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melino
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6/16 8:09pm
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RE: Burden of the Throne {J/J, post-LotF, drama/action/romance} Chapter 3 - 6/16/08
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OMG! That was so beautiful you had me crying at the end. Nothing i could have imagined would ever even come close to the power and feelings in that post. Fantastic work once again  I have no other words to say other than WOW WOW WOW!
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Jag4Me
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6/16 8:12pm
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RE: Burden of the Throne {J/J, post-LotF, drama/action/romance} Chapter 3 - 6/16/08
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Wow. OK - I really like how when Han finds Jag he decides to switch tactics and put him to work on the
Falcon...much better than tearing him a new backside. No need to kick a dog when he's already down.
It is so typical J/J that it took forever for Jag to finally make it to the medward. I loved Jag running into
Mirta!! The way she sized him up was just great!  Nice touch!! I hope she and Jaina stay
friends, they are good together.
You did such a great job writing Jag's anguish. It was very emotional to read and an interesting take on Jag's mind.
I really enjoyed this chapter - you did a brilliant job.
 Any teasers on what happens next?? Pretty please?? 
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ccp
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6/16 8:18pm
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RE: Burden of the Throne {J/J, post-LotF, drama/action/romance} Chapter 3 - 6/16/08
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Great update! Wow!
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JAGSGURL15
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6/16 8:44pm
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RE: Burden of the Throne {J/J, post-LotF, drama/action/romance} Chapter 3 - 6/16/08
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that post was amazing! the emotion and voice and passion just had me bawling.
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angry_bendu1
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6/17 9:18am
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RE: Burden of the Throne {J/J, post-LotF, drama/action/romance} Chapter 3 - 6/16/08
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 Umm... I can't really articulate more than that right now.
Excellent update!
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Aleria
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6/17 2:07pm
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RE: Burden of the Throne {J/J, post-LotF, drama/action/romance} Chapter 3 Replies - 6/17/08
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jadesabre75 posted:
Wow.  That was so...hell I don't think I have a word to describe it.
The scene between Han and Jag was awesome. Loved how Han finally admit, even to himself, that he really liked Jag because they were so similar.
Jag's walk to see Jaina...felt like it took forever!!! LOL But in a good way. The gamit of emotions he went through was heart wrenching.
And when he finally made it there... Yep. I cried.
That was beautiful Aleria!!!!! Stupendous job!
Three appalausing emoticons?  I'm honoured, thank you very much!
I think it's about time for Han to realise why his daddy-alarms don't go off blaring even though Jag is so important to his daughter.  And I liked writing about Jag's feelings. The way they culminated at the end made me quite emotional. Happy to hear it does it to others, too!
melino posted:
OMG! That was so beautiful you had me crying at the end. Nothing i could have imagined would ever even come close to the power and feelings in that post. Fantastic work once again I have no other words to say other than WOW WOW WOW!
There should really be a bowing emoticon available...  Thank you so much!
Jag4Me posted:
Wow. OK - I really like how when Han finds Jag he decides to switch tactics and put him to work on the
Falcon...much better than tearing him a new backside. No need to kick a dog when he's already down.
It is so typical J/J that it took forever for Jag to finally make it to the medward. I loved Jag running into
Mirta!! The way she sized him up was just great! Nice touch!! I hope she and Jaina stay
friends, they are good together.
You did such a great job writing Jag's anguish. It was very emotional to read and an interesting take on Jag's mind.
I really enjoyed this chapter - you did a brilliant job.
Any teasers on what happens next?? Pretty please??
Well, Han's reasoning is simple: if it works for him, it should work for any Corellian pilot!  About Mirta, I figured she'd have heard at least something about Jag and Zekk from Jaina, and probably even realized which way our Solo was leaning... So she had an obligation to evaluate them! 
I know I've been torturing Jag for the whole beginning of this story, but it's helped in honing my ability of writing angst and seems to be paying off. And of course I'm happy you liked the chapter! Thank you!
Teasers? Well, I'm working on the next part so check in again in a couple of days and I should have some little tidbit for you! 
ccp posted:
Great update! Wow!
Thank you!
JAGSGURL15 posted:
that post was amazing! the emotion and voice and passion just had me bawling.
Thank you very much! Happy to assist in clearing those tearducts.
angry_bendu1 posted:
Umm... I can't really articulate more than that right now.
Excellent update!
I'm sorry for any dryness of the eyes. But I'm really glad you liked it up to the point of speachlessness!
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Jaina_and_Jag
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6/17 7:18pm
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RE: Burden of the Throne {J/J, post-LotF, drama/action/romance} Chapter 3 Replies - 6/17/08
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Beautiful!!! You wrote Jag so well! His emotions were so strong and I feel so bad fr that boy! Come on Jaina, you have to come back to him! He loves you more than life itself!!!!
What a great job.
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Aleria
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6/19 3:38am
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RE: Burden of the Throne {J/J, post-LotF, drama/action/romance} TEASER - 6/19/08
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Jaina_and_Jag posted:
Beautiful!!! You wrote Jag so well! His emotions were so strong and I feel so bad fr that boy! Come on Jaina, you have to come back to him! He loves you more than life itself!!!!
What a great job.
Thank you so much! But if someone can get through to Jaina, it's Jag. Always has been...
Author's Note:
It's a national holiday in Finland this weekend so I'll be away from my computer for a couple of days. BUT, the next part has been drafted and just needs to be written out and a little bit of tinkering. It should be done next week. In the mean time, Jag4Me requested a teaser, so I'll give you something to wonder about...
Next up: Interlude II - Insight of what Jaina is going through
Teaser posted:
Burning eyes haunted her. Their insane gleam was etched into her memory, spouting rage at her. They gripped her, choked her. Even now she was at their mercy in the forlorn prison she had been thrown into.
She couldn’t stand the gaze. Despair and dread billowed over her, leaving shame in their wake. Hopelessly she fought their power - turning away, closing herself down and vanishing behind her shields. But the eyes kept coming back. They would never let her go.
I'll be back with more at the beginning of next week!
(I withhold the right to change some things in that tidbit, but it gives you something to mull over)
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darkladypurplepencil
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6/19 6:03am
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Wow, just wow. The way you capture Jag's pain made me cry more than once.
Please update soon! And if you have a pm list, please add me!
DLPP
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Aleria
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6/22 9:27am
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RE: Burden of the Throne {J/J, post-LotF, drama/action/romance} TEASER - 6/19/08
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darkladypurplepencil posted:
Wow, just wow. The way you capture Jag's pain made me cry more than once.
Please update soon! And if you have a pm list, please add me!
DLPP
Thank you! Nice to get a new reader.
There'll be an update next week, possibly in just a couple of days. Plus, you are now on the PM list.
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dancinut1080
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6/27 6:49am
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RE: Burden of the Throne {J/J, post-LotF, drama/action/romance} TEASER - 6/19/08
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"Delurks" Wow, what a great story, can you add me to your PM list please? Can't wait for more.
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Aleria
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6/28 5:17am
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RE: Burden of the Throne {J/J, post-LotF, drama/action/romance} TEASER - 6/19/08
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dancinut1080 posted:
"Delurks" Wow, what a great story, can you add me to your PM list please? Can't wait for more.
Thank you very much! You're on the list now. Glad you liked and delurked!
Next part is under construction and will probably be posted tomorrow or Monday. Thanks for reading!
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Jag4Me
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6/28 12:26pm
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Aleria posted:
Next part is under construction and will probably be posted tomorrow or Monday.
Oh! Yay! I'm looking forward to it!
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Jerisa_Skywalker
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6/28 1:38pm
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I really like this story. You write the characters so well. It's really beautiful. I like Han the most. It's so like him to storm off to do something and then realizing he needs to approach differently. Also Mirta at Jaina's sickbed, very like of her to drop in I think.
So, I can only hope for more and spend some well deserved applause:
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Aleria
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Jerisa_Skywalker posted:
I really like this story. You write the characters so well. It's really beautiful. I like Han the most. It's so like him to storm off to do something and then realizing he needs to approach differently. Also Mirta at Jaina's sickbed, very like of her to drop in I think.
So, I can only hope for more and spend some well deserved applause:
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like Han, he's been slightly scary to write since I have a pretty strong picture of him in my mind and I want to do him justice.
Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoy what's yet to come!
Jag4Me posted:
Oh! Yay! I'm looking forward to it!
I'm so glad to see you're that enthusiastic about this, and... I finished writing the next part!  So, it should probably be up tonight. See you then!
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