Author Topic: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel - Authors Note 06/23
Jag4Me 
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Date Posted: 5/11 5:58pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel (Invincible and post LotF Spec.) Chap. IV 05/11 Happy Mothers
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

</Kick Note> Happy Mothers Day to all the wonderful mothers out there: Tahi, Cyn, Chris, Connie and everyone else! May your children always bring you joy and peace. peace This one is a happy day for our heroes. A day of new destiny and...yes...a little love at first sight. love

You are so sweet and I feel honored for the mention! I hope all the mom's (and everyone else too) have had a lovely day.

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

She looked up at him and gave him the "Organa Glare of Death".

OMG! I love this!! cool

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

She raised her eyebrow at him, finding another attack vector. "Did you know that Jag is basically running the Empire, Han?"

"Not unitl a couple of days ago." He shrugged. "Trust me Leia it will work out."

Oh yeah, it's going to work out. Jag can do anything! grin
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Leia inhaled sharply but said no more. She opened herself to the currents of the Force, surprisingly she felt nothing but peace. She brushed her brothers mind ever so gently and felt his calm reassurance sweep over her as he looked over and winked at her.

In a way, this was as special a day for the two of them as it was for anyone else. Luke Skywalker and Leia Organa-Solo would come face to face with Vader's fist.

I thought this was just sooo cool! applause

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"The 501st," Leia said softly. She would have known their legendery power, discipline and form anywhere. Some things just never changed. She looked over to her brother who caught her eye and gave a silent nod. She relaxed then, accepting the reality and finality of the moment and knowing that there was no better path for her daughter.

This actually gave me chills...the good kind.

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Soontir Fel.

I heart him so much! love
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Right beind him and immediately to his left was his wife Syal. Her long blonde hair and beautiful features had changed even less than her husbands over the years, Luke decided. And giving birth to six children had done nothing to diminish her figure either. Luke felt Wedge's joy explode in the Force as he watched his sister desend the ramp.

The two groups began to walk toward each other, in a moment that was certainly being recorded for galactic history. Finally the two parties met and Syal Fel ran into her sons arms. "Jagged. Oh, Jag," she smiled up at him, "how handsome you look."

Jagged Fel smiled down at her, giving her a kiss on the forehead, "Thank you Mother, I missed you." She squeezed him tightly for a moment and then moved to Wedge to give him the same treatment.

*sigh* I love Jag and his mom. We need more of her..

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Soontir smiled at him and placed a hand on his shoulder, "Jagged." He then grinned, "The beard looks different in person, I think I actually kind of like it."

"Don't say that where Aunt Iella can hear it."

"I already did," Iella Antilles said with a smile on her face. "Hello Soontir. I told Jag what good is being the best looking man in the galaxy if you keep your face covered in hair."

The Baron laughed embracing his sister-in-law and then kissed her on both cheeks, "You look beautiful."

Too funny! laugh Iella and Soontir could be really fun together.

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

As always, Luke's grief over Mara sang across their bond in the Force to Leia. The last time he had seen Soontir Fel were the days when he and Mara had became engaged. The grief that crossed his face would have been missed by everyone but those who knew him well and it certainly wasn't lost on his twin sister. She gave him a gentle brush of love through the Force and he quickly returned it.

cry Very nice Luke moment...Mara was his soul mate.
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Fel smiled, shook her hand and gave her a slight bow. "I'm honored to meet you Grand Admiral, but I'm an observer and advisor only. My son will speak for the Empire."

applause

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"No, I need a word with you anyway, son."

Jagged then turned and dismissed the Stormtroopers. All of which saluted him and marched back up the loading ramp of the shuttle except for one. That stormtrooper gave Jag a mock salute and made a somewhat sassy gesture towards him, and then proceeded up the ramp.

Jag and Soontir shot a look to each other and grinned. yeah, back at you Cem, we'll settle it later.

I am so glad Cem showed up! And why do people think the Fel's are so stiff?

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"I just wanted to say that I'm sorry about your baby Jag, I truly am. Is she recovered?"

"Not fully, no. More children are highly unlikely."

Soontir gave a sympathetic nod and asked, "I take it you apologized for your outburst? We do not yell at women in this family Jagged. You were raised much better than that."


Nooo, there has to be baby Fel's!! This is cruel...these two have been kept apart for too long. The need some happiness...soon.
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Jag sighed. Apparently Leia had wasted no time in outing him to his father for his behavior towards Jaina. But he knew he deserved it. "I haven't seen her again, I've been pretty busy."

"Avoidance doesn't solve problems Jagged, you know that. You will make the time and shortly."


I cannot wait...hope we get to see it soon. praying Jag, listen to daddy Fel.

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"Would you get a load of that," Kyp Durron said as a low whistle escaped his mouth. "She looks just like her mother did in my dreams as a kid. And I'm not kriffing around."

"Why Kyp," Corran said rather derisively, "Isn't she a little old for you? I thought your dating pool bracket was eighteen to twenty-five."

Durron grinned, "That's not what Mirax says Corran...that's not what Mirax says."


Very funny! These guys are so good together...and I like it when Kyp talks dirty. blush

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"You want to know what I heard?" Ben Skywalker asked just a little too exictedly. His bright blue eyes filled with awe and wonder. Gently he wiped his brow and was about to continue when Jysella rather rudely interupted him.

"Uh, no, but I'm sure you're going to tell us anyway."


Could Jys be a little jealous?? She is a better fit for Ben than certain other folks that are way to old for him...
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"Watch your mouth pup," Kyp said dryly. "I'd teach you a lesson but Mara would rattle chains by my bed for the rest of my life."


This made me want to laugh and cry all at once!! I can actually see Mara doing just that to him too!!

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"Oh, I suppose so Kyle, I'd hate to have to fight you." Kyp shrugged, "Besides, she's entirely too aristocratic for my blood. And if the Fel's are anything, they are stuffy Imperial aristocrats."


This is what I mean? They are so misunderstood! Or are the other guys just jealous?

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

It was then that Valin Horn finally spoke, "I'm going to marry her."

Simultaneously, the other five Jedi turned and looked at Valin, but he didn't see them at all. All he could see..all he could reigister was her. He closed his eyes, burning this time and this moment into his consciousness forever. He'd remember it on his death bed he knew..this moment and this place.


Oh! YES! shock Love it and love the Jedi reactions.

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Ben frowned, he hated being called that; especially by such a beautiful woman, but he added, "The Daughter of Fel."


Ben is getting cheeky! I like it...

THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

In that moment it was Kyp Durron's voice Valin heard, it was his voice that would knock the boy out of his stupor. "Go after her Valin. Don't let her walk away, you may only get one shot son, take it. It's your chance. Or you may watch her walk away with another man for the rest of your life. Your moment is now, go!"

He closed his eyes as the wind continued to blow over his face. He mustered every ounce of courage left in the universe.

He opened his eyes and again he heard Durron, "The Force hates a coward Valin, go."

Nice Kyp part...he really is a great Jedi and friend.


Can't wait for more!! applause You always do such a nice job and use all my favorites. grin

 

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Date Posted: 5/11 8:06pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel (Invincible and post LotF Spec.) Chap. IV 05/11 Happy Mothers
That was great I'm betting Jag and Jaina's next conversation will be strained to say the least. Has he had to talk with Vader's true fist yet?

Oh poor Valin, it is much harder for us guys than we get credit for. Acording to my wife "can I buy you a drink" always worked best with her.

Great Chapter.

 

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42356_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 5/11 9:09pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel (Invincible and post LotF Spec.) Chap. IV 05/11 Happy Mothers
Happy Mother's Day, all!!



You're a fraction the man your father is."
"Funny. That's what I was going to say to you."

-Darth Caedus and Valin Horn, 40 aby


laugh This was like..my favorite line in the books so far...I love it!


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
And also there with the GA Delegation stood Jagged Fel.
Of course, Jag has to be thrown in there wink tongue With his own sentence, no less!


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
She only hoped this would proceed quickly because her grand daughter was due up from her nap.
laugh Such a random thought! And yet it shows her new priorities. I hope she gets to spend more time with her granddaughter than she did with her kids...


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
"Stop being a negative nova, Princess," her husband whispered as he stood beside her, "Everything is going to be okay, trust me."

She looked up at him and gave him the "Organa Glare of Death".

I love the revision of "the look", much more powerful imagery! And I love it when Han gets to be the reasonable one!


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
"That was different," Leia said.

"How so?"

"I don't know, exactly."

Han smiled down to his wife, "It'll be fine."
Like complete role-reversal!! I love it!


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
She opened herself to the currents of the Force, surprisingly she felt nothing but peace. She brushed her brothers mind ever so gently and felt his calm reassurance sweep over her as he looked over and winked at her.

love Awww, what a good big brother...or little brother...whichever...


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
"The 501st," Leia said softly. She would have known their legendery power, discipline and form anywhere. Some things just never changed.
Magnificent! Some things just never change.


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
I told Jag what good is being the best looking man in the galaxy if you keep your face covered in hair."
HERE, HERE!! coffee (this is the closest to a toasting glass we have..lol)


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
As always, Luke's grief over Mara sang across their bond in the Force to Leia. The last time he had seen Soontir Fel were the days when he and Mara had became engaged. The grief that crossed his face would have been missed by everyone but those who knew him well and it certainly wasn't lost on his twin sister. She gave him a gentle brush of love through the Force and he quickly returned it
Poor Luke! Little reminders everywhere...Love how they take turns comforting each other.


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
Then Soontir Fel moved to stand in front of Grand Admiral Niathal. After a moment, she spoke. "Welcome to Hapes Baron Fel, I look forward to discussions and good faith talks with you."

Fel smiled, shook her hand and gave her a slight bow. "I'm honored to meet you Grand Admiral, but I'm an observer and advisor only. My son will speak for the Empire."

She looked as puzzled as a Mon Calamarian could look, Jag thought, as she quickly looked between father and son but said nothing more. She silently nodded, content to ask no futher questions for now.
Sounds like the plan is about to be made official...I can't wait!


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
That stormtrooper gave Jag a mock salute and made a somewhat sassy gesture towards him, and then proceeded up the ramp.

Jag and Soontir shot a look to each other and grinned. yeah, back at you Cem, we'll settle it later.
grin That's awesome!


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
Soontir gave a sympathetic nod and asked, "I take it you apologized for your outburst? We do not yell at women in this family Jagged. You were raised much better than that."

Jag sighed. Apparently Leia had wasted no time in outing him to his father for his behavior towards Jaina. But he knew he deserved it. "I haven't seen her again, I've been pretty busy."

"Avoidance doesn't solve problems Jagged, you know that. You will make the time and shortly."

"Yes sir, I will."
I guess you're never to old for lectures from your parents...but yeah, Soontir is absolutely right!


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
The six of them stood off to the side from the offical delegation. In theory they were honorary attendee's from the Jedi Order. In reality they were back-up in case any malcontent or lunatic got any ideas with all the big brass around. That did not need to happen under any circumstances.
Thats probably a REAL good idea


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
"Why Kyp," Corran said rather derisively, "Isn't she a little old for you? I thought your dating pool bracket was eighteen to twenty-five."

Durron grinned, "That's not what Mirax says Corran...that's not what Mirax says."

"That's not funny anymore Kyp."

"Oh, I assure you it is."
laugh laugh This was priceless! I was about to quote the next part..but figured I'd just end up quoting your entire post...jo lets just suffice to say, This scene with the Jedi Masters acting like children was HILARIOUS!


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
Ben looked at her. What was her problem. She was always so rude to him, whenever she did acknowledge that he was even there.
I have a few ideas about that raised_brow mischief


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
It was then that Valin Horn finally spoke, "I'm going to marry her."

Simultaneously, the other five Jedi turned and looked at Valin, but he didn't see them at all. All he could see..all he could reigister was her. He closed his eyes, burning this time and this moment into his consciousness forever. He'd remember it on his death bed he knew..this moment and this place.

Again, suffice it to say this whole situation was awesome! Absolutely hilarious.


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
"A wedding?" Kyp asked. "I love wedding's, drinks all around. Good luck, Valin."
laugh cool another nice reference


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
Katarn grinned, and looked sideways at Valin Horn, but instead of shaking her hand he bent and kissed it. "Hello Lady Fel," he said smoothly.

Trying to cause trouble? raised_brow angel



THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
"Gee, Horn that was a hell of a marriage proposal. I must have blinked and missed it."
...My thoughts exactly...


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
Well, I'm not the historian that Master Katarn is, but I've got some pretty interesting stories myself and I'd really like to relay them to you over dinner." He then looked at Soontir, "If thats okay, of course."

Go Valin! Haha, and love the permission part.


THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
Finally she spoke, "Pick me up tomorrow night at nineteen hundred hours.
Can't wait to see what that'll lead to!


Absolutely awesome, and incredibly FUN post! Very, very nice for a happy holiday post. I loved it!

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Maggy 
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Date Posted: 5/12 12:02pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel (Invincible and post LotF Spec.) Chap. IV 05/11 Happy Mothers
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I can see that. thinking

grin grin wink

*laughs* Well, I suppose that candy, the sunrise, my dogs, my niece and nephew and sometimes IrishKatarn make me happy. wink And of course my readers. love

Thought so, there are more things making you happy wink grin

I freaking love Fel. love

I never would have guessed silly

laugh We'll see. whistling

*waits to see*

I know right. Wes has the best gif.'s! love

Yes he has some awesome ones grin

I'll agree that Jag is being a jerk here, but lets not forget all the crap Miss. Solo has put this incredible man through. I think it all just reached a boiling point and he lost it. Which, I admit, that is difficult to believe of Jagged Fel, but he had a moment of humanity.

Yeah who would have thought that to be in him at all tongue

Exactly! Thats the irony! grin Another good catch for Mags!

blush

*nods* He knows that, but right now he feels the need to make her understand how badly she has hurt him, unfortunately, thats how we often treat loved ones when we're hurt. Or, at least I do.

That is so true hugs

applause Very true. I'm just glad that Han and Soontir have a mutual respect for each other.

Otherwise Leia really has to worry about the meeting tongue wink

</Maggy> thinking

laugh laugh laugh
hugs

Oh, yeah, that I'm willing to confirm.

H.I.M Roan-ness BADASSERY!!


And his beautiful awesome daughter. The Princess of Power, H.I.H. Marasiah Fel


I have to admit that I have not read the comics, none of them at all, from the first to the last one. Hard to get a hold on them sad

*nods* Personal reference there for me, which is often the case with my J/J. blush My Daddy told Sean that the day we married. tongue

grin aww grin

That's all very true Maggy. But, ultimately I think that is what made J/J. All of the tragedy the love was purified and now it's undeniable...in canon and everywhere else. wink

applause awesome words, so true applause

We'll see what they do. love

Kissing all better? love

wink tongue

You're a fraction the man your father is."
"Funny. That's what I was going to say to you."

-Darth Caedus and Valin Horn, 40 aby


So true, so true
I think Han would have smacked some sense into him if he would have got the chance silly

Chapter IV - This Moment

[i]"This is going to be interesting," Leia said as she stood there in the beautiful late Hapan afternoon with the rest of the Galactic Alliance Welcome Delegation. The Delegation also included her brother Luke Skywalker, near life-long friends Wedge and Iella Antiles and Grand Admiral Niathal. And also there with the GA Delegation stood Jagged Fel.


Niathal as well? Otherwise you would have called it a family gathering to welcome the new addition tongue

"Stop being a negative nova, Princess," her husband whispered as he stood beside her, "Everything is going to be okay, trust me."

*snrk* and that from Han?! laugh

"That was different," Leia said.

Now they are family wink

She raised her eyebrow at him, finding another attack vector. "Did you know that Jag is basically running the Empire, Han?"

"Not until a couple of days ago." He shrugged. "Trust me Leia it will work out."


Han and Leia seem to have switched roles .. normally she is the one reassuring all and everyone!

"The 501st," Leia said softly. She would have known their legendary power, discipline and form anywhere. Some things just never changed. She looked over to her brother who caught her eye and gave a silent nod. She relaxed then, accepting the reality and finality of the moment and knowing that there was no better path for her daughter.

She can’t really change her path anyway, can she? Even with the troubles the young ones have, but they will live through them grin wink

He had definitely grown older, Luke Skywalker thought to himself, but he was still instantly recognizable as the legendary fighter pilot of his youth. His dark hair had receeded some and his face had aged if only a little and the eye patch over his eye only made him look more interesting and more distinguishing.

I am pretty sure Soontir thinks the same of him and Han laugh tongue

Right behind him and immediately to his left was his wife Syal. Her long blonde hair and beautiful features had changed even less than her husband’s over the years, Luke decided. And giving birth to six children had done nothing to diminish her figure either. Luke felt Wedge's joy explode in the Force as he watched his sister descend the ramp.

It had been a lifetime for him since he had seen his sister last time grin sure he is more than happy

The two groups began to walk toward each other, in a moment that was certainly being recorded for galactic history. Finally the two parties met and Syal Fel ran into her sons arms. "Jagged. Oh, Jag," she smiled up at him, "how handsome you look."

Aww grin love
Happy reunion with his family
He certainly deserves some happiness after all those bad things with his son and Jaina and all the stress

Jagged Fel smiled down at her, giving her a kiss on the forehead, "Thank you Mother, I missed you." She squeezed him tightly for a moment and then moved to Wedge to give him the same treatment.

grin

"I already did," Iella Antilles said with a smile on her face. "Hello Soontir. I told Jag what good is being the best looking man in the galaxy if you keep your face covered in hair."

laugh cry laugh cry laugh

Fel smiled, shook her hand and gave her a slight bow. "I'm honored to meet you Grand Admiral, but I'm an observer and advisor only. My son will speak for the Empire."

*snrk*

She looked as puzzled as a Mon Calamarian could look, Jag thought, as she quickly looked between father and son but said nothing more. She silently nodded, content to ask no futher questions for now.

She must be surprised tongue
She waited for him only to be told she has to talk with someone else wink

Jag and Soontir shot a look to each other and grinned. yeah, back at you Cem, we'll settle it later.

laugh I thought that a brother is hidden under one of those masks wink

Jag sighed. Apparently Leia had wasted no time in outing him to his father for his behavior towards Jaina. But he knew he deserved it. "I haven't seen her again, I've been pretty busy."

stupid boy!!! sad

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"Would you get a load of that," Kyp Durron said as a low whistle escaped his mouth. "She looks just like her mother did in my dreams as a kid. And I'm not kriffing around."

she is too young anyway silly tongue

At that point Master Katarn had had enough and turned around with a scolding look on his face, "Will you two ever grow up? Because I've listened to you for far too many years. I swear Horn, your kids are more mature than you and Durron."

No they will not grow up … where is the fun in that tongue

Corran looked offended, "But Kyle, we love you. Sat by your sick bed, day and night while you recovered from the hole of all holes in the chest.

*snrk* nice, really nice

He continued to stare as Ben Skywalker waved his hand in front of his eyes. "Master Horn, I think something is wrong with Valin, he's in some kind of trance...or something."

laugh laugh



"You've got to be kriffing kidding me," Ben Skywalker said. "She's coming this way."

Katarn's voice was serious as he said, "Durron you will behave yourself understood?"


laugh laugh

"A wedding?" Kyp asked. "I love wedding's, drinks all around. Good luck, Valin."

That is the wrong thing to say tongue

She nodded at him and smiled, slowly withdrawing her white gloved hand, "I'm sorry if it's impolite to ask but I've heard so much about your legendary journeys..and well, I'me working on my post-graduate studies and I'd like to know if you would sit with me and go over history, Sir. It wouldn't take a whole lot of your time and I'd really appreciate it."

silly she is not serious LOL laugh

Valin just stood there. For the life of him, he was unable to speak to Wynssa Fel. She looked at him only for a moment, waiting for an answer to her greeting. When it became clear that she wasn't going to get one, she looked back over them all and said, "It's been nice to meet all of you, and thank you again Master Katarn." And with that she took her brothers arm and they turned to leave.

Yeah .. he did great at the first meeting silly I am totally impressed by his eloquent reply – he certainly left an impression on her tongue

Valin Horn stepped away from the others and began to run toward the slowly retreating family he called out, "Lady Fel."

shock he found his guts tongue

Finally she spoke, "Pick me up tomorrow night at nineteen hundred hours. You know where we're staying I assume."

"Yes, I do," he said, "and I'll be there."

"Very well Jedi Horn, until then."

He bowed. "Until then...Lady Fel." He looked at Soontir and then Jagged and nodded. He then turned and walked away.


Hey, lucky one grin


Happy family reunion love grin
And it had Kyp too love besides Jag love


tongue

Awesome work PP applause
I wonder why Leia was so nervous right in the beginning, nothing bad has happened wink



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Date Posted: 5/12 2:38pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel (Invincible and post LotF Spec.) Chap. IV 05/11 Happy Mothers
Well, heck...what can I say that everyone else hasn't?

Sorry I'm late... blush

Kick, my dear, you have a honest to goodness flair for witty dialogue. I've honestly lost count of the number of times you've made me laugh out loud.

Soontir giving Jag the business...priceless.

Kyp vs. Corran...priceless x2

As far as Valin/Wyn goes, true love is like that, isn't it? The whole world seems to stop....and you don't know how you ever did without them...*sigh* love

Love it like usual...

Cyn

PS...Kick'ika, garbage disposal's are so 20th century. talk_hand Organic recycling is the way to go...

 

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Date Posted: 5/12 6:16pm Subject: RE: Fly Well: The Rise of Jagged Fel (Invincible and post LotF Spec.) Chap. IV 05/11 Happy Mothers - Date Edited: 5/12 6:28pm (3 edits total) Edited By: THE_PIED_PIPER
Hah, Sab! cool

jadesabre75 posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
</Kick Note> Happy Mothers Day to all the wonderful mothers out there: Tahi, Cyn, Chris, Connie and everyone else! May your children always bring you joy and peace. peace This one is a happy day for our heroes. A day of new destiny and...yes...a little love at first sight. love

Thank you my dear. hugs


You're so welcome. kiss

jadesabre75 posted:
PMSL! I just have to say I'm still chuckling after reading this. Jake actually came in the room and asked me what was wrong.


Awe, then my goal was achieved. I wanted to bring some joy to our mothers on their special day. happy





jadesabre75 posted:
"Stop being a negative nova, Princess," her husband whispered as he stood beside her, "Everything is going to be okay, trust me." LOL Negative Nova. That's cute.


*nods* It sounded Han-ish

jadesabre75 posted:
She looked up at him and gave him the "Organa Glare of Death". laugh I'm pretty sure he's immune to this by now.


laugh Point.

jadesabre75 posted:
The two groups began to walk toward each other,in a moment that was certainly beining recorded for galactic history. Finally the two parties met and Syal Fel ran into her sons arms. "Jagged. Oh, Jag," she smiled up at him, "how handsome you look."

Ah yes. Mom's rock! You ever need an ego boost, there ya go.


Awe, very true. I love my mom, so much. love I wouldn't have made it without her.

jadesabre75 posted:
Soontir smiled at him and placed a hand on his shoulder, "Jagged." He then grinned, "The beard looks different in person, I think I actually kind of like it." Damn right. He could make anything look good.


Yeah. *gets her Jag drool bucket out*


jadesabre75 posted:
The party then all turned to leave except for Jagged and Soontir. "Well Father I guess we're waiting for the Beauty Extraordinare." LOL Wonder who that could be... whistling


I love Wyn, I'm going to have alot of fun writing her in this...I can already tell.

jadesabre75 posted:
Soontir shook his head and chuckled, "We could be here a while Jagged, she's primping. But I wasn't going to hold everyone else up waiting on her."

"You could go ahead, I'll wait for her," Jagged said.

"No, I need a word with you anyway, son." Damn. Almost got away.


laugh tongue

jadesabre75 posted:
Jagged then turned and dismissed the Stormtroopers. All of which saluted him and marched back up the loading ramp of the shuttle except for one. That stormtrooper gave Jag a mock salute and made a somewhat sassy gesture towards him, and then proceeded up the ramp.

Jag and Soontir shot a look to each other and grinned. yeah, back at you Cem, we'll settle it later. And the last Fel has had his say. That wasn't very imperial though. LOL

Right. thinking But can you imagine what being a shawdow child is like?

jadesabre75 posted:
"I just wanted to say that I'm sorry about your baby Jag, I truly am. Is she recovered?"

"Not fully, no. More children are highly unlikely."

Soontir gave a sympathetic nod and asked, "I take it you apologized for your outburst? We do not yell at women in this family Jagged. You were raised much better than that." That's right Soontir. You tell him!


*nods*

jadesabre75 posted:
Jag sighed. Apparently Leia had wasted no time in outing him to his father for his behavior towards Jaina. But he knew he deserved it. "I haven't seen her again, I've been pretty busy."

"Avoidance doesn't solve problems Jagged, you know that. You will make the time and shortly." shame_on_you


He has his reasons. whistling wink


jadesabre75 posted:
And now, for the sideshow...Please welcome the Jedi! (circus clown music starts)


Motley Crew? mischief



jadesabre75 posted:
"This has got to be the most boring thing that I've ever had to do. When can we leave Dad?" Jysella Horn's voice was inpatient as she fidgeted with her lightsaber and pulled stray locks of brown hair that the wind had freed from her bun out of her eyes. (yeah, cause that's mature ms. Ben Skywalker is immature.)


love mischief

jadesabre75 posted:
"Jys, act like a Jedi Knight and be tranquill for once, please," her fathers voice rang back.

"Yes, Sir." She let out a sigh and looked over to her older brother Valin who was busy chating with Ben Skywalker.

Masters Katarn and Durron also stood with them watching the Imperial's land, and the seemingly never ending parade of pomp and circumstance unfold before them. The six of them stood off to the side from the offical delegation. In theory they were honorary attendee's from the Jedi Order. In reality they were back-up in case any malcontent or lunatic got any ideas with all the big brass around. That did not need to happen under any circumstances.

"Would you get a load of that," Kyp Durron said as a low whistle escaped his mouth. "She looks just like her mother did in my dreams as a kid. And I'm not kriffing around." laugh I love Kyp.


</Kyp> I'll have to check Chris out.. mischief Wanna spin in my X-Wing. mischief

jadesabre75 posted:
"Why Kyp," Corran said rather derisively, "Isn't she a little old for you? I thought your dating pool bracket was eighteen to twenty-five." Ouch! tongue


Hah! Corran = love

jadesabre75 posted:
Durron grinned, "That's not what Mirax says Corran...that's not what Mirax says."

"That's not funny anymore Kyp."

"Oh, I assure you it is." Uh, yeah Corran, it is. Freaking hilarious!


I think so, yyyeess... devil And besides who says Kyp was trying to be funny. shock whistling

jadesabre75 posted:
At that point Master Katarn had had enough and turned around with a scolding look on his face, "Will you two ever grow up? Because I've listened to you for far too many years. I swear Horn, your kids are more mature than you and Durron."

Corran looked offended, "But Kyle, we love you. Sat by your sick bed, day and night while you recovered from the hole of all holes in the chest.

"Thats right," Kyp added, "and we even brought you pretty flowers and sang to you while you were unconscious."

Katarn grunted and rolled his eyes, "I would have prefered death." Yeah, I'm thinking I would have too.


</Kyp> Chris doesn't like my singing...I'll have to try something else. mischief ............................... whistling

You know what whistling is in mine and CJM's "code book" right? raised_brow

jadesabre75 posted:
"You want to know what I heard?" Ben Skywalker asked just a little too exictedly. His bright blue eyes filled with awe and wonder. Gently he wiped his brow and was about to continue when Jysella rather rudely interupted him.

"Uh, no, but I'm sure you're going to tell us anyway." beatup


I liked that to. grin

jadesabre75 posted:
Ben looked at her. What was her problem anyway. She was always so rude to him, whenever she did acknowledge that he was even there.

And as usual he pretended not to hear her and continued, "I heard she wanted to be an actress and model like her mother because all she's ever wanted to do is live on Coruscant, and that she was offered contracts that are in the range of Kick Wes...I'm talking millions a piece. However, Baron Fel wouldn't allow it because of men like.... Master Durron."

"Watch your mouth pup," Kyp said dryly. "I'd teach you a lesson but Mara would rattle chains by my bed for the rest of my life."

"Whatever," Ben said and turned to Valin. "What do you think Val?"

I'm sorry, Valin's not in right now. But if you leave your name, number and a brief message, he might get back with you. Beeeeeep.


shock

shock

love

THAT WAS FREAKING FUNNY AS HECK!!!!!!!!!!1

Now, I'm the one laughing.. laugh


jadesabre75 posted:
He continued to stare as Ben Skywalker waved his hand in front of his eyes. "Master Horn, I think something is wrong with Valin, he's in some kind of trance...or something." Or something is right. hypnotized


*nods* Aye.

jadesabre75 posted:
Just then Wyn Fel, who was walking away from the Imperial shuttle sandwiched between her father and brother, turned and looked directly at the Jedi, motioning in their direction. Jagged bent down and she said something in his ear, he nodded and they started walking towards them.

"You've got to be kriffing kidding me," Ben Skywalker said. "She's coming this way." LMAO!


Don't laugh too hard Missy. You'll have a fourteen year-old boy before too terribly long. I'll give you my sisters number for support class. tongue My nephew...is a legend. tired

jadesabre75 posted:
Katarn's voice was serious as he said, "Durron you will behave yourself understood?" Noted, cataloged and filed. Under yeah right.


laugh LMAO!!!!

jadesabre75 posted:
"Oh, I suppose so Kyle, I'd hate to have to fight you." Kyp shrugged, "Besides, she's entirely too aristocratic for my blood. And if the Fel's are anything, they are stuffy Imperial aristocrats."


"Man, I'm going to get to talk to her," Ben exclaimed as Jysella shot him an annoyed look that related how inmature she thought he was.

It was then that Valin Horn finally spoke, "I'm going to marry her." PMSL!


Do not laugh at Young Horn, Christian. The boy must become a man. happy
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jadesabre75 posted:
Simultaneously, the other five Jedi turned and looked at Valin, but he didn't see them at all. All he could see..all he could reigister was her. He closed his eyes, burning this time and this moment into his consciousness forever. He'd remember it on his death bed he knew..this moment and this place. Man, I'm cracking up reading it again. Too funny.


Really? You thought that was funny? thinking

jadesabre75 posted:
Corran and Jysella looked at each other with confusion and slight concern. That was unlike Valin, he never made such statements of finality, and he always meant what he said and never said anything lightly. Jysella had never seen a look like that on her brothers face before. His jaw was set and his eyes were unflinching and undaunted as he continued to stare, unashamed at the young woman approaching them.

"A wedding?" Kyp asked. "I love wedding's, drinks all around. Good luck, Valin."

Corran elbowed Durron hard and spoke to Valin, "That's quite a statement son, you've never even spoken to her."

"I don't have to. I've known her my whole life." raised_brow


Not literally. tongue Figuratively! laugh

jadesabre75 posted:
Corran was completely flabergasted by Valin's unusual behavior. He shook his head and wondered what the next few moments would hold, what destiny they would shape. He could feel it in the Force, they all could. Something big was fixing to happen.


"It's nice to meet you Jedi Horn."

Valin just stood there. For the life of him, he was unable to speak to Wynssa Fel. She looked at him only for a moment, waiting for an answer to her greeting. When it became clear that she wasn't going to get one, she looked back over them all and said, "It's been nice to meet all of you, and thank you again Master Katarn." And with that she took her brothers arm and they turned to leave. hypnotized


Is that a good thing Chris? worried

jadesabre75 posted:
Kyle bowed, and when they were out of hearing range said rather mockingly, "Gee, Horn that was a hell of a marriage proposal. I must have blinked and missed it." PMSL!


That's Kyle. Have you ever read through the Kyle Katarn thread. I think they closed it down, but it's funny as crap. I could get you a link to it even though it's closed you can still read it. Sean sits and reads through it sometimes, when he's actually home for an evening. happy

Ben and Jys smiled but didn't laugh at Valin because he was obviously so...well, they couldn't quite figure it out.

jadesabre75 posted:
Corran smiled and put his hand on Valin's shoulder, "It's okay son there will be another day to talk to her, I'm sure."

In that moment it was Kyp Durron's voice Valin heard, it was his voice that would knock the boy out of his stupor. "Go after her Valin. Don't let her walk away, you may only get one shot son, take it. It's your chance. Or you may watch her walk away with another man for the rest of your life. Your moment is now, go!"
Ah...the voice of reason. Scary that it's Kyp, but hey. What are you gonna do.


</Corran> Take what you can.
</Kyp> Give nothing back!







jadesabre75 posted:
OMG Piper! This was freaking hilarious! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I loved it!


You're welcome, welcome, welcome, My Dear. hugs

jadesabre75 posted:
Can't wait to see Jag grovel to Jaina though. raised_brow


wink





Chimpo_the_Sith posted:
"I just wanted to say that I'm sorry about your baby Jag, I truly am. Is she recovered?"

"Not fully, no. More children are highly unlikely."


Poor Jaina sad I hope that Force will help her for once and allow her to have a child.


*nods* sad

Chimpo_the_Sith posted:
Soontir gave a sympathetic nod and asked, "I take it you apologized for your outburst? We do not yell at women in this family Jagged. You were raised much better than that."


You tell him Soontir devil


*nods* Old Man Fel is tough.

Chimpo_the_Sith posted:
Jag sighed. Apparently Leia had wasted no time in outing him to his father for his behavior towards Jaina. But he knew he deserved it. "I haven't seen her again, I've been pretty busy."

[quote=Chimpo_the_Sith]: shakes head : Way to go Jag. You sure are a top contender for idiot award of the year angry


*nods* Yes, he has certainly done better.



Chimpo_the_Sith posted:
I can't believe that he first screamed at her, then left with promise to bring her food and did not return to her. Did he even think how it must have hurt her? She almost died, she lost a child and now she probably feels that she lost Jag too.


*nods* Yeah, Jaina is hurting right now...they both are.

Chimpo_the_Sith posted:
Great chapter happy


Thank you Chimpo, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. And thank you so much for the reply! hugs




jacensolofangirl2007 posted:
laugh laugh laugh laugh


blush grin


jacensolofangirl2007 posted:
oh man, I think I'm laughing to hard to type right now. laugh


Awe, I'm happy to make you laugh. hugs

jacensolofangirl2007 posted:
I love Valin, he sooooo cute! tongue Kyp's right boy, Go get her!


Yeah, I really like Valin Horn, and hope to see alot more of him in canon. grin And, yeah, he needed that boost that he got from Durron in that scene.

jacensolofangirl2007 posted:
LOL speaking of Kyp, that guy just gets funnier and funnier with age. laugh laugh . Corren and everyone else was a hoot too though laugh

[quote=jacensolofangirl2007]And I loved what Jags dad said to him about their family not yelling at woman. And I can't believe he hasn't gone to see Jaina yet angry . Your going to lose her again boy if you don't get a move on shame_on_you laugh


worried Let's hope not.

jacensolofangirl2007 posted:
great Chapter!!


Thank you so much and thank you for reading! hugs



Jag4Me posted:
[quote=THE_PIED_PIPER]
</Kick Note> Happy Mothers Day to all the wonderful mothers out there: Tahi, Cyn, Chris, Connie and everyone else! May your children always bring you joy and peace. peace This one is a happy day for our heroes. A day of new destiny and...yes...a little love at first sight. love



Jag4Me posted:
You are so sweet and I feel honored for the mention! I hope all the mom's (and everyone else too) have had a lovely day.


hugs



Jag4Me posted:
[quote=THE_PIED_PIPER]
She looked up at him and gave him the "Organa Glare of Death".


OMG! I love this!! cool


That was a Canadianjedimama, addition. grin

Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

She raised her eyebrow at him, finding another attack vector. "Did you know that Jag is basically running the Empire, Han?"

[quote=THE_PIED_PIPER]
Leia inhaled sharply but said no more. She opened herself to the currents of the Force, surprisingly she felt nothing but peace. She brushed her brothers mind ever so gently and felt his calm reassurance sweep over her as he looked over and winked at her.

In a way, this was as special a day for the two of them as it was for anyone else. Luke Skywalker and Leia Organa-Solo would come face to face with Vader's fist.


I thought this was just sooo cool! applause


Awe, thank you. I wanted to bring a full-circle here with Anakin Skywalker's children. love

Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"The 501st," Leia said softly. She would have known their legendery power, discipline and form anywhere. Some things just never changed. She looked over to her brother who caught her eye and gave a silent nod. She relaxed then, accepting the reality and finality of the moment and knowing that there was no better path for her daughter.

This actually gave me chills...the good kind.


cool

Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Soontir Fel.

I heart him so much! love


No joke. love




Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Right beind him and immediately to his left was his wife Syal. Her long blonde hair and beautiful features had changed even less than her husbands over the years, Luke decided. And giving birth to six children had done nothing to diminish her figure either. Luke felt Wedge's joy explode in the Force as he watched his sister desend the ramp.

The two groups began to walk toward each other, in a moment that was certainly being recorded for galactic history. Finally the two parties met and Syal Fel ran into her sons arms. "Jagged. Oh, Jag," she smiled up at him, "how handsome you look."

Jagged Fel smiled down at her, giving her a kiss on the forehead, "Thank you Mother, I missed you." She squeezed him tightly for a moment and then moved to Wedge to give him the same treatment.


*sigh* I love Jag and his mom. We need more of her..


QFT! No worries, I think the Fel's are getting ready to invade Star Wars. wink

Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Soontir smiled at him and placed a hand on his shoulder, "Jagged." He then grinned, "The beard looks different in person, I think I actually kind of like it."

"Don't say that where Aunt Iella can hear it."

"I already did," Iella Antilles said with a smile on her face. "Hello Soontir. I told Jag what good is being the best looking man in the galaxy if you keep your face covered in hair."

The Baron laughed embracing his sister-in-law and then kissed her on both cheeks, "You look beautiful."


Too funny! laugh Iella and Soontir could be really fun together.


*nods* I think so.

Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

As always, Luke's grief over Mara sang across their bond in the Force to Leia. The last time he had seen Soontir Fel were the days when he and Mara had became engaged. The grief that crossed his face would have been missed by everyone but those who knew him well and it certainly wasn't lost on his twin sister. She gave him a gentle brush of love through the Force and he quickly returned it.

cry Very nice Luke moment...Mara was his soul mate.


I know, I feel so bad for him...sometimes I have to put the book down. sad



Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Fel smiled, shook her hand and gave her a slight bow. "I'm honored to meet you Grand Admiral, but I'm an observer and advisor only. My son will speak for the Empire."


applause


*bows*

Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"No, I need a word with you anyway, son."

Jagged then turned and dismissed the Stormtroopers. All of which saluted him and marched back up the loading ramp of the shuttle except for one. That stormtrooper gave Jag a mock salute and made a somewhat sassy gesture towards him, and then proceeded up the ramp.

Jag and Soontir shot a look to each other and grinned. yeah, back at you Cem, we'll settle it later.


I am so glad Cem showed up! And why do people think the Fel's are so stiff?


Awe I'm glad you liked Cem, and....I have no idea, because they rock! I have theories on it though..check out my latest two posts in the Jag club. tongue

Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"I just wanted to say that I'm sorry about your baby Jag, I truly am. Is she recovered?"

"Not fully, no. More children are highly unlikely."

Soontir gave a sympathetic nod and asked, "I take it you apologized for your outburst? We do not yell at women in this family Jagged. You were raised much better than that."


Nooo, there has to be baby Fel's!! This is cruel...these two have been kept apart for too long. The need some happiness...soon.


*nods* sad



Jag4Me posted:
quote=THE_PIED_PIPER]
Jag sighed. Apparently Leia had wasted no time in outing him to his father for his behavior towards Jaina. But he knew he deserved it. "I haven't seen her again, I've been pretty busy."

"Avoidance doesn't solve problems Jagged, you know that. You will make the time and shortly."


I cannot wait...hope we get to see it soon. praying Jag, listen to daddy Fel.


*smiles*

Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"Would you get a load of that," Kyp Durron said as a low whistle escaped his mouth. "She looks just like her mother did in my dreams as a kid. And I'm not kriffing around."

"Why Kyp," Corran said rather derisively, "Isn't she a little old for you? I thought your dating pool bracket was eighteen to twenty-five."

Durron grinned, "That's not what Mirax says Corran...that's not what Mirax says."


Very funny! These guys are so good together..

I love Kyle, Kyp and Corran. And I love writing them. Kyle, Kyp and Corran = cool devil grin

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Jag4Me posted:
and I like it when Kyp talks dirty. blush


Here just for you, Connie

"We've got a score to settle, you and I. Come and get me monster!" ~Kyp Durron
wink




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Jag4Me posted:
[quote=THE_PIED_PIPER]
"You want to know what I heard?" Ben Skywalker asked just a little too exictedly. His bright blue eyes filled with awe and wonder. Gently he wiped his brow and was about to continue when Jysella rather rudely interupted him.

"Uh, no, but I'm sure you're going to tell us anyway."


Could Jys be a little jealous?? She is a better fit for Ben than certain other folks that are way to old for him...


Yeah, tell me about it. sick sad


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Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"Watch your mouth pup," Kyp said dryly. "I'd teach you a lesson but Mara would rattle chains by my bed for the rest of my life."



This made me want to laugh and cry all at once!! I can actually see Mara doing just that to him too!!


Oh, I have no doubt she would, and probably alot worse.

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Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

"Oh, I suppose so Kyle, I'd hate to have to fight you." Kyp shrugged, "Besides, she's entirely too aristocratic for my blood. And if the Fel's are anything, they are stuffy Imperial aristocrats."


This is what I mean? They are so misunderstood! Or are the other guys just jealous?


On the Fels? I think that the jelousy leads to ignorance, I really do. plain

*shrugs*


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Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

It was then that Valin Horn finally spoke, "I'm going to marry her."

Simultaneously, the other five Jedi turned and looked at Valin, but he didn't see them at all. All he could see..all he could reigister was her. He closed his eyes, burning this time and this moment into his consciousness forever. He'd remember it on his death bed he knew..this moment and this place.


Oh! YES! shock Love it and love the Jedi reactions.


*bows*

Thank you, Connie

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Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

Ben frowned, he hated being called that; especially by such a beautiful woman, but he added, "The Daughter of Fel."



Ben is getting cheeky! I like it...


Ben, is a smart kid.

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Jag4Me posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:

In that moment it was Kyp Durron's voice Valin heard, it was his voice that would knock the boy out of his stupor. "Go after her Valin. Don't let her walk away, you may only get one shot son, take it. It's your chance. Or you may watch her walk away with another man for the rest of your life. Your moment is now, go!"

He closed his eyes as the wind continued to blow over his face. He mustered every ounce of courage left in the universe.

He opened his eyes and again he heard Durron, "The Force hates a coward Valin, go."


Nice Kyp part...he really is a great Jedi and friend.


Agreed and agreed.


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Jag4Me posted:
Can't wait for more!! applause You always do such a nice job and use all my favorites. grin



Thank you Connie, and thank you for reading and the thoughtful reply. hugs



ccp posted:
That was great I'm betting Jag and Jaina's next conversation will be strained to say the least.


wink We'll see.



ccp posted:
Has he had to talk with Vader's true fist yet?


laugh No, Jag is smart enough to avoid Leia when she's in Vader mode.

ccp posted:
Oh poor Valin, it is much harder for us guys than we get credit for.


Oh, I can respect the position. grin And being turned down? Whoa. I'm glad that as a woman, I never never asked a guy out. I would never do it, not in a million years. I figured if they wanted to talk to me....they'ed talk to me.


ccp posted:
Acording to my wife "can I buy you a drink" always worked best with her.


Yep. That's a good one. wink

ccp posted:
Great Chapter.


Thank you ccp, and thank you so much for reading and the reply.


Jedimaster_JainaSolo posted:




You're a fraction the man your father is."
"Funny. That's what I was going to say to you."

-Darth Caedus and Valin Horn, 40 aby


laugh This was like..my favorite line in the books so far...I love it!


NO JOKE! That whole book was freaking awesome from the first to the last word.


Jedimaster_JainaSolo posted:
THE_PIED_PIPER posted:
And also there with the GA Delegation stood Jagged Fel.


Of course, Jag has to be thrown in there