Durroness posted:Oh, this is so sad, so clever, so unexpected!
Durroness posted:Both Horns grimace and rub their legs, while Mirax smiles. Under any other set of circumstances, I would have been highly amused. But now, a sick feeling rides up through my stomach while Mirax embraces me. Funny how a bit of humor can make the situation seem even sadder! poor Kyppie! and really poor Jysella too.
Durroness posted:I love it and I'm eagerly awaiting more. Great job, its very unique.
PGHS_Weyr posted:awww that was both funny and sad... Poor old Kyp... Loved Mirax! That was great!
SilSolo posted:lol Kyp has a thing for attracting younger women doesn't he?
Ceillean posted:Uh...well, Jaina's already a tid bit young for Kyp but Jysella?
Ceillean posted:Different. Unexpected, but different.
Ceillean posted:Goodness, Corran would so kick Kyp's ass!
Ceillean posted:Great writing, Alkibiades! (see, I got your name right this time )
Alkibiades posted: Still, Thrawn/Leia is thirty years, when you account for time very strictly - 35 to 40 is more likely - and nobody complained - someone even hoped the involvement would become romantic...
Ceillean posted:Thrawn is Thrawn! Thrawn gets to do whatever the hell he wants to. He's Thrawn! Just needed to be said. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to more of your writing!
Mira_Jade posted:At first I was shocked to see you writing a J/J, and then I saw the 2x K/J, and I sorta snickered.
Mira_Jade posted:What can I say, I like Kyp/Jysella. I think I'm pretty burnt to age differences in Star Wars fanfiction - Kyp/Mara, Kyp/Jysella, Thrawn/Leia(even though the way Chiss age makes that understandable.) Hey, for all we know humans in the Star Wars 'verse age differently than us Earthlings. You never know.
Mira_Jade posted:Anyway, great job explaining Kyp's emotions. I feel so bad for him here, even though I am a serious J/J shiper. That he was going to propose to Jaina, only to have Jag beat him to it was heartbreaking - as was his lack of emotional involvement with his marriage to Jys. Poor Jys. too.
Mira_Jade posted:Can't wait to see the second part.
TheOnlyJediPrincess posted:I really like where this is going! I really like how Mirax stopped Corran and Valin from reacting to drastically! please add me to the PM list if you have one!
Alkibiades posted: Thanks! You are rather fond of Thrawn, aren't you?
Alkibiades posted: All feedback is appreciated, wie immer.
Ceillean posted:Ach, da spricht jemand Deutsch!
Ceillean posted:Great update!
Ceillean posted:Today is the ninth anniversary of their wedding – ours will be in three weeks – and this is the precise day he picks for his return. In a body bag. I expected a lot but not Jag's death. Absolutely not expected. So now I'm wondering what else you've got up your sleeve.
jadesabre75 posted:Sith! Fel has not been on Ossus since they were married, but today he returned. Today is the ninth anniversary of their wedding – ours will be in three weeks – and this is the precise day he picks for his return. In a body bag. I so wasn't expecting that. Glad Kyp finally found a happy place for himself with his wife. Great job!
jadesabre75 posted:11 kids?!