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MiralukaJedi Registered: May '08	Date Posted: 7/16 7:06am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/15
	Very nice turnabout. Should be interesting to see where it goes next. -----signature----- The balance is weighted and found wanting ~ Winston Churchill Lessons and Memories~ Jysella Horn, OCs, Post NJO Call and Answer~ http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28668422/p1/?3
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Jedimaster_JainaSolo Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 7/16 9:21am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/15
	Flowerlady posted: “I’ll be waiting,” Jag said in a tone that told Jaina that he’d wait forever for her. Adorable! Hope is so adorable! And I loved Leia's talk with Jaina. And Im even more glad she listened! Great post! Can't wait for more!! Dana -----signature----- Excited padawan of NYCitygurl Behind the Durasteel Mask: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28439445 "Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young..." 1 Timothy 4:12
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SWpants666 Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 7/17 7:54am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/15
	Leia returned the play outfit to the growing pile of clothes and returned Jaina’s smile, but as she spoke it turned into a smirk. “Yes, she’s told us. She’s also convinced he’s to be her new daddy.” Bahahaha. Oh Hope is too cute Though I'm sure Leia didn't need her to catch on to what's going on She turned and added, “I feel as if I let myself love Jag, I’ve was just waiting until something happened to him so I could be with Jag.” That is completely understandable, but I hate that she feels that way. If that's NOT how it is then it shouldn't matter. Oh emotions. No one would ever question your motives, if something happens between you and Jag. You’ve mourned long enough, and I know Zekk would think the same.” She moved to meet Jaina’s eyes and smiled, “He only ever wanted you to be happy.” Yesss...listen to Leia Jaina about flew into a rage when Jag finally told her about that. It irritated her that she had been so distracted by Jag that she hadn’t sensed the investigator. Some Jedi Master she was, she thought cynically. love makes even Jedi do crazy things. squee I'm excited -----signature----- ~MTFBWY~ **Holder of the Straw of Disaster** All I want is to be in the light
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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 7/28 8:38am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/15
	iamobiwan1970 posted: It begins! Yay! This is so sweet. I wonder if Jag will tell her how Zekk came to him as a ghost? Glad Leia shared. It's time Jaina: Embrace your destiny! [and we know Jag's waiting by the water in red swim trunks] Thanks... As for him revealing Zekk's visit... I think he will eventually but probably not before this story ends. Emmm...red swim trunks...maybe. TelannaTani posted: bounce I can't wait for more. Soon please!!?!?! Thanks... Coming right up... ccp posted: Excellent! Can't wait to see more. Thanks....Soon... Jag4Me posted: Great to see an update! Love the packing scene and Leia encouraging Jaina to be with Jag. Thank you!! Leia is only encouraging Jaina to be happy again. She had always known Jaina was in love with Jag as much as she was with Zekk. jadesabre75 posted: Yeah baby! Christmas in July!!!! Woot! Ok...sorry. I just love this story so much I get a little crazy when you update. Moreso than my normal crazy. LOL Loved that Leia revealed the little secret to Jaina. I think she needed to hear it and it was very true to form with how you've written the boys and how I think they should be. Awesome!!!!!! Next update?????? LOL I'm bad, I know. You are crazy all the time Sab...not just when I update. Yes, Jaina did. Otherwise she'd never let her love for Jag out weigh her guilt. As for the boys...I think they are more like this than Profic let us see. Especially after they realized that their bickering over Jaina wasn't helping her..... Update coming up in a few... angry_bendu1 posted: “I’ll be waiting,” Jag said in a tone that told Jaina that he’d wait forever for her. I think they need to invent a melt little face-doohick for this story because I would be clickin' on that thing nonstop! Oh well, this plus this is as close as I can get. Great job, Flowerlady! I'm most definitely looking forward to the next post! Oh thank you... canadianjedimama posted: I'm a teary pile of fangirl goo right now Sara. And at work too! This was fantastic... I Zekk. He can't be dead in profic, I won't stand for it. Cyn Well, then I accompished what I wanted... Thanks!! I agree...considering how many times I've killed him in my fanfic, I don't want him dead in profic...now isn't that ironic or what. Solo_and_Fel posted: angry_bendu1 posted: “I’ll be waiting,” Jag said in a tone that told Jaina that he’d wait forever for her. I think they need to invent a melt little face-doohick for this story because I would be clickin' on that thing nonstop! Oh well, this plus this is as close as I can get. Great job, Flowerlady! I'm most definitely looking forward to the next post! I agree with angry_bendu. That line definitely made me melt. P.S. Not sure I've replied to this story yet. It's been an interesting journey for Jaina. Nice job. Hey...Thanks for reading and commenting!! I love new readers. It's been an interesting journey to write. MiralukaJedi posted: Very nice turnabout. Should be interesting to see where it goes next. Thanks... Jedimaster_JainaSolo posted: Flowerlady posted: “I’ll be waiting,” Jag said in a tone that told Jaina that he’d wait forever for her. Adorable! Hope is so adorable! And I loved Leia's talk with Jaina. And Im even more glad she listened! Great post! Can't wait for more!! Dana Thanks for reading...I loved coming up with Hope. She's a lot of fun. SWpants666 posted: Leia returned the play outfit to the growing pile of clothes and returned Jaina’s smile, but as she spoke it turned into a smirk. “Yes, she’s told us. She’s also convinced he’s to be her new daddy.” Bahahaha. Oh Hope is too cute Though I'm sure Leia didn't need her to catch on to what's going on She turned and added, “I feel as if I let myself love Jag, I’ve was just waiting until something happened to him so I could be with Jag.” That is completely understandable, but I hate that she feels that way. If that's NOT how it is then it shouldn't matter. Oh emotions. No one would ever question your motives, if something happens between you and Jag. You’ve mourned long enough, and I know Zekk would think the same.” She moved to meet Jaina’s eyes and smiled, “He only ever wanted you to be happy.” Yesss...listen to Leia Jaina about flew into a rage when Jag finally told her about that. It irritated her that she had been so distracted by Jag that she hadn’t sensed the investigator. Some Jedi Master she was, she thought cynically. love makes even Jedi do crazy things. squee I'm excited Well hopefully she does listen to Leia...but I can understand how Jaina feels. And yeah, love makes Jedi do all sorts of crazy things, probably why the OJ forbade it. And we all know how wonderful that worked. Thanks for reading!! Sara -----signature----- I used to dream of Kyp or Jag, now it's Edward Cullen...I blame Cyn and Saber.. Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr
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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 7/28 8:42am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/15 - Date Edited: 7/28 9:48am (2 edits total) Edited By: Flowerlady
	Note: There are only two more chapters after this one... Yep, we're coming to the end. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Two Days Later Jaina watched as Jag and Hope played tag in the massive garden, weaving their way around the beautiful flowers and manicured shrubs. Jag had told her that he had two fulltime gardeners who maintained it all. Jaina smiled at the antics of the man who probably would be the next Grand Moff, and a little girl who at times seemed as untamed as the wind. It was easy to see that they truly had a special relationship. And it warmed her heart. She and Jag had spent all evening talking. Neither of them admitted anything beyond that they missed each other, but she knew that he loved her. She saw it in his eyes every time he looked at her. Now she just had to let go of her doubt, as her mother told her to, and let herself give in to the feelings that being with him again rekindled. Hope threw over her shoulder as she ran around a large raised planter of native exotic looking scarlet lilies, Corellian violet leafed mountain hostas and Chandrilia creeping white roses, “You can’t catch me!” Jag started after her, but at the last moment changed directions and went in the opposite direction. Hope was fast, but she never expected him to do appear in front of her. She squealed and tried to pivot away, but Jag caught her around the waist. “Got you!” Jaina laughed as the little girl giggled and struggled to get away. “Oh, no, you don’t, you little imp,” Jag said between gasps of trying to catch his breath. The two of them had been playing since they woke up and only took a break at lunch time. Jaina had played in the morning, but now was content to sit and watch from a garden table as she sipped on iced struguri juice. Sitting the fine crystal glass back onto the marble top of the table, she stood. It was time to join the fun. Jag began to tickle Hope, and she giggled and shrieked in delight. Jaina stifled a giggle of her own as she snuck up behind them. She reached out with both hands and was only centimeters away from catching Jag in his ticklish spots right under his ribs, when suddenly she found herself caught by his right arm. “Oh!” she exclaimed as he dragged her around, actually picking her up off her feet. “Jag! Put me down!” “Mommy! Help!” Hope said between giggles as she was dangling from the waist under Jag’s strong left arm. “Oh, now, I got you both.” Jag laughed, looking from one to the other. “Some big, strong Jedi you two are.” Jaina mockingly glared at him. “You think you’ve out smarted me?” His sea green eyes twinkled with mischief as he held her tightly against him. She was suddenly very aware of how lean and hard his body was, and his masculine scent of spice and sea assailed her senses. He was so handsome, roguish, with his dark hair falling over his sweat dampened forehead, and a smirk pulling at his full lips. They were both breathing heavily, the sensation tantalizing against her chest which was pressed against his. She could feel the muscles move over the small of her back through the thin fabric of her tee-shirt as his bare arm flexed, tightening his hold on her. They were both dressed in tees and shorts, and she couldn’t help the thrill that shot through her when her smooth legs brushed up against his rougher ones. Though, she was sure she was having the same affect on his senses that he was having on her, he tried to quip, “I’m not the one being held.” Fighting the desire that was overtaking her, she smirked wickedly and pushed with the Force. At the same time, she grabbed Jag in an invisible grip as he fell backward. Without her moving a muscle, Jagged found himself on his back with Jaina suddenly straddling his hips, while Hope bounced on his chest. “Yay! Mommy beat you, Uncle Jag!” Jag, however, wasn’t paying the little girl any attention. Suddenly, he was fully focused on the woman sitting over him. He held Jaina’s gaze captive and she felt the heat in it. She knew that she should move; she could feel the affect she was having on him. But she couldn’t. A long moment ticked away, before Jag cleared his throat and pulled his gaze from Jaina to the bouncing imp on his chest. He finally caught her under her arms to stop her. Laughing, he said, “You sure did. Now will you and your mommy let me up?” Jaina, finally getting the strength to move, stood up and away from Jag, who watched her every movement. Her heart raced, not from their play, but from the want she felt for this man. “Okay, Angel, let Uncle Jag up.” She leaned down and picked her daughter up. Hope immediately wrapped her arms around her mother’s neck. “I think its nap time anyway.” “But, Mommy, I want to play,” she whined. Jag gracefully stood and interjected before Jaina could, “We’ve been playing almost all day, sweetheart. And I know Mrs. Wardel’s made some fresh cookies.” Her eyes lit up, Hope loved Jag’s housekeeper. “Really?” Jag smiled as he nodded. “Yep. C’mon, I’ll even have some with you. I like her special cookies, too.” Jag gently laid his hand on Jaina’s back as she carried Hope through the garden and onto the portico that lead into the kitchen. There Mrs. Wardel turned and greeted them with a smile. The heavyset widow had been Jag’s housekeeper at his Bastion apartment since he came back to the Empire after the war. She came to Kuan upon Jag’s request after Raleen left, and taking with her most of the furniture that she had long ago replaced his original pieces with. Within a month, Mrs. Wardel had completely erased any sign that the Baroness had ever spent a day in the mansion, let alone four years. After they had Mrs. Wardel’s special chocolate and vweilu nut cookies, Jaina put Hope down in the large bedroom Jag had obviously had decorated for her. Then she went into her own suite of rooms across the hall to freshen up before dinner. The room, which was called the Queen’s Room, was as massive as the one Jag occupied he had told, when he showed her to it after their arrival. Mrs. Wardel did a wonderful job at decorating it in subtle shades of creams, golds and wines. Jaina entered the bedroom proper and was headed into the luxury refresher, when she saw a box wrapped in red foil and tied with a silver bow lying on the canopy bed. She smiled and picked up the flimsy card tucked under the ribbon. She unfolded it and read: Jaina, I’d like to award your patience. Please wear this and meet me in the kitchen within the next hour. I’d like to have dinner with you tonight on the beach. Jag Curious, she quickly un-wrapped the gift. She gasped when she saw the black swimsuit with matching sarong. It was similar to one she had worn on the last of their excursions on Hapes while they were still dating before the Swarm War. The memories from that stolen week were still very vivid in Jaina’s mind. She gently laid the one piece suit out on the burgundy and cream covered bed. Yesterday, they had spent the morning touring the estate and ended with a picnic lunch by the river. She asked why he hadn’t showed them the beach, but he simply had told her that she only had to be patient. He should have realized by now that she had never been patient. ~ Forty-five minutes later Jaina met Jag in the kitchen where he was speaking with Mrs. Wardel as the two of them packed a basket of food. Jag finished packing a bottle of wine, turned and smiled at Jaina as she walked up to stand beside him by the granite counter. Mrs. Wardel grinned as she watched her employer with Jaina. Jaina couldn’t help the slight blush that touched her cheeks at Jag’s piercing attention. However, her embarrassment of having him so blatantly look her over didn’t stop her from doing the same to him. He was dressed simply in black swim trunks. It took Mrs. Wardel clearing her throat to break the spell. Suddenly, Jaina found her voice and said, “Hi. Thanks for the bathing suit. I never even thought to pack one.” He smiled. “I figured as much. I hope that you like it.” Before she could say anything, Mrs. Wardel injected, “If there’s nothing else, sir?” “No, Mrs. Wardel. Thank you for getting this ready,” Jag smiled at the housekeeper. She bobbed her head and turned to go. “Hope,” Jaina said as if just remembering her daughter. “What about Hope?” Mrs. Wardel grinned and replied, “Don’t worry about little Hope. We’ll have tons of fun when she wakes up and I’ll make sure she eats her dinner.” “Thank you.” Jaina’s relief painted her words. The housekeeper nodded to them again and turned, but before stepping away she looked back at Jaina. Smiling all too knowingly for Jaina, she went on to say, “I’ll even make sure she gets to bed on time.” Then she was gone. Jag scratched his clean shaven chin and met Jaina’s suddenly wide eyes. “Don’t mind her. She’s trying to play matchmaker. We’ll be back long before Hope’s bedtime.” “Oh.” Suddenly, she wasn’t sure if she was relieved or disappointed. “So,” he said shattering the ensuing silence, “you didn’t say. Do you like the suit?” She looked down over herself and replied, “Ahhh…Yes. I liked the first suit that I had like this, too. Where in the galaxy did you find this? It’s so much like that one.” He shrugged as he picked up the basket. “I found it here in Vissaary. It instantly reminded me of that suit you wore on Hapes.” Her breath caught at the intensity of his gaze. They both knew the significance of that week they spent on the beach in one of Tenel Ka’s summer cottages. Even though the week had been incredible with them barely ever leaving the comfort of each other’s arms, it was after that that things went sour in their relationship. It was the last time that they spent any time together. Six months later they met in a refueling station and she broke it off, telling him things just weren’t working for them. As he stared at her and she at him, she realized that they both were thinking the same thing—What would have happened if she hadn’t been called away three days before their two weeks had been through. She knew that he had wanted to ask her to marry him sometime within the second week, but she abruptly left before he ever had the chance, or before she could have told him yes. She whispered, “Yeah, yours does, too.” Ignoring her comment, Jag held out his hand, his voice also a whisper, “Will you let me lead you?” She looked from his eyes to his hand and trembled as she laid hers into his, knowing that she would let him lead her anywhere. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ FL -----signature----- I used to dream of Kyp or Jag, now it's Edward Cullen...I blame Cyn and Saber.. Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr
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jacensolofangirl2007 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/28 9:51am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/28
	awwww. I can't believe how much I've missed! that was so wonderful Jag just gets more and more awesome!! I can't wait to see what he has planned on the beach! -----signature----- discover you intellectual side and join the Jacen Solo fan club http://boards.theforce.net/eu_community/b10194/4379448/p337/?8401 Padawan to EarthKnight: We strive for a 100 in awesomeness. And if we get a 90, it's still cool.
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 7/28 10:37am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/28
	Getting closer and closer. Now which one is going to screw up first? Great update. -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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Jag4Me Title: Bet Your Knowledge and Man Bites Dog Hostess Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 7/28 11:04am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/28
	Oh, Sara! You write Jag so beautifully, I love him playing tag! In fact the whole garden scene is awesome. When Jaina landed on him I was like . He is taking things slow and it's beyond romantic. Can't wait for the beach! -----signature----- "Your new nickname, especially in the TIS circle, is the Stoner." - Trika_Kenobi "All biologists know that the peacock with the most extravagant tail wins the peahen." Archy McNally
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Jedimaster_JainaSolo Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 7/28 12:02pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/28
	Flowerlady posted: She looked from his eyes to his hand and trembled as she laid hers into his, knowing that she would let him lead her anywhere. You sure know how to make a good post-ending! Great post! I love Jag playing tag with Hope. So cute. And I can't wait for the date on the beach! Dana -----signature----- Excited padawan of NYCitygurl Behind the Durasteel Mask: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28439445 "Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young..." 1 Timothy 4:12
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MiralukaJedi Registered: May '08	Date Posted: 7/28 2:21pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/28
	Nice work. Cann't wait to see how you wrap it all up. -----signature----- The balance is weighted and found wanting ~ Winston Churchill Lessons and Memories~ Jysella Horn, OCs, Post NJO Call and Answer~ http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28668422/p1/?3
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Solo_and_Fel Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 7/28 6:24pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/28
	Whoo. That was pretty hot. ccp, that's hilarious, but don't curse them. -----signature----- "Hurling black lightning is one thing, but quoting Kyp Durron puts me lower than I ever expected to get." To Suffer & Be Strong: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28435487&brd=10477 Check profile for more fics.
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canadianjedimama Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 7/28 8:34pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/28
	melts into a pile of goo Yeah... it was that good! I love your Jag in this. Patient, careful, and oh-so-restrained Jag. With all that emotion boiling underneath...[face_drool] Nice post. Cyn -----signature----- Lucky member of the Jagateers, my e-sister's of Jag-love! Current avatar is a homage to my first ban.... I stink at Shelf of Shame! But I'm playing again!!!
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SWpants666 Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 7/29 5:17am Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/28
	Jaina smiled at the antics of the man who probably would be the next Grand Moff, and a little girl who at times seemed as untamed as the wind. It was easy to see that they truly had a special relationship. And it warmed her heart. It warms my heart too She reached out with both hands and was only centimeters away from catching Jag in his ticklish spots right under his ribs, when suddenly she found herself caught by his right arm. can't catch that man by surprise often can you? Aww the "Mommy! help!" was so cute! Because all I can do is laugh at the fact that Jag is playing around and being goofy (although if Jaina knows his ticklish spots, it sounds like they were having some random fun behind closed doors in the past ) and that he caught two "big, strong Jedi" And he's dressed in shorts and a t-shirt. I LOVE that image! Without her moving a muscle, Jagged found himself on his back with Jaina suddenly straddling his hips, while Hope bounced on his chest. hehehehe So evil, I love it Within a month, Mrs. Wardel had completely erased any sign that the Baroness had ever spent a day in the mansion, let alone four years. She sounds like an awesome lady. And very talented. And very intuitive hahaha. I like her She looked from his eyes to his hand and trembled as she laid hers into his, knowing that she would let him lead her anywhere. AWWWWW Gah! I was really hoping for the beach scene. I can't wait -----signature----- ~MTFBWY~ **Holder of the Straw of Disaster** All I want is to be in the light
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TelannaTani Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 7/29 1:16pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/28
	swoon -----signature----- John 8:31-32 Callsign: "Voz" Padawan to BigFatty
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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 7/30 7:58pm Subject: RE: The Broken Road--LotF-post LotF, Romance, Angst- Z/J & later J/J (not a triangle) Updated 07/28
	jacensolofangirl2007 posted: awwww. I can't believe how much I've missed! that was so wonderful Jag just gets more and more awesome!! I can't wait to see what he has planned on the beach! Thanks for reading! I'm glad that you're enjoying it. ccp posted: Getting closer and closer. Now which one is going to screw up first? Great update. You know you are gonna jinx them with that kind attitude... Thanks.. Jag4Me posted: Oh, Sara! You write Jag so beautifully, I love him playing tag! In fact the whole garden scene is awesome. When Jaina landed on him I was like . He is taking things slow and it's beyond romantic. Can't wait for the beach! I'm glad that you think I'm doing okay with Jag...sometimes I wonder. Thanks...He is quite the romantic when I write him. Jedimaster_JainaSolo posted: Flowerlady posted: She looked from his eyes to his hand and trembled as she laid hers into his, knowing that she would let him lead her anywhere. You sure know how to make a good post-ending! Great post! I love Jag playing tag with Hope. So cute. And I can't wait for the date on the beach! Dana Thanks...sometime I wonder if my endings are corny. Thanks for reading. I loved writing Jag playing with Hope. It's fun writing him as a daddy...err.. step-daddy in this case. Beach...you want a beach scene...coming right up.. MiralukaJedi posted: Nice work. Cann't wait to see how you wrap it all up. Thanks... me either. Solo_and_Fel posted: Whoo. That was pretty hot. ccp, that's hilarious, but don't curse them. Thanks...wait until you read the next part. canadianjedimama posted: melts into a pile of goo Yeah... it was that good! I love your Jag in this. Patient, careful, and oh-so-restrained Jag. With all that emotion boiling underneath...[face_drool] Nice post. Cyn If you're goo now...I can't imagine what you'll be after reading the next chapter.... Jag is patient and restrained but just how patient and restrained is even beyond the great Jag? Thanks for reading, Cyn... SWpants666 posted: Jaina smiled at the antics of the man who probably would be the next Grand Moff, and a little girl who at times seemed as untamed as the wind. It was easy to see that they truly had a special relationship. And it warmed her heart. It warms my heart too Mine too... She reached out with both hands and was only centimeters away from catching Jag in his ticklish spots right under his ribs, when suddenly she found herself caught by his right arm. can't catch that man by surprise often can you? No you can't.... Aww the "Mommy! help!" was so cute! Because all I can do is laugh at the fact that Jag is playing around and being goofy (although if Jaina knows his ticklish spots, it sounds like they were having some random fun behind closed doors in the past ) and that he caught two "big, strong Jedi" And he's dressed in shorts and a t-shirt. I LOVE that image! Me too...Well, what else would he wear as he spent hours in the summer heat playing with a three year old... Without her moving a muscle, Jagged found himself on his back with Jaina suddenly straddling his hips, while Hope bounced on his chest. hehehehe So evil, I love it Within a month, Mrs. Wardel had completely erased any sign that the Baroness had ever spent a day in the mansion, let alone four years. She sounds like an awesome lady. And very talented. And very intuitive hahaha. I like her Every bachelor needs a good grandma-like housekeeper. She looked from his eyes to his hand and trembled as she laid hers into his, knowing that she would let him lead her anywhere. AWWWWW Gah! I was really hoping for the beach scene. I can't wait Thanks for reading...your hope is coming up soon... TelannaTani posted: swoon Thanks for reading.... Sara -----signature----- I used to dream of Kyp or Jag, now it's Edward Cullen...I blame Cyn and Saber.. Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr
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