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Author Topic: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Completed 12-22-08
jadesabre75 
Registered: Nov '07
40329_Jedi
Date Posted: 4/24/08 5:58am Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-23-08
I can't decide if Jacen doing this is bad or not. frustrated Great chapter though!

 

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YodaKenobi 
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39865_Darth Revan
Date Posted: 4/25/08 1:59pm Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-23-08
"I know, but I could of protected her if I was faster." Jacen sighed as he put his head in his hands.
"Jacen you're not perfect, no one is." Riggs said.
"Well I should be!" he said angrily back to Riggs who recoiled back in shock at the sudden tone change in Jacen.

Shades of Anakin Skywalker again sad

"Great the job switches from one married space pirate to another space pirate who galvanizes across the galaxy." Leia threw her arms in the air in frustration. I expected you to talk some sense into him Han, not encourage him to go. You really think he'd listen to me, Jaina, or even Luke?" she asked.

This is what I expected from Leia tongue

"Well what would happen if Serra inadvertly sent Jacen on a mission which led to his death?" Kyp asked.
"Then there be very little chance of someone stopping or preventing me of hunting down Col Serra and..." Jaina started.

Foreshadowing, maybe...? thinking

"Sir another component has been added, 3 down, 4 to go." a man told Rizlem Slag as he watched over the endless space in his flagship.
"Perfect, the fools all over the galaxy won't know what hit them." Slag grinned as he watched crews work on multiple Star Destroyers encircling around his own Super Star Destroyer, "Won't know what will hit them at all."

raised_brow

This can't be good. But what does it mean? confused

Oh and if anyone can think up of a good name for Slag's SSD then please tell. So far all I got is Leviathan, but somehow I got a feeling its already been used or taken.

Indeed grin

No ideas off the top of my head thinking I'll let you know if I think of anything.

Good post, smash grin Great finally seeing more of Han, Leia, Luke, and Jaina (Kyp too!). Sounds like Serra's is regrouping but Slag seems to be on his way to... something? And almost complete thinking

Glad Ashlen will be okay grin

Post more soon happy

 

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smash128 
Registered: Feb '08
Date Posted: 4/28/08 9:30pm Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-23-08
YodaKenobi-Yeah he has the shades of Anakin Skywalker on him, a bad trait I say. Yeah I'm glad as well I'm bringing in more of Luke, Kyp, etc. Thanks for reading.
jadesabre75-Thanks for reading, glad you're liking it. And Jacen does have some things in life left to sort out
JEDI_MARAUDER-Well what kind of good leader wouldn't care for his own people, thats what makes a leader a good one in the first place. Thanks for reading
jacensolofangirl2007-Tsk tsk tsk I'd say you're jealous of Ashlen tongue and that she's with Jacen oh well you can't win them all, jk. Thanks for reading. And yes Jacen will bring it on to Slag.

Part 11
(In Space Near Imdaar)

Both Jacen and Riggs were relaxing in the lounge playing a game of sabacc when another figure entered the room.

"I get to play whoever's the winner." a cool female voice rang. Both Jacen and Riggs jumped and turned as they saw Ashlen standing in front of them completely healed, arms crossed, and a smirk on her face.

"Ashlen you're ok." Riggs and Jacen got out of their seats and ran up to meet her, Riggs hugged her while Jacen came up to hug her, but stopped.

"Well I'm glad you're alright." Jacen held his hand to shake her's which she took it. Ashlen then pulled Jacen into a hug, it took Jacen by shock at first but then returned it. They then turned around when they heard a chuckle as they saw Col Serra standing there.

"Well Ashlen its good to see you back on your feet." Col said.

"I say it is." Ashlen agreed.

"Well as fine as this is of relaxing with you three, I have news to bring you. We found out some information on the data you stole from Slag's office on Tatooine.

"What is it?" Riggs asked.

"Well we figured out the name of his Super Star Destroyer, its called the Juggernaut. And what Slag's been planning to use with it. He's been modifying it with a superlaser, a superlaser that could fire one blast and immediately a second in a matter of seconds." Col stated.

"What!?" Ashlen asked.

"Thats impossible!" Jacen remarked.

"It take enormous amounts of power to fire a superlaser and a Super Star Destroyer alone doesn't have the capability to fire multiple shots in less then a minute." Riggs agreed.

"If it was something like the Eclipse then it be a different story." Jacen finished.

"Which brings me to the next part we found in the data, alone yes even a Super Star Destroyer equipped with a superlaser it take several minutes for it to fire, and several more to charge up. Indeed it would destroy ships whole and leave a good crater on a planet, even piercing to the core. You remember the seven Star Destoryers Slag had around the Juggernaut in a vertical circle pattern.

"You don't mean." Jacen started.

"Bingo, those seven star destroyers are acting as focus points, each of them has a cannon on it, and each will fire its laser at a attended trajectory, then the Juggernaut fires its own laser and boom you got an instant superlaser. Now according to the data the Juggernaut can fire multiple shots at a time before even stopping to recharge. Just imagine if the Death Star had the ability to do that, the entire Rebel fleet at Endor would of been decimated in a matter of minutes once superlasers were coming at them nonstop." Col explained.

"But where is he getting the massive amounts of power for this?" Riggs asked.

"We're guessing stygium, but we're not positive." Col replied, "And I bring even graver news. We also concluded that somewhere on the Juggernaut, there's a shield generator powerful enough to generate a field wide enough that encompasses the Star Destroyer. Nothing will be able to get close to them if that shield is up." Col continued.

"Superlaser that can fire multiple shots at once and a shield that encompasses all of Slag's fleet." Jacen shook his head at the grim odds.

"And if Slag has a chance to use this out in the open and demonstrate it a couple times, no doubt most systems will surrender and follow under him to be spared." Col finished, "In order to ensure this not happens, we need a strike team to infiltrate the Juggernaut and disable that shield generator. Hopefully an attack can be made on the individual star destroyers can decrease the leathalness of the superlaser, though the danger will not be over until the Juggernaut itself is take out."

"And Slag along with it." Ashlen finished.

"Commander Serra." They all turned and saw a bothan technician run up to them, "We received a distress call from a nearby ship in the vicinity, the Reconciliation. We can only conclude its Rizlem Slag's work.

"Find Jeckt, I want all crew to their fighters!"

"Right away sir." The bothan turned and ran to find Jeckt Landsir, a pilot from Chandrila and the flight leader for Renegade Squadron's starfighter division. Col Serra turned to Jacen, Riggs, and Ashlen and nodded at them before heading off towards the bridge. They then turned and nodded as they ran to jump into their flightsuits before heading towards the hangar and getting into their X-Wings.

"Ready for some action R3?" Jacen asked the astromech droid as he prepped his fighter and started to lift along with rest of the X-Wings as they left the Renegade and flew towards the distress signal while the Renegade itself made haste the signal.
It didn't take long as the X-Wings came upon a MC80 star cruiser under attack from an Imperial and an Interdictor Star Destroyer, both had Slag's insigina on them. The Imperial Star Destroyer was attacking the Reconciliation on its starboard side while the Interdictor was doing the same on the other side.

"Set S-Foils into attack positon." Jeckt's voice came on the comm, they saw as the two enemy ships released TIE Defenders, "Take your targets and go!" he ordered. X-Wings and TIE Defenders clashed with each other, Ashlen noticed it was much easier fighting these Defenders then the ones that attacked them at Geonosis.

"They probably haven't had as much battle experience as those ones." Riggs said over the comm confirming her thoughts. Jacen agreed in his head as he released a quad shot on destroyed a TIE he had been pursuing. For every single TIE they took down it seemed like three more took their place, and Jacen had his doubts that the two Star Destroyers attacking the star cruiser were providing all the TIEs by themselves.

"I'm hit!" Renegade 4's voice screamed as his X-Wing went spiraling down and impacted onto the side of the star cruiser as two TIE Defenders shot it down.

"We got more trouble." Ashlen said in the comm.

"What is it?" Jeckt asked.

"I'm scanning TIE Interdictors coming from the Interdictor Star Destroyer. TIE Interdictors were similar in appearence to TIE Bombers except for the single ordnance bay the Bomber had on it, the TIE Interdictor has four of them on it meaning it could carry four times the armament of a TIE Bomber and drop twice the payload of it as well. Jacen noticed as the Interdictors started dropping proton bombs onto the Reconcilation.

"This doesn't look good." Jacen muttered.

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(In Hyperspace, Approaching Imdaar)

"What if Jacen's there?" the worried voice of Leia came.

"Don't worry princess I'm sure he's fine." Han said as pulled the Falcon out of lightspeed. They soon came upon the sight ahead of them as X-Wings and TIEs were battling it out. The X-Wings were gaining more kills, but the pilots were tiring from the near endless waves of TIEs coming at them.

"This looks bad." Luke said while Lando Calrissian nodded his head. The Galactic Alliance had received a distress call from a Mon Calamari cruiser known as the Reconciliation. Chief Of State Cal Omas appointed Leia to head first into the matter along with her husband Han Solo and twin brother Luke Skywalker, Han's old buddy Lando was visiting at the time and agreed to tag along and help.

"Lando take control of the ship while I charge up the guns, me and the kid are going to take some bucketheads down." Han said while Luke rolled his eyes as he was still referred to as 'kid' even in his age nowadays by Han. Han gout out of the pilot's seat and headed towards the quad guns and Luke followed him. Leia then felt a Force presence enter area and she instantly it was her daughter Jaina and Jaina's Twin Suns Squadron. In added effort, two Nebulon-B Frigates also emeged from hyperspace. Slag's forces must of noticed them since TIEs now came towards the Falcon, Twin Suns, and the two frigates.

"Accelerate to attack speed, draw their fire away from the frigates." Jaina said over the comm.

"Copy lead." She heard Jagged Fel's voice. As the Twin Suns X-Wings and Chiss Clawcraft zoomed into the battle as well.

"Just like old times eh kid?" Han asked as he vaped two TIE Defenders.

"You could say that." Luke replied as he let the Force guide his hands and fired and fried a TIE Interdictor that had fired upon one of the frigates. He felt through the Force that both his nephew and niece were out their fighting in X-Wings and how he wished he could join them. He knew he had his first and foremost duty to the Jedi as first priority, but there was nothing against the law on missing the chance and excitment of being in a dogfight. He had to chuckle as he still had his farmboy enthusiasm for excitment still within him. The battle esculated as Renegade and Twin Suns pilots teamed up and started to take out TIEs as if they were tiny bugs hit by bug spray.

"Kyp you got two of them on you." Jaina said as she watched Kyp's X-Wing being fired upon by two pursuing TIE Defenders.

"No problem Goddess I got them where I want them." Kyp sent his X-Wing into a spiraling maneuver, the two inexperience TIE pilots unfamilar with this maneuver got confused trying to emulate it and crashed into each other.

"Seems rather sloppy for you Durron." Jag's voice said on the comm.

"Who asked you Fel!" Kyp returned through gritted teeth.

"Cut the chatter, both of you!" Jaina commanded, she felt her own X-Wing being fired upon and cursed herself for not noticing that two TIE Defenders had creeped up behind her, "He's got a lock on me." She cursed as green lasers flew past her.

"Bit busy at the moment." Kyp's voice came as he himself was being chased by a trio of Tie Defenders.

"I've got them." Jag said as his Clawcraft came up behind the Defenders and fired, destroying the first one, but as he was about to shoot the second one, a blast from TIE Defender had knocked him off the trail of pursuing the other Defender chasing Jaina.

"Blast it all!" Jaina cursed as the TIEs shot had impacted on her again.

"Dive down!" She heard a familar voice.

"Jacen." She said.

"Do it!" he shouted. Jaina immediately did as she was told as the TIE chasing didn't have time to react as Jacen flew towards the TIE straight on and fired at the last possible second, vaping the TIE.

"Thanks Jace." She said to which she got a nod through their bond. The Millenium Falcon was successful in keeping TIEs off its back thanks to Lando's piloting skills plus Han and Luke manning the quad guns.

"Oh dear." Leia said as she stood up from her seat.

"What is it?" Lando asked, but soon saw what she saw. The Reconcilation already taking heavy damage from the two enemy star destroyers and TIE Interdictors was looking like it was about to fall apart. Out of his viewing spot Han saw shuttles leaving the Renegade and fly towards the Reconciliation in hopes of evacuating any survivors of the attack.

"We should do the same." Leia said then turned to Lando, "Send a message to the frigates, tell them to sent transports to the cruiser to help evacuate." Lando nodded as he sent the Falcon towards the ailing star cruiser.

"They just never stop coming." Ashlen said as she chased two TIE Defenders and vaped the two of them.

"Its like more of them are coming from a hidden source." Riggs said as he fired a proton torpedo at a TIE Interdictor. Time seemed like it stop as the TIE Defenders and Interdictors stopped their attack and retreated in one direction.

"Did we win?" Kyp asked.

"I don't think so." Jaina replied. They saw the Imperial Star Destroyer that attacked the Reconcilation head in the same direction while the Interdictor turned and jumped into lightspeed. Jacen's eyes widened as he saw six Star Destroyers and a Super Star Destroyer form out of nothingness, the seventh Star Destoryer soon joined them in formation as a vertical circle around the Juggernaut.

"The Juggernaut and the other Star Destroyers must of had cloaking devices." Col Serra surmised as he watched the scene from the bridge of the Renegade, "Jeckt, get your squadron out of there!"

"You heard the man, all fighters fall back!" Jeckt said to his squadron.

"Same to Twin Suns, fall back!" Jaina said to her's.

"I have a bad feeling about this." Luke said as he passed evacuaed survivors and returned to the cockpit of the Falcon with Han. His feeling was confirmed as multiple arcs of green light travel down the trench area of the Juggernaut while a single green light went straight down the middle of the individual Star Destroyers. Seven green beams emanated from the front of each of the Star Destroyers and came together, a single green beam came from the front of the Juggernaut and hit the center of the connected beams. A green laser shot forward and plowed through the Reconciliation, destroying it immeidately along with any shuttles and escape transports that hadn't made it out in time. But it didn't stop as a second laser shot forward and went straight through one of the Nebulon-B Frigates destroying it. A third laser shot forth and shot straight down towards the planet Imdaar. The planet exploded into subatomic particles as it was vaporized into space debris and floating rocks.

"Oh no." Tears came to Leia's eyes as memories of her home planet of Alderaan destroyed by the first Death Star came back into her mind. Lando watched in shock as he remembered back to Endor when the second Death Star became fully operational and fired upon the Rebel fleet. The Juggernaut and seven Star Destroyers then turned and jumped into hyperspace leaving the scene of chaos within its wake...

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So how do you like this part huh? Well tell me what you think.

 

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jacensolofangirl2007 
Registered: Nov '07
42777_Danni Quee
Date Posted: 4/28/08 10:51pm Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-28-08
Jealous? Me? whistling LOL

"Well I'm glad you're alright." Jacen held his hand to shake her's which she took it. Ashlen then pulled Jacen into a hug, it took Jacen by shock at first but then returned it

see Jacen doesn't like this pairing either.... not_talking

okay all joking aside, this was a great chapter. I like this thing with the superlasers, I look forward to all the trouble they bring. mischief hopefully Jacen takes them out very soon though, we don't need a lot more planets destroyed. but I look forward to that as well.



 

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JEDI_MARAUDER 
Registered: Nov '07
17779_Kyle Katarn
Date Posted: 4/28/08 11:48pm Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-28-08
That is an insane superlaser! I don't know how it is going to be possible to infiltrate the Juggernaut but the Renegades will think of something. Should be interesting to see what Slag does with his new toy. Surely he will be up to no good. Cool post, it's nice seeing the Solo Skywalker clan together vaping TIEs.

 

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jadesabre75 
Registered: Nov '07
40329_Jedi
Date Posted: 4/29/08 6:16am Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-28-08
Very interesting idea with the SSD's. I love how Ashlen wouldn't let Jacen get away with a handshake. You go girl!

Great job! Loved the action!

 

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smash128 
Registered: Feb '08
Date Posted: 4/30/08 7:09pm Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-28-08
jadesabre75-Haha yeah Ashlen would do that, thanks for reading and liking the action.
JEDI_MARUADER-It is an insanse superlaser, yep Slag still got some things up his sleeve. And thats what I was going for with the Solo Skywalker thing, thanks for reading.
jacensolofangirl2007-You can't vouch for Jacen, only Jacen himself can vouch for himself...Ashlen can vouch for him as well tongue , I'm glad you're liking the thing with the superlaser. Thanks for reading.

Part 12
(In the lounge area on the Renegade)

No one dared speak to each other as the area was silent, Jacen lifted his eyes to meet a couple others; his parents, his uncle's, Ashlen's, Jaina's. Then he returned his gaze to the ground, moments before Renegade Squadron had received a distress call from a Mon Calamari star cruiser, the Reconciliation. It had come under attack from Rizlem Slag's pirate forces and they were in desperate need of help. Renegade Squadron rushed to help the ship in need, but found themselves facing a never endless onslaught from waves of TIE Defenders and TIE Interdictors. Jacen's family along with Twin Suns Squadron had arrived to also aid the Reconciliation and it seemed like the battle was turning in their favor when Slag's forces made it seem like they were retreating. However all good things come to an early end as Slag revealed his fleet of seven Imperial class Star Destroyers and one Super Star Destroyer, the Juggernaut. What made these star destroyers so unique and dangerous is that each was equipped with a component and when these components combined they could create a superlaser that could fire multiple times in less then a minute and destroy a planet, the planet of which was Imdaar. Imdaar was a swamp world controlled by the Empire during the days of the Rebellion. It had resources on its planet surfce which would then be transfered to a facility on its moon, the Imdaar Alpha. The Imdaar Alpha was a production facility where they manufactured TIE Phantoms, TIE fighters with cloaking abilities that were modified off V38 assault fighters. However the phantom TIEs were destroyed before they could be put in full use by the Empire. Jacen noticed as Col Serra entered the area.

"I debriefed each of the survivors, they said that the pirates originally demanded all the valuables and such, you know the things pirates usually do. But then they started to attack all of a sudden, the crew started to counter back before Slag's forces disabled or destroyed all armament on the Reconciliation, thats when they sent the distress call." Col Serra explained.

"This Slag fellow seems like something fierce." Han said.

"He's also Force sensitive." Jacen replied which got the attention of his uncle, mother, and sister.

"Did you say he's Force sensitive?" Luke asked.

"Yeah, it was rumored that he was, but I didn't really see it until I dueled him on Tatooine." Jacen explained. Luke pondered on what Jacen said as he scratched his chin.

"Why were you on Tatooine?" His mother asked him.

"Renegade business." Jacen said and nothing else came after that, his mother looked saddened a little bit that he didn't elaborate on it anymore, but nodded. Jaina just glared, she definitely did not like the attitude that Jacen had formed recently back when it was first revealed that her twin brother joined Renegade Squadron and it only seemed to be materialize, especially around his family. The fact of the matter, and one that annoyed Jaina to no end was that Jacen seemed content as he always been whenever their father had talked to him or ask him something about life as a Renegade. She scowled as she watch Jacen laugh at her father's random questions. Somedays she just wish the old Jacen would just remerge, and this new one would go back to the depths from wherever it came from and never return. She started to wonder when the old Jacen started to die, was it when he was taken captive by the Vong or possibly before that.

"Well I guess we'll take the survivors to their given worlds." Leia stood up and said to Col Serra.

"That would be fine Princess Leia, take your time transporting the passengers to your frigate." Col nodded at her and walked off. Riggs got up and nodded towards Ashlen, she got up and walked towards Jacen giving him a kiss on the cheek before catching up with Riggs. Jacen watched her walk away, his eyes stuck on certain...parts oh her body before a cough from his father distracted his attention.

"Nice girlfriend." Han said and patted Jacen on the back.

"What's her name?" Leia asked.

"Ashlen, Ashlen Tecklas." Jacen replied back.

"She's definitely one to keep." Lando laughed which Leia glared at him.

"Where's she from?" Jaina asked.

"She was born in Corellia, but raised on Coruscant and she left before the Vong terraformed it." Jacen explained.

"So thats where she got her nature from." Han scratched his chin,"Well all the good women do come from Corellia." he laughed, but saw Leia's glare and he stopped.

"Look Jacen, I know we haven't been really supportive of you lately of whats been going on." Leia started.

"That would be an accurate assesment." He somewhat coldly replied to her. Jaina shook her head, she definitely felt the coldness radiating from Jacen, how could her mother not.

"And I may not be happy with you doing this, but as your father told me it might be the best for you." Leia continued.

"Well I'm glad you started to see it that way." Jacen said.

"And I know I can't protect you from the dangers of the galaxy, but that doesn't stop me from being your mother." She finished. Jacen got and walked towards his mother and hugged her, "Thanks." he said to her and she nodded her head as tears formed in her eyes.

"I already put in my five credits." Han held up his hands which made Jacen laugh.

"Well I thinks its time for us to go now." Luke said. He went and hugged Jacen, Lando shook his hand, Han hugged him and Leia hugged him again, when it came to Jaina she got up and gave Jacen a little shove on the shoulder.

"Take care of yourself." She said softly and turned and walked off.

"Yeah you too." Jacen said as he watched her go and the last remnants of their bond that had opened in the battle closed off again.

Later Jacen and Riggs were in a training room practicing sniping using slugthrower rifles. Jacen had found that he was easily beating Riggs, due to one factor.

"You're cheating." Riggs said as he turned to Jacen with a frustrated look.

"Me?" Jacen gave an innocent look.

"You're using the Force to guide your aim. Thats cheating, be a real man and do it yourself." Riggs said as he made a perfect shot in the center of the target. A second came as Jacen had emulated Riggs' shot, he turned to reprimand Jacen again.

"That time was without the Force." Jacen grinned, then sighed.

"What's wrong?" Riggs asked as he leaned his rifle against a nearby wall.

"My twin sister Jaina, we hardly talk to each other and our bond between us is close to being completely gone." Jacen said.

"Have you tried talking to her about it?" Riggs asked again.

"Yes and no, I haven't told her about why I did this and when ever I get around to telling her something I usually end up saying something mean and hurtful like I am not the same person when it comes to being around my family like I can never be like the old person I used to be around them ever again." Jacen stated as he placed down his rifle.

"Well if it were me, I would try making amends with her. Because if all you and her are going to is argue then it soon could become violent between the two of you, and maybe you or her will end up doing something that could endanger or possibly kill each other. And the sad thing about that is, you won't even realize it until it is too late."

"You make it seem like I'll give into my hate and kill my sister, well thats not going to happen." Jacen picked up his rifle and made another perfect shot.

"I'm just saying to watch yourself and your actions Jacen, because if Ashlen gets drag into this...Jaina might not be the only person you'll hurt." Riggs left the training room and left Jacen standing there alone.
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(Ashlen's quarters)

Ashlen had finished getting out of the refresher and changed into a crimson red robe, she heard knocking on her door and she went and opened it revealing Jacen.

"Hey I just...I..I." Jacen started and stopped, he was looking at Ashlen wearing nothing more then a robe covering herself.

"See something you like?" She smiled mischieviously, "Or is there something you would like to see?" Her smile got bigger when she saw him blush bright red, she then sat on her bed and patted next to her to indicate for him to see next to her, he hesitated, "I promise I don't bite." she said and patted again.

"Not yet anyway." Jacen joked as he stepped forward and sat next to her on her bed.

"So what's on your mind Jacen?" She asked.

"I been thinking." He started.

"Thinking, thats something new for you." She snickered.

"Can I finish?" He asked impatiently and she held her hands up to tell him to continue, "I been thinking, over the course of all thats happened and of what happened back on Tatooine. I've seem to have grown fond of you, to a point of even liking you as in more then just liking."

"Was this before or after I gave you that kiss because Jacen there's a reason I did so?" She asked.

"I know, but its taken me awhile to think upon it and I realize I'm having feelings for you. And I guess you have them for me?" He asked to which she nodded, "And well if we both have feelings for each other and..." Jacen was stuttering for the right answer until he found two fingers pressed on his lips.

"If you want to tell me how you feel, just shut up and kiss me!" She smiled, he smiled back and leaned forward as she did the same. The lips met for a second time, and unlike last time where Jacen freaked out about it, he returned the kiss. Their arms found their way around each other and they down onto the bed. The last thing Jacen saw between the kisses was his shirt being thrown off and a crimson red robe falling to the floor.
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Oh yeah I did the deed devil . This part was a tad shorter, but it was more of a filler part, the next part will have Slag and action back in it. Also the next part, the dark voice returns shock . So tell me what you think?

 

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Date Posted: 4/30/08 7:34pm Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-30-08
Damn! Jaina's got a chip on that shoulder. Great scene between Jacen and his family.

I think my favorite part was:

Ashlen had finished getting out of the refresher and changed into a crimson red robe, she heard knocking on her door and she went and opened it revealing Jacen.

"Hey I just...I..I." Jacen started and stopped, he was looking at Ashlen wearing nothing more then a robe covering herself.

"See something you like?" She smiled mischieviously, "Or is there something you would like to see?" Her smile got bigger when she saw him blush bright red, she then sat on her bed and patted next to her to indicate for him to see next to her, he hesitated, "I promise I don't bite." she said and patted again.

"Not yet anyway." Jacen joked as he stepped forward and sat next to her on her bed.

"So what's on your mind Jacen?" She asked.

What the *$#( do you think?!

Great chapter!

 

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jacensolofangirl2007 
Registered: Nov '07
42777_Danni Quee
Date Posted: 4/30/08 7:55pm Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-30-08
What made these star destroyers so unique and dangerous is that each was equipped with a component and when these components combined they could create a superlaser that could fire multiple times in less then a minute and destroy a planet, the planet of which was Imdaar. Imdaar was a swamp world controlled by the Empire during the days of the Rebellion. It had resources on its planet surfce which would then be transfered to a facility on its moon, the Imdaar Alpha. The Imdaar Alpha was a production facility where they manufactured TIE Phantoms, TIE fighters with cloaking abilities that were modified off V38 assault fighters. However the phantom TIEs were destroyed before they could be put in full use by the Empire

I always get a history lesson on your parts Smash tired laugh learn something new everyday!

"Nice girlfriend." Han said and patted Jacen on the back

not all would agree with this....

"She's definitely one to keep." Lando laughed which Leia glared at him

now why did I see this coming... frustrated

"If you want to tell me how you feel, just shut up and kiss me!" She smiled, he smiled back and leaned forward as she did the same. The lips met for a second time, and unlike last time where Jacen freaked out about it, he returned the kiss. Their arms found their way around each other and they down onto the bed. The last thing Jacen saw between the kisses was his shirt being thrown off and a crimson red robe falling to the floor.

shock oh no you didn't! okay that does it, forget about Ashlen! you are so dead for writing that! frustrated LOL! not_talking lol Jacen don't give in! its a trap! she works for the evil dude! devil

lol laugh laugh I hope you know i'm just kidding....well maybe ..... tongue

great chapter though! I liked the scene between Jacen and his family expect for the part that Jacen starting to be a real jerk frustrated

She started to wonder when the old Jacen started to die, was it when he was taken captive by the Vong or possibly before that.


now where have I heard this before? thinking

lol nice work!




 

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YodaKenobi 
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39865_Darth Revan
Date Posted: 5/1/08 2:46pm Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-30-08
Sorry I'm late! blush

"Well we figured out the name of his Super Star Destroyer, its called the Juggernaut.

I like it! Great name for an SSD.

"Bingo, those seven star destroyers are acting as focus points, each of them has a cannon on it, and each will fire its laser at a attended trajectory, then the Juggernaut fires its own laser and boom you got an instant superlaser. Now according to the data the Juggernaut can fire multiple shots at a time before even stopping to recharge. Just imagine if the Death Star had the ability to do that, the entire Rebel fleet at Endor would of been decimated in a matter of minutes once superlasers were coming at them nonstop." Col explained.

Wha!? shock Crazy.

"Superlaser that can fire multiple shots at once and a shield that encompasses all of Slag's fleet." Jacen shook his head at the grim odds.

This is gonna be tough...

"I'm scanning TIE Interdictors coming from the Interdictor Star Destroyer. TIE Interdictors were similar in appearence to TIE Bombers except for the single ordnance bay the Bomber had on it, the TIE Interdictor has four of them on it meaning it could carry four times the armament of a TIE Bomber and drop twice the payload of it as well. Jacen noticed as the Interdictors started dropping proton bombs onto the Reconcilation.
"This doesn't look good." Jacen muttered.

I have to agree with Jacen here tongue I do like Serra's idea about having a strike team board the Juggernaut though to take out the shielding.

"Lando take control of the ship while I charge up the guns, me and the kid are going to take some bucketheads down." Han said while Luke rolled his eyes as he was still referred to as 'kid' even in his age nowadays by Han.

Here, perfect grin

"No problem Goddess I got them where I want them." Kyp sent his X-Wing into a spiraling maneuver, the two inexperience TIE pilots unfamilar with this maneuver got confused trying to emulate it and crashed into each other.

Pure awesome cool

"I don't think so." Jaina replied. They saw the Imperial Star Destroyer that attacked the Reconcilation head in the same direction while the Interdictor turned and jumped into lightspeed. Jacen's eyes widened as he saw six Star Destroyers and a Super Star Destroyer form out of nothingness, the seventh Star Destoryer soon joined them in formation as a vertical circle around the Juggernaut.

shock shock shock

"I have a bad feeling about this." Luke said

grin

His feeling was confirmed as multiple arcs of green light travel down the trench area of the Juggernaut while a single green light went straight down the middle of the individual Star Destroyers. Seven green beams emanated from the front of each of the Star Destroyers and came together, a single green beam came from the front of the Juggernaut and hit the center of the connected beams. A green laser shot forward and plowed through the Reconciliation, destroying it immeidately along with any shuttles and escape transports that hadn't made it out in time.

I don't know how they're going to stop something like this!

A third laser shot forth and shot straight down towards the planet Imdaar. The planet exploded into subatomic particles as it was vaporized into space debris and floating rocks.

... shock

It's worse than I even thought sad

Great post, smash applause I loved all the action, the space battle was great grin I really like the idea for Slag's "superweapon" too. That's horrifying!

 

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YodaKenobi 
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39865_Darth Revan
Date Posted: 5/1/08 2:57pm Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-30-08
Okay, new post now:

The fact of the matter, and one that annoyed Jaina to no end was that Jacen seemed content as he always been whenever their father had talked to him or ask him something about life as a Renegade. She scowled as she watch Jacen laugh at her father's random questions. Somedays she just wish the old Jacen would just remerge, and this new one would go back to the depths from wherever it came from and never return.

This goes double in canon at the moment, I imagine tongue

Riggs got up and nodded towards Ashlen, she got up and walked towards Jacen giving him a kiss on the cheek before catching up with Riggs. Jacen watched her walk away, his eyes stuck on certain...parts oh her body before a cough from his father distracted his attention.

whistling

"So thats where she got her nature from." Han scratched his chin,"Well all the good women do come from Corellia." he laughed, but saw Leia's glare and he stopped.

laugh

Because if all you and her are going to is argue then it soon could become violent between the two of you

raised_brow

Foreshadowing?

"You make it seem like I'll give into my hate and kill my sister, well thats not going to happen." Jacen picked up his rifle and made another perfect shot.

doh!

This conversation has taken a very dark turn...

"If you want to tell me how you feel, just shut up and kiss me!" She smiled, he smiled back and leaned forward as she did the same. The lips met for a second time, and unlike last time where Jacen freaked out about it, he returned the kiss. Their arms found their way around each other and they down onto the bed. The last thing Jacen saw between the kisses was his shirt being thrown off and a crimson red robe falling to the floor.

About time Jacen closed the deal tongue

Good post, smash, though I'm more worried about all this ominous stuff about Jacen and Jaina fighting. I'm sort of wondering if you're setting up a conflict between them in which Ashlen gets killed... thinking

Great work, I'm looking forward to more happy

 

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smash128 
Registered: Feb '08
Date Posted: 5/4/08 12:06am Subject: RE: Emergence-A Jacen Solo Story (Post-NJO AU) Updated 4-30-08 - Date Edited: 5/4/08 12:08am (1 edits total) Edited By: smash128
YodaKenobi-Yes sir Jacen sure did seal the deal. tongue At least you're more supportive of that then some other people not_talking who read this, jk. OH yeah the tensions between Jacen and Jaina is going to boil down to a confrontation, I have it planned in my head, just don't when and where to put it. Thanks for reading.
jacensolofangirl2007-You don't like my history lessons worried ? I'm I am going to cry . Naw, jk yeah how can you ever accuse Ashlen of that, she's sweet, she's innocent, and she's sitting next to me as I'm typing this. LOl, thanks for reading.
jadesabre75-Yeah the thing between Jacen and Jaina is going to be a confrontation, don't know if it will be an emotional one, well probably for them, thanks for reading.

Part 13

"What a dream." Jacen woke up from a deep slumber and look around the room as he sat up in bed. All his clothes were there on the floor, plus a crimson red robe. "Wait a minute, I don't have one of those." Jacen said as he stared at it, when a noise from behind him made him turn around. He saw Ashlen still asleep under the covers, "Oh sweet force it wasn't a dream." he gasped as he jumped out of the bed and hastily put his clothes back on.

"Hello." Jacen stopped in the process of putting his boots on when he turned around and saw Ashlen wide awake and staring at him with a smile.

"Sleep well?" He asked back with a smile, to which she nodded.

"Yes can you hand me that." She pointed towards her robe, he reached out with the force and tossed it to her.

"I'm going to go find Riggs." Jacen said as he got up and left the quarters. He found him in the mess hall, Riggs was busy reading a datapad while enjoying a pastry and cup of caf, "Hey." Jacen said sitting down after he gotten himself a pastry and glass of blue milk.

"You look like you had a rough night." Riggs said as he looked at Jacen's frizzled hair. Jacen blushed as he reached with his hand and tried to smooth his hair out while Riggs snickered. They noticed Ashlen join them minutes later holding her own pastry and blue milk. They chatted and joked for awhile before Col Serra walked up to them.

"I don't pay you to sit around and schmooze." He said.

"You don't pay us at all." Ashlen replied back to which Col Serra smiled.

"True, but..." he started.

"Thats not why you're here." Jacen finished which Col nodded.

"We discovered more information off that disk, and it seems to be the perfect opportunity as well. As we know the Juggernaut is heavily defended by surrounding Star Destroyers and also has a shield generator on it to protect itself and the surrounding star destroyers. Well another thing we found out that is the Juggernaut always returns to Felucia every other week for a supply pickup from an enclave and then head to a refueling station before going off again. The opportunity is that if you manage to make it onto Felucia and find a way to sneak yourselves into one of the supply shuttles that goes to and from Felucia then you can easily get aboard the Juggernaut."

"When do we leave sir?" Ashlen asked.

"Immediately, due to the importance of not being spotted on your approach to Felucia the TIE Hunters have been prepped. It will make it seem less obvious of what we're trying to do then. Go get prepped and ready to go." All three of them nodded.
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(Enroute To Felucia)

"I'll never get comfortable flying these things." Riggs complained in his comm as the three TIE Hunters made their way towards Felucia.

"I'll never get comfortable flying in general." Jacen added in.

"Cut the chatter, we're almost onto the planet and as soon as we land you'll be fine." Ashlen said through an irritated voice. The TIEs made their desecent into Felucia's atmosphere as they saw the vast different kinds of flora through their TIEs' cockpits. Ashlen brought her TIE in for a landing or close to it since she had equipped the TIE Hunters with antigrav repulsors so they never would really touch the ground similar to a landspeeder as Jacen and Riggs did the same.

The humudity started to come onto the three as they made their trek through the Felucian jungle, their bodies were sweating and some parts of their jumpsuits were becoming soaked with their sweat.

"I wonder if we'll run into an acklay." Riggs said.

"A what?"