Author Topic: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoilers
Darth_Lex  3896 posts
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Date Posted: 2/15/08 12:29pm Subject: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoilers - Date Edited: 2/15/08 12:39pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Darth_Lex
Title: Should Be Going
Author: Darth_Lex
Timeframe: LOTF
Characters: Jaina Solo, Jagged Fel
Genre: Romance
Summary: LOTF missing scene

Disclaimer: Lucasfilm owns all the rights to Star Wars. I don’t. No infringement is intended or profit to be made by me.


This vignette is a missing scene from LOTF. At the very end of Fury, while sitting on a blanket with Jag watching the sunset on Endor, Jaina decides to seek out Boba Fett to help train her to take down her brother. As she gets up to go make plans, she promises Jag she’ll say goodbye before she leaves.

Here’s my version of their farewell. love


*** SPOILER NOTICE ***

The story contains no major plot spoilers for Revelation. There are a few minor references – some of which come from the Revelation excerpt included with Fury, anyway – but nothing which reveals the events of the book to any meaningful degree. If there’s a spoiler at all, it’s that this vignette is a missing scene. (For those who are curious, this scene would take place between Chapters Two and Three of Revelation.)


As always, thanks to TKL for the beta. hugs


p.s. Yes, I meant to get this posted yesterday, but it needed a bit more work. doh! Oh well, better late than never, right? batting So a one-day belated Happy Valentine’s Day, J/Jers! rose




Should Be Going


His door was closed when she got there. She paused outside, took a slow breath, and knocked. Boots thumped, and the door opened.

“Hey,” Jaina said. “Can I come in?”

“Sure.” Jag stepped aside to let her through, then shut the door behind him. He appraised her. “Ready to go, I guess.”

“Nothing to be gained by waiting.” She forced herself to smile. “I promised I’d say goodbye before I left…”

“I see you decided to get dressed up all fancy for your audience with a head of state.”

She laughed. The nondescript gray flight suit was about as boring as it got. “Military issue might send the wrong signal. I figure the longer I can go without them shooting at me, the better.”

“Good idea.” He was still standing by the door. He didn’t seem to know where to go. Not that she did, either – she was just standing in the middle of his room. “So,” he said into the awkward silence, “what’s your plan?”

“Fly to Mandalore and ask to see Boba Fett.”

Jag chuckled. “It has the virtue of simplicity. And whose brilliant idea was that? Zekk’s?”

“My dad’s.”

“Ah. He would have been my next guess.”

“I bet.” Her palms were sweating. She wiped them on her hips. “Keep an eye on Ben if you can.”

“Why? What’s he up to now?”

She blew out a slow breath. “He can’t quite leave that GAG detective training behind. He’s not convinced Alema killed Mara – in fact, he’s sure it’s Jacen. But he says he’ll follow the evidence wherever it leads. So he’s going to investigate her murder start to finish, piece by piece.”

Jag raised a brow. “That could be… rough.”

“Yeah. So watch out for him, okay?”

He took a step forward. Just like that he was only an arm’s length away. Just within her reach. “I’ll do what I can.”

“All right.” She looked down at her boots. She really should get going. “So, are you gonna wish me luck?”

“You don’t need luck. You have the Force.”

“Yeah.”

“It’ll be with you, Jaina. It always is.” He flashed a grin. “You sure you don’t want to take Threepio with you? I hear those Mandalorians are sticklers for the intricacies of protocol. You wouldn’t want to inadvertently offend them.”

Without thinking, she slugged him in the arm. “You can be such a pain sometimes.”

“Sorry.”

“No. You’re not.”

He scowled. “It’s that Jedi lie detection. Caught every time.”

“So…” She sighed again. “I guess I should be going.”

“Okay.” He paused. “Just…”

When he didn’t continue, she took a step closer. “Just what?”

He looked away, then back into her eyes. “Just don’t forget who Fett is. What he is. Mandalore, grandfather, whatever else he might be, he’s still a cold-blooded killer. You can’t trust him.”

“In other words, be careful.”

He smiled, faintly. “Well, I know better than to say it to you that way. But yes.”

“I’ll be careful, Jag,” she said, holding his gaze. “I promise.”

“You’d better. Because when you’re through, I want you back here in one piece.”

“One piece. Right. I can do that.”

They stood there, looking at each other. She could feel the hesitation boiling off him in the Force. Then, finally, he slid toward her and pulled her into his arms. Instinctively she hugged him in return, wrapping her arms around his back. After a moment he tightened their embrace, but didn’t let go.

Holding him close, nestled against him, she suddenly became acutely aware of their physical contact. His hands on the small of her back. His heartbeat. Her fingers on his shirt. Her cheek on his chest. His warmth. Her own pulse, racing.

She realized she didn’t want to let go, either.

“Be safe,” he whispered.

She squeezed him gently, and ran her hands up his back a little. “I will.”

He took a long, deep breath. His chest rose and fell against her. But he said nothing, only ran his hands once a short distance down and up her back.

“I’ll come back,” she said softly into him.

“Hmm?”

She raised her face and looked at him. His was only millimeters away. “I said, I’ll come back.”

He didn’t blink. “I’ll be waiting.”

She stared into his eyes. That… look. It brought back so many –

And then he was kissing her. Gently. Tenderly.

Jaina kissed him back. Somewhere in the deep recesses of her mind, she wondered if she shouldn’t be. If she was making a mistake. If this was too soon.

He broke the kiss, his lips lingering a hairsbreadth from hers.

“Jag…”

He kissed her again. Hard, this time. Claiming her lips. Plundering her mouth with his tongue. She couldn’t breathe.

She whimpered – but not from anxiety.

She crushed him to her, and kissed him with equal fervor. His hands caressed her back; hers caressed his. Her legs went weak, and he pulled her closer, holding her up – without ever breaking their kiss. She embraced him even tighter.

Gasping for air, she finally tore her lips away. He was looking down at her, grinning.

“Jag, I…”

“No,” he said quietly. Gently, yet insistently.

“But –”

He silenced her with another kiss, just for an instant. “Not now. Not today.” He gazed deeply into her eyes. “It can wait.”

For when she got back? Or for when… for when this was all over?

He leaned down and kissed her on the neck – just behind her jaw, beneath her ear.

Jaina decided she didn’t need to know the answer right now. “Oh…”

“Surrender,” he whispered.

She did.

*****

Jaina gave her hair one last vigorous rub with the damp towel, then gave up. That was as dry as it was going to get. She draped the towel over the back of the chair, then turned back to face the bed.

Jag was still sound asleep. He hadn’t noticed when she’d awakened, or when she’d crawled out of bed. Apparently even the sound of the sanisteam hadn’t bothered him. She chuckled to herself, and stepped over to the side of the bed. She reached out to rock his shoulder, then drew her hand back.

She didn’t need to wake him, not just to say goodbye. Their farewell was best remembered as it was. Not in words.

Stepping quietly on tiptoes, she made her way to the door, opened it, and slipped out into the night. The air was warm, humid. Closing her eyes, she inhaled the deep forest aromas of Endor. This might be her last moment of calm – of peace – for weeks. She savored it.

Then she opened her eyes and started walking toward the landing area, where an X-wing was fueled and prepped for her. The techs would have long given up waiting for her. She only got a few strides, though, before she saw her uncle approaching from the opposite direction. Even before they met halfway, she felt her face flushing.

“Just out for a midnight stroll,” Luke said. “And you?”

“Uh…”

“Don’t worry, Jaina,” he said, leaning in conspiratorially, “I won’t tell.”

She nodded. “Right. Thanks.”

He winked, and walked away.

She stood there a moment longer, then strode off at a quick pace toward her waiting starfighter.

“Better work on my subtlety before I get to Mandalore.”


 

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Date Posted: 2/15/08 12:39pm Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
Lex, that was adoreable!!! Positively precious!! Thanks so much for continuing the love!!!

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Date Posted: 2/15/08 3:48pm Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
So I haven't read any J/J since about 2003. (Wow, that's been 5 years now!) But when I saw this title, it intrigued me. So despite having no clue on the state of Star Wars EU canon, I clicked.

And I really liked it.

It was such a fun read and I remembered a lot of the things that I loved about this ship. Thanks for giving that to me. happy

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Date Posted: 2/15/08 4:40pm Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
You posted it ! hugs


Full reply when I get home!


Great job Lex! dancing


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Date Posted: 2/15/08 5:58pm Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
Lex...I absolutely love your canon speculations!! and this is one of the best... applause

Wow!! I'm going to pretend that this is canon, once I've read the book for myself. I'm so excited about what I've been seeing about this next book, I can't wait to have it in my grubby little hands...Especially for the Jag/Jaina bits... love

Fantasticly written as always!! applause


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Date Posted: 2/15/08 6:53pm Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
applause applause applause applause applause applause applause applause

It was so good I read it about five times. Great job!

 

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Date Posted: 2/15/08 8:41pm Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil - Date Edited: 2/15/08 8:43pm (1 edits total) Edited By: THE_PIED_PIPER
Darth_Lex posted:
p.s. Yes, I meant to get this posted yesterday, but it needed a bit more work. doh! Oh well, better late than never, right? batting So a one-day belated Happy Valentine’s Day, J/Jers! rose


And back at you from your fellow J/Jers! dancing



Darth_Lex posted:
His door was closed when she got there. She paused outside, took a slow breath, and knocked. Boots thumped, and the door opened.

“Hey,” Jaina said. “Can I come in?”

“Sure.” Jag stepped aside to let her through, then shut the door behind him. He appraised her. “Ready to go, I guess.”


That’s Jag always to the point, but in a good way!



Darth_Lex posted:
“Nothing to be gained by waiting.” She forced herself to smile. “I promised I’d say goodbye before I left…”


*nods* Jaina Solo: A Practical Woman.. tongue



Darth_Lex posted:
“Jag chuckled. “It has the virtue of simplicity. And whose brilliant idea was that? Zekk’s?”

“My dad’s.”

“Ah. He would have been my next guess.”


laugh



Darth_Lex posted:
“I bet.” Her palms were sweating. She wiped them on her hips. “Keep an eye on Ben if you can.”

“Why? What’s he up to now?”

She blew out a slow breath. “He can’t quite leave that GAG detective training behind. He’s not convinced Alema killed Mara – in fact, he’s sure it’s Jacen. But he says he’ll follow the evidence wherever it leads. So he’s going to investigate her murder start to finish, piece by piece.”

Jag raised a brow. “That could be… rough.”

“Yeah. So watch out for him, okay?”

He took a step forward. Just like that he was only an arm’s length away. Just within her reach. “I’ll do what I can.”


worried Be careful what you agree to Jag, this is Luke Skywalkers son, we’re talking about here.




Darth_Lex posted:
He looked away, then back into her eyes. “Just don’t forget who Fett is. What he is. Mandalore, grandfather, whatever else he might be, he’s still a cold-blooded killer. You can’t trust him.”


I think that the danger factor that Fett adds to the story and Jaina’s mission is substantial. I can’t wait to read the book to get the full feel of that, and her family’s reaction to it.




Darth_Lex posted:
They stood there, looking at each other. She could feel the hesitation boiling off him in the Force. Then, finally, he slid toward her and pulled her into his arms. Instinctively she hugged him in return, wrapping her arms around his back. After a moment he tightened their embrace, but didn’t let go.

Holding him close, nestled against him, she suddenly became acutely aware of their physical contact. His hands on the small of her back. His heartbeat. Her fingers on his shirt. Her cheek on his chest. His warmth. Her own pulse, racing.

She realized she didn’t want to let go, either.

“Be safe,” he whispered.

She squeezed him gently, and ran her hands up his back a little. “I will.”


Okay….okay. This ( love ) will forever more be my standard, Jag & Jaina “moment” that I love response. tongue

So….. love




Darth_Lex posted:
He took a long, deep breath. His chest rose and fell against her. But he said nothing, only ran his hands once a short distance down and up her back.

“I’ll come back,” she said softly into him.

“Hmm?”

She raised her face and looked at him. His was only millimeters away. “I said, I’ll come back.”

He didn’t blink. “I’ll be waiting.”

She stared into his eyes. That… look. It brought back so many –

And then he was kissing her. Gently. Tenderly.

Jaina kissed him back. Somewhere in the deep recesses of her mind, she wondered if she shouldn’t be. If she was making a mistake. If this was too soon.

He broke the kiss, his lips lingering a hairsbreadth from hers.

“Jag…”

He kissed her again. Hard, this time. Claiming her lips. Plundering her mouth with his tongue. She couldn’t breathe.

She whimpered – but not from anxiety.


blush Sorry, I just couldn’t cut any of that, so…… love That was really beautiful. peace






Darth_Lex posted:
holding her up – without ever breaking their kiss.


shock *is speechless with love *


[quote=Darth_Lex] “Surrender,” he whispered.

She did. [/quote]

Always.. love




[quote=Darth_Lex]She didn’t need to wake him, not just to say goodbye. Their farewell was best remembered as it was. Not in words.[/quote]

Oh, so true. rose




[quote=Darth_Lex]This might be her last moment of calm – of peace – for weeks. She savored it.[/quote]

*nods* I suspect she’s right. *sighs*





[quote=Darth_Lex] “Just out for a midnight stroll,” Luke said. “And you?”

“Uh…”

“Don’t worry, Jaina,” he said, leaning in conspiratorially, “I won’t tell.”

She nodded. “Right. Thanks.”

He winked, and walked away. [/quote]

Perfect! Busted by Uncle Luke. laugh

</ to Luke> shhh Don’t say anthing it may get back to Han, and we need Jag alive to found our glorious Imperial Dynasty. tongue






[quote=Darth_Lex] “Better work on my subtlety before I get to Mandalore.”[/quote]

Subtlety? shock She’s a Solo! tongue



Very nice, Lex. You capture Jag perfectly. applause You’ve been writing him for a long time and it shows. The J/J romance and interaction together was spot on with everything we’ve seen in LotF. And I like the idea that Jag will be looking after Ben. Jag is a sound, morally upright person, a great “older brother” figure for Ben that won’t try to murder his father, corrupt him or put him in the Embrace of Pain.

Kudos! A great Valentine read!




 

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Date Posted: 2/16/08 12:22am Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
I saw this, when **** yeah!" because it had been a very long day and I was hoping for something precisely like this.

So I clicked and read it. Then I scrolled back up, and read it again. And then a third time...

In short, it was absolutely *wonderful* and passionate without being disgustingly sweet like everyone seems to be in the mood for around Valentine's. It was simple, and I thought it made a lot of sense, considering what we've seen in Fury and the preview for Revelation so far.

Awesome work!

 

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Date Posted: 2/16/08 3:11am Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
Fantastic job Lex!

 

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Date Posted: 2/16/08 7:33am Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
Oh wow Lex! Such an amazing scene. If only the LOTF books would include stuff resembling this, we'd be in good shape grin

 

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Date Posted: 2/16/08 8:16am Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
Oh wow.... love

This was just fantastic! It fits perfectly with the end of Fury. And from what I've been spoiled with for Revelation. whistling

Well, I don't have much to say except SQUEEEEEEE!

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Date Posted: 2/16/08 3:38pm Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
Ah! Now I need Revelation to see how this fits in.

Great 'fic.

 

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Date Posted: 2/16/08 10:04pm Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
She crushed him to her, and kissed him with equal fervor. His hands caressed her back; hers caressed his. Her legs went weak, and he pulled her closer, holding her up – without ever breaking their kiss. She embraced him even tighter.

Gasping for air, she finally tore her lips away. He was looking down at her, grinning.

“Jag, I…”

“No,” he said quietly. Gently, yet insistently.

“But –”

He silenced her with another kiss, just for an instant. “Not now. Not today.” He gazed deeply into her eyes. “It can wait.”

For when she got back? Or for when… for when this was all over?

He leaned down and kissed her on the neck – just behind her jaw, beneath her ear.

Jaina decided she didn’t need to know the answer right now. “Oh…”

“Surrender,” he whispered.

She did.

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Date Posted: 2/17/08 6:00am Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
Chimpo posted:
Fantastic job Lex!




I second that. LOL. tongue

Seriously, this was simply perfect . . . in my version of canon for sure. love

Thanks for that little tidbit of wonderfulness. applause

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Date Posted: 2/17/08 11:54am Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil

I love the line about surrendering to Jag. Jaina would see giving into her desire that way. kiss But at least she finally had the sense to do it! dancing


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“Just out for a midnight stroll,” Luke said. “And you?”

“Uh…”

“Don’t worry, Jaina,” he said, leaning in conspiratorially, “I won’t tell.”

She nodded. “Right. Thanks.”

He winked, and walked away.
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Date Posted: 2/17/08 2:46pm Subject: RE: Should Be Going (J/J missing scene, LOTF; one post) just after Fury; very minor Revelation spoil
That was a great Vigg! I loved the ending!

 

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