Author Topic: Invincible (Caedus has tricked everone, until the real jacen finally returns)Completed! 5/9/08
morrison85  6755 posts
Registered: May '05
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Date Posted: 5/13 5:51am Subject: RE: Invincible (Caedus has tricked everone, until the real jacen finally returns)Completed! 5/9/08
I want to know what was in lukes present O.O


anyway, i think snce dark nest he was not thaaaat bad you should have left him m being allanas father tongue

anyway it wasnt 15 years he as away wasnt it ? wasnt iot only like 11 years?

 

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jacensolofangirl2007  621 posts
Registered: Nov '07
42777_Danni Quee
Date Posted: 5/13 7:35am Subject: RE: Invincible (Caedus has tricked everone, until the real jacen finally returns)Completed! 5/9/08
morrison85 posted:
I want to know what was in lukes present O.O


anyway, i think snce dark nest he was not thaaaat bad you should have left him m being allanas father tongue

anyway it wasnt 15 years he as away wasnt it ? wasnt iot only like 11 years?


lol tongue Mara's note? well that i'm going to leave to your imagination laugh

well....Dark Nest was okay I guess for him...but for me he was a LOT different in that one already from where NJO ended so...plus If he had been there for DNT, then I don't think he would have left again leaving the perfect opening for Caedus to be born and move in. sad but yeah him actually being Allana's father would have been nice, but every storys got to have a sad part right? wink

yeah the 15 years thing...was kinda of a mistake on my part, but thats something I had messed up at the beginning and I didn't want to be inconsistent. So I just kept it that way, but really it was like 10 years or something. Because wasn't there like 5 years between NJO and DNT. and another 5 years between DNT and LOTF? something like that tongue

thanks for reading and for the feedback!!


 

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JediKyle23  82 posts
Registered: Feb '08
19990_Kyle Katarn
Date Posted: 5/13 10:38am Subject: RE: Invincible (Caedus has tricked everone, until the real jacen finally returns)Completed! 5/9/08
Wow. Awesome story! I'm sorry I haven't read it before now. It's incredible. Great story! Possible sequel?

 

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Earthknight  2817 posts
Registered: Oct '02
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Date Posted: 5/13 2:39pm Subject: RE: Invincible (Caedus has tricked everone, until the real jacen finally returns)Completed! 5/9/08
Geat job applause !!! I love the ending.

I'm especially pleased that Jacen is okay because the last part had me almost crying. So I'm very happy that he is alive and well with his family happy .

Sheesh. You are making me love Jacen....wait I kind of already liked Jacen...just not in LotF.

 

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jacensolofangirl2007  621 posts
Registered: Nov '07
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Date Posted: 5/15 7:00pm Subject: RE: Invincible (Caedus has tricked everone, until the real jacen finally returns)Completed! 5/9/08
JediKyle23 posted:
Wow. Awesome story! I'm sorry I haven't read it before now. It's incredible. Great story! Possible sequel?


awww thanks! blush your too nice. thanks for reading it! I'm really glad you liked it, that makes my day happy

lol um..we'll see about a sequel, but maybe. It would be fun.

thanks for reading and for the feedback!!

Earthknight posted:
Geat job applause !!! I love the ending.

I'm especially pleased that Jacen is okay because the last part had me almost crying. So I'm very happy that he is alive and well with his family happy .

Sheesh. You are making me love Jacen....wait I kind of already liked Jacen...just not in LotF.


lol thanks Master!! glad I made you proud...well I think I did...hopefully worried tongue jk

glad you liked the ending, every ending needs a happy ending right? I hate bad endings, I mean why do some people even do that? grrr. lol

lol! yay. everyone needs to love jacen don't you know? He's just the best of the best! dancing glad and honored I got you to love him too. grin

thanks for reading and for the feedback Master!

 

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