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Jerisa_Skywalker 
Registered: May '08
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Date Posted: 6/8 12:44pm Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - UPDATE 6/7 Family Matters Part 2 - Date Edited: 6/8 2:02pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Jerisa_Skywalker
shock um, slightly taken back, but, gee, guess it had to happen. Though I get the feeling Kyp really kind of cares for Jaina. Or he wouldn't have gotten so angry by her defiance, would he now? Though I still have the feeling there has to be something better than this cat-mouse-relationship...

So in sum it totally fits the characters. So I definately liked it mischief

ImperialSolo posted:
Not fair! My imagination took me to places not appropriate for these boards. tongue wink (I've never been any good with phrases, sorry. wink )


Well, now I see why that is. I just meant to say how long it will take until she's more approchable. Maybe opens up a little. I don't see desks in Anakin's imeadiate future, but well, I was wrong about K/J too. Guess I always am...

ImperialSolo posted:
I'm not sure I agree about Jaina having told Kyp to get lost, convincingly. tongue



What is the code a girl uses when she does it convincingly??? I mean short of beating him up, since he is her superior officer. I never get the difference of the No-I-Hate-You-To-Bits and the No-I-Mean-Yes. thinking Maybe because I'm a girl and mostly mean what I say... On the other hand of course you can use a desk with someone you hate... tired Guess I'll keep reading and learn something about this stuff blush .

ImperialSolo posted:
I'm glad nobody was thinking Anakin is weird or something like that. wink



Never! We all know what that was all about wink

ImperialSolo posted:
Wait until he finds out what she'll be up to next. mischief tongue


Will do!
So I hope for the next update.

 

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ccp 
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Date Posted: 6/8 5:57pm Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - UPDATE 6/7 Family Matters Part 2
Great chapter!

 

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Date Posted: 6/9 11:22am Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - UPDATE 6/7 Family Matters Part 2 - Date Edited: 6/9 11:33am (1 edits total) Edited By: angry_bendu1
*permanently red faced blush * Well, Jaina was certainly... limber? laugh shhh

That was well written though and I definitely agree with the others. Creepy Jacen needs to stop playing mind-voyeur. angry Freaky. shame_on_you

Great post and have as good of a Monday as you can. rolling_eyes tongue

peace

You should... um... really send me the other version too. blush shock laugh *trying to roll my mind out of the gutter*

 

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ImperialSolo 
Registered: Feb '08
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Date Posted: 6/9 2:42pm Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - UPDATE 6/7 Family Matters Part 2
Idrelle_Miocovani posted:
I got abducted by Darth School,

"An evil Sith Lord, and a cunning one. You were lucky to escape, young Jedi." wink

Idrelle_Miocovani posted:
so sorry I haven't been able to comment! I'm still getting caught up, but I can say that this story is developing really nicely! grin Leaves me wondering what's going to happen next! grin

When you have caught up, why not tell me what you think might happen next? wink

Thanks for reading! grin

Ceillean posted:
Do you have a PM version of that one certain scene? grin Yummy. Even though I'm not too fond of K/J. tongue

Kyp likes it rough, huh? Oh my... I have this permanent grin attached to my face right now.
I think it fits to this Kyp characterisation, though.

PM version? whistling tongue I'll see what I can do. wink

Judging by the reaction I feel that you liked the update? raised_brow How do you think Kyp is different here? thinking

smash128 posted:
Creepy Jacen, creepy Jacen. I'm just going to say that for the rest of the day.

Only if you say it in a Hutt accent...
Is it meant to sound like Jabba's Zeedee Jedi! Zeedee Jedi! when Luke kills the Rancor? wink

But seriously, why did Jacen seem so "creepy" here? He was on his best behavior! And he was trying to stop his sister from doing something stupid!! tongue

smash128 posted:
The K/J um wow, I'm not much for K/J, but yeah Kyp and Jaina sure have an attraction to each other or else they wouldn't of done it. Good work, can't wait for the next one.

Let's wait and see how things develop? mischief

Jedi_Perigrine posted:
shock Wow! Well done! Creepy Jason didn't ruin the mood too much I see! wink Can't wait for the next post!

Maybe Jacen encouraged them to go somewhere that seemed far away from him. Glad you liked it! wink

Idrelle_Miocovani posted:
Creepy Jacen. Very creepy Jacen.

And then -- shock

Whoa. I suppose Kyp and Jaina are a little more than attracted to each other, eh?

Again, like I said to smash128, what makes Jacen so "creepy" in this scene? confused It's not like he was mind-controlling Jaina and Tahiri and forcing them to kill people here. worried

And are Kyp/Jaina attracted to each other...? mischief whistling

Time will tell...

DARTH_MU posted:
And people are worried about the evilness of Jacen...

I give you Darth Durron!

On another note, how sure are we that Kyp is Kyp in this picture?

Which picture?

*looks at the photograph in MU's hand*

(From the Imperial Center Guardian)

WHO IS THE MYSTERY MAN WITH THE PRINCESS ON HIS ARM?
Deep Space, Wednesday

Intriguing footage has been leaked to military feeds on the HoloNet. Supposedly acquired by a source aboard the Star Destroyer Vader, it claims to show Jaina Skywalker caught in a compromising position with a lover.

The Imperial Security Bureau has moved quickly to remove the recording from all legal channels, with deliberate solicitation of the unedited footage carrying the death penalty, but those who have seen the material describe it as "steamy" and even "pornographic".

Military sources who have seen the material confirm that the location for the tryst appears to be an officer's day cabin. The details of the participants' uniforms indicate that both are TIE Pilots, and the viewport views are consistent with an office in the flight-launch complex aboard a Super-class Star Destroyer.

The view also appears to show a desert world in a binary system. Naval Command confirms that the Vader has spent the past two days at Tatooine, an important Rimward node on the Corellian Run, which conforms to this description.

"The girl sure looks like HIH," one officer aboard the Abrogator reports, "But who knows. All we ever get are airbrushed family photos, and there's something pretty kinky about comparing a holo of the Imperial Family with this stuff. She's getting up to some pretty kinky stuff in there."

Speculation about the identity of the man involved has reportedly been widespread, but a number of newsfeeds have named the mystery man as Commander Kyp Durron, the leader of Saber Squadron, in which HIH Lieutenant Skywalker is currently serving.

Other sources, however, caution against the authenticity of the supposed footage. The Imperial Palace has issued a strongly worded denial, while Naval Command insists that it is "unlikely" that a serving officer would be so unpatriotic and disloyal. Loyalist media outlets are reporting that this may be another example of "vile and vicious" Rebel propaganda. "It may be designed to defile the honourable reputation of the Empire," remarks Rable Hono in the Gazette, "but it only truly demeans the terrorist agents who willingly participate in this pornography."

More on this story as we get it.

wink

Jaina_Solo_Goddess posted:
So many people in this story want control, don't they. Especially Jacen...Thanks for the continuing PMs, by the way, even if I didn't respond. School and Finals are finally over!!! dancing

And Kyp falling for someone? Of course not... wink

Glad you made it out alive and well. grin wink

Tell me what you think about Kyp's feelings for Jaina? batting whistling

iamobiwan1970 posted:
There's a song, can't think of the title, but aline goes: "This is how we do it." All I could think after reading the K/J scene was: "This is how Imps do it." tongue I liked the scene. I'm guessing it is at the edge of what is allowed on the boards here. And I absoulutely agree with Ceillena: is there a PM version ???? I'm a bigger Kyp fan than K/J, but he's fun here, different than canon Kyp by a bit. Though in the love department that's impossible to say since we don't get much of that in canon.

Great update. Thanks for the info on Kyp's background.

I have a sneaking suspision Jacen is going to have fewer and fewer allies.

And where is Leia?

Leia is on Coruscant... whistling

Can you tell me how you think Kyp is different here from canon? I think he's still the same Kyp. mischief

I worked hard to make sure this complied with what's allowed. I hope I got it right. worried
But I'm glad you liked it.

And, as I said to Ceillean: "PM version"...??? wink

Sticks posted:
Daaaaaaaaang. I just found this and got caught up. I'm a sucker for AUs where the Imps win (I'm writing one myself now, actually) and this is good stuff. Please add me to your PM list, and your *cough* alternate PM list. blush Keep up the excellent work!

Hmm? What's an "alternate PM list"? I don't think we have one of those...

Yet. wink

But I'm glad you're enjoying this. You're on the normal PM list now. grin I'll have to take a closer look at your 'fic, too. When time allows. frustrated

Jerisa_Skywalker posted:
shock um, slightly taken back, but, gee, guess it had to happen. Though I get the feeling Kyp really kind of cares for Jaina. Or he wouldn't have gotten so angry by her defiance, would he now? Though I still have the feeling there has to be something better than this cat-mouse-relationship...

So in sum it totally fits the characters. So I definately liked it mischief

shock You liked it?! shock

Kyp may be protective of Jaina, or he may be possessive - which would you prefer? wink

I think it's more cat-and-dog than cat-and-mouse, though! wink

Jerisa_Skywalker posted:
Well, now I see why that is. I just meant to say how long it will take until she's more approchable. Maybe opens up a little. I don't see desks in Anakin's imeadiate future, but well, I was wrong about K/J too. Guess I always am...

You'll find I'm just full of surprises! wink

Jerisa_Skywalker posted:
What is the code a girl uses when she does it convincingly??? I mean short of beating him up, since he is her superior officer. I never get the difference of the No-I-Hate-You-To-Bits and the No-I-Mean-Yes. thinking Maybe because I'm a girl and mostly mean what I say... On the other hand of course you can use a desk with someone you hate... tired Guess I'll keep reading and learn something about this stuff blush .

I don't intend to give excuses for guys harassing girls, don't get me wrong. I just meant that if Jaina really didn't want the attention, she wouldn't have kissed him back in one of the earlier posts.
I know this is a difficult subject, though. It's not easy to see who's right or wrong. And as I said above, those characters are supposed to be flawed and human.
I'm glad they make people think and discuss a bit and hope that will continue. happy

Jerisa_Skywalker posted:
Will do!
So I hope for the next update.

It should come tomorrow! grin

ccp posted:
Great chapter!

Short reply! tongue

But thanks! wink

angry_bendu1 posted:
*permanently red faced blush * Well, Jaina was certainly... limber? laugh shhh

She may be small, but she's got it where it counts! wink

angry_bendu1 posted:
That was well written though and I definitely agree with the others. Creepy Jacen needs to stop playing mind-voyeur. angry Freaky. shame_on_you

Hey! He has a Force-bond with his sister, and sensed the turmoil she was in.
Is it possible that, behind the training that's encouraged him to act crazily, he's still a sensitive young man who loves his sister? mischief

angry_bendu1 posted:
Great post and have as good of a Monday as you can. rolling_eyes tongue

peace

Thank you. I hope this helped your Monday, too? hugs

angry_bendu1 posted:
You should... um... really send me the other version too. blush shock laugh *trying to roll my mind out of the gutter*

Was that an attempted mind-trick? shock shame_on_you wink

 

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darkjedileia 
Registered: Jul '07
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Date Posted: 6/9 4:30pm Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - UPDATE 6/7 Family Matters Part 2 - Date Edited: 6/9 9:57pm (2 edits total) Edited By: darkjedileia
Looking forward to next chap.

I'm interested in how this DE AU came to be. Will it be explained or maybe flashbacks?

 

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ImperialSolo 
Registered: Feb '08
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Date Posted: 6/10 8:09am Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - NEW 6/10 Getting to Know Each Other - Date Edited: 6/10 8:25am (1 edits total) Edited By: ImperialSolo
Note: There's a fictional news article for your amusement in my reply post above. It deals with the previous update. tongue



Getting to Know Each Other

Tahiri was surprised that Anakin Solo left her alone when she asked for some time to herself. But when she tried to meditate, she found herself distracted—and oddly comforted—by his noisy attempts to keep himself busy, and his agitated aura in the Force.

So she wasn't surprised—or even unhappy—when he came to find her in the forward hold, twenty minutes later.

She was surprised by the grin that he gave her as he walked in, though—and by the wry smile she found twisting her own lips in reply.

"I can't believe this...." she sighed, shaking her head. "I can't believe he did this..."

Anakin just laughed slightly. "Better that you find it out this way, no?" He leaned forward, and gave her a hug. "Now, come on. Let's get you something to eat?"

Tahiri felt her teeth clench. "I'm not hungry."

"No," Anakin agreed, standing up and messing up her hair, "you're just stubborn." He looked down at her with thoughtful eyes. "You talk less than you used to."

Tahiri looked back up at him, with a wry grin. "I'm not really the same person any more."

Anakin shrugged. "I don't believe that."

Tahiri frowned. He almost seemed to be smiling. "My life just got totally karked, Captain Solo. Someone I care for declared me a traitor, and is now trying to kill me."

Anakin's eyes went wide, and his jaw dropped in a look of outrage. "Whoah? You care for him?!"

Tahiri crossed her arms. "It's none of your business."

Anakin sighed, putting one hand to his forehead, and pacing about the forward hold. "Look... if it's that serious...." He looked at her, sincerity competing with distaste on his face. "We can find a way to make this right. But your life's not over... even if you do decide to change sides!"

"What is there to make right?" Tahiri demanded, standing up and staring at him. "He didn't even let me explain!"

Anakin grinned at that. "Well, I'm sure we can find you an opportunity. We're the Rebel Alliance. We're good at getting the Imps' attention."

She sighed. "Obviously I overrated my importance to... the Empire."

Anakin's response was to walk back up to her, and hug her again.

Tahiri frowned, but Anakin just tightened the hug.

"Oh," he said. "I've missed you."

He wasn't exactly bothering to shield his emotions—and instead of amused contempt for his Rebel flaws, she found herself surprised by the strength and honesty of his feelings.

She looked at him, into his eyes. She flinched at the bright blue gaze, but refused to look away. "Why?" she asked.

Anakin's fingers traced down her cheek. "How much do you remember?"

"I... not much..." She looked down at the ground—his boots, and her bare feet. She frowned at that—was it some Rebel way of keeping prisoners from getting too far? But it didn't seem like something worth complaining about.

He brushed her hair from her forehead, and grinned "We were always together. We saved those kids on Yavin 4. You never wore shoes. We had that adventure in Vader's old castle. We went through your coming of age on Tatooine.... What happened?"

She stared blankly at him.

"Can you at least remember why you can't remember?" he asked.

When she spoke, Tahiri's voice cracked with unfamiliar pain. "I just don't, okay? Maybe it wasn't as important to me as it was to you."

She pouted, but Anakin squeezed her again, leaned in, and kissed her forehead. "We'll work it out," he said, with a quiet grin. "I'd forgotten how much fun it was being with you..."

Tahiri gave him a wry look.

"So Rebels like hugging a lot?" she asked.

She didn't want to admit that she enjoyed being hugged.

Anakin winked at her. "We're the good guys, Ree. A really friendly bunch."

She rolled her eyes, and put her arms around his waist. "So what do we do now?"

Anakin looked down at her, and his lips curled up at one side. "I'm fine like this."

Tahiri looked back, and blinked. "Yeah?"

"Yeah."

She frowned thoughtfully. "We can't stay like this forever, though..."

Anakin grinned. "Hmm. We could try and set a Galactic record?" His hand was rubbing her back, and his lopsided smile looked kinda cute.

Tahiri stifled a grin. "Funny."

Anakin's eyes shone. "Or," he suggested. "We could make very small movements..." He leaned a little closer, with an expression that seemed caught between a smile and a desire to kiss her.

Tahiri just kept looking into his eyes. "And what is our goal?"

"To get to know each other again?" he asked.

For a moment, Lieutenant Veila's stormtrooper training took over. She noticed that her heart was beating very fast, and her breathing had quickened—danger signs; but she felt no urge to move. Their bodies were close, and Anakin had just slid one hand up to the back of her neck.

"To stay alive?" Anakin added.

Tahiri bit her lip, as if thinking. "Is it wise to move slowly, then?"

He leaned in and nuzzled her. "One way to find out...." he murmured.

Tahiri's eyes were wide. She couldn't move away.

Uh-oh.

Anakin led her into the kiss. Their bodies pressed together as if they were made for this, his arms binding her tight against him, and then their lips touched. Tahiri felt her eyes closing, and kissed back gently, hesitantly.

Anakin had been greedy for a moment, at first—but then he slowed, becoming gentler. He wasn't just responding to her, Tahiri realized—he didn't want to rush this, either.

She returned the favor, surprised by her own feelings—and happy to let Anakin savor her lips. She let her hands slide from his back round to his chest. She parted her lips, and felt him deepen the kiss.

For several moments, their mouths moved together in a shared rhythm, slowly exploring, enjoying, and teasing.

But worries began to rise up in her mind. Why was she doing this? He was a Rebel—the enemy....

Slowly, tenderly, reluctantly, their mouths slid apart, and they looked at each other.

What do you think you're doing?! she had planned to ask, but instead, the words caught in her throat, and she just stared back at him instead, swallowing slightly as her eyes met his.

There was a fluttery feeling in her stomach, a sense of rightness about what they'd just done. There was something she should have been thinking of, something that should have held her back, but whatever it was, it didn't matter; it could wait.

She smiled at him, and felt like she belonged.

"Wow," Anakin said, sounding a little breathless.

Tahiri found herself blushing. She felt a little surprised, too, and wondered if that showed on her face.

She looked at Anakin. A grin was forming on his lips.

Then they blinked at each other.

"Uh..." Tahiri said.

Anakin hugged her tighter again, and she raised an eyebrow back at him. His eyes seemed to be searching hers—and getting lost.

"Hey?" she asked. She could feel a silly grin forming on her face.

Anakin grinned back, his open palm rubbing slowly on her lower back.

"Hey," he answered. "So where do we go from here?"

She blinked, as his body rocked gently against hers.

"I... don't know..." she murmured, taking a step backwards. She felt her rear bump up against the computer console behind her. It was hard to form coherent thoughts, but when Anakin leaned in to kiss her again, it was easy enough to put her arms around his neck, and reach up on her tip-toes to kiss him back.

Pleased to see me, huh? she thought, running her fingers through his hair, and savoring the anticipation as their lips moved to meet each other again.

Then the deck jerked violently beneath their feet, and the alarms began to howl.

 

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Date Posted: 6/10 8:16am Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - NEW 6/10 Getting to Know Each Other
Great job!

Sorry I've not replied in a long while! I'll try to do better!



A/T!!!!!!!!!! happy

 

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Date Posted: 6/10 8:30am Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - NEW 6/10 Getting to Know Each Other
A A/T moment, aww. Well Anakin is still working on trying to get Tahiri to become her old self, the one used to remember when they were kids. Good stuff, can't wait for more.

 

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Date Posted: 6/10 8:42am Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - NEW 6/10 Getting to Know Each Other
Excellent!

Han's reaction to all of this should be interesting.

 

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DARTH_MU 
Registered: Feb '05
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Date Posted: 6/10 8:52am Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - NEW 6/10 Getting to Know Each Other
Geez, makes me wonder how much Empress Leia is paying Mezhan Kwaad...

Wow, everything stayed together with canon even right up to JJK.

Darn, I thought that maybe it C'Baoth suceeded in turning Leia's children to the dark side, and then Leia went in to save them, only to be captured... But it looks far more serious.

Where's the point of divergence?

 

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Jerisa_Skywalker 
Registered: May '08
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Date Posted: 6/10 1:09pm Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - NEW 6/10 Getting to Know Each Other
So, that was definately cute. I like how she doesn't understand what rest of her seems to want. I thought the order of his summery was cute too: the no shoes made it second place!!! dancing .
And now I smell action again?

But to reply to the answer from before:

ImperialSolo posted:
shock You liked it?! shock


As I said it fits the characters. Doesn't mean I like the relationship wink

ImperialSolo posted:
Kyp may be protective of Jaina, or he may be possessive - which would you prefer? wink


For Jaina's sake... It would certainly fit a Sith to be possessive. But is he truely Sith or someone who doesn't know bouders. thinking Can't decide yet. Need more input.

ImperialSolo posted:
I think it's more cat-and-dog than cat-and-mouse, though! wink wink

I think it's cat-mouse. They just switch characters. wink

ImperialSolo posted:
I don't intend to give excuses for guys harassing girls, don't get me wrong. I just meant that if Jaina really didn't want the attention, she wouldn't have kissed him back in one of the earlier posts.
I know this is a difficult subject, though. It's not easy to see who's right or wrong. And as I said above, those characters are supposed to be flawed and human.
I'm glad they make people think and discuss a bit and hope that will continue. happy


I didn't get you wrong there. It's just used quite often in stories. And then it mostly goes your way, like Han and Leia, though I think Han was nicer than your Kyp. I just never get woman in general that play that game. I agree though than Jaina showed something like interest that one occasion. I didn't figure it went that far. Still I think it makes both of them very lonely, doesn't it. But now I think I'm overplaying my hand.

 

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morrison85 
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Date Posted: 6/10 2:43pm Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - NEW 6/10 Getting to Know Each Other
lol Poor tahiri, being taunted b anakin..

 

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Date Posted: 6/10 4:28pm Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - NEW 6/10 Getting to Know Each Other
Another great post! I love seeing Tahiri slowly coming back to her ordinary lovable self. And Anakin too, of course, but he's ALWAYS his ordinary lovable self. I'm glad they got interrupted though, two steamy posts in a row might have driven me crazy! wink

Well, that and the fact that we knew the peace couldn't last forever! It never does.

 

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Date Posted: 6/10 7:46pm Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - NEW 6/10 Getting to Know Each Other
I love this story! Your A/T is absolutely yummy and sweet and everything it was always meant to be! Keep up the great work!

 

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ImperialSolo 
Registered: Feb '08
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Date Posted: 6/11 7:12pm Subject: RE: DARK LEGACY (AU, 31 ABY) Jaina, Kyp, Jacen, Tahiri, Anakin - NEW 6/10 Getting to Know Each Other
G__Anakin posted:
Great job!

Sorry I've not replied in a long while! I'll try to do better!

That's fine. I'm glad you managed this time. hugs

G__Anakin posted:
A/T!!!!!!!!!! happy

Yep!!!! grin

smash128 posted:
A A/T moment, aww. Well Anakin is still working on trying to get Tahiri to become her old self, the one used to remember when they were kids. Good stuff, can't wait for more.

I'd say he's doing quite well, wouldn't you? wink
Keep reading to see how things develop, though! tongue

ccp posted:
Excellent!

Han's reaction to all of this should be interesting.

Now, do you mean his facial expressions, or what he actually says and thinks? tongue

Glad you liked it!! grin

DARTH_MU posted:
Geez, makes me wonder how much Empress Leia is paying Mezhan Kwaad...

Tsk! Read my sig, MU! tongue

DARTH_MU posted:
Wow, everything stayed together with canon even right up to JJK.

I felt that Anakin and Tahiri should have had much the same childhood as in canon - but some things may already have been different then. wink

DARTH_MU posted:
Darn, I thought that maybe it C'Baoth suceeded in turning Leia's children to the dark side, and then Leia went in to save them, only to be captured... But it looks far more serious.

Oh, it is far more serious... mischief

DARTH_MU posted:
Where's the point of divergence?

There are already some clues... it does say "a different Dark Empire outcome" at the start of the first post...? But that may be misdirection. mischief
As you observed, some things remained identifiable up to the JJK timeframe...

Jerisa_Skywalker posted:
So, that was definately cute. I like how she doesn't understand what rest of her seems to want. I thought the order of his summery was cute too: the no shoes made it second place!!! dancing .

Thanks! You noticed how Tahiri has, unconsciously, reverted instantly to being barefoot already?

The Empire couldn't change how she feels, instinctively and honestly; they only made her think in certain ways, which controlled her feelings. Now, after the big shock of being declared a traitor, she's feeling freely again, and that means that she's feeling comfortable with bare feet, and with Anakin...

... with being herself? grin

Jerisa_Skywalker posted:
And now I smell action again?

Do you mean smut, or shooting people? wink

Jerisa_Skywalker posted:
But to reply to the answer from before:

ImperialSolo posted:
shock You liked it?! shock


As I said it fits the characters. Doesn't mean I like the relationship wink

Is there a chance you could be convinced otherwise? tongue I hope the contrast with A/T helps take the story forward? confused

Jerisa_Skywalker posted:
For Jaina's sake... It would certainly fit a Sith to be possessive. But is he truely Sith or someone who doesn't know bouders. thinking Can't decide yet. Need more input.

So you'll keep eagerly reading the K/J? wink

Jerisa_Skywalker posted:
I think it's cat-mouse. They just switch characters. wink

I really like that explanation - but I don't think either of them is a mouse! tongue

Jerisa_Skywalker posted:
I didn't get you wrong there. It's just used quite often in stories. And then it mostly goes your way, like Han and Leia, though I think Han was nicer than your Kyp. I just never get woman in general that play that game. I agree though than Jaina showed something like interest that one occasion. I didn't figure it went that far. Still I think it makes both of them very lonely, doesn't it. But now I think I'm overplaying my hand.

No, it's interesting to hear your reactions. Please keep up with them!? praying
I think that both Kyp and Jaina have reasons for being... aloof. We've already dealt a little bit with Jaina's reasons; keep reading to learn more about Kyp...

And, don't you think that if they understand each other, that might be a good thing? thinking

morrison85 posted:
lol Poor tahiri, being taunted b anakin..

Yeah, poor her. sad I'm sure every girl here would agree. wink

Jedi_Perigrine posted:
Another great post! I love seeing Tahiri slowly coming back to her ordinary lovable self. And Anakin too, of course, but he's ALWAYS his ordinary lovable self. I'm glad they got interrupted though, two steamy posts in a row might have driven me crazy! wink

Well, that and the fact that we knew the peace couldn't last forever! It never does.

No? Hmph. plain

But I'm glad you liked the post - and the characters. grin
We may test your craziness limit in future, though. Would you mind? batting

star_writer24 posted:
I love this story! Your A/T is absolutely yummy and sweet and everything it was always meant to be! Keep up the great work!

Thank you - that's nice to hear, especially coming from an A/T writer like you! I've tried to do what I feel A/T deserve here, and I'm happy people like it. grin

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AU, 30 ABY - Anakin, Jaina, Jacen, Tahiri, Kyp, Leia, Han...
Empire, Rebellion... no Yuuzhan Vong!
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