture by now. Shame! It does make for better story this way - conflict and angst and all that. Oh then you should really enjoy the next two posts.... Hope is adorable. I love her - and how much he's her father's daughter. How fitting. Hope was fun to come up with. And it is very fitting. More soon? Coming up, though it's not that soon from your post...DRL sadly... PHGS_Weyr Great Job master! This was a lovely post, incredibly mushy just the way we like it! Thanks for the PM! Thanks!!! And you are welcome.... JainaJag14 How come I haven't found this before now? It's absolutely brilliant. I love your characterizations of Jaina, Jag, and especially Zekk, and little Hope is adorable. Would you put me on your PM for this? I want to see where you take this wonderful story. Thanks. Hey...welcome aboard!!! Thank you...I'm glad that you are enjoying it. And of course I'll PM you... MiralukaJedi Just new to the site and decided to post to this story first. It's quite good. More please ? Welcome!! and I'm honored to have your first post...Thanks and yes there's more to come. SITH_MAYO For some reason I thought I was update to-date with this story, but apparently not, and I apologize. I haven't finished or caught up entirely, but I love where this is going. Hope is adorable!!! That is totally okay... I'm glad that Hope is so accepted... Keep up the work, and I'll keep catching up, lol. Thanks, I'll try and I know how it is to always be catching up... Thanks Sara. And great work... You're welcome...and thank you.... Thanks for reading everyone!!!! Sara -----signature----- I used to dream of Kyp or Jag, now it's Edward Cullen...I blame Cyn and Saber.. Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr
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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 6/6 8:59pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 05/06 - Date Edited: 6/7 5:12am (1 edits total) Edited By: Flowerlady
	Author’s Note: This is the vignette from Jag’s POV. As with the one from Zekk’s, it is part of the story, but outside Jaina’s “snapshots”. Every Long Lost Dream ~Part 1 of 2~ One Month Later, 46 ABY He watched as the stars, which made up the sky over Bastion, blurred and then turned into the streaked bluish pattern of hyperspace. Letting out a long sigh, he sat back into the pilot’s seat of the yacht and undid the crashwebbing. He usually found comfort in the sleek design and speed of the ship Ralene had given to him on their second anniversary, but he didn’t today. Anniversary? Jag shook his head. They weren’t married, but they still celebrated an anniversary. Just five months ago he’d given her a diamond and sapphire ring, telling her the sapphire reminded him of her blue eyes. She had been delighted; she loved it when he did such romantic things. She surprised him with having a gold pocket chrono made with a etching of his chateau on it. After they exchanged gifts, they spent the entire weekend in bed playing lovers’ games. Were they really any less married then his sister Wynssa and his friend Rohn Vetter? Sometimes he wondered why he ever asked Ralene to marry him. They had become fast friends and lovers, but he had lovers over the years before Ralene, not many, but enough to be able to separate lust from love. But then Ralene told him that she loved him. He’d been lonely, he’d been hurt by his own doings, and he finally realized that Jaina was never going to be his. She belonged to Zekk. She was happily married. Did he not deserve any less happiness? He enjoyed Ralene; he liked her wit, obstinacy and guile. She was beautiful beyond compare—except to Jaina, he thought, no one is as beautiful as Jaina. But there were sparks between them. Ralene could incite lust in him. Their sex life didn’t suffer from his lack of true love for her; maybe it was because she loved him so much. Maybe he had hoped that her love for him would be enough. Whatever the reason, he had asked her to marry him and she willing agreed to wait until he was ready to finally take the final step. It was that final step he’d never been able to take. Had he really been engaged to the heiress to the Tagge fortune for four years? He remembered back to when the news of their engagement hit the Imperial HoloNet. Immediately, speculation was put forth that he was marrying Ralene for her money and for the political power her family held over the Empire. Her father had been a Moff under Pelleaon for years. But the media soon realized that Jagged Fel didn’t need the Tagges’ money or their power. He had all of that on his own, and he didn’t he show signs of being in a hurry to marry her. Maybe he was holding out hope that someday… She no longer belongs to another. He shook the thought from his head. No, he had to let go of the past. He could be Jaina’s friend, but nothing more. Jaina still loved Zekk. He had to let go of the lost, impossible dreams… Besides Ralene loves me… He usually enjoyed going back to Kuan, but this time his heart was heavy. Every day he and Jaina spent time together. They went to all sorts of attractions and places. All of them places Hope would enjoy too. He was beginning to really love that little girl. He didn’t want to leave the fantasy he was living while on Bastion. He wanted to believe that Jaina was his, that Hope was his, but her likeness to Zekk was almost a cruel reminder that she didn’t belong to him, that Jaina wasn’t his, and that he should be somewhere else. He belonged, if not to Ralene, to the planet he now called home and duty called. He was the governor, he had to go back. He had the capitol of the system reassigned to Kuan after Governor Lostin resigned. During his time as an admiral he had become quite wealthy with smart investments and some good advice and from his father. By the time he was talked into becoming the vice-governor, he had accrued enough money to purchase a beautiful estate near the planetary capitol of Vissaary. His mansion—well, actually, it was a castle, or, as the locals called it, chateau—had been built nearly a thousand years ago by a Kuani ruler. Attached were vast lands containing fruit orchards and struguri vineyards which produced some of the best wines in the Empire. He had to laugh as he remembered Jaina’s response to him describing his home during one of their many evenings together during his month on Bastion. “You know this is my favorite wine,” Jaina said as she sat the glass down on the table. They were sitting in the dining room of his rather massive Bastion apartment, which he maintained since he had to be on the planet several weeks and, sometimes, months at a time for the Moffs’ Council. Hope had finished her diner and was in the care of his very capable housekeeper, and was playing in the guest room which his nephew Davin used when he visited. Davin was Wyn’s son and was the same age as Hope. Secretly, Jag couldn’t wait for the two monkey-lizards to meet. However, for now, Hope was content in making Davin’s TIEs fly around the room and giving Mrs. Wardel a run for her money. Jaina was all his and she was as lovely as ever. Jag grinned and shrugged as he picked up his wine glass and took a sip. She didn’t miss his expression of subtle smugness. “What? Am I not to enjoy the wine?” He continued to smile and was happy to see the liveliness come back into her brown eyes. They had spent the day together at the Pelleaon Gardens. They’ve been seeing each other nearly daily since the zoo trip two weeks prior. However, she still had days when she was withdrawn and he knew she was thinking of Zekk. Today had been one of those days. Smiling, he said, “Actually, I’m glad that you enjoy it. It’s produced at a winery in Vissaary…from fruit grown primarily on my estate.” Jaina stared at him flabbergasted. “You have to be kidding me! You own a farm?” He sat down his glass of the pale yellow wine and shrugged. “I suppose you could call it that. But I assure you, I know very little about fruit growing. I have a small army, both living and droid, employed for that. I only know enough to know I can trust my manager. The orchards and vineyards came with the estate when I purchased it almost five years ago.” She pushed her plate of half-eaten poached mynock and spiced vegetables away and leaned over her arms. Gazing at him still in disbelief, she asked, “So, what’s your home like?” He leaned back in the chair and replied fondly, “Chateau Vissa-Fel is beautiful. It is named for its first owner and its last.” “Oh, that’s creative of you, Jag,” she interjected dryly. “Couldn’t you come up with a better name?” She rolled her eyes and he only winked. “Well, it is actually tradition to keep its name like that. King Vissa built it as his residence and it became home to the government for over three hundred years. Vissaary got its name from him. It sits on a high bluff and overlooks the calm waters of the Azure Sea and has some the richest land in the area in its holdings. The old castle saw many battles after Vissa became king. The fortress was where the ruler of Kaun plotted all of his attacks on Kaun’s sister planet, Bordal. It has survived numerous attacks from land, sea and air, including direct attacks from battle cruisers from space. If the stone walls don’t keep an enemy out, the shields will.” “I’m surprised such a place so full of history was on the open market.” “Me too. But I fell in love with the ancient beauty of the place the first time I saw it. I inquired and was surprised to find it was for sale. I bought it the next day. Father was rather amused by it, though.” “Why?” she asked as she began eating her meal again. “Because Vissa wasn’t from Kuan, though he had been a trusted admiral for the king. He was actually Corellian and won some major victories over Bordal. He declared himself king when the ruler and the rest of the royal family were killed in an attack on his home in the then capitol of Loble. “The irony, as my father finds it, is that to the local people, I saved them from the radicals who wanted to restart the old war with Bordal, and was made their ‘ruler’ when I was appointed vice-governor. I even moved the capitol like he did when I moved the system government from Bordal to Ruan. I have been compared with King Vissa more than I’d like to be, despite his favorable rule, and living in his palace hasn’t made the comparison any less likely. Some even have gone so far as to say I even look like him. Hutt’s slime! He was a tall, mountain of a man with a bushy beard and a bald head!” Jaina’s loud laugh cut through the dimly lit dining room like a gentle breeze. “Oh, I definitely can see the resemblance.” “Do you, now?” he replied sardonically. “Well, maybe I should start calling myself King Fel instead of Governor, too.” Between chuckles she said, “King Fel. That’s rich.” He laughed, too, simply because it was contagious. He picked up his wine glass and held it up. With eyes full of good humor and something more, he said, “A toast then.” “To what?” “King Fel, of course!” She shook her head, but lifted her glass. As the fine crystal clicked lightly against his, she said, “To the king.” “As the Goddess commands,” Jag softly added as he sipped his wine with neither one of them able to pull their gaze away from the other. But then she looked down and Jag could suddenly see the sadness in her eyes. And he knew she was thinking of Zekk. ~ Jag sighed and out of his memory to find himself staring, not into the blue haze of hyperspace, but into the amused face of a dead man. “Zekk?” he squeaked as he pulled himself up from the less than perfect position he had slipped into while thinking about, first Ralene, and then Jaina. Recovering quickly he said, “Figures you’d get the last laugh.” “Well, Fel, you have to see the irony of all this. First, it was me pining for her love; now, it’s you. Though, at least, for you I’m dead and can’t come back.” “Yeah, I see the irony all too clearly,” Jag deadpanned. Clearing his throat and wondering what in the Hells could be going on, he asked, “So, what are you? A piece of under cooked gornt or possibly you’re a dream. I can’t believe I’m now seeing Force ghosts. I thought you dead Jedi could only be seen by another Jedi.” Zekk grinned and shrugged. “I am whatever you want me to be, Jag. Whether you want to believe I’m here because you have indigestion or if you believe I’m a real ghost, will not change the outcome.” “Okay…I think.” “You’ve been seeing Jaina.” Jag drew in a deep breath and defended his actions by saying, “Yes. But nothing can come of it. I’m still engaged and she’s still grieving over you.” “But you love her.” Jag looked away and shrugged, without looking up he responded, “Maybe I do, but I’m invested in a relationship. I can only ever be Jaina’s friend.” The ghost, or whatever it was, didn’t speak for an interminable long time. Jag was beginning to think Zekk left him. He finally looked up and was suddenly overwhelmed by a crushing sadness. “How’s my Hope?” The words were soft, almost as if they were forbidden. Suddenly, Jag wondered if Force ghosts weren’t allowed to talk about certain things. Or, ask certain questions. However, the pain in the transparent green eyes of his friend and rival jolted him to say, “She wonderful, Zekk. She’s very beautiful…and very much like you, you know. Jaina’s trying hard not to let her forget you.” Zekk smiled, but it was brittle. “Thanks. But she will forget me, and in many ways, already has.” “No, you’re wrong; she is very curious about you. She’s even questioned me about you. How I knew you and what I thought of you.” The image of Zekk in the viewport laughed heartily despite the undercurrent of pain. “You didn’t tell her the truth, I hope.” Jag couldn’t help the snigger that escaped. “No, I lied through my teeth.” After a moment, the two men stopped the chuckling and stared at each other. Finally, Zekk said, “I once promised you that I’d take care of her.” “I know. I was surprised that you never told her. I hinted at our conversation before I left and it was pretty obvious she knew nothing about it.” “Jag, you know Jaina as well as I do, she’d never like it if she realized that we were plotting,” Zekk’s ghost chided. “You’re right.” Jag took a deep breath and added, “Whatever doubts you ever had, Zekk, you shouldn’t have them. She loved you, she still does.” “And she loves you.” He shook his head slowly, before responding, “No, my friend, she may have at one time, but I walked away one too many times, I think.” “Jag, my time is short. I soon won’t be able to be seen in this realm. I will fully become one with the Force. I promised you once to be there for Jaina after you left for the Empire. Now, I’m asking you to return the favor.” Jag was surprised. Zekk smiled and reached out to him, but couldn’t touch him. Zekk seemed so close, but, yet, so far away; untouchable. “Love her, Jag. Be there for her. And raise my little girl. I know you will be a wonderful father and I’d never trust anyone else to do the job. Good bye, my friend.” ~ The sound of the proximity alarm filled the cockpit and suddenly Jag sat up, looking around him and blinked the sleep from his eyes. Disorientated and with Zekk’s final words echoing through his mind, he peered out the viewport where only seconds ago Zekk’s image was so clear. Now, all that filled the transparasteel was the whirl of hyperspace. He glanced down at the counter; it was counting down to zero. Reaching for it, he pulled it when the alarm chimed again. Looking back up, he watched as the swirling blue jerked into the beautiful jewel of Kuan, and in the distance the planet Bordal hanging behind it. He felt his heart break as he whispered to the dead man who loved the same woman he did, “But I’m already taken, Zekk. I may love her, I may even love your daughter as my own, but I can’t just leave Ralene. She loves me. Jaina still loves you. Damn you, you really did get the last laugh, didn’t you?” [tbc with 2nd part] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Am I wicked or what? FL -----signature----- I used to dream of Kyp or Jag, now it's Edward Cullen...I blame Cyn and Saber.. Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr
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JediMaster_Jen Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 6/6 11:06pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 06/07
	Awesome fic. Jag needs to find a way to ditch his fiancee and be with Jaina and Hope. “How’s my Hope?” The words were soft, almost as if they were forbidden. Suddenly, Jag wondered if Force ghosts weren’t allowed to talk about certain things. Or, ask certain questions. However, the pain in the transparent green eyes of his friend and rival jolted him to say, “She wonderful, Zekk. She’s very beautiful…and very much like you, you know. Jaina’s trying hard not to let her forget you.” Zekk smiled, but it was brittle. “Thanks. But she will forget me, and in many ways, already has.” This actually brought a few tears. So sad that Hope is already forgetting her daddy. I hope Jaina and Jag can keep him alive for her to remember. Excellent work. -----signature----- "Qui tacet consentit"~~ (silence implies consent) Red Wings Rock!!!!!!!
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SWpants666 Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 6/7 6:07am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 06/07
	Anniversary? Jag shook his head. They weren’t married, but they still celebrated an anniversary. Sooo some girls like that stuff. Silly Jag. She was beautiful beyond compare—except to Jaina, he thought, no one is as beautiful as Jaina. That's right. Keep that in mind. I feel bad for Ralene. She obviously loves Jag but he can't give her that same love. She doesn't deserve that. Davin was Wyn’s son and was the same age as Hope. Secretly, Jag couldn’t wait for the two monkey-lizards to meet. I can just see Jag calling children monkey-lizards, especially those he loves. Jag sighed and out of his memory to find himself staring, not into the blue haze of hyperspace, but into the amused face of a dead man. “Zekk?” he squeaked as he pulled himself up from the less than perfect position he had slipped into while thinking about, first Ralene, and then Jaina. Recovering quickly he said, “Figures you’d get the last laugh.” Yes, he totally would. I like how Jag quickly gets over his surprise and doesn't chalk it up to insanity. Shows just how much he has learned about the Jedi (alive AND dead) over the years “Love her, Jag. Be there for her. And raise my little girl. I know you will be a wonderful father and I’d never trust anyone else to do the job. Good bye, my friend.” Aw that's so sweet of Zekk. And y'know, I can actually see him saying something like that. I think Jaina helped him grow from the whiny Zekk pining over her (at least, in your fic) and he couldn't become one with the Force if he remained selfish. I like how you constantly remind us of the pain in Jaina, Zekk & Jag. It makes this entire thing very real -----signature----- ~MTFBWY~ **Holder of the Straw of Disaster** All I want is to be in the light
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Jag4Me Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 6/7 8:26am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 06/07
	Oh! don't take this the wrong way...but, I love force ghost Zekk! . That was so unexpected and his conversation with Jag is great. Love it!! Jag needs to push Ralene out the closest air lock and go back to Jaina for all that great..uh, well you know. I hope Jag gets to do more soon than just day dream about it. King Fel rocks and I cannot wait for Hope and Jaina to visit his castle. I'm sure Ralene would not be pleased at all by that.... More soon? Pretty please? -----signature----- "Jag4Me, the queen of the Forum Feud Flirt " - Inty "When facing a desperate situation dress with dash." - Archy McNally Get in here and chat up soundtracks! http://boards.theforce.net/the_amphitheatre/b10382/29017470/p1/?19
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Jedimaster_JainaSolo Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 6/7 4:05pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 06/07
	That was awesome!! I love the way Zekk and Jag can still be friends despite the strain of loving the same woman. I can't wait to see how long it takes Jag to dump Ralene and get back together with Jaina...and the "how". Awesome!! Dana -----signature----- Excited padawan of NYCitygurl Behind the Durasteel Mask: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28439445 "Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young..." 1 Timothy 4:12
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iamobiwan1970 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 6/7 4:25pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 06/07
	Another great post. Loved being in Jag's head and LOVED Zekk's "visit": I am whatever you want me to be, Jag. Whether you want to believe I’m here because you have indigestion or if you believe I’m a real ghost, will not change the outcome.” you tell him Zekk! Get that man to think straight! She pushed her plate of half-eaten poached mynock and spiced vegetables away and leaned over her arms Didn't know you could eat that stuff! Bleh! Indigestion indeed! Great update FL! -----signature----- Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there, with open arms and open eyes.
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canadianjedimama Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 6/7 10:51pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 06/07
	Nice shout out to Dickens there... But you know what? That was lovely. Truly lovely. Even in death Zekk still has the hugest heart of anyone, alive or dead. And seeing Jag's internal POV was nice. Though I'd rather see other things.. Nice postie, Sara Cyn -----signature----- Lucky member of the Jagateers, my e-sister's of Jag-love! "I like Princess Leia, but that's different Star Wars." Baby Girl on CW Proud co-corrupter of Flowerlady to Twilight... I Wobbler...
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 6/8 4:12pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 06/07
	Great update! -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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