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Twin_Saber
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2/22 3:32pm
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RE: Invincible (Caedus has tricked everone, until the real jacen finally returns)updated 2/20/08
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Hi! Sorry for not replying lately! I've been busy with my stupid test-obsessed school. But this has been a great couple of posts and I look forward to the next few. Thanks for the PMs!!
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Abeja
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That's a great story. I've always hated it that Jacen became evil. Would you mind adding me to your Pm list, if you have one?
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jacensolofangirl2007
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2/24 8:44am
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Twin_Saber posted:
Hi! Sorry for not replying lately! I've been busy with my stupid test-obsessed school. But this has been a great couple of posts and I look forward to the next few. Thanks for the PMs!!
TWIN_SABER
thats ok, I was wondering what happened to you though  .
I'm really glad you liked them! I had a lot of fun writing them.
thanks for reading and for the reply!!
Abeja posted:
That's a great story. I've always hated it that Jacen became evil. Would you mind adding me to your Pm list, if you have one?
-Abeja
thanks! yeah I hated it too  ...but oh well.
yes of course i'll add you, welcome aboard!
I'm glad you like the story and thanks for the reply!
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jacensolofangirl2007
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I just added a trailer to this story over on the first post 
let me know what you all think of it!
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Oh my goodness, the trailer was good. I liked Han's line at the end, leave it to him to be the master of sarcasm and understatement. "Oh, great! Now there's two of them!" That left me chuckling, despite all the seriousness of the situation.
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jadesabre75
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Awesome trailer! I have to agree that Han's line made me laugh out loud.
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Oh my gosh.Love the trailer.
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jacensolofangirl2007
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dm1 posted:
Oh my goodness, the trailer was good. I liked Han's line at the end, leave it to him to be the master of sarcasm and understatement. "Oh, great! Now there's two of them!" That left me chuckling, despite all the seriousness of the situation.
I'm glad you liked it. I thought it could use a little humor....
thanks for reading and for the reply!
jadesabre75 posted:
Awesome trailer! I have to agree that Han's line made me laugh out loud.
Thanks! I'm glad you liked that part too
thanks for reading and for the reply!
dawn7191 posted:
Oh my gosh.Love the trailer.
YAY!another person likes it!
I'm so glad you loved it!
thanks for reading and for the reply!
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TheOnlyJediPrincess
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The latest chapter was great! the suspension is really building.
The trailer you have added is great too, I can't wait for the fight between Jacen and Caedus.  I hope Luke is ok. I busted out laughing at the last line where Han speaks. "great now there is two of them." That is Han to a T.
I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!
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jacensolofangirl2007
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TheOnlyJediPrincess posted:
The latest chapter was great! the suspension is really building.
The trailer you have added is great too, I can't wait for the fight between Jacen and Caedus. I hope Luke is ok. I busted out laughing at the last line where Han speaks. "great now there is two of them." That is Han to a T.
I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!
thanks!! I'm really happy you liked them.
I'm glad that you liked Hans line too, I didn't realize how poplar it would become when I wrote it 
thanks for reading and for the reply!
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next post coming later today!
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Part 11
Caedus smiled wickedly out the view port as the Anakin Solo finally made its way to space. He looked out at the stars, imagining when they would all belong to him. No more rebellions, no more wars, no more traitors, everything would be at his command. Soon very soon he would have his revenge.
Entering the command deck, the Yuuzhan Vong warrior Yall rigidly walked down the ramp, looking out in distaste at all the human officers down below him. His eyes followed all the medal and machines that surrounded him; everything was sleek straight lined and completely unnatural. It disgusted him.
But he didn’t let his distaste show as he walked towards the black figure at the end of the ramp, who was looking out at the stars. He acted like he wasn’t aware of his approach but Yall knew better than that, even though he couldn’t be detected through the force, Colonel Solo still somehow always knew when he was coming.
He found it a little annoying but ignored the feeling as he made his way to where Colonel Solo was, and stood behind him setting his legs and body in a way that would be able to block about anything should someone feel the need to test his might.
Caedus continued to look out at the stars but he knew Yall was behind him, “Is everything set?” he asked.
Yall narrowed his eyes; he would think that the human would at least have the respect to turn around to talk to him. “Yes, everyone has been briefed on the mission and ready to go hunting”.
Caedus smiled at that, he really liked being in control of Yuuzhan Vong. The specie’s that had almost conquered this galaxy was now answering to him! He really was the most powerful person in the galaxy now. There was no one who could stop him now.
Yall narrowed his eyes even more at Colonel Solo’s smile. A Yuuzhan Vong leader never would have let his warriors see him smile like that, it was degrading.
Caedus now turned around to look at him, “Very good Agent Yall, you are dismissed. Make sure to keep everyone set, we’ll be arriving at Endor in four days, and I won’t tolerate any mishaps”.
The Yuuzhan Vong warrior made eye contact with him and curtly nodded than swiftly turned and marched back the way he had come.
Caedus turned back to the view port and watched as they entered hyperspace.
Soon, very soon.
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Jacen and Jaina were still hidden down in a dark room somewhere near the bottom of the ship, when they felt the ship go into hyperspace.
“Where do you think he’s going?” Jaina asked curiously.
Jacen who was walking around the room was using the force to see where he was going as he searched the room for some kind of back door. “I’m not sure. You know him better than me.” he said as he bumped into some crate.
Jaina heard the commotion he was making, “What are you doing? You’re going to give us away.”
As he stepped around the crate, Jacen almost smiled at that, “They can’t hear with their ears blocks”.
“Huh?” she asked confused, “why would their ears be blocked?”
Jacen rolled his eyes, which he thought after he did it about how pointless it had been since she wouldn’t be able to see it. “Because I didn’t want them to hear anything.”
Her eyes narrowed, “You blocked their ears? How?”
“Just a trick I learned, I’ll teach it to you sometime if you want”.
“I’d like that”, she said as she started feeling around.
As Jacen’s hands continued to roam the sleek wall, he was quickly disappointed not to find anything that resembled a back door. “Ok time for plan B”.
“What’s plan B?” she asked as she went to stand beside him, using her hands and the force to keep from falling over some of the junk.
Jacen answered her by turning on his lightsaber and sending it at the ceiling, making a perfect circle big enough for both of them to get through. As the piece of ceiling fell to the ground, light flooded into the room immediately, bathing both of them in it. Jacen smiled at it in satisfaction then jumped up through it with Jaina right behind him with her lightsaber already in hand, just in case.
But it turned out to another empty room as well, filled with a bunch of old equipment.
“I have a feeling that they weren’t expecting company today”, Jaina said dully, as she looked around.
Jacen turned off his lightsaber and gingerly walked towards the door, and stretched out in the force and instantly felt a couple presences outside the door. He closed his eyes and gently probed their minds sending desires of hunger into them. Then as he listened, he heard them walk away. He turned back to face Jaina, “Ready to do a little snooping?”
Jaina gave him a wicked smile, “Of course, I’m always up for a good game of snooping”.
“Good”, he said as he gently and slowly opened the door. He kept his force presence hidden while at the same time using it to search the area. He noticed that Jaina on the other hand wasn’t doing such a good job of keeping hers hidden. So without a word to Jaina about it, he expanded his force cloak to cover her as well. She didn’t even seem to take notice of it though as they ran down the hallway.
At first it was clear sailing and they didn’t see or feel anyone as they carefully made their way down the maze of the ship. Jaina thought it was good luck on their part, but Jacen was suspicious about it, he was still worried about those teenagers that hadn’t been giving off a force presence earlier, but Jaina was sending him reassures through there twin bond that it had probably had just been a trick the fraud had been using. As much as Jacen wanted to believe that though he couldn’t bring himself too, there was no sense in doing something like that, and even if there was, it would have taken a lot more than possible force straight to do something like that. No, Jacen thought, there was a lot more to this than met the eye, he just knew it.
As they turned around the next corner, that’s when Jacen and Jaina finally felt someone coming and they quickly ducked into the nearest room and watched one of the GAG pass. Jacen sucked in a breath as he watched, than stuck his head out to watch him as he walked away, he still couldn’t believe that some people would actually want to dress like Vader.
As the GAG passed out of sight they quickly ran out of the room and down the next hallway.
As they kept randomly just picking different ways to go, Jaina had finally had enough of that, “Jacen where are we trying to go?”
As Jacen turned another counter he turned his head to whisper back at her, “I don’t know, but I’d like to find out where all those teenagers are”.
She nodded, “there’re probably all in the main hold”. She said as she reached out and pulled Jacen to a stop. “It’s up a few levels though I think”.
He nodded in understanding as they dunked in another empty room that looked like a meeting room crowded with chairs, “should we find a turbolift or do this easy way?” he said indicating to his lightsaber.
Jaina bit her lip as she thought about it, “you know if we keep cutting stuff, somebody’s bound to notice eventually”.
Jacen thought that she was probably right and dodged back out into the hallway, “I think I saw a turbolift this way”. He said as he started running back down the way they had just come.
She sighed as she quickly followed, she felt like they were running in circles.
Jacen was right when he led them right to one of the lifts. They quickly surveyed the area, than when they were sure it was clear they jumped into the lift and waited as it lifted them a few floors.
“I had forgotten how huge these ships are”, Jacen commented as they waited looking at all the buttons on the keypad.
Jaina glanced at it unimpressed, “I’ve seen bigger.”
He looked at her sideways, “yeah I’m sure you have, but it’s been a while since I have.”
“Well whose fault is that now,” she asked blowing a stray piece of hair out of her face, “you could have come home a lot sooner than now”.
When Jacen didn’t answer, Jaina instantly regretted saying that. She hadn’t thought about how much blame he was probably putting on himself about not coming back sooner and fixing this before it became this big of a mess. She bit her lip and silently scolded herself. “Jacen I didn’t mean it like that, you had no way of knowing and it’s not….”
He interrupted her, “Its ok Jaina, but I should have known better than to have been gone this long any way. There always is one big war around the corner”.
She looked grimly at him, “yeah I guess there is. But don’t you worry Jacen, because from now on I’m not ever letting you out of my sight again.” She said trying to lighten his mood a little.
It worked when Jacen gave her a lopsided smile, “Yeah well if that’s the way you want it to be than you’re going to find yourself in a lot of new territories and…”
Jaina shut him up, “Ok ok you don’t have to go into detail brother, I guess I can let you do you manly functions once in a while.” She said teasingly back.
Before Jacen could give her a retort back though, the turbolift reached its destination and as the doors slide back, Jacen and Jaina were instantly greeted by a squad of GAG. The squad looked at them in surprise but quickly got over it as they all reached for their blasters. Jacen looked at them and muttered, “not good”.
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thanks for reading everyone and please comment  . and if you think theres anything that you think will make the story better, please tell me.
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jadesabre75
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and if you think theres anything that you think will make the story better, please tell me.
Short of having Jag in the picture, I can't think of anything to make this story better. 
I liked the banter between the twins. Awesome job!
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Yay its good 
I am really loooking forward to Jacen beating up Caedus ass.
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He interrupted her, “Its ok Jaina, but I should have known better than to have been gone this long any way. There always is one big war around the corner”.
She looked grimly at him, “yeah I guess there is. But don’t you worry Jacen, because from now on I’m not ever letting you out of my sight again.” She said trying to lighten his mood a little.
Hmmm  I wonder if Jaina will keep her word on that. Nice job 
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And thats when the poodoo hit the proverbial fan.....
I like how you have continued the dialogue between Jacen and Jaina. That is one thing I have really missed since the problems during the Dark Nest trilogy. Quick question, is Tahiri going to be in this later as Caedus' little enforcer? I'm kind of hoping not, but if so I would be interested to see what her character is like in this AU.
Good update, I will be back for more.
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