shahid_chestro posted:Good Story. I hope that you show Jacen's reasons for going sith to the others. Also, show his issues with his love for his family and his duty as a GAG and a Sith. also...dont show him stupid/weak coz he's not. I really hope that you develop Tahiri's character. Update soon.
DarthAnakin101 posted:Wow...this is one of the best stories I have read on here, and that's only after the first chapter! I love how you portray the characters and explained things that some...duller people wouldn't understand. Great post and if you have a PM list please add me!
DarthAnakin101 posted:Sweet! and, if I may say so, FIRST!
shahid_chestro posted:Great Chapter. what are those abilities??? Cant wait for more.
NYCitygurl posted:Awesome chapter!! Go Ben for sticking to what he believes -- especially since he's right And your Caedus continues to be eerily chilling.
DarthAnakin101 posted:Awesome! I loved it, especially how you included Vectivus and Kyp. Nice work!