Author Topic: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel, (Updated 07/15!)
Jag4Me 
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Date Posted: 6/2 5:19pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS! - Date Edited: 6/2 5:53pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Jag4Me
Wow...am I first?? grin

Happy Anniversary to Kick's parents - 40 years love amazing!

Kick, this is even better than I imagined. You are given Soontir and Jag the pages their characters
truly deserve.

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Jag looked over to his father then, as always amazed at his strategic mind and analysis abilities. “If my post is made permanent that will be a top priority. ”

His father chuckled, “You mean when your post is made permanent. I’ve spoken to Daala; she’ll do what she has to.”

Jag raised his eyebrow with a wry look on his face. “What did you offer in return?”

“Don’t worry Jagged, I didn’t offer her what she really wants. You are to be married after all.”

Jag snorted. “As long as that’s understood.”

Do you think Jag gets his sense of humor from Soontir? This is damned hysterical!!
Or...maybe Soontir was serious?? shock
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

“Oh, I don’t know Jagged. The old rancor still looks pretty damn good and you’re not married…yet.”

“Not interested,” came the flat reply.

ack!! No he is not interested! EWWEE!

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"No thanks needed for telling the truth, son." he said and continued. "Now what of the Veila woman. When will she be extradited?"

Jagged took a deep breath. He had known this question would come and he was prepared for the hell his answer would soon bring down on him. He hoped that he could make his father quickly see that his decision had been the correct one. "She will not be extradited to Imperial courts Sir, I've signed a waiver."

"Daala is going to execute her herself then," Soontir shrugged. “The result is the same.”

“She has been pardoned Sir.” Jag quickly blurted out while his resolve was strong, “and I have agreed.”

As put out as I am by Tahiri's character right now this was just the thing to do. Did I mention what
good work you do? cool
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

“I realize that Sir, but it’s irrelevant to the moral point. Plus, what am I to do? Alienate Luke Skywalker by executing one his Knights, that wouldn’t be particularly responsible right now. Not to mention the position it would put me in with the Solos…'Hello, I’m your new son-in-law and I’m going to execute Anakin’s girlfriend now'.”

The anger on Soontir’s face became three-fold. “You are allowing your personal responsibilities to cloud your judgment!”

“And your allowing vengeance to cloud yours,” Jag said as he prepared for all the possible reactions that his father could give him and the thought of most of them broke his heart.

Powerful father son stuff! You are nailing my idea of Soontir and Jag's characters.
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Baron Fel stood stoic and unmoving as if his ears had malfunctioned and he had not heard or understood what his sons answer had been. Finally he recovered enough to add in the voice that Jag remembered as the ‘pre-ass whipping’ voice. “So to be clear, Gilad Pellaeon’s murderer is to be ‘rehabilitated’ by the man who obliterated Carida? Is what my son is telling me?”

I LOVE the pre-ass whipping voice! Priceless! applause
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

“Oh yes,” Soontir added flatly. “Forever indebted because Solo got him off after he committed genocide. That makes me feel a lot better about the situation Jagged.”

This makes me want to wail "just leave Kyp alone!!" like the you tube video of the Britney guy... silly
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Continuing to shake his head Soontir Fel found himself baffled for the first time in many years. “Why do you want leverage over her Jagged? What is it Tahiri Veila has that you want? She’s an orphan with no political clout and now a disgraced Jedi Knight with an extremely tarnished reputation. Do I need to tell you the rumors that fly around the nature of her relationship with Darth Caedus?”

“I don’t care about gossip Father, whether it true or not. Tahiri Veila could be useful to me on a personal level and that is what I care about.”

“Jagged,” Soontir said softly, which a few moments before hand Jag wouldn’t have thought possible. “I hardly see Jaina as the type of woman who would tolerate such things.”

shock EWEE!!
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"That is grotesque, and I assure you not what I meant. You know of my promise to Daala to appoint more female Moffs."

Soontir nodded and Jag slowly continued. "Father, you know what a pit of vipers they are, I'm sure their already planning to usurp me as soon as Luke's back is turned and he's dealing with his next crisis."

"Jagged what do the Moff's have to do with Tahiri Veila?"

Jag shrugged as if his next words wouldn't cause Mustafaric volcano's to erupt from his father, "I'm going to appoint her as a Moff."

*falls off chair* shock Didn't see that coming....
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"I don't like it Jagged. It would be built on duplicity." Exasperation overtaking him Soontir asked his son, “I must say this is just sheer brilliance Jagged. What would Thrawn say to you?”

Jagged grinned, “Shine my boots and kiss my…art?”

ROFL!! Brilliant Kick! love
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Soontir snorted, “and what idiot says my son has no personality.”

No one should say that because he is Jag! batting
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Jagged closed his eyes and continued to rub his temples but nothing seemed to ease the pain in his head these days other than being with Jaina and having her perform one of her Force fueled massages. "No, I didn't object but I probably should have."

I'm pretty sure more details on these Force fueles massages will be needed....
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"I don't know what I'm having...I just don't know anymore. I want victory without war. That’s what I want."

Brilliant job of typing it all up with a nice neat bow. applause
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"Son you've been through a lot, as has Jaina. Now the galaxy is at peace and you're to finally be married. The two of you just need some much deserved privacy and time together. When we leave tomorrow why don't you take the Starflare for the honeymoon?

Jagged grinned, the pain in his head easing ever so slightly. "There will be no need to take the Starflare. The Solo's have made a gift of the Love Commander to Jaina and me for a wedding present."

Soontir chuckled. "That’s a nice ride, but you will rename it I assume?"

"Of course," came Jaggeds typical crisp reply. "My Betrothed has chosen The MaraSyal."

Love this - love that Soontir likes Jaina so much too. Thank the stars they are changing the name on that ship!!
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

As a rule Chiss didn't feel anger but Soontir knew that at times it had taken a toll Jag and he had became frustrated if not angry. The incident towards the end of the Yuuzhan Vong War, when he and Jaina had been granted a rare two day leave and had been photographed on a beach with less than swimming attire on had nearly exhausted his extensive fuse.

Jaina had thought it funny. A reporter had quoted her as saying, "Doesn't he look good though? I mean what's a girl to do?"

A perfect example of why they are so good together. This is so much fun Kick!!
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

“Imperial fleets are in horrific disarray Sir, and I’m a mere Colonel and not quite sure I have the knowledge to get them back where they need to be. I’d like you to take the position of Supreme Commander of Imperial Forces Sir. I believe the position should be separate from the Moff Council at least for now.”

Soontir was speechless, “They Moffs will never accept that Jagged. They’ll say it’s a conflict of interest given your position.”

“Quite contraire father they have already agreed to it. “ Jagged grinned, “they really don’t want to test Skywalker and are not openly giving me any problems even if they are privately scheming to get rid of me.”

applause applause

What a great chapter Kick! I love the comment about "prying apart" Wyn and Valin too! love
Wow.
Will there be some wedding planning soon? love

 

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jadesabre75 
Registered: Nov '07
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Date Posted: 6/2 6:05pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
Sorry I didn't respond earlier. I read it pretty quick, but I had to go and watch Bones first. grin


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:



The Moffs had been given the choice of Jag’s leadership or the wrath of Queen Mother Tenel Ka for trying to kill her and her daughter. The Moffs had quickly and unanimously chosen Jag. Um...not sure if that was the better deal. I know Tenel is fierce but Jag can make their lives hell.


His father chuckled, “You mean when your post is made permanent. I’ve spoken to Daala; she’ll do what she has to.”

Jag raised his eyebrow with a wry look on his face. “What did you offer in return?”

“Don’t worry Jagged, I didn’t offer her what she really wants. You are to be married after all.” Why am I not surprised Daala would be a cougar. Funny.

Jag snorted. “As long as that’s understood.”

“Oh, I don’t know Jagged. The old rancor still looks pretty damn good and you’re not married…yet.”

“Not interested,” came the flat reply. Damn right.

Wow. The conversation with Jag and his dad...I was laughing at how worked up he was getting Soontir. Pretty freaking funny!



Moff Fel closed his eyes and turned his head away unable to take the look of betrayal that would overcome Soontir’s face as he replied. “Kyp…Durron.”

Baron Fel stood stoic and unmoving as if his ears had malfunctioned and he had not heard or understood what his sons answer had been. Finally he recovered enough to add in the voice that Jag remembered as the ‘pre-ass whipping’ voice. “So to be clear, Gilad Pellaeon’s murderer is to be ‘rehabilitated’ by the man who obliterated Carida? Is what my son is telling me?”

“That is correct Sir.”

“Whose dumbass hare-brained idea was that?! Skywalker? He’s the only person in the galaxy naive enough to actually think…” PMSL! Wow. That was just... laugh


"I don't like it Jagged. It would be built on duplicity." Exasperation overtaking him Soontir asked his son, “I must say this is just sheer brilliance Jagged. What would Thrawn say to you?”

Jagged grinned, “Shine my boots and kiss my…art?” LOL Cute.

Soontir snorted, “and what idiot says my son has no personality.” Um...the stupid ones?

Jagged closed his eyes and continued to rub his temples but nothing seemed to ease the pain in his head these days other than being with Jaina and having her perform one of her Force fueled massages. Now that sounds interesting...

"Of course," came Jaggeds typical crisp reply. "My Betrothed has chosen The MaraSyal." raised_brow


After along moment of watching his father lost in thought, Jagged finally spoke. "I too wish it was Davin standing here and breathing air instead of me Sir. He would have been much more suited to this."

The words stung Soontir more than Jag would ever know. He loved all his children the same as any good parent did. Davin had been more 'his' child. They had had more in common and had connected on more levels, and he knew that he would never really recover from that boy’s death.

However, he would never wish to trade Jaggeds life for Davins and knew what Davin would have said to the mere thought of it. His eyes narrowed, "Don't you ever say that again Jagged...ever." cry


"You mean you've pried Wyn away from Knight Horn." I bet that was painful.

Soontir rolled his eyes. "No he'll be there as well. I wouldn't want either of them to go into irreversible withdrawal after all." LOL Man, Soontir is kicking it with the jokes.

“Yes Sir. I’m in a bit of a predicament. As I’m sure you know Darth Caedus was an idiot…as a military strategist he was completely incompetent.”

Jags father shrugged, “why are you telling me what I already know.”

“Imperial fleets are in horrific disarray Sir, and I’m a mere Colonel and not quite sure I have the knowledge to get them back where they need to be. I’d like you to take the position of Supreme Commander of Imperial Forces Sir. I believe the position should be separate from the Moff Council at least for now.”

Soontir was speechless, “They Moffs will never accept that Jagged. They’ll say it’s a conflict of interest given your position.”

“Quite contraire father they have already agreed to it. “ Jagged grinned, “they really don’t want to test Skywalker and are not openly giving me any problems even if they are privately scheming to get rid of me.”

“You’re mother will not be pleased. We’re supposed to be retired and traveling you know?”

“Yes I know father, but I need you.”

Baron Fel nodded, “I’d be happy to. However we will discuss politics later, we have an engagement party to prepare for. ”

LOVED IT! Of course Tir would be the best for the job!

Great job Piper! Well worth the wait dear!




 

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princess_of_naboo 
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Date Posted: 6/2 6:17pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
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"Awe," Soontir smiled.


Yeah, that sort of creeps me out. I just don't see him saying that no matter the context. tongue

Other than that, awesome post! Ah, those scheming Fels. grin

 

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carr3107 
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Date Posted: 6/2 7:14pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
Lots of positive things to say, although I am dying to know how you envisioned it before Invincible came out.

 

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Date Posted: 6/2 7:37pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
You can definitely tell that they're related.

Tahiri going undercover on the Moff Council is interesting, as is her being under Kyp's supervision. I probably would have had Corran be her mentor again, but there's a certain amount of sense in Kyp being in charge of her.

The Love Commander is good for their honeymoon (assuming they can't get a suite on the Errant Venture). I guess that means that Ben is getting the Jade Shadow?

 

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Date Posted: 6/2 8:39pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
Wow this was very cool. Very interesting discussions. Their humor is very intriguing and I am very much enjoying this relationship they have. It is much better than the the harsh indifference that they are most often portrayed as having. laugh HA! the reference to Valin and Wyn was awesome! Will there be some scenes with them? That would be fun to read! Anyway, awesome post!! And I have to say, I finished Invincible in perfect timing!!

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canadianjedimama 
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Date Posted: 6/2 9:04pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
Kick wrote... posted:
"I don't like it Jagged. It would be built on duplicity." Exasperation overtaking him Soontir asked his son, “I must say this is just sheer brilliance Jagged. What would Thrawn say to you?”

Jagged grinned, “Shine my boots and kiss my…art?”

Soontir snorted, “and what idiot says my son has no personality.”

Moff Fel signed and continued seriously, "You think that I do like it father? Do you think I like any of this? I'm a fighter pilot not a damn politician. I detest politicians; I always did and look what happened to me."


raised_brow The Beta for this story detects unbeta'd lines in this post. And a spelling error... shame_on_you

silly

That were so gosh darn funny I almost peed my pants! laugh You have my post-posting appproval. tongue

And, princess_of_naboo, Kick says "Awe" and "fixing" alot....but it's part of her charm love , so I try not to edit her voice out! Any disgruntledness about this should be directed here. *points at self*

Any excellent display of the father/son dynamic here my dear...Fantastic, as always. hugs

Cyn

Funny Chapter VI note: Kick sent it to me about two weeks ago...but DRL was a pain and I couldn't get to it right away. So a bit later, she sends me the second part, which you guys haven't seen yet. In my sleep deprived state I beta'd part 2 and said "Here, post this! People want to read it!" and she was like "Ummm...yeah, but I need post the first part first." And I was like doh!

MORAL OF THIS STORY: Do not allow sleep deprived xray techs to beta your epic length work. Because they give it back to you ackbasswards.




 

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Date Posted: 6/2 9:10pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
I am going to have to stop reading this for awhile until I finish reading the book series. I don't want to spoil the series. I will try to read some other works you have up there though.

 

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Date Posted: 6/2 11:34pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
aww.. that was great

 

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Date Posted: 6/3 11:41am Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
Great update!

He's weaving quite the web her I hope it all comes together.

 

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Date Posted: 6/3 12:31pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
‘pre-ass whipping’ voice

Oh, yeah. mischief My mom had one of those. It was usually directed at my brothers, but when you heard it, it was a good idea just to run anyways. frustrated Didn't wanna get caught in the crossfire! laugh tongue

This was a really fantastic post, and I am glad that you had such a good weekend. wink Sounds like a really fun time! happy

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Date Posted: 6/3 12:55pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
Awesome update.

Great father/son dynamic. The Tahiri angle will definitely be fun to watch. As will the engagement party! Can't wait for the next part! *hint, hint* Someone might have mentioned it was done... batting

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Thanks for the PM.

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Date Posted: 6/3 4:44pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
Great post! grin Definitely some interesting stuff going on now...

 

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Date Posted: 6/3 5:55pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
canadianjedimama posted:
Kick wrote... posted:
"I don't like it Jagged. It would be built on duplicity." Exasperation overtaking him Soontir asked his son, “I must say this is just sheer brilliance Jagged. What would Thrawn say to you?”

Jagged grinned, “Shine my boots and kiss my…art?”

Soontir snorted, “and what idiot says my son has no personality.”

Moff Fel signed and continued seriously, "You think that I do like it father? Do you think I like any of this? I'm a fighter pilot not a damn politician. I detest politicians; I always did and look what happened to me."


raised_brow The Beta for this story detects unbeta'd lines in this post. And a spelling error... shame_on_you

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Sorry, Cyn, it was a last minuteer... tongue And whats mispelled I ran it through spell check. worried

kiss

canadianjedimama posted:
That were so gosh darn funny I almost peed my pants! laugh You have my post-posting appproval. tongue



Thanks Great One, it was just too good to pass by. blush

canadianjedimama posted:
And, princess_of_naboo, Kick says "Awe" and "fixing" alot....but it's part of her charm love , so I try not to edit her voice out! Any disgruntledness about this should be directed here. *points at self*


love Awe, I'll have to get to fixing it then. tongue

wink


canadianjedimama posted:
Any excellent display of the father/son dynamic here my dear...Fantastic, as always. hugs


blush grin Thanks Cyn that was what I wanted to accomplish here. happy




canadianjedimama posted:
Funny Chapter VI note: Kick sent it to me about two weeks ago...but DRL was a pain and I couldn't get to it right away. So a bit later, she sends me the second part, which you guys haven't seen yet. In my sleep deprived state I beta'd part 2 and said "Here, post this! People want to read it!" and she was like "Ummm...yeah, but I need post the first part first." And I was like doh!

MORAL OF THIS STORY: Do not allow sleep deprived xray techs to beta your epic length work. Because they give it back to you ackbasswards.


laugh You see I wasn't going to tell that. hugs

It's really my fault Cyn because I keep getting my frigging Roman numerals mixed up. laugh


Thanks for the reply Dear One, I yub ya! kiss




mrjop2 posted:
I am going to have to stop reading this for awhile until I finish reading the book series. I don't want to spoil the series. I will try to read some other works you have up there though.


Awe, I understand. hugs

After the next chapter there will be no more LotF spoilers though because it's time to move beyond that. happy

And there is only one in the next chapter. thinking

Thank you for reading and your thoughts mrjob2.

And I'll have some Legacy 'fic up pretty soon set in 137 aby. love


JAGSGURL15 posted:
aww.. that was great


Thank you for reading my friend and for the reply. hugs



ccp posted:
Great update!


Thank you my fellow Texan! hugs


ccp posted:
He's weaving quite the web her I hope it all comes together.


I think its called a controled crash my friend.

At least it is for the author. laugh

Thanks for reading ccp. wink


angry_bendu1 posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
‘pre-ass whipping’ voice

Oh, yeah. mischief My mom had one of those. It was usually directed at my brothers, but when you heard it, it was a good idea just to run anyways. frustrated Didn't wanna get caught in the crossfire! laugh tongue


Man who you tellin' tired

My mother was famous for ass-whipping.

She busted my ass at church one time. cry

I was like seven and threw one of my tantrums and stayed in the parking lot because she wouldn't let me have a whole piece of gum and only gave me a half-piece. She went to pick me up from Sunday school to take me to church and discovered that I wasn't there. Naturally she panicked.

And she found me sitting outside playing in the gravel.

She was not pleased.

She took me in the restroom and busted my little ass....well.

And there were people that I knew in there of course. plain

Of course my mother busting my ass is actually infamous being as though thats how I got my nickname Kick. happy



angry_bendu1 posted:
This was a really fantastic post, and I am glad that you had such a good weekend. wink Sounds like a really fun time! happy

hugs



We did have a good time. grin And thank you so much for reading my friend and your thoughts. hugs



TelannaTani posted:
Awesome update.


Awe thank you Telanna hugs And thank you for reading and the reply. grin

TelannaTani posted:
Great father/son dynamic.


grin



TelannaTani posted:
The Tahiri angle will definitely be fun to watch.


I can't wait to write that. I already have it planned out in my mind for the most part...but I'm looking forward to writing it.


TelannaTani posted:
As will the engagement party!


Thats up next! grin love



TelannaTani posted:
Can't wait for the next part! *hint, hint* Someone might have mentioned it was done... batting

grin


Well I can't post it until Sab is back from vacation. There is no way I could post a Kyp chapter without Chris being here...she'd kill me. worried

TelannaTani posted:
Thanks for the PM.




Thank you Telanna for taking the time to share your thoughts.




Jaina_and_Jag posted:
Great post! grin Definitely some interesting stuff going on now...


Bam! Becky is HERE!!! love

yeah, it's starting to pick up a little. I hope to keep it interesting. grin

As always thanks for reading My Dear... kiss


Thank you for the wonderful replies everyone and have a great Tuesday night! peace

 

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Registered: Nov '07
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Date Posted: 6/3 8:29pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Chap. VI 06/02 - INVINCIBLE SPOILERS!
Um...excuse me. Where's my reply sister!? raised_brow I mean, I know my replies aren't earth shattering but come on. not_talking

 

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