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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 6/27 4:23pm Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated June 28th
	Ceillean posted: ********** “You wrecked my ship!” Nikk’s voice was a mere squeak as the three of them stood in front of the charred Lucinda. Liz raised her brows in question and gave the taller man a quizzical look. Her gaze moved along his lean body and rested on his midsection. “What the hell are you looking at?” he barked. Liz shrugged, “I’m wondering if someone chopped off your testicles. You sound like an eunuch.” PMSL! I love these two! Awesome update. Not surprised Luce bit the big one. Knew it was gonna happen. Hope Liz and Kyp are gonna be ok... -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! 9-19-08 - Best Bloody Day of the Year! Savvy? - http://www.limestrong.com/ Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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Robimus Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 6/27 10:10pm Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated June 28th
	[quote=Ceillean] Liz raised her brows in question and gave the taller man a quizzical look. Her gaze moved along his lean body and rested on his midsection. “What the hell are you looking at?” he barked. Liz shrugged, “I’m wondering if someone chopped off your testicles. You sound like an eunuch.” Well, Liz is really hot. The above confirms it Talk about putting Nikk in his place, . And Luce is dead? Hmmnnn, I wonder Great update! -----signature----- I am forever seeking the damutek of Hooley Krekk Oh, woe! Oh, misery! Oh, unhappiness. Hooley Krekk where are you?
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angry_bendu1 Registered: Apr '07	Date Posted: 6/28 5:49am Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated June 28th
	It was actually quite cruel, he thought, being locked up in a white cubicle while being able to take longing stares at the outside. Kyrian can't exactly say much about cruelty. Didn't he kidnap and inject his sister with some kind of Force-drug? I rest my case. And poor Luce. She seemed like she was truly sorry and her actions were beyond her control. I do feel kind of bad for her. Well, just a little... Excellent update! -----signature----- Ramblings of a Jedi (snarky Jesika's diary- filled w/ romance, sarcasm, etc.): http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28753761/p1/?0 I was staring at the orange juice because it said "concentrate". Proud owner of a '96 Geo Metro. "To the Crapmobile!"
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 6/28 6:20am Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated June 28th
	Interesting! Looking forward to more. -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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Ceillean Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 6/30 2:02am Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated June 28th
	ccp posted: Interesting! Looking forward to more. Thanks! More coming soon. angry_bendu1 posted: It was actually quite cruel, he thought, being locked up in a white cubicle while being able to take longing stares at the outside. Kyrian can't exactly say much about cruelty. Didn't he kidnap and inject his sister with some kind of Force-drug? I rest my case. Yep but I guess it's human to start wallowing in self pity. shrugs And poor Luce. She seemed like she was truly sorry and her actions were beyond her control. I do feel kind of bad for her. Well, just a little... laughs Excellent update! Thank you! Rob posted: Well, Liz is really hot. The above confirms it Talk about putting Nikk in his place, . And Luce is dead? Hmmnnn, I wonder Yeah, she's forever fallen asleep. Great update! Dankeschön! Sab posted: Awesome update. Not surprised Luce bit the big one. Knew it was gonna happen. Hope Liz and Kyp are gonna be ok... I think it was obivious she'd die. shrugs Poor Luce. Even I feel sorry for her. Kyp and Liz'll be okay. They'll actually be having a few funny moments, too. obi posted: I'll address this in reverse! So the unnamed evil got to Luce! That's pretty sad! What about Kyrian? Is he dead too! Nope. Now, I really don't knkow who the evil is or if Luce told the Jedi and Kalenda enough info before she died. I don't like those creatures on this dusty planet. I keep thinking they are poisonous. Can't wait to see what our heroes have in store for them on this place. Well, Rosa-Belle had a laughing fit when I sent her the beginning of the next part. They'll be having fun. I like Nikk's whining and Liz's comment about him being a eunuch. And I understand if going to Yavin scares her. She had a comfy life. For Kyp it really was the only oppurtunity. I doubt Leia would have tolerated him hanging around their house for much longer than a month. Great work! Thank you! -----signature----- I'm having trouble dealing with the fact that Kyp Durron is a fictional character Stress -- The reaction created when the mind overrides the body's desire to choke the living sh** out of somebody who desperately needs it http://ceillean.blogspot.com/
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Ceillean Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 7/7 11:00am Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated June 28th
	Writer's Block. sniffs I'm having trouble continuing the main story arc. I've rewritten the next post four or five times, erased every word of it and started off new again. And every time it was horrible. So I'm taking MsLanna's advice: try writing something different until the muse returns. And then nail the bit** down so she'll never leave again. Her words, not mine. So this is a sort of small story arc within the large story arc. Does that make sense? I hope it does and hope this update's alright. sighs Thanks for reading! “Hold her down!” Liz stopped in mid stride when she heard a screeching voice coming from somewhere nearby. She gave Kyp a quizzical look when there was another high-pitched, blood curdling scream, “Stop it! You’re killing her!” Liz was astounded at how fast Kyp could run – one second he was standing right beside her, the next second he was off towards the sorrow laced voice. Liz hurried to keep up, cursing under her breath as she grabbed the straps of her backpack with both hands to keep it from bobbing up and down on her back. Her heart leapt into overdrive, pumping blood through her veins at a fast pace as she ran for all she was worth. Kyp and Liz had been walking for almost an hour, taking in the scenery and plainly talking about this and that, wondering if they’d reach the city before nightfall. The planet was beautiful, Liz thought. Besides the rock-like animals, they’d seen beautiful birds soaring through the air, riding the currents elegantly. Blue black feathers decorated their lean bodies, their small eyes a piercing white blue and their rounded beaks a powerful blood red. And they had sung the most beautiful song Liz had ever heard from an animal. The melody still echoed around them and she caught herself humming along. As magnificent as these creatures were, there was no doubt in Liz’s mind that they were equally as dangerous. Again she heard a shout and willed her legs to move faster. She glared at Kyp’s receding back and shot a command through their bond for him to slow down. To her surprise he stopped and she jogged the rest of the way to meet up with him, “I’m not a Jedi, Kyp. I can’t keep up.” She said in between gasping breaths, bending over to brace her palms against her knees. He nodded once, “Sorry. I feel someone’s badly injured.” Liz took a deep breath, hoping to calm her rapid heartbeat as she straightened into a standing position, “So we should hurry.” She said thinking it came out as more of a wheeze than words. “You’re killing her!” The voice chilled Liz to the bone, a voice full of obvious boiling anger and hatred, “Leave her alone!” Kyp was off again, veering towards tall green trees where Liz had last seen the birds perched atop dark branches. She hurried after the Jedi, thankful for the shade the trees were giving off. The golden son above them was hot on her bare arms and face, the skin already tingling as if hundreds of tiny needles were pricking at her. Jumping over fallen logs and huge silver rocks, Liz tried her best not to stumble and break her bones. She almost bounded into Kyp’s back as he came to a sudden and very quiet halt. She circled him with a tiny scowl, gazing up to his worried face as he seemed to be scanning the vicinity with the Force. “Are we –“ He held up a hand and shushed her, which Liz found to be very irritating but she kept her peace, believing to almost feel his prodding of the Force, carefully reaching out with invisible eyes and hands probing the area. Frowning he beckoned for Liz to follow him in a leisurely pace. She could see a clearing up ahead and before she knew it she could make out the sound of someone crying. “Please. Let her go. Can’t you see you’re hurting her?” Liz realized it was a woman speaking, her voice quivering in between sobs. Kyp crouched down when they reached the outskirts of the clearing, hiding behind the large trees and peering around. Liz went down on her knees next to him, holding on to his shoulder to steady herself. There wasn’t much she could see when she tried taking a look over Kyp’s tousled head. But the low, cold voices and soft cries were enough to make a shiver run down her spine. ******** Kyp narrowed his eyes as he watched the scene playing out only a few meters before them. A little human girl lay sprawled on the grassy ground, her small hands pressing down on her stomach as if she were in pain. Her mother, Kyp guessed, was being held by a tall, broad shouldered humanoid who didn’t quite fit into the category of being human. Long silver hair was bound in a braid down his back, his forehead showing dark red markings Kyp couldn’t make sense of. His eyes were a deep violet, slanted upwards, giving him an almost elegant look. But his mouth was turned up into an ugly sneer, showing sharp, pointed teeth that washed the elegance away. “Please. You’re hurting her.” The mother wailed, struggling to get free of the humanoids hold. “We’re trying to help her, you foolish woman!” Kyp turned his head to the new voice, seeing another of the humanoids moving to crouch down beside the girl. The same silver hair surrounded his head but his eyes were a deep sea green, the expression on his face a gentle one. He placed a large hand onto the girls belly, closing his eyes as he whispered words Kyp couldn’t understand. But he felt a stirring in the Force as the man drew it around himself and the girl, blanketing her and focusing the Force on her hurting stomach. “You’re hurting her!” The woman screeched, kicking forward as she tried to free herself. “Can’t you do something?” Liz whispered near his ear. He shook his head, “We won’t interfere. He’s trying to heal the girl.” “Then how come she’s going crazy about it?” She asked, inclining her head towards the shrieking human woman. Kyp blew out a breath and rubbed his fingers across his brow, “I feel animosity coming from her. She doesn’t trust the healer. She’s angry at him.” The little girl on the ground suddenly arched her back, a scream ripping from her throat, echoing throughout the clearing and most likely even beyond. Her mother’s shouts and curses became one with the girls’ bone-wrenching wails. Kyp felt Liz stir behind him, “I can’t listen to this, Kyp.” He knew what she meant. He felt sick to the pit of his stomach listening to the little girls’ anguished screams. She was definitely in pain, he could feel it through the Force but he also felt that the humanoid male was trying his best to help her. The healing signature was all around him. With a sudden abruptness the girl grew quiet, her eyes closed as if she’d fallen into a peaceful slumber. Her mother wriggled and kicked, cursing the silver haired beings – demanding retribution for her daughter’s death. But Kyp felt the little girl was still alive. “Take them back to the village.” The healer said, waving his hand. Two guards, dressed in black armor appeared from behind the healer – one picked the girl up, cradling her in his strong arms whereas the other guard helped drag the wailing mother from the scene. “What happened?” Liz asked, clutching at Kyp’s shoulder, “Will she be alright?” “I don’t know, Liz.” “Well, what now? I mean, should we stay here or maybe –“ “I will not harm you.” The sudden deep voice of the healer startled both of them and it took a moment for Kyp to realize the healer was addressing them. Slowly Kyp straightened up, feeling Liz’s sudden anxiety around them. He turned his head towards her, “It’s alright, Liz. I believe he’s telling the truth.” He whispered only for her to hear. Almost obediently she followed Kyp into the clearing, never letting go of his arm. “Who are you?” the healer asked in a low, yet kind voice. His hands were clasped behind his back as he stood firm, cocking his to the side as he surveyed the newcomers. There was a glint in the green eyes that Kyp thought could be amusement. “We’re travelers.” Kyp answered thinking it best not to give away too much information. Nikk was still working safely on the ship – depending on what happened while Kyp and Liz were among these beings, Nikk was only a com link away. “But you are not from these regions.” A welcoming smile spread across the healer’s face and Kyp felt curiosity leaking from him. “No.” “But you are of the First Ones.” His voice grew solemn as he spoke, a wistful undertone beneath his simple words, “I feel you can delve into the Force.” Kyp nodded, “Yes. So can you. I felt you heal that little girl.” The healer heaved a sad and long sigh, shifting his gaze to the blue sky above. He closed his eyes and took a deep breath, holding it and then letting it out with a smile. “Would you join me in our haven? The sun will soon reach its highest point and your skin will burn.” Kyp probed the being with the Force, searching for the tiniest trail of a lie but all he felt was the same curiosity at meeting new humans. It would be interesting to learn more about these people but he found it unwise to venture into their territory. “We will not harm you. We are a peaceful people.” And Kyp believed him. He felt Liz’s grip tighten on his shoulder and he smiled as he turned towards her, “He’s telling us the truth, Liz.” “As far as he believes it.” From the corner of his eye Kyp saw the healer stiffen at Liz’s remark, “If he’s right about the sun, we’ll be in trouble.” And Liz knew he was right. Her skin was already itching and burning where the sun touched her. Reluctantly she nodded at the Jedi and sighed, “Fine. Let’s go then.” She turned her dark brown eyes to the male humanoid, her curiosity spiking at who these people were. The healer’s look didn’t differ too much from humans – the strange yet mesmerizing eyes and the pointy teeth were the only things that gave him the appearance of perhaps being alien. “It’s not far.” The healer said as he beckoned them to follow, “A few minutes’ walk is all. We don’t receive visitors very often.” “What happened to the little girl?” Kyp asked as he kept the pace with the healer. He had too many questions – he decided to clear up the situation that still had him feeling ill. “There is a sickness spreading through the village.” The healer said, his voice laced with worry and fear, “The healers of my people do their best to help but the others are wary of us.” “You do not live among the villagers?” Liz asked slowly, a frown creasing her forehead. The healer turned towards her, green eyes alight and his smile a warming one. “A very long time ago we did. Our history is a complicated one.” He chuckled then and Liz raised a dark brow, “You believe us to be different, do you not?” the healer asked. “Different how?” “Most likely you think us to be aliens from this world. But the fact is that we – humans and my people – share the same genes.” At Liz’s bewildered look his smile turned into a grin. Sharp, pointy teeth glittered in the sunlight, “I will gladly explain once we’ve reached the haven.” “Why are you so nice to us?” Liz blurted out, ignoring Kyp’s dark glare. “As I’ve said, we hardly receive visitors. It would be a nice change to speak to others who do not fear us.” “How do you know we’re not afraid of you?” The healer stopped in stride and gave a peculiar look, “I feel it within the Force. There is curiosity coming from you but not fear.” He walked on, quickening his pace suddenly and beckoning for them to hurry, “We are almost there.” And so Kyp and Liz followed. ******** The haven, as the healer had described his home, was more of a compound of underground winding tunnels. Liz gazed up to the ceiling as they walked, wondering how the tunnels were lit. There was a complete encasing light blue glow but she couldn’t see any obvious source. The walls reminded her of chopped ice but when she slid her fingers along the croppy rocks she was surprised at the warmth. “Why do you live underground?” Liz asked as she hurried to keep up with Kyp and the healer. Kyp gave her a curious look and she smiled at him, hoping to seem reassuring. She hoped the Jedi Knight was correct in his assessment that they had nothing to fear from this man. Plainly put she didn’t trust him. “We had built our dwellings near the village years ago. As things went, our peoples fought and we decided to retreat. The sun burns our skin as well but not to such an extent as to human flesh. These tunnels were here long before our kind and we used them to our advantage. The darkness protects us from the sun.” “But that’s not the only reason, is it?” Liz asked absent mindedly, trailing her fingers along the bluish rocks of the walls. It took her a moment to realize that the healer hadn’t answered her question. The tunnel ended in a large cavern – so large Liz thought they’d stepped back outside. The ceiling, if it was the ceiling, was a startling blue mimicking the sky. There were large trees growing within the cavern, standing along the walls as if to hide the starkness of it. Green grass grew along the ground, a light breeze moving through the tiny straws. More openings Liz assumed were tunnels branched off the large cavern, winding in each and every way. It seemed the compound was enormous. “Welcome to our home.” The healer said leading down a short flight of stone stairs. Liz’s boots crunched atop the grass as if it were real. Maybe it is real, she thought to herself but remembered to keep up with the two men instead of constantly distracting herself. She hurried to Kyp’s side, taking hold of his hand as they walked through the garden within the cavern. Beautiful red and blue flowers grew around the trees, tiny insects fluttering about. The healer led them through another tunnel, this one far shorter and leading into a smaller cavern that also seemed to lack a ceiling – whenever Liz looked up it felt like she was outside. “This is our official meeting place.” The healer said as another one of his people came strolling their way. Liz immediately recognized her to be female. Her silver hair almost reached down to her calves, decorated with twinkling pins and beads. Her eyes held the same green as that of the healer and she smiled warmly as she took in Liz and Kyp. “You’ve brought friends?” she asked with a sing song voice. “This is my daughter, Emalia.” The healer said as he held out a hand for the young woman to grasp. Emalia’s smile grew when she neared her father and Liz noted she lacked the spiky teeth. Liz wondered who these people were. The healer kept referring to the villagers as humans – did this mean they themselves were not? She made a mental note to ask about that later. Kyp nodded towards the woman, introducing first Liz and then himself in a soft tone of voice. Emalia reached to grasp Kyp’s hand and her smile turned into a beaming grin. Liz arched a dark brow but held her peace. Maybe Emalia was this nice to all visitors… Except she almost point blank ignored Liz. There was no shaking of hands, just a virtually noncommittal nod. “How long will you be staying?” Emalia asked in her sing song voice. “Not long, I’m afraid.” “Well, at least a day.” The healer piped in, “There will be a feast tonight and you’re very welcome to join us.” Liz clutched at Kyp’s hand, squeezing a bit harder than intended and forcing her smile to stay in place. “I’m not sure that’s such a good idea.” Liz said in a low voice, “We have a friend waiting on us to return in a few hours.” Emalia turned her green eyes to Liz, “Then you must contact your friend. It’s far too dangerous to travel the lands above when the sun is blazing as it is now.” Liz was seething within as she watched Emalia. She didn’t trust the healer and she sure as hell did not trust his daughter. But she couldn’t come up with an excuse fast enough because Kyp had nodded a yes and they were following the healer and Emalia towards another cavern. Liz heard loud barking laughter and the sound of children playing. She scowled up at Kyp as he squeezed her hand, letting him know through their bond that she considered this whole thing to be the stupidest idea. Again he tried reassuring her that these people meant well – there was nothing within the Force to tell him they were deceitful. Don’t you ever listen to your gut instead of the Force? She asked him through their link but all she received in return was amusement from him. “Would you excuse us for a moment?” Liz asked softly, pulling Kyp away from Emalia and her father, all the while hoping her smile didn’t seem forced. “You trust these people blindly?” she whispered near his ear letting go of his hand. “Of course I don’t. But as I’ve said I feel no deceit from them. And we don’t really have much of a choice.” He reached out and trailed a finger down her bare arm. Liz winced as a stinging pain shot through her skin and she glanced down at red, blotchy spots. “It’s getting hotter up there. I’m sure we’d make it back to the ship but we’d both be dealing with one hell of a sunburn. So we stay.” Liz sighed, “I don’t trust them.” His hand settled on her shoulder and he smiled, “Neither do I.” “But you said you feel nothing from them.” “I don’t. But that doesn’t mean I have to trust them. As you so delicately put it, I do still work with my gut.” His smile warmed her from within and his thumb gently caressed her cheek. She nodded then, the feeling of something being off settling into the pit of her stomach, “But only tonight. We leave tomorrow morning.” Kyp nodded and leaned forward to kiss her forehead. She reached down towards his belt and retrieved his comlink, “I’ll let Nikk know.” ********** Nikk growled and let the tool drop to the ground with a metallic clank. He took deep, measuring breaths before kneeling down and examining the blinking device embedded into Lucinda’s belly. All scans came up positive that this thing was a bomb but it didn’t make sense to Nikk. Why hadn’t the thing gone off yet? Numerous occasions had already occurred, especially now that he’d landed the ship. Wouldn’t this be the perfect opportunity to blow him to hell and back? His com link chirped and with a sigh he ripped it from his belt, “What?” “How’s it going?” He heard Liz’s voice and rolled his eyes. He wasn’t in the mood for her silly remarks and definitely not in the mood to argue. “Slow. What’s up?” He examined the bomb while talking, poking at it with a finger then trying to dislodge it with force – there was no immediate danger sense when he played around with it and he frowned. “We’ve met some people.” Liz said her voice eerily low. Nikk frowned, “And?” “I don’t like them but we have to stay.” “Why?” “Have you been outside the ship yet?” “Just when the two of you left, yeah. I got four more of those damned trackers. It’s a sure bet whoever planted them knows where we are. So we should get out of here as soon as possible.” There was an audible sigh at the other end, “It’s hot outside, Nikk. Step outside and you’ll notice your skin start to prickle.” “That bad?” “Yes. So we have to stay here at least until sundown. But they’ve invited as to stay for the night – big celebration for whatever reason. You’re welcome to come join us. Please.” Nikk arched a brow at her strange tone of voice, “Are you alright, Liz? You’re so civil with me right now.” “I’m fine. Are you up for celebrating being alive tonight?” “Sorry, Liz. I need to get Lucinda fixed. I don’t know how long I’ll need. So enjoy yourself.” She grunted a sound of annoyance and Nikk found himself smiling. It seemed that wherever she and Kyp had gotten to, wasn’t a place Liz wanted to be. “I’ll try my best.” “If anything comes up on my side, I’ll let you know.” Nikk said before terminating the link. And with a scowl he went back to work. Meh. I need to go find some inspiration to continue this. You know that stupid part is I already have the ending all planned out but to get to this ending is a whole different story. sighs Hope you enjoyed. -----signature----- I'm having trouble dealing with the fact that Kyp Durron is a fictional character Stress -- The reaction created when the mind overrides the body's desire to choke the living sh** out of somebody who desperately needs it http://ceillean.blogspot.com/
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 7/7 11:55am Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated July 7th
	Great update! I think that there is more going on here than I first realized. -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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angry_bendu1 Registered: Apr '07	Date Posted: 7/7 2:55pm Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated July 7th
	Great job! I really like this new turn of events. I wonder if these people are really friendly... -----signature----- Ramblings of a Jedi (snarky Jesika's diary- filled w/ romance, sarcasm, etc.): http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28753761/p1/?0 I was staring at the orange juice because it said "concentrate". Proud owner of a '96 Geo Metro. "To the Crapmobile!"
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/7 3:03pm Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated July 7th
	Well now...that was an interesting twist. Maybe your muse just works in mysterious ways. Maybe I should send mine over to you because she's giving me TOO many ideas right now. Anyway...Loved this chapter. It was nice to see the two of them spending some time together, even if it wasn't necessarily quality. It's Chocolate Day by the way. Maybe you should go have some and see if your muse feels like cooperating again. Great job my dear! -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! 9-19-08 - Best Bloody Day of the Year! Savvy? - http://www.limestrong.com/ Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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iamobiwan1970 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 7/7 6:45pm Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated July 7th
	I love these weird creepy people who can use the Force. I love how they referred to Kyp and Liz as from the old ones. I like when the Force is seen as magical. I don't always get that feeling in profics and let's face it, these guys work magic. And well, I like that. I like this piece. You'll figure out how to integrate. Just let the Force flow through you! -----signature----- Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there, with open arms and open eyes.
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Robimus Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 7/7 10:44pm Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated July 7th
	Writer's Block. sniffs I'm having trouble continuing the main story arc. So thats where I got that from , your contagious I really enjoyed the update, the creepy vampire people are of great interest. Hello, My name is Lestat, I'm a healer and this is my story...... I can't wait to find out more about these mysterious cave dwellers. -----signature----- I am forever seeking the damutek of Hooley Krekk Oh, woe! Oh, misery! Oh, unhappiness. Hooley Krekk where are you?
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Ceillean Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 7/8 12:13am Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated July 7th - Date Edited: 7/8 12:14am (1 edits total) Edited By: Ceillean
	ccp posted: Great update! thank you! I think that there is more going on here than I first realized. Yeah. Now you know how I feel . angry_bendu1 posted: Great job! Thanks. I really like this new turn of events. I wonder if these people are really friendly...My little secret. Sab posted: Well now...that was an interesting twist. Maybe your muse just works in mysterious ways. Who knows? But the muse is annoying me right now. Maybe I should send mine over to you because she's giving me TOO many ideas right now. Yes, please do that! Especially for the J/J story. I'm stuck there too. Anyway...Loved this chapter. Great. It was nice to see the two of them spending some time together, even if it wasn't necessarily quality. More to come. It's Chocolate Day by the way. Maybe you should go have some and see if your muse feels like cooperating again. There's a chocolate day? How cool is that?! Great job my dear! Thank you! obi posted: I love these weird creepy people who can use the Force. I love how they referred to Kyp and Liz as from the old ones. Yay. Because that's one of the parts I loved myself. I like when the Force is seen as magical. I don't always get that feeling in profics and let's face it, these guys work magic. Yep, completely agree. A Jedi would be great in a medieval magic story, I think. And well, I like that. I like this piece. You'll figure out how to integrate. Just let the Force flow through you! letting the Force flow through me I am I'm glad you like this piece. Rob posted: So thats where I got that from , your contagious gasp I hope I'm not! I really enjoyed the update, the creepy vampire people are of great interest. Vampire people? Honestly, I hadn't been thinking about vampires while writing. Which I ususally do because I'm fascinated but not this time. Hello, My name is Lestat, I'm a healer and this is my story...... I don't like Lestat, though. I can't wait to find out more about these mysterious cave dwellers. Soon, I hope. If I get my brain to conjure up the needed words. -----signature----- I'm having trouble dealing with the fact that Kyp Durron is a fictional character Stress -- The reaction created when the mind overrides the body's desire to choke the living sh** out of somebody who desperately needs it http://ceillean.blogspot.com/
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JediKyle23 Registered: Feb '08	Date Posted: 7/8 9:12am Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated July 7th
	Wow. I missed a lot. Great job. I love how in depth you get with all of your stories. Keep up the excellent work. -----signature----- Destiny Rewritten: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28052752/p1/?0 Path to Peace: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28407100&brd=10477&replies=0
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Robimus Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 7/8 9:28pm Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated July 7th - Date Edited: 7/8 9:30pm (3 edits total) Edited By: Robimus
	[quote=Ceillean] [quote=Rob]So thats where I got that from , your contagious gasp I hope I'm not! OK, I think I've got an update almost ready, your off the hook I really enjoyed the update, the creepy vampire people are of great interest. Vampire people? Honestly, I hadn't been thinking about vampires while writing. Which I ususally do because I'm fascinated but not this time. Not Vampires? I was really looking forward to one of the pretty female Vampire's saying "Come closer Kyp, closer, I want to suck your............. ................blood." -----signature----- I am forever seeking the damutek of Hooley Krekk Oh, woe! Oh, misery! Oh, unhappiness. Hooley Krekk where are you?
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Ceillean Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 7/8 10:13pm Subject: RE: An Unlocked Soul -- OC's, Kyp/OC (AU) -- Updated July 7th - Date Edited: 7/8 10:16pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Ceillean
	JediKyle23 posted: Wow. I missed a lot. Great job. I love how in depth you get with all of your stories. Keep up the excellent work. Thank you so much! Glad you like it! Rob posted: I was really looking forward to one of the pretty female Vampire's saying "Come closer Kyp, closer, I want to suck your............. ................blood." You just made me choke on my breakfast. But in a good way. -----signature----- I'm having trouble dealing with the fact that Kyp Durron is a fictional character Stress -- The reaction created when the mind overrides the body's desire to choke the living sh** out of somebody who desperately needs it http://ceillean.blogspot.com/
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