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ccp 
Registered: Apr '05
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Date Posted: 6/16 7:18pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-16-08- Chapter 14*Part One*
Excellent!
Can't wait to be the next part.

 

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jaina-Fett 
Registered: Jan '08
40224_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 6/16 8:11pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-16-08- Chapter 14*Part One*
WOOHOO!!!! You might not have updated in a while but it was well worth the wait applause

I'm glad you got "Sticks " mentioned , I loved Jaina as a pilot.

Is the Countess Tenel Ka's grandmother ? confused


Can't wait for the next update .

 

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JAGSGURL15 
Registered: Jul '03
21797_Ewok
Date Posted: 6/16 8:49pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-16-08- Chapter 14*Part One*
great as usual! Jaina's dress... wow.

 

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Jainasolo101 
Registered: Dec '07
43737_Marasiah Fel
Date Posted: 6/16 8:53pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-16-08- Chapter 14*Part One*
Oh no.

Jag is getting into something he should not have.
I hope it gets better!


Great Post

I'll keep watching!

 

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Jedimaster_JainaSolo 
Registered: Jun '03
42356_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 6/17 12:50am Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-16-08- Chapter 14*Part One*
grin Awesome post!! I loved all the interations...and the sticks thing...marvelous! laugh

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SWpants666 
Registered: Oct '04
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Date Posted: 6/17 2:33am Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-16-08- Chapter 14*Part One*
She wore a pair of pretty flats, as she had never mastered heels

Smart girl :P
She sounds gorgeous though


Jaina wore, well he wasn't sure it could be considered a dress when it concealed so little, but that was what he supposed it was called.

laugh I'm surprised Han let her out of the house!


"Sticks, huh? Well that is interesting. I've heard of him, but I didn't know he still held all those records there." she said smoothly.

grin Oh that's great. Doesn't surprise me she still holds the records.
I feel bad that she doesn't fly much anymore.


Ah, that was a great chapter, everyone meeting each other happy

 

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Jaina_and_Jag 
Registered: Apr '03
23040_R2-D2 Blueprint
Date Posted: 6/17 5:39pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-16-08- Chapter 14*Part One*
Loving this stuff. grin

 

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JainaJag14 
Registered: Apr '06
24102_Mara Jade
Date Posted: 6/17 6:59pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-16-08- Chapter 14*Part One*
This is a really great story. I love how you developed everything, and included all the characters. You've really translated the SW universe into real life, and it works almost flawlessly. Could you PM me when you update? Thanks. happy

JJ14

 

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Trickster-Lead 
Registered: Aug '07
7725_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 6/18 7:02pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-16-08- Chapter 14*Part One*
Idrelle_Miocovani- Thanks! Im glad you are continuing to enjoy...

smash128- Thanks...The countess...Not saying

zonzo- Oh, he is. Thanks!

princess_of-naboo- Sorry, can’t tell...Im glad you liked that...Just a little add in of mine. More on that later.

Jag4Me- Thank you! He’s begining to figure her out. As for the countess...

jadesabre75- I know...it will be worth it though...

Aleria- Thanks, that’s sort of what I was aiming for. Glad it worked. Don’t worry, the academy comes back into play.

ccp- Thanks!

jaina_Fett- Thanks, glad you think so. So did I. The role worked for her. Hmmmm.

JAGSGURL15- Thank you!

Jainasolo101- Of course. Men (even if they are Jagged Fel). Lol, anyways, Thanks. I hope it will too...

Jedimaster_JainaSolo- Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.

SWpants666- I like Wyn, she is fun to write and I just saw that dress and pictured her... I don’t think Han saw the dress. Jaina’s not stupid. she could have easily slipped a coat on over it. Of course, but she could start back. Thanks!!!

Jaina_and_Jag- Thank you!

JainaJag14- Thank you so much for reading! Yes, I’ll let you know.

 

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JAGSGURL15 
Registered: Jul '03
21797_Ewok
Date Posted: 6/20 10:11pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-16-08- Chapter 14*Part One*
eagerly awaiting more! :d

 

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Trickster-Lead 
Registered: Aug '07
7725_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 6/25 12:36pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-16-08- Chapter 14*Part One* - Date Edited: 6/25 2:42pm (3 edits total) Edited By: Trickster-Lead
Thanks to whoever nominated me, I'm flattered. And as always, thanks for reading and responding! Here is the next part...

Chapter Fourteen- Part Two

Jagged blinked. Jaina, he guessed, was simply trying to be polite, because there was certainly nothing ‘well’ about the woman standing before them. His mother had always said that a polite little lie every now and then was necessary to survive in this universe. In this particular case, however, Jag could see nothing very little about the lie.

The countess was shorter than Jaina, even without her heels, and weighted at least four times what the Goddess did. Her hair was slightly below shoulder length, and styled sleekly. However it was the color, not the nature of her hair that made the woman so, well, unique seemed to kind a word. The woman had evidently been unable to choose a color for her hair, so she had simply combined them all. Her makeup portrayed to same sense of indecisiveness. She wore navy blue mascara, purple and pale green eyeshadow (copiously applied) and bright pink lipstick. Her dress was also multicolored, slightly too tight and covered in various forms of glitz and glitter. All in all, she looked like a woman who had never excepted the fact she had grown old and was desperately trying to hold on to her youth.

At Jaina’s comment, the woman giggled. “Well, thank you dear. I was almost late tonight. I could have sworn that it started at nine. Lucky for me Milly never forgets anything. She rushed in at a quarter ‘til and shouted at me to get ready. I threw on the first thing I saw and sped right over.” The countess giggled again. “Good thing too, I never miss an opportunity to see you again, darling. It has been so long!” Though she addressed Jaina, her eyes had wandered and fixed themselves on Jag, raking his form.

Jaina gave her a polite smile and nodded. “A month at least,” she supplied, digging her finger nails into Jag’s arm painfully. It took all his military upbringing not to acknowledge his discomfort.

“A month?” exclaimed the countess. “It seems to me an age at least!”

“Indeed, so much has happened since.” returned Jaina kindly. “Speaking of, Doris, to answer your previous question this is Jagged Fel. He’s a friend of mine. Jag, this is this esteemed Countess de Rosen. I believed I have mentioned her to you?”

“Mentioned?” said Jag with a sly glance at Jaina. “She speaks of you constantly, Countess. I can barely get her to talk about anything else.”

Jaina’s instant increase of pressure on his arm let Jag know he had touched a nerve, and would pay for it, but for the time being the carefully concealed look in Jaina’s face was worth it.

The countess positively beamed. “Jaina is always much too kind. She is a truly remarkable young woman,” she purred, sending Jag a look that was purely predator. He shivered slightly, but chose to ignore it.

“That, I know,” replied he sincerely, and Jaina’s grip on his arm lessened slightly.

“So, Doris,” said Jaina, quickly turning to a safer subject. “I heard-”

But whatever Jaina had heard of, Jag never found out, because her words trailed off suddenly and she glanced at something just beyond his right shoulder. The countess and Jag both mimicked her, allowing their gazes to follow the same path. But there was nothing there.

Wait.

There was something. A rustling of feet and conversation were floating down the garden path just behind them. Two figures were making their way toward the trio, and one of them, Jag recognized.

“Gilad,” the countess addressed the taller of the on comers. “Fancy seeing you here.” There was something flat in her tone that suggested to Jag there was some interesting history between the countess and the grand admiral.

“Likewise, Doris,” said Pellaeon, in a similar tone. “I trust you know the princess.” He gestured toward his companion. Suddenly, Jag recognized her also. It was Princess Elaine of Norith. She was tall, even in comparison to the Admiral, with long sheer blonde hair that fell straight to her hips. Her complexion was fair, extremely fair, and her eyes had something of a gaunt appearance to them. Though he had heard rumors calling her the most beautiful girl in Known Space, Jag thought she was gather plain. She appearance lacked character and vitality. She looked like a statue, pale and staring.

“Why yes,” said the countess with a kind smile. “You look lovely tonight, Elaine. How are you?”

“I am well, thank you, Doris,” replied the princess in a flat and airy sort of tone. She volunteered no more information.

“Well, well, well,” said the Admiral turning his gaze to the goddess. “Jaina Solo, I must say, you look more like your grandmother everyday.”

Jaina extend her free hand to him and he kissed it. “I can only hope so, Admiral. I would rather it not be my father I emulate.”

“Ah, but alas. You are your father in everything but your looks, my dear,” returned Pellaeon with a wink. “And you Fel,” he added to Jag. “Are your father’s double. Im surprised to see the two of you get along so well.”

“Get along?” asked Jaina in mock astonishment. “I can’t stand him!”

Pellaeon smiled. “Yes, well, neither can your mother and father stand each other, Jaina.”

“Your dress is lovely, Jaina.” the princess cut in suddenly.

“Oh,” said Jaina, clearly taken aback. “Thank you, Elle. Yours looks amazing on you. Nice choice in color.”

The princess nodded, her eyes wandering over Jag, but in a very different way from the countess.

“You look like your brother,” she told him simply;
Jag blinked. Surely she didn’t mean Cem. He looked as much like their mother as Jag did their father. “My brother?”

“Yes,” returned the girl shortly. “Davin.”

His stomach did a slight turn as it always did at any mention of his eldest brother’s name, his late eldest brother’s name.

“You knew him?” Jag asked quickly.

“Yes,” Elaine returned. “He was a good friend of mine. I was sorry for his death.”

Jag could not think of anything to say, so he just nodded once. Jaina’s death grip on his arm turned into a comforting squeeze, and Jag felt a rush of gratitude toward her.

“He was a good soldier,” said Pellaeon gruffly. “And he went before his time.”

A silent expectance of these words rippled through the people around him.

“Well,” said Jaina after a few moments. “I promised Jag a dance, so we should probably be moving, but it was wonderful to see all of you once again.”

With that he and Jaina made their exit. She pulled him strategically through the garden pathways, and he allowed himself to be led. Finally they stopped in front a fountain in the very heart of the garden, but she didn’t let go of his arm.

“Thanks,” he said, giving her a slight smile.

“Well, I really didn’t want to have to witness the countess’s devouring you. It might have gotten messy,” she quipped.

Jag laughed. “Is she always that.” He paused. “Friendly.”

“Only when there are nice looking men around.”


“Oh? Then what was that about?”

Jaina cocked her head to the side and flashed a lopsided smile.

“Why, Jagged Fel, are you telling me you don’t own a mirror,” she asked him, taking a step closer.

“What are you saying I’m nice looking or something?” He said in kind. “Because-”

But he didn’t finish, because at that moment, she stepped forward and, linking her arms around his neck, kissed him, hard. And he kissed her back, even harder. His arms tightened around her, his hands finding the bare skin of her back and-

Then a noise shattered the seeming mist around them, causing reality to rush over them once more. It was an bloodcurdling, breathtaking, agonizing scream. And it was coming from the direction of the ballroom. They broke apart, giving each other startled looks and then bolted back to discover the source of their disruption.

It was not hard to find. The occupants of the ballroom had all formed a circle around it. There lying the in center was none other than Princess Elaine. As Jag watched, Mara Jade Skywalker pushed through the circle, closely followed by her husband and sister-in-law. She bent down beside the motionless girl and pulled something out of the side of her neck.

“She’s dead.” said Jaina’s aunt emotionlessly.


 

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zonzo 
Registered: Dec '07
7744_Kyle Katarn
Date Posted: 6/25 12:43pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-25- Chapter 14 *Part Two* Up! - Date Edited: 6/25 12:53pm (1 edits total) Edited By: zonzo
I win! nerd

*Gasp* Murder! Great plot device.

 

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jaina-Fett 
Registered: Jan '08
40224_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 6/25 12:47pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-25- Chapter 14 *Part Two* Up! - Date Edited: 6/25 12:49pm (1 edits total) Edited By: jaina-Fett



I was not expecting that .

Okay so let me get this straight.
They have an encounter with the " Countess " ( who -by the way- is a little silly ) , they get away from said Countess ; share a steamy kiss ( which was unexpected) , and then someone dies. thinking


Oh yah I can't wait for the next update


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Jainasolo101 
Registered: Dec '07
43737_Marasiah Fel
Date Posted: 6/25 12:48pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-25- Chapter 14 *Part Two* Up!
OH NO!

Wow great post. Something really is going wrong.
I am glad that Jad and Jaina got to kiss. Not only
was she kissing him but he was kissing her. But they had to get interupted.
I wonder who killed the princess?

Great post and I can't wait!

 

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Jag4Me 
Registered: Jan '08
44272_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 6/25 12:54pm Subject: RE: Happenings at Coruscant High J/J, J/TK, A/T -Update- 6-25- Chapter 14 *Part Two* Up!
Trickster-Lead posted:
Thanks to whoever nominated me, I'm flattered. And as always, thanks for reading and responding!

Well deserved for this fun story. applause
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The countess was shorter than Jaina, even without her heels, and weighted at least four times what the Goddess did. Her hair was slightly below shoulder length, and styled sleekly. However it was the color, not the nature of her hair that made the woman so, well, unique seemed to kind a word. The woman had evidently been unable to choose a color for her hair, so she had simply combined them all. Her makeup portrayed to same sense of indecisiveness. She wore navy blue mascara, purple and pale green eyeshadow (copiously applied) and bright pink lipstick. Her dress was also multicolored, slightly too tight and covered in various forms of glitz and glitter. All in all, she looked like a woman who had never excepted the fact she had grown old and was desperately trying to hold on to her youth.

I love this description! She sounds like a train wreck! laugh I think I like the countess after all.
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"Ah, but alas. You are your father in everything but your looks, my dear,” returned Pellion with a wink. “And you Fel,” he added to Jag. “Are your father’s double. Im surprised to see the two of you get along so well.”

“Get along?” asked Jaina in mock astonishment. “I can’t stand him!”

Pellaeon smiled. “Yes, well, neither can your mother and father, Jaina.”

applause Wonderful conversation and yay! for the Admiral's appearance. "I can't stand him!" Han and Leia all over again. love
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But he didn’t finish, because at that moment, she stepped forward and, linking her arms around his neck, kissed him, hard. And he kissed her back, even harder. His arms tightened around her, his hands finding the bare skin of her back and-

Been waiting on this!!! kiss And then they get interrupted?! applause
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“She’s dead.” said Jaina’s aunt emotionlessly.

shock Uh, oh. I bet our young lovers will get thrown into a mystery now? raised_brow
Awesome update Lead!!

 

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