Ceillean posted: Breathe. A picture of her husband floated in the top right hand corner and she felt separated from herself. I am clompletely and uttery speechless. Just like Jade! LOL “I know. He’s not Bela.” This has to be so damned hard on Jade! Having gone through the ordeal with Bela and now this. Yeah, but somehow I think she'll cope. But Kyp didn't do it. Of course not. I won't ruin the story by saying that, cause I'm sure you all know that. I think I've never been this excited over fanfiction before. Please update soon! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssseee. Soon my dear, next chapter is almost done. *sighs* This I had not expected. Never in a thousand years. Now if the victim was telling the truth -- and I'm guessing she was -- why in the world would Cutter pretend to be Kyp? Keep wondering...you got time. I want more. Damn. I thought I was impatient. Great update Sab!
Chimpo_the_Sith posted:Woah!
Jade_eyes posted:Shocker of a twist in the plot!!! That'd be almost like saying Luke did it!!! Almost... Loved how the Durrons pulled together Of course. That's what family is for. It must be someone who LOOKS like Kyp though Speaking of relatives you look like but wish you didn't --too bad they can't pin this on Han's no good cousin LOL
iamobiwan1970 posted:Yep! This one definately gave me an OMG! Here I wa thinkin' it'd be all mush with the ball and the teens falling in love! Foolish me! Now I said I don't kill characters...never said I wouldn't drive them nuts. LOL There will be more mush...here and there. Good job! Thanks!
iamobiwan1970 posted:After I responded to the last chapter I was thinking about this again. And then you wrote how the media was going to treat this. Let's face it, Kyp has a really bad tainted past. The average citizen is going to have an easy time beliving he is guilty. I like how you are writing Jade as stoic and how even Zekk's doing what he can to help.
jadesabre75 posted:“I’m gonna kill Jag.” He told her as he went back to his previous position. “He didn’t give me the code.” She told her friend as she walked closer to the couch and sat down heavily on his stomach. Kyp moved his arm to glare at her and found her smiling at him. “What do you want, Fel?” He asked as he pushed her off him and sat up