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MarasFire
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1/27 10:40am
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Broken (Jaina, A/T, divorced H/L, L/T, Luke/Callista; YJK/NJO AU) Updated 3/14
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3/26 5:06pm (23 edits total)
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Title: Damaged
Author: MarasFire
Year: 25 ABY
Summary: The Solo children have a very different upbringing that affects not only them but ultimately the entire galaxy.
Notes: Luke and Mara married in 11 ABY, after Exar Kun's destruction and her subsequent training at the Jedi Academy. Two years later, Ben was born.
Disclaimer: Just like everybody else, I do not own Star Wars.
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Dramatis Personae (incomplete as it would ruin certain surprises )
Alyse Durron: Jedi Knight; second-in-command of Durron's Dozen (female Human)
Amber Karrde: child (female Human)
Anakin Solo: Jedi apprentice (male Human)
Ben Skywalker: Jedi apprentice (male Human)
Callista Ming Skywalker: Jedi Master (female Human)
Corran Horn: Jedi Master (male Human)
Daeshara'cor: Jedi Knight (female Twi'lek)
Danni Quee: scientist; Jedi apprentice (female Human)
Ganner Rhysode: Jedi Knight (male Human)
Jaina Solo: Jedi apprentice; owner of the Jade Sabre (female Human)
Kyp Durron: Jedi Master; commander of Durron's Dozen (male Human)
Han Solo: smuggler; captain of the Solo Command(male Human)
Iella Wessiri Antilles: head of the New Republic Intelligence Service (female Human)
Isolder: Prince Consort (male Human)
Jysella Horn: Jedi apprentice (female Human)
Lando Calrissian: entrepreneur; legal guardian of the Solo children; captain of the Lady Luck (male Human)
Lowbacca: Jedi Knight (male Wookiee)
Leia Organa: New Republic diplomat (female Human)
Luke Skywalker: Jedi Master; official head of the Jedi Academy (male Human)
Lusa: Jedi apprentice (female Chironian)
Malinza Thanas: "niece" of Luke Skywalker; musician (female Human)
Miko Reglia: Jedi Knight (male Human)
Mirax Terrik Horn: former smuggler; captain of the Pulsar Skate (female Human)
Myri Antilles: child (female Human)
Octa Ramis: Jedi Knight (female Human)
Raynar Thul: Jedi apprentice (male Human)
Salena Solo: child (female Human)
Shada D'ukal Karrde: former Mistryl; lieutenant of Talon's organization (female Human)
Syal Antilles: child (female Human)
Ta'a Chume: former Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium (female Human)
Tahiri Veila: Jedi apprentice (female Human)
Talon Karrde: smuggler; head of a neutral intermediary information-brokering organization (male Human)
Taryn Solo: child (female Human)
Tendra Calrissian: entrepreneur; legal guardian of the Solo children; captain of the Gentleman Caller (female Human)
Teneniel Djo: Queen Mother of the Hapes Consortium; member of the Singing Mountain Clan; de facto princess of Dathomir (female Human)
Tenel Ka Djo: Jedi Knight; Chume'da of the Hapes Consortium (female Human)
Tycho Celchu: former Rogue Squadron pilot (male Human)
Valin Horn: Jedi apprentice (male Human)
Wedge Antilles: former general and leader of Rogue Squadron (male Human)
Wes Janson: former general and Rogue Squadron pilot (male Human)
Winter Celchu: New Republic Intelligence agent (female Human)
Zekk: Jedi apprentice (male Human)
Damaged
“Lando and I would be happy to take care of the Solo children until Leia is able,” Tendra told the Masters’ Council.
“All of them?” Corran Horn asked. His eyebrows furrowed, doubtful of the Calrissians’ ability. It wasn’t that the Solos were horrendous children. It was just that there were four of them that needed to be cared for. His question reminded everyone of the Horn family’s offer to take in one Solo child.
Lando nodded. “Yes, all of them. The children’s caseworker has already been to our home and has given her approval. Our workload is not terrible so we will be available to be able to talk to the children as well.”
“What of their education?” asked Kyle Katarn. The bearded Jedi was an instructor himself and the question seemed very appropriate.
“We are actively searching for a tutor,” Tendra assured him. “And the children are free to attend your academy whenever they choose to. To summarize our intentions, we will do whatever is necessary to accommodate and fulfill the needs and desires of the children.”
The Council exchanged glances with each other. Both halves - Jedi and non-Jedi - had no complaint. The children would be together and their needs taken care of. Leia Organa was good friends with the Calrissians and would be happy to know that her children were not living with strangers. What was there to object to?
“Jaina? Anakin?” Luke Skywalker leaned forward as he addressed his niece and nephew, standing to the side of the Council room. He felt guilty, Jaina knew, that he was unable to take care of his sister’s children. But he was newly married and his son was having a bit of a hard time adjusting to a stepmother. And there were rumors of another Skywalker child… “Are you okay with his arrangement?”
Jaina let go of her sisters’ hands and stepped forward with Anakin. Her heartbeat was reminiscent to the scuffing of her shoes on the durasteel floor. “Yes,” the teenagers said together.
On the other side of the room, a woman signed her name on a piece of flimsy. “Mr. and Mrs. Calrissian,” she said as she stood and approached the couple. “Your temporary guardianship papers. Ms. Organa has already signed them.”
Four hours later, the Solo kids boarded the Lady Luck, leaving everything they had known behind.
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Oh my! This looks quite interesting! Please put me on the PM list!
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I agree ^. Please add me also!
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All right!
Luke and Callista Skywalker! Yay!
I could you!
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Hey! Where's Jacen? Other then that it's great but seriously, you have Jaina Anakin and two little girls but where's Jace? Add me to the PM list if you have one please!
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Intriging, very interested to find out what is going on here.
Please add me to any PM list.
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This looks good! Add me to PM list? Please?
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You certainly have my interest. I'll hang around and wait for PM's!
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MarasFire
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Date Posted:
1/28 5:19am
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RE: Damaged (Jaina Solo, AU)
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Everybody has been added to the PM List
DARTH_MU, I'm glad you're happy about Luke and Callista I tried to put many overlooked couples or not canonical relationships in this 'fic, like Luke/Callista and Lando/Tendra.
And, Twin_Saber, I don't want to give anything away but the fact that Jacen isn't there has a lot to do with this.
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“And there’s Dubrillion.” Tendra pointed toward the blue-green planet laced with fluffy white clouds. Beautiful was the first word that came to Jaina’s mind when she saw Dubrillion. She was a politician’s kid raised on Coruscant: natural scenery wasn’t the way anybody would describe that city-planet. But even though Jaina could recognize the planet’s beauty, she could not appreciate it as much as she could have. With the events of the last week being what they were, what was beauty worth?
As the Lady Luck entered the planet’s atmosphere, Dubrillion’s individual cities and countrysides became evident. The texture of the land became visible and the ground rushed toward them.
“That large city to the right is the capital city,” Lando said. “Often, tourists go there to see the large aquarium set up there.”
“That’s why Lando set up his hotel there,” Tendra said, her mouth turning upward into a wry smile.
“How far away is your home?” Anakin asked, saying what both he and Jaina had been thinking. Jaina was interested in what the Calrissians were saying, but her increasing drowsiness overpowered her curiosity to know more about the planet she would now call home.
“Not very,” Lando assured him. For the next twenty minutes, the Lady Luck journeyed with relative silence from within. They sped into the dark side of the planet. The moon replaced the sun, the lesser luminary dominating the night.
Tendra spoke then. “We’re here.”
Lando began the landing pattern, silently confirming his wife’s statement. Jaina watched Lando’s hands, learning the positions of the controls. There were the standard controls that every ship came with, and then there were the special modifications controls. There probably weren’t many other teenaged girls in the galaxy that grew up using modified ships but that was the norm for Jaina. In fact, she wasn’t sure if she’d ever driven a ‘normal’ ship, used the way it was designed and intended.
After landing, everybody got ready to leave the luxury yacht.
“Don’t worry about it,” Lando told Jaina and Anakin, who were heading toward Tara and Lena. “Tendra and I can bring them in.”
Jaina blinked a bit in surprise. She wasn’t used to having two able-bodied adults around. Most of the time Leia had so many papers to lug around that Jaina and Anakin were responsible to make sure Tara and Lena made it into the house.
Lando and Tendra gently picked up the sleeping girls; Jaina and Anakin grabbed the luggage. Lando and Tendra just had one small bag—they had just needed to bring enough clothes for three days—and the Solo children had stuffed all they needed in two big suitcases. The Calrissians had promised to take care of anything the kids might have left behind.
“Just leave everything on the floor,” Lando whispered. “We’ll take care of it in the morning.”
That proposition sounded perfect to Jaina. Her eyes could barely stay open, and these days sleep was Jaina’s best friend. A blessed escape from reality; a blackness that covered all.
The moment Jaina walked into the room designated as hers, she aimed for the bed and fell asleep in moments, not even caring that she hadn’t changed yet. What Jaina did care about was that her black happiness did not come.
Jaina’s dreams came in patches: evil conspiracies, Sith Lords, Chosen Ones, children, murder, speeders and clones all made brief appearances. And loud and clear above all the rest, spoken by a voice that Jaina knew and now feared:
“For the good of the galaxy, Callista Skywalker must die.”
Jaina’s eyes flew open, her heart pounding against her ribcage. Pain seared from her abdomen—while she had been sleeping on her stomach, her pants had been pressed against her. The warm comforter was sliding off of the bed, like they’re known to do when children turn over too many times in their sleep. Jaina slid out of bed, the comforter following her and landing on the floor, and shakily stood.
It was only a dream.
Jaina rubbed her eyes and sighed deeply, her heartbeat subsiding.
Her eyes not yet adjusted to the darkness, Jaina stumbled a bit toward her door. Her toe hit her suitcase, causing her to wince and mentally yelp. That’s one way to get what you’re looking for. Her pain all but gone, Jaina rummaged through the suitcase she shared with Lena, looking for her pajamas.
Succeeding, Jaina changed quickly and climbed back into bed. Fear peaked again at the thought of her dream.
“For the good of the galaxy, Callista Skywalker must die.”
Jaina shook her head as if to clear it.
It was only a dream.
If only it was.
This time the dark delight overtook her and nothing except the smell of breakfast could bring Jaina out of her stupor.
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Oh no!
Someone whom Jaina know wants to kill Callista!
I will protect her!
C'mon, foul villain, to get to Callista, you have to go through me!
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You've got me hanging on the edge of suspense.
Where is Han?
Thanks fo the PM.
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Ooh, nice creepy dream there... makes me wonder where you're taking this! I can't wait to see!
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Interesting... Please add me to the PM list?
So where is Jacen? Dead? Gone Sith already?
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“For the good of the galaxy, Callista Skywalker must die.”
Jaina shook her head as if to clear it.
It was only a dream.
If only it was.
Oh... This could go in so many interesting directions! There are lots of questions, and I look forward to getting the answers!
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Interesting beginning! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
I've also been looking for fics where the Solo kids are adopted/fostered. I think this is only the second I've found.
Can you add me to your PM list, please?
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