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Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 7/15/08 2:53pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 22 - updated 7-14
	Great clues they got--that it's not really a saber and that he's wearing a mask. -----signature----- I dedicate every num yummy love ballad to Mara/Luke as I completely melt Insatiable mush addict ginchy & IJJ: yours especially Certified Squee! maniac
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/15/08 2:58pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 23 - updated 7-15
	ccp posted: Great update! Thanks! I get the feeling Security is trying to use a little misdirection by putting Kyp's name out there. Not sure I'd go that far. Everything will be answered in the next few posts. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Jag4Me posted: jadesabre75 posted: “I’m gonna kill Jag.” He told her as he went back to his previous position. “He didn’t give me the code.” She told her friend as she walked closer to the couch and sat down heavily on his stomach. Kyp moved his arm to glare at her and found her smiling at him. “What do you want, Fel?” He asked as he pushed her off him and sat up I love this part! Jaina is such a great friend, I can see her coming in, sitting on Kyp and then dragging him off to spar. Of course. How many times did he do that when she was moping. That's what friends are for. As always - awesome update! More more more. Thanks! Next one is up! -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! "Writers block is when your characters get tired of everything you do to them and go on strike." Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/15/08 3:05pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 23 - updated 7-15
	star_writer24 posted: Just dropping by to tell you AGAIN how much I LOVE this story. Thanks! The JK/KR Mush is melty and I love it love it love it. LOL I do too. Poor Kyp, I hope you get him out of this mess soon! ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ canadianjedimama posted: Nice little postie we have here! Well thank you, I kinda like it myself. A relaxing read after the clown show that is the ER and Diagnostic Imaging... PMSL! I hate new residents... Yeah, they suck. Seems to me that alot of these next generation children are mouthy. Maybe the Jedi need to invest in a beatin' stick? come on...their parents weren't any different. Loved it! Thanks! Cyn ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Ceillean posted: Myri and Ajani have finally seen the light! Hallelujah! Better late than never. I wonder why Cutter's so obsessed with Karissa? Because she managed to get away? If you still have questions about this after the next two chapters then I can answer them. “Someone should probably question your choice of husbands, Durron.” He sneered and she could feel the hatred coming off of him. “First you marry a slaver then a serial killer. Guess you’re moving up the food chain there.” “I will make sure Master Durron is prosecuted to the full extent. He won’t get away from this scott free like he did last time. And your career in the senate will be over.” He gloated, giving her a leer then turning to walk down the hall. I hope someone hurts him. And no witnesses please. The poor man's been through enough. Even though he was a jerk before. LOL Kyp's holding on quite well. But I think his reputation is now completely ruined. Poor guy. Because now the media will go ahead and dig up everything from his past and they'll use everything against him. I'm not playing that angle. Too much work. LOL So just imagine that. Thanks for the PM. You're very welcome. Great way to start off the morning. I do what I can. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Jade_eyes posted: Myri's scene Jade at the press conference I'm glad there's going to be a third party looking into the findings--then if they've been "adjusted" to make Kyp look guilty that'll come up. Everything shall be answered soon my dear....incedently one of the ladies that I work with was giving me her theory today. I must say she didn't get it. LOL You will all be surprised. He He. -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! "Writers block is when your characters get tired of everything you do to them and go on strike." Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/15/08 3:31pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 23 - updated 7-15
	Guess what...Chapter 24! Why? Cause my Beta freaking rocks!!!!!!! This one's a doozy.... ~Sab ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Chapter 24 Next day… Mid-morning… Luke watched as Kyp fidgeted in his seat. He had sent the information to Myri yesterday that they had turned up while they were looking at the tape. She had told him that the small group that was looking over the information too had confirmed their findings and now they were waiting for NRI to call them and tell them if the charges were going to be dropped. Meanwhile, Kyp was ready to explode and Luke was finding it hard to keep from chuckling at him. “You know it’s gonna be a while before we hear from them.” Kyp told him and Luke simply nodded. “Was there something else you’d rather be doing, Master Durron?” Teased Luke as both men smiled at each other. Corran was across the room and he groaned. “Don’t you two ever get tired of trying to kick each other’s butt’s?” Kyp and Luke turned and their grins deepened. “Nope.” They answered as they stood up and walked into the next room that had Luke’s personal gym in it. Might as well blow off some steam as they waited. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ “Jarik?” Jarik lifted his gaze as he stepped out of his speeder and gave the man before him a puzzled look. “Yes?” He asked, alarms not going off in his head but apprehension blanketing him just the same. Karissa wouldn’t worry if he was a few minutes late picking her up. “I’m sorry, I’m Cutter.” The man told him, extending his hand to shake. Jarik hesitated a brief second then took the man’s hand. “What can I help you with Cutter?” “Actually, Micah sent me.” Jarik’s alarms did go off then. Micah wouldn’t send a total stranger to him unless he had no choice. He still wasn’t getting anything from the man, but his stomach started clenching in anxiety. “Is he ok?” “Yeah, he needs to talk to you. Said it was urgent.” “Why didn’t he just conta…” Whatever Jarik was about to say was cut off as he felt someone come up behind him and grab one of his arms. Before he could react he felt the force ripped from him and something hard hit his head and the blackness swallowed him. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Karissasighed as she sat on the bench. He should be here by now she thought to herself. Jarik was hardly ever late and if he was he always called. Karissa sat forward, her elbows on her knees and her chin resting on her palms as her fingers tapped against her cheek. Lightly she reached out and felt nothing when she tried to contact him. Her skin prickled. That wasn’t right. Jarik never cut her off completely, he was always there in her head somewhere. Standing, she started to walk down the hall towards the entrance. She wasn’t supposed to go anywhere on her own but she had the feeling that something was wrong and she had learned to trust those feelings over the years. Breaking out into the late morning sunlight she scanned the area and saw Jarik’s speeder a little way down the street. Maybe he had a surprise in store for her. That brought a small smile to her face as she walked quickly down the stairs in the direction of his vehicle. When she got closer, she slowed her speed glancing at everything around her. The door to Jarik’s speeder was ajar and her heart skipped. “No.” She whispered, her feet picking up their pace and her hand going to her saber on her belt. Using her weapon, she pushed the door open a little wider and nearly fell to her knees with what she saw. Splatters of blood ran across the driver’s seat and the console. Her hand blindingly groped for her comm. “Obath.” “Micah. I need you.” “Kissa, I don’t think Jarik would be happy to hear that.” “Micah, please. I think something happened to him.” She said, desperation in her voice. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ “I have to go.” Micah told her, leaning down to place a kiss on her forehead. Sari didn’t say anything as he walked towards the door. “Micah.” She croaked and he turned, giving her a confused look. He felt his stomach drop at the look on her face and he was almost afraid to ask. The timing was horrible. “What?” “I’m sorry.” She whispered, tears streaking down her face, but he didn’t move. “Sorry about what?” He managed to get out, dread pooling in his stomach. “I never wanted to help him, but…” His feet moved and took him to stand in front of her. “Help who Sari? Who did you help?” “Cutter.” “Who’s Cutter?” He asked, with more patience than he had known he possessed. “He’s the one who’s been killing those women.” Her voice was so faint that Micah almost didn’t hear her. A flurry of emotions ripped through him and he saw her flinch. Oh yeah, he was broadcasting loud and clear right now. The only thing keeping him from ripping into her was the fact he loved her. “Where did he take him?” He asked, trying to compartmentalize his feelings so he could function. “I don’t know. He didn’t tell me.” “Did he give you any clues?” Micah asked as the logical part of his brain took over since he heart was screaming in protest right now. Grabbing her upper arms he pulled her so that she was standing and shook her slightly. “Think Sari. Where would he have taken Jarik?” Her sobs were audible in the room and he bit his lip before he said something he would regret later. “He and some of his buddies used to hang out down by the warehouses and he always commented that would be a good place to hide. I didn’t think anything of it at first…” Plucking his comm off his belt he called Karissa. “Kissa, head down to the warehouse district. I’ll meet you there.” He didn’t wait for her answer, knowing she would do it without question. His attention was directed back to the young woman in front of him and he sighed. There wasn’t time to deal with this right now. “When we find him, you and I are going to have a talk.” He told her, lifting her chin so that she was looking at him. She nodded at him and he stepped away, backing towards the door. With one last look, he opened the door and bounded out down the hall leaving behind a mess he wasn’t sure he wanted to dig through later. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ He He.... -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! "Writers block is when your characters get tired of everything you do to them and go on strike." Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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angry_bendu1 Registered: Apr '07	Date Posted: 7/15/08 3:43pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 23 - updated 7-15 - Date Edited: 7/15/08 3:50pm (1 edits total) Edited By: angry_bendu1
	Hmm... a mask and funky saber, eh? Wonder how far those clues will go to clear Kyp. He is the go-to scapegoat for stuff like this isn't he, poor guy. At least it proves that the witness shouldn't have been able to definitively ID him. And that curved lightsaber sounds awful Asajj Ventress-y. And Dooku-y. Very confuzzling-y... Why do I get the feeling that Sari is in cahoots w/ Cutter? Great update! EDIT: Shoot! I posted when you posted! Great update, though! I imagine that Kyp and Luke would turn to beating the crud out of wach other in order to clear their heads. Men. And Jarik! Oh noes! I hope that Kissa doesn't fall face first into a trap, because that's sure what it's sounding like! Sari, you bad bad girl! I can't really be fuming mad at her though, because she seems awful torn up about it. I thought her mysterious illness might have something to do with this... Great second update! -----signature----- Ramblings of a Jedi (snarky Jesika's diary- filled w/ romance, sarcasm, etc.): http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28753761/p1/?0 I was staring at the orange juice because it said "concentrate". Proud owner of a '96 Geo Metro. "To the Crapmobile!"
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/15/08 3:43pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 24 - updated 7-15
	Jade_eyes posted: \:D/ Great clues they got--that it's not really a saber and that he's wearing a mask. Why thank you. They needed something to go on. LOL -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! "Writers block is when your characters get tired of everything you do to them and go on strike." Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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Jag4Me Title: C&G and FFC Game Hostess Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 7/15/08 3:59pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 24 - updated 7-15
	Two for one day?! Proof it's not Kyp...like we didn't know, but still!! LOL at Kyp and Corran. He got Jarik?! 3 for one? More more more! -----signature----- The Other Innocent Diva Twin. Master to Qui-Gon_Reborn "Jag- Wicked Temptress of Mandalorians" - adaml83 "Well if anyone could get a Sith in a kilt, I'd place my money on Jag." - Cam
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Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 7/15/08 4:45pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 24 - updated 7-15
	I almost had a cow when I realized That's who's been helping Cutter?!?! Now Jarik's in a really tight jam!!! -----signature----- I dedicate every num yummy love ballad to Mara/Luke as I completely melt Insatiable mush addict ginchy & IJJ: yours especially Certified Squee! maniac
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 7/15/08 5:34pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 24 - updated 7-15
	Oh wow, I was totally not expecting that. -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/15/08 5:48pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 24 - updated 7-15
	And thanks to my wonderful Beta...Sab does a hat trick! Woot! ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Chapter 25 Jarik’s head felt like someone had taken a sledgehammer to it. He reached out to use the force to clear it, when he suddenly felt the emptiness. “Sith. Freaking animals.” He cursed the unseen, force-voiding entities that Cutter must have stashed around him. Jarik swore when this was over he was going to fly to Myrkr and kill every last one of those sithing things. Taking a few deep breaths, he slowly opened his eyes, happy to see that the light wasn’t bright wherever they had dumped him. He slowly moved his head to take in his surroundings and groaned. “What is it with bad guys and kriffing warehouses.” He mumbled as he started to move his limbs to see if anything was broken. Surprisingly, he wasn’t tied up. Whoever had taken him was either an idiot, or had no reason to be afraid of him. Of course without the force he only had this training from Jag to rely on. When he breathed in his chest felt tight, but it didn’t feel like he had broken anything. The sound of voices grabbed his attention and he swung his head to see who it was. Slowly, he kept his eyes on the new arrivals as he stood up to face them. This ought to be interesting. Two men out of the group made their way over to him, but the other three walked over to his left towards a chair and table that were bathed in the light of a bare bulb. The two men coming his way didn’t exactly make him feel very confident. They were built like Wookies and one of them had a grin on his face. Not good. They each grabbed an arm, twisting it back behind him to limit his movements. He didn’t even bother to try and get away from him. It would be stupid to. Plus he was curious to know what was going on. He just hoped it didn’t get him killed. They half carried, half dragged him over towards the others, but didn’t seat him in the chair as he thought they would. He was stopped in front of who he assumed was the host of this little party. “What, no loud music, scantily clad serving girls or flashing lights? Man, someone needs to school you in the finer art of party throwing.” Jarik snarked but no smile came to his face. Cutter simply narrowed his eyes, then punched him in the stomach. Jarik stayed bent over for a few seconds, trying to catch his breath, before one of the behemoths holding him grabbed a handful of his hair and yanked him back up. Schooling his features to hide his pain, Jarik glared at the man in front of him. “Just like your father.” Cutter sneered, running a hand over his own chin. “Arrogant to the last.” “And how the hell do you know what my father is like?” He spat back, wincing as his stomach convulsed one last time before finally settling down. “Oh I know all about the great Kyp Durron. Jedi Master extraordinaire. Miraculously reformed dark sider brought back into the esteemed fold of Grandmaster Luke Skywalker. Expert ruiner of innocent lives.” He added the last part with a sneer. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Her steps moved her quickly up the steps to the second floor of the temple. Jared was practically jogging to keep up with her at this point, but she didn’t care. She had to talk to Kyp. The door was open to Luke’s office and not caring who was inside she walked in. Four sets of eyes looked up in surprise at her entrance, but she only focused on one. Jade practically flung herself into his arms. “What are you doing here?” He asked quietly. “Missed you too dear.” Kyp chuckled, squeezing her tighter. It had been too freaking long since he had gotten to hold her and he wasn’t about to question why she was here. Yet. Luke beat him to the punch anyway. “Jade, you shouldn’t be here. If the police…” She pulled back to look her husband in the eyes and took a deep breath. “Bela has asked to see me.” She whispered, feeling his surprise and anger through their bond. “Why?” “I don’t know. I just received the message from his lawyer. It didn’t give specifics. Just said that he needed to talk to me and very soon.” ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Somehow her steps had brought her to the end of Industrial Row. There was no trail and she was trying very hard to keep her composure right now. She hadn’t felt him in the force in a long time and tried not to think that it could be because he was dead. He couldn’t be dead. She needed him too much. Karissa took a deep breath and centered herself. He was here somewhere, she just needed to find out where. “Think Fel.” She told herself quietly. “Where would someone take him.” She scanned the buildings around her and started to move when her comm twittered. Not taking her eyes off the buildings she reached down and answered it. “Fel.” “Where you at?” Micha’s breathless voice came over the unit. “End of Industrial Row. Where are you?” “Stay there. I’m coming to you.” He said, dropping the call and leaving her frowning at the place where his image had just been. She reached out and felt his presence growing closer to her. The sound of a speeder caught her attention and she turned to see one coming down the deserted street at a rapid pace. Micah stopped the machine in the middle of the road and hopped out. “Have you found anything?” He asked as he finished strapping a second blaster to his thigh. “No. I just got here when you had called.” “I’m assuming you can’t feel him.” He told her as he settled next to her. She could feel the turmoil of his emotions as he tried to keep them it together. He was pretty together for someone whose best friend had been kidnapped by a psycho that they now had a name for but still knew nothing about and who had just been betrayed by the person he loved. Later he would need to talk, but right now they were both focused on getting Jarik back. Karissa shook her head at his question. Closing her eyes, she reached out to the buildings around her. This area was devoid of life. It had been deserted for about 10 years after a stricter set of pollution laws had been enacted and the corporations hadn’t wanted to update their buildings. “One of the victims was found out here.” Micah whispered, not meaning to interrupt her concentration. “That could be good.” She responded, enlarging her search area and finding nothing. “This could be his home turf.” He added. “I can’t even find a kriffing bug here.” She said disgruntled, as she started to cut off her senses. Then she stopped, grabbing Micah’s arm in a painful grip. “What?” “There’s a void.” She said, her arm lifting to point to their right. “Over there, under the building.” ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Jade sat nervously in her living room as she waited for Bela’s call. Seena had taken the children so she could be alone. Jared stood to her left, his arms crossed in front of him. He had insisted on staying while she talked to her former husband and she hadn’t argued. It relaxed her at least a little. Suddenly a chime sounded in the room and she came face to face with the man she had once loved. He had aged quite a bit since the last time she had seen him. His hair was grey now and longer than he’d probably ever worn it. He still had the same chiseled jaw and cold eyes that she at one time had found attractive, but now they didn’t move her. “Bela.” She said simply, keeping her curiosity in check. “You still look exquisite Jade.” He told her quietly, a small smile coming to his face. “Surely you didn’t call me to comment on how well I’ve aged.” “No. Unfortunately I didn’t.” “Then what do you want?” “I had a visitor yesterday.” “And I should care--why?” “An old friend came to see me. He told me a story I think you’ll be very interested in.” ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ “So let me guess.” Jarik said. “My father wronged you somehow. You had family on Carrida?” “No.” Cutter offered, his face betraying nothing. “You had him as a teacher and he yelled at you once?” Jarik said, quickly becoming tired of this game. “He has nothing to teach me, so that would not be the answer either.” “Actually, my dad could teach you a few things about how to treat a woman.” Jarik mumbled, wincing when the two men holding him squeezed his arms further behind his back. “Then what the kriff is your problem?” That earned him two more punches to his gut. Tasting blood, Jarik somehow managed to fight off the haze of pain that was trying to take a hold of him. “My problem is that your father is alive.” Jarik’s gaze shot up, confusion and anger mixed on it. “But that will soon be fixed.” He added, delivering a blow to Jarik’s jaw that drove him backwards into the men holding him. “When he comes for you I can correct the error.” ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ “Who came to see you, Bela?” Jade asked, feeling Jared’s apprehension mix with her own. “Edward.” “He’s still alive?” Jared spoke before he could stop himself. “Yes Obath, he’s still alive. You’re still shadowing senators I see.” “What did he want?” Jade said quickly before the two men started their verbal tirade against each other. “To brag about his protégé.” “His protégé? Bela, what the sith does this have to do with…” “Cutter has been molded by the bastard since he was four years old for one sole purpose in life. Revenge.” ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ As soon as Jarik could get air back in his lungs and see straight, he found a laugh work its way up his chest. “You think you can take my father? You’re crazier than I thought.” He told the man, a slight smile coming to his face. “I’m not planning on taking your father on.” “Then how the frag…” “I plan on trading his life for yours.” Then he laughed. “Well, I should say I did plan on that.” ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ “Cutter?” “Yes, he’s the lovely serial killer that’s been terrorizing Coruscant for the last two years. Twenty-four years old, sandy blonde hair and blue eyes. Quite built from what I understand, if Edward is to be trusted with such mundane facts.” Jade stared at the former senator, confused. “He told you this?” “Volunteered it freely. Like I said, he was here to brag.” “I still don’t understand what this has to do with me.” Bela paused, looking as if he was composing himself for the next revelation. His eyes finally met hers and he swallowed visibly. “He has your son. And he’s going to trade his life for your husband’s.” ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Dun dun dun! And I promise...it gets better. -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! "Writers block is when your characters get tired of everything you do to them and go on strike." Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/15/08 6:09pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 25 - updated 7-15
	angry_bendu1 posted: Hmm... a mask and funky saber, eh? Wonder how far those clues will go to clear Kyp. He is the go-to scapegoat for stuff like this isn't he, poor guy. Yes he is. At least it proves that the witness shouldn't have been able to definitively ID him. And that curved lightsaber sounds awful Asajj Ventress-y. And Dooku-y. Very confuzzling-y... LOL Eh... Why do I get the feeling that Sari is in cahoots w/ Cutter? Great update! Thanks! EDIT: Shoot! I posted when you posted! It's a posting frenzy today! Great update, though! I imagine that Kyp and Luke would turn to beating the crud out of wach other in order to clear their heads. Men. Boys. Pffft. And Jarik! Oh noes! I hope that Kissa doesn't fall face first into a trap, because that's sure what it's sounding like! Uh...She's Jaina's daughter. Nuff said. Sari, you bad bad girl! I can't really be fuming mad at her though, because she seems awful torn up about it. I thought her mysterious illness might have something to do with this... Um... Great second update! Thanks! ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Jag4Me posted: Two for one day?! Proof it's not Kyp...like we didn't know, but still!! LOL at Kyp and Corran. He got Jarik?! 3 for one? More more more! Hat trick! ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Jade_eyes posted: I almost had a cow when I realized That's who's been helping Cutter?!?! Now Jarik's in a really tight jam!!! Oh...it gets so much better. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ ccp posted: Oh wow, I was totally not expecting that. Woot! My work here is done. -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! "Writers block is when your characters get tired of everything you do to them and go on strike." Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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Jag4Me Title: C&G and FFC Game Hostess Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 7/15/08 6:23pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 25 - updated 7-15
	jadesabre75 posted: “He has your son. And he’s going to trade his life for your husband’s.” They cannot kill Jarik. And you can't leave me hanging like this. Hat trick! You know how much I love hockey. -----signature----- The Other Innocent Diva Twin. Master to Qui-Gon_Reborn "Jag- Wicked Temptress of Mandalorians" - adaml83 "Well if anyone could get a Sith in a kilt, I'd place my money on Jag." - Cam
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melino Registered: Apr '08	Date Posted: 7/15/08 6:23pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 25 - updated 7-15
	OMG!!!! 3 posts in one day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Everytime i finish one i think that i couldn't be mre surprised and then.....you surprise me again Excellent work! I'm on the edge of my seat and very worried -----signature----- Jaina and Jag belong together when will Canon get it right? My First fanfic is called "Good Intentions" J/J AU please check it out! http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29561459/p1/?0
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/15/08 6:39pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 25 - updated 7-15
	Jag4Me posted: