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Mya??? She worked my nerve and I wanted her to leave Jarik be but wow!!!!!!!  She totally doesn't match the profile physically. Hope that doesn't throw the investigative team off too much. Love the Kyp/Jade scene at the front and glad that Karissa and Jarik mended their fences. Now he just needs to tell her he does NOT think of her as a sister LOL!!!!
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Jade_eyes posted:
Mya??? She worked my nerve and I wanted her to leave Jarik be but wow!!!!!!! She totally doesn't match the profile physically. Hope that doesn't throw the investigative team off too much. Remember what Cutter'said'. She was a message. 
Love the Kyp/Jade scene at the front and glad that Karissa and Jarik mended their fences. Now he just needs to tell her he does NOT think of her as a sister LOL!!!!
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He got Mya? Oh well...
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“Is there a particular reason you two are in my classroom? Alone.” He asked, not moving as his eyes darted back and forth between the two of them.
“Um…”Karissa started, but Jarik was faster.
“She just wanted to thank me for the other night by ramming me through with a light saber. We figured it would be less messy in here than out in the hall.”
The silence was profound after Jarik’s statement and both youngsters became uneasy. Jag, simply stood there revealing nothing. Finally, he sighed then started over towards his desk.
“Go do it in Durron’s room. I have class this afternoon and don’t really feel like cleaning up the blood.”
He sat down at his desk and after a few minutes realized they were both still there, staring at him.
 Nice save by Jarik! I knew I liked that boy...like father, like son. 
Jag's come back is perfect Jag - and people say he has no sense of humor? 
Ok - is Jag's classroom in the Jedi Temple? I am confused a bit I guess.  They found the body at the Temple, right? So you would
think that everyone there would be stressing? Or am I ahead of myself?
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Jag4Me posted:
He got Mya? Oh well...PMSL!
Nice save by Jarik! I knew I liked that boy...like father, like son. Yeah, that apple didn't fall far from the tree.
Jag's come back is perfect Jag - and people say he has no sense of humor? Oh he does...just doesn't show it. That would ruin his rep.
Ok - is Jag's classroom in the Jedi Temple? I am confused a bit I guess. They found the body at the Temple, right? So you would think that everyone there would be stressing? Or am I ahead of myself? Yes, Jag still teaches Self-defense classes, so he's still at the temple. Mya's body was found on the temple steps. They general public doesn't know they found Mya yet, so that's why there's no stressing.
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Jag4Me posted:
He got Mya? Oh well...PMSL!
Nice save by Jarik! I knew I liked that boy...like father, like son. Yeah, that apple didn't fall far from the tree.
Jag's come back is perfect Jag - and people say he has no sense of humor? Oh he does...just doesn't show it. That would ruin his rep.
Ok - is Jag's classroom in the Jedi Temple? I am confused a bit I guess. They found the body at the Temple, right? So you would think that everyone there would be stressing? Or am I ahead of myself? Yes, Jag still teaches Self-defense classes, so he's still at the temple. Mya's body was found on the temple steps. They general public doesn't know they found Mya yet, so that's why there's no stressing.
I guess I am sick but I saw it was Mya and it was like it's ok. ack! Did I say that?
Good one about protecting Jag's rep!! I like that!
Thanks for clarifying the whole body and stressing issue.  I'm just a little slow today...too much candy.
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Jag4Me posted:
I guess I am sick but I saw it was Mya and it was like it's ok. ack! Did I say that? LOL Nah. You're good.
Good one about protecting Jag's rep!! I like that! It sounded good.
Thanks for clarifying the whole body and stressing issue. I'm just a little slow today...too much candy.
No biggie. Sometimes I don't explain things very well. I've got the whole story done in my head, but I sometimes forget the reader doesn't know what I know. So please feel free to ask questions if you're confused.
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Apparently it's 2 for 1 day! LOL Don't get too excited.
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Chapter 14
“Galven?”
The middle Durron child raised his head off his desk and frowned at Master Zekk. Looking around he saw that the room was empty except for the two of them.
“Are you ok?” Zekk asked, taking the seat next to him.
“No. I have a monster of a headache.” He said quietly, wincing at the noises filtering in from the hallway. Zekk realized what was happening and closed the door with the force. He didn’t have a class right now, which was a good thing.
“Did I fall asleep?” Galven asked, still lost in the haze of pain.
“I was going to ask you that. You made it about halfway through, then your head went down and didn’t come back up.” Zekk commented, lightly probing the boy. “This isn’t the first headache you’ve had, is it?”
Galven shook his head and took a deep breath.
“Have the others been this bad?”
“No. They usually go away after a few minutes. This one just hit me.”
Sensing that the hallway was now empty, Zekk stood and helped Galven to do the same.
“Come on. Let’s get you down to the infirmary.”
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“She doesn’t fit the profile.” Myri said, the strain evident in her voice. He nodded and all but felt her frustration increase.
“Myr…” Ajani said, hesitating, then reaching out.
“Don’t.” She said, swatting his hand away and walking over towards the window. Ajani’s lips thinned and he rubbed his head unconsciously.
“It’s been three weeks. I said I was sorry and explained my actions. Why are you still mad at me?” He asked quietly, not moving from his spot.
“I’m not mad at you.” Mryi stated, her voice neutral.
“Really?” He asked, sarcasm slipping past his defenses. “Because you could have fooled me. Between the blatant snubs during meetings to the not returning my comm messages and even going so far as to instruct your secretary to tell me yo'ure not here…that tends to tell a man you’re still mad at him.” Her spine stayed ramrod straight and he sighed in defeat.
The silence in the room was deafening before she finally answered.
“I’m not mad at you…anymore.” Myri whispered, wrapping her arms around her. He forced himself to resist the pull of going over to comfort her. More for his benefit than hers, since he found it hard to use his brain when he touched her.
“Then, what’s going on? Why are you pushing me away?” He asked quietly, willing his body to loosen up.
“I’m just scared.” Was her reply. That made him move. He hesitated slightly when he got right next to her, but pushed himself to keep going.
As soon as her head hit his chest, he felt her relax and wind her arms around his waist. Closing his eyes, he practically shouted out his joy at her small act. She’d kept him further than arm’s length for the last three weeks and it had driven him nuts. He had readily acknowledged to her that he made a mistake in attacking Jarik as he had. Numerous apologies had followed, all of them heartfelt, but he had been afraid the damage was done. In grasping for straws, he had touched the one he shouldn’t have even have placed in the pile. All the while he had watched what he had once hoped would be a relationship with Myri slip further and further away from him.
“Why are you scared?” He asked, not sure he wanted to hear the answer, but confident enough he could handle it now that she was in his arms. She was quiet for so long that he thought he was going to have to ask again.
“You know that last time I got any sleep?” She said to his chest, avoiding his question.
“When?”
“Three days ago.”
“You haven’t slept in three days?” He asked incredulously, pulling back to study her face. She had looked tired, but he had been so caught up in trying to solve this stupid case and having his own pity party that he hadn’t really looked at her.
“I got a small nap yesterday, but it was only about 30 minutes.” Her gaze didn’t meet his as she kept it centered on his chest.
“How the sith are you staying awake?”
“Stim pills. Lots of strong caf.” She said giving him a dry laugh. Her voice seeming to get weaker with every answer she gave him and that cemented his decision. Abruptly, he pulled away and walked over to disappear through her door. She was too shocked to say anything or move, so she just stood there, staring after him in surprise. He came back in, his step a little lighter and walked over to grab her bag, throwing it over his shoulder and grabbing her arm gently.
“What are you doing?” She asked, not having the strength to resist him.
“Taking you home. I had the rest of your appointments canceled for today and tomorrow.”
“Ajani!”
“Don’t argue with me, because right now you won’t win.” He told her quietly, but forcefully as he led her past her secretary and down to the lift.
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“I can’t find anything wrong, Master."
“He’s getting unexplained headaches and there’s no residue that someone has been in his head other than his family in passing. There has to be something wrong.” Zekk said quietly, his eyes darting over to where Galven lay on one of the examination tables.
“If there is, it’s not physical.” The young doctor told him. Zekk nodded his thanks and sighed.
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Their trip was quiet as he drove her home, though that wasn’t unusual for them. Myri was so tired she could barely keep her eyes open and that only solidified his actions. He parked the speeder in the garage and she somehow managed to find the strength to get out. Cupping her elbow he led her to the lift and thankfully it only took a minute to get to her floor.
Stopping in front of the door, she reached up to put in her code and he gently shoved her inside.
“Ajani...” she started but he stopped her when they got to her bedroom.
“Not now. Now, you need to sleep. We’ll talk when you get up.” Still moving her towards the bed as he talked. She plopped down and when she laid back on the pillows on her own he reached down to take her shoes off. Pulling the blanket at the end of the bed off, he laid it over her and turned to leave.
“Thank you.” She whispered, but if he answered she never heard him.
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Had he not been around Jaina for over half his life, Jag would have been agitated with the silence of his oldest daughter. Karissa sat next to him in the front seat, her gaze turned to the view outside her window. The twins and Jessa chatted happily in the back seat, seemingly oblivious to what was going on in front of them. He knew it would be a few days before his daughter even acknowledged his existence again, but he knew he could handle it. He’d done it with her mother so many times he was a pro at it by now.
When he pulled the speeder into a space and got out, the children all filed out and the small group made their way to the lift.
Jaina looked up as they walked in and her eyes sought out his. They shared a smile, then Jag frowned slightly as Karissa walked by him and down the hall to her room without a word. Sighing, he took off his jacket and threw it over the back of a chair, then made his way into the kitchen. Jaina followed him, getting dinner out of the cooling unit. She wasn’t cooking, because Jag happened to like his kitchen just like it was. However, she did have the ability to put something already made into the cooker.
“What’s going on between Kissa and Jarik?” Jag asked, sitting down at the table.
“What do you mean?”
“Don’t answer my question with a question, dear.” He joked, kicking his feet up onto the chair across from him.
Jaina sighed and turned around to meet his gaze. “I’m not sure.”
“You’re not sure.”
“No.” She said, walking over to swat his feet down and sit in the chair they had vacated. “If you had asked me that question a month ago I could have told you positively they were best friends.”
“And now?”
“I’m not sure. They seem…different with each other now. It’s nothing huge, just little things. They touch each other a lot more than they used to and I see them trade looks that are…different.”
“You keep saying that.”
“Well, I don’t have a name for it. The biggest thing, is Karissa said she would go to the Senator’s Ball with him. That right there should tell you something is up.” She gave him a puzzled look. “Why are you asking?”
“I walked into my classroom today and they were there together. Alone and standing kinda close. Jarik said that they had chosen that room because Karissa was going to stab him with a lightsaber and they didn’t want to make a mess in the hall.” Jaina giggled and he couldn’t help but smile. They had been a little worried that Karissa would be a basketcase after the attack, but so far she had been ok. As much as could be expected anyhow.
“You think they were doing something else?” She asked, getting back up to put dinner in the cooker.
“No, but I definitely think I interrupted something.”
“Would you have a problem with that?”
“What? Interrupting something?” He asked, but she knew from the tone of his voice he was ribbing her.
“No you numnut, with Jarik and Karissa.”
“Not in 30 years, no.”
“Jagged!”
He chuckled and got up and wrapped his arms around her, resting his chin on her shoulder.
“Yes, I have a problem with that. I have a problem with anyone who wants to date my daughter. Regardless of whether it’s Kyp’s kid or not.”
“But you wouldn’t be as upset if it was Jarik?” She asked quietly.
“No. Jarik’s a good kid and he knows how to deal with her. If he’s crazy enough to want to date her, then that’s his lookout.”
She smacked his forehead lightly and turned in his arms.
“You like him and you know it.”
“That’s not the issue.” He said, leaning down to kiss her nose. When she closed her eyes and smiled, he placed a kiss on her jaw, then moved down.
“Mmm. Jag?”
“Hmm?” He said, as he kissed her neck and settled his hands on her hips.
“The kids are in the other room.”
“Yes they are.” He said quietly, moving his mouth back to her ear. “But you can hear the last three coming from a kilometer away and I doubt that Karissa is going to come out of her room until dinner.” Jag stated, finding the spot behind her ear that drove her insane.
“What, we’re just gonna drop here on the floor?” She joked, her hands roaming across his chest.
“Don’t tempt me, Goddess.”
"That's what I do best."
“You know,” Kyp’s voice said, making them both jump. “I swear I need to keep you two separated.”
“Damn it, Kyp!” Jaina wailed, shooting him a glare. He smiled and leaned against the doorway.
“Now you know how I felt when Jade and I were dating.” He said, not looking the least sorry. “Between you two and Jared it’s a miracle I ever got laid.”
“Did you need something, Durron?” Jag asked, not letting Jaina move away from him when she tried.
“No. Just wanted to come over and interrupt you again.” He said, walking over to sit down at the table.
Jaina glared at him and he just smiled, kicking his feet up on the chair next to him.
“I was just checking to see how Kissa is.” He said, his gaze leaving Jaina’s and darting around the room.
“She’s fine. Still pissed at me, but fine.” Jag said, letting go of his wife finally and moving back over to the table to mirror his friend. Jaina snorted at their poses and shook her head. The topic of discussion chose that moment to walk into the kitchen. She avoided the eyes of everyone in the room and went over to the cooling unit to get a drink.
“Hey Kissa.” Kyp said, a small smile on his face. She didn’t turn around, but she did stop briefly.
“Hi uncle Kyp.” She murmured, then quickly left the room.
He looked at Kyp and grinned. “So, how long did you ground her for?” Kyp asked.
“A month.”
Kyp froze, his face scrunching up in a painful grimace.
“What?” Jaina asked as she joined them at the table.
“Guess that means she won’t be going to the ball.”
“No, she won’t.” Jag said quickly, receiving a glare from his wife.
“She broke the rules and our trust Jaina. She doesn’t deserve to go.” He said defensively, looking to Kyp for help. His friend wasn’t even looking at them. Kyp had turned his head, acting as if the wall was extremely interesting.
“Jag, she already picked out her dress and everything.” Jaina pleaded.
“No.” He said curtly as he got up and left the room. Jaina sighed and turned to Kyp.
“Maybe I can convince him later.” She said slyly causing Kyp to chuckle.
“That’s low, Goddess.” He snarked, but Jaina could still sense his disappointment.
“Will Jarik be upset?”
“I don’t know. Probably, but he’s a big boy. He can handle disappointment.”
Jaina nodded, leaning her head on her arm and turning slightly in her chair to face him.
“So how’s Galven?”
Kyp looked confused. “How should he be?”
“I just thought that after going to the infirmary today…” But she never got to finish her sentence. Kyp bounded out of the chair and towards the door before she could.
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Galven was sitting in his room, playing a video game with Rika when he felt his agitated father outside his room. He didn’t put the game on pause, knowing his dad would come right in and guessing that he knew what the conversation was going to be about.
True to form, Kyp didn’t even knock to enter.
“Honey, can you leave for a minute?” Kyp said quietly, not looking at his daughter.
“Sure dad.” Galven answered, starting to get up.
“Not you, smart ass.” He mumbled, a small grin coming to his face. Rika looked between her brother and her dad, wondering what was going on. Galven smiled at her and she sat her controller down and stood up.
“Ok daddy.” She said quietly, then left.
Galven sat, still facing the paused game and Kyp sat down next to him. They both winced when one of his knees popped. He glanced over at his son and found him fighting a smile.
“Yeah, yeah, yeah. I’m old.” Kyp said, finally getting settled and picking up Rika’s controller. Galven didn’t say anything as he unpaused the game and they started playing. It was an X-wing game and apparently his sister had been kicking Galven’s butt before Kyp had interrupted. After about five minutes, Kyp finally spoke.
“Anything you need to talk about?” He asked, as he shot down his son’s ship for the fifth time.
“Yeah, I can’t fly.”
Kyp laughed and nodded. “You can blame your mother for that.”
“I will.” Galven said through gritted teeth, finally shooting Kyp down.
“Anything else?” Kyp prodded, hearing his son sigh and shoulders slump for a moment.
“I went to the infirmary today.” He whispered, the game forgotten.
“Why?”
“Apparently I passed out in Master Zekk’s class.”
“You passed out?” Kyp questioned, looking at his son confused.
“Yeah. But the doctor didn’t find anything wrong.”
“How long?” He asked, knowing Galven would understand the question.
“Couple months.”
“Last time?”
“This morning?”
Kyp felt his chest constrict painfully.
“What time?” He asked cautiously.
Galven finally turned to look at him. “What time?”
“What time did you get the headache originally?”
“This morning, it was early. The sun hadn’t even come up yet.”
“Sith.” Kyp swore, standing up and starting to pace.
“Dad?” He asked, worry lacing his voice.
“Why didn't you say anything?” Kyp asked, his voice wavering.
“It’s just a headache. I didn’t think it was a big deal.” The young man said, starting to worry.
“Something happened to me this morning, at the same time.” Kyp told his son as he stopped pacing and their gazes met. “I’ve had them for the last couple of months too.”
“What does it mean?” Galven asked, confused.
“I don’t know. But every time I get one, they find a body from the serial killer.” Kyp whispered.
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I love two for one day!!  Don't know how you manage it!
OK - The headaches with Kyp and Galven are spooky. I don't want Kyp and/or his son blamed. 
ROFL over Kyp interrupting the Fel's again. That banter is too darn funny between them.
Jag has to let Kissa go to the Ball! Dang it! Jaina needs to go work on it...hey! PM scene!
Just kidding!!
This is really a fun story and the suspense is awesome!! 
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With Kyp and Galven both getting headaches... makes me think it's a force kinda thing, but no ohter Jedi seem to be getting them....  Glad Ajani got Myri to go get some much needed sleep. Also glad she is not mad at him any more  The Jaina/Jag convo was sweet and fun... very warm and teasing at the same time... they just need to NOT be interrupted so much Though I do know for a fact Kyp gets a charge out of doing it And will Jag make an exception for the ball?? Jaina can be very persuasive--but he might feel once he's stipulated a month he'd better stick to it.
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Jag4Me posted:
I love two for one day!! Don't know how you manage it! LOL Me either.OK - The headaches with Kyp and Galven are spooky. I don't want Kyp and/or his son blamed. *Hands tissue*
ROFL over Kyp interrupting the Fel's again. That banter is too darn funny between them. LOL Yes, Again. They all seem good at doing that to each other.
Jag has to let Kissa go to the Ball! Dang it! Jaina needs to go work on it...hey! PM scene! LMAO! I'm not sure I'm up to a PM scene, but I'll keep it in mind.Just kidding!!
This is really a fun story and the suspense is awesome!!
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
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With Kyp and Galven both getting headaches... makes me think it's a force kinda thing, but no ohter Jedi seem to be getting them.... It's a conundrum.
Glad Ajani got Myri to go get some much needed sleep. Also glad she is not mad at him any more I couldn't let her stay mad at him.
The Jaina/Jag convo was sweet and fun... very warm and teasing at the same time... they just need to NOT be interrupted so much Though I do know for a fact Kyp gets a charge out of doing it Of course. They love to drive each other nuts.
And will Jag make an exception for the ball?? Jaina can be very persuasive--but he might feel once he's stipulated a month he'd better stick to it.
Guess we will have to wait and see.
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Now I'm convinced Kyp and Galven have something to do with Cutter.
I like Ajani. Have you noticed that I tend to totally fall in love with your OC's? 
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Ceillean posted:
Now I'm convinced Kyp and Galven have something to do with Cutter. LOL I can't tell you anything. That would ruin my fun.
I like Ajani. Have you noticed that I tend to totally fall in love with your OC's? I've noticed that. Not that that's a big deal. I love your Nikk. LOL So we're even.
Great update! Thanks!
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RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 14 - updated 6-28
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Great couple of updates!
Seems that everything is interconnected.
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angry_bendu1
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6/29 10:10am
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RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 14 - updated 6-28
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Wow, those were two really great posts!
Galven and Kyp sharing those headaches... very freaky! 
And poor Mya! She might've been a meanie but she sure didn't deserve that. And I wonder who she is supposed to be a message for... just the Jedi in general to show he can get the jump on one or someone more specific?
Good job!
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jadesabre75
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6/29 11:23am
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RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 14 - updated 6-28
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ccp posted:
Great couple of updates! Thanks!
Seems that everything is interconnected.
Yep, moreso than you already know.
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angry_bendu1 posted:
Wow, those were two really great posts! Thank you!
Galven and Kyp sharing those headaches... very freaky! and not good...
And poor Mya! She might've been a meanie but she sure didn't deserve that. And I wonder who she is supposed to be a message for... just the Jedi in general to show he can get the jump on one or someone more specific? That you'll have to wait and find out...
Good job!
Thank you very much!
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