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canadianjedimama
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Jan '08
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Date Posted:
7/20 2:04pm
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RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 29 - updated 7-20
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You get to see Batman...*is waaaayyyy jealous*
Nice chapter here Sab!
I'm mad at Sari because she helped frak everything up, but I'm worried and feel sorry for her too!
 The dilemma!
You got Luke bang on here, dear one!
Loved it! 
Cyyn
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jadesabre75
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7/20 5:18pm
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iamobiwan1970 posted:
Busy day for you in writing! I'm glad the Jedi are all expressing sympathy and compassion for Sari. Well, Corran seems his typical resistant, but he always seems to cave in and follow Luke's lead. They wouldn't be Jedi if they didn't care what happened to her. And yes, Corran is predictable.
“I know what she did, but I’ve never turned my back on my students regardless of their actions. The essense of Luke (though it can be argued he abandoned Alema). Yes, this is Luke in a nutshell.
Great stuff!
Thanks!
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Jade_eyes posted:
Great update. Glad there's sympathy for Sari... poor Micah too--her feelings for him are real but they'll have to start from scratch  Wootness for Jarik  
Again, they wouldn't be Jedi if they didn't care. As far as Micah and Sari, even I don't know what I'm doing with them. LOL
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ccp posted:
Another great chapter! Thanks!
I am very anxious to see this all figured out.
We're coming into the homestretch.
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Jag4Me posted:
Wow....so much happening! Excellent chapter Sab! Keep'em coming!
Thanks! Gotta start working on the next one. LOL
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canadianjedimama posted:
You get to see Batman...*is waaaayyyy jealous* Dude...get a sitter and go see the freaking movie! You have to see it in a theater!!!!!! Best Movie EVER!
Nice chapter here Sab! Thanks!
I'm mad at Sari because she helped frak everything up, but I'm worried and feel sorry for her too!
The dilemma! Exactly.
You got Luke bang on here, dear one! Well, he is kinda easy in that respect. LOL
Loved it! Thanks!
Cyyn
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TelannaTani
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I'm glad they're not going to feed Sari to the wolves. It's becoming clearer all the time that she's a victim in this scheme too. I hope she can find some peace - and not in death.
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melino
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7/21 1:56pm
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Just when i thought everyone was ok now that they had rescued Jarik.....I threw in Sari's abduction! Loved the post and i think that Jarik & Kissa are going to be great for each other. I really like how you matured Karissa in the last few postsand Kyp being so emotional was nice to see
Looking forward to more!
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jadesabre75
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7/21 3:24pm
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TelannaTani posted:
I'm glad they're not going to feed Sari to the wolves. It's becoming clearer all the time that she's a victim in this scheme too. I hope she can find some peace - and not in death.
Well if they did feed her to the wolves, they wouldn't be Jedi.
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melino posted:
Just when i thought everyone was ok now that they had rescued Jarik.....I threw in Sari's abduction! Loved the post and i think that Jarik & Kissa are going to be great for each other. I really like how you matured Karissa in the last few postsand Kyp being so emotional was nice to see I'm not sure I want to let go of this fic. LOL I'm gonna have to eventually. I wanted her to mature throughout the fic and I'm glad it worked out well!
Looking forward to more!
Hopefully soon...got lots going on. LOL
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jacensolofangirl2007
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7/22 8:54am
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I'm back!!!
and wow 
just look at how much I've missed! wow, guess I'd better get reading.....lol YAY!
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jadesabre75
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jacensolofangirl2007 posted:
I'm back!!!
and wow
just look at how much I've missed! wow, guess I'd better get reading.....lol YAY!
Yeah baby! I'm so glad you're back! I've freaking missed you!
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NightSword
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Yay! I'm back...and finallly caught up.
I love Jarik and Karissa. They're so cute together!
I'm curious about what's going to happen to Sari...
Can't wait for more!
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Ceillean
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7/26 7:43am
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 I forgot to comment.
I'm glad Jarik is going to be alright. I'm worried about Sari, though.
Poor Micah. 
Will Jarik sit back and wait for Sari to be rescued or is he going to go after her as well?
Great update, Sab,
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jadesabre75
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NightSword posted:
Yay! I'm back...and finallly caught up. Yay!
I love Jarik and Karissa. They're so cute together! Yes they are. LOL
I'm curious about what's going to happen to Sari...me too. I think I have it mapped out...
Can't wait for more!
Hopefully soon.
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Ceillean posted:
I forgot to comment. Sok!
I'm glad Jarik is going to be alright. I'm worried about Sari, though. Sari's fate...coming up soon!
Poor Micah. Yeah, just a little sucky. LOL
Will Jarik sit back and wait for Sari to be rescued or is he going to go after her as well? He's a Durron...anything could happen.
Great update, Sab, Thanks!
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A/N - No, I haven't forgotten about this story. Like Last Name, I hadn't planned on going any further than Jarik's rescue with Sins. So...give me a little time to map out my plan and I promise you'll get some more posts! Thanks guys!
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jadesabre75
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7/28 6:38pm
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Oi! What's this? An update!? Why yes it is. LOL I actually got something written. Glory Hallelujah! It's not long though, so don't get too excited.
Enjoy!
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Chapter 30
Edward paced in front of her as he mumbled to himself. It had been two days since her kidnapping and each day she slipped deeper into herself. While she knew no one would come looking for her, there had been a tiny spark of hope that someone would. That spark had been doused long ago, and at this point she just wanted it to be over. She almost wished Edward would just kill her and get it over with.
“I can’t believe he screwed up a simple plan.” She heard him say though she’d given up long ago even paying attention to him. “Your brother is an idiot.” He threw at her and continued his pacing. Sari snorted.
“Well you would know, being one yourself.” She threw back at him, totally unprepared for the sting on her face. Looking up she saw him standing over her, his face red with anger and she smiled. It was so easy to get to him. If she was going to die anyway, the least she could do was distract Edward until they could find him.
“They’re not coming after me, Edward. Your plan’s not going to work.” She told him, her eyes narrowing as he laughed.
“You underestimate your worth my dear. They’ll come after you.” He replied with conviction.
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He had just finished pulling his tunic over his head when he heard the door swoosh open.
“I’ll be ready to go in a minute.” He said as the shirt slithered down his chest.
“Oh please, take your time. Unless there’s another show later.”
Jarik turned around and gave Karissa a playful look. She stood just inside the door, leaning against the frame. The brown robes she wore may have looked plain on most people, but not on her. He finished rearranging his own robes and leaned back against the medbed.
“I think I could arrange a private viewing later, if you’re up to it.”
“Don’t tempt me, Jarik.” She told him, sass in her voice. “Besides, if we want to make the meeting we have to leave now.” She reminded him, smiling when he rolled his eyes. “I thought you wanted to go?” She asked as he made his way over to her. Leaning down, he kissed her nose and slapped the door controls to open it.
“I do.” He responded as he grabbed her hand and pulled her out the door with him. “Just not looking forward to the confrontation.” She squeezed his hand as they made their way down to Luke’s office. Jarik looked over and smiled at her. His parents had told him about the meeting but had never mentioned him needing to be there.
Without bothering to ring the chime, Karissa opened the door and the two of them stepped in. Jarik’s hand was still firmly in hers and that was probably a good thing. Every eye whipped to them and she felt him raise his shields.
“Jarik, what are you doing here?” Kyp asked, turning towards him.
“I’m here to help.”
“Son…”
“Dad, Sari’s my friend. Regardless of what she’s done I’m not leaving her in enemy hands.”
“But you just got out of the medical ward.” He countered, flinching slightly when Jade touched his arm.
“You can either let me help or I’ll go on my own. Your choice.” The young man told his father as he crossed his arms and waited. Karissa stood next to him and settled her gaze on Kyp. He looked livid, but she could tell he was definitely losing the battle with himself. The master chose not to say anything, instead turning back around to pay attention to the briefing. Jarik fought the smirk on his face as he and Karissa moved to stand towards the back of the group. He glanced briefly past his parents and his gaze connected with Micah’s. There hadn’t been time for the three of them to talk in the last two days. Jarik knew when this was all over they were all going to sit down and have a chat. Force knows they were going to need it.
Luke stood and everyone quieted. The room was full, but not uncomfortably so. Ajani and his team were there, along with Myri. Most of the senior masters and then the three younger adults rounded out the group.
“Now you all know we received a message from Edward yesterday. Detective Panaz and I have been going over the best course of action to retrieve Sari and we think that we’ve found it.” The grandmaster nodded to the detective, who stood and took over the discussion.
“Edward is holed up in an apartment building down on the south side, by the warehouse district. He had freely given us his coordinates, which leads me to believe he’s going to try and ambush whoever goes in.”
“How good is Edward? I mean we already know he’s a little crazy after what he did to Cutter.” Corran asked.
“Edward’s not an idiot. What he lacks in imagination he makes up for in ambition.” Jared offered. “Of course it all depends on who is working with him. He could have hired just grunt men to do what he says for the right price or he could have hired the best. We have no way of knowing.”
“Which is why I’d like to go in with mixed groups. Law enforcement and Jedi together. If he isn’t smart enough to employ force sensitives, then I want all the extra advantages I can get.” Ajani stated.
“Does anyone object to this?” Luke asked, speaking to his people directly. When no one spoke up, he nodded turning back to the detective.
“From what I understand, Sari isn’t that strong of a Jedi, at least not as strong as those in this room. I’m going to assume he doesn’t have any ysalamari, but somehow I don’t think that will bother any of you.” Jarik and Micah shared a glance at Ajani’s statement and both of them sighed. Luke noticed their silent exchange.
“Does that bother you two?” He asked the young men and was surprised at their resulting smiles.
“Nope. We’re just gonna be taking a little vacation to Myrkr after all this is over and wiping those little buggers out.” Jarik offered, garnering a laugh from the room.
“The objective is to take as many people alive as possible. Of course Sari is our main objective, but I don’t want Edward or his thugs to get away or get hurt. Well, just don’t kill them. Hurt is ok.” He amended, earning an elbow in the ribs from Myri. “Whoever gets to Sari first needs to get her out of the building as soon as possible. We’ll put her in a safe house until Edward and Cutter are arraigned.”
“You’re not going to arrest her?” Micah asked, not bothering to hide his surprise.
“Wasn’t planning on it.” Ajani commented, smiling slightly at the shock on most of the room’s faces.
“Why not?” Jared inquired.
“Do you want me to?”
“No…I’m just surprised is all.” The elder Obath commented.
“Look, I’m more concerned about getting her to testify against her brother and Edward when we nail him. If what we’re finding out is true, then she’s as much a victim in this sick game as those women that Cutter killed were.”
Jarik looked over at Micah and found his friend’s gaze directed towards the floor. It had never been easy to read Micah in the force, despite the fact he had no force abilities to speak of. His mom had told him that Jared was the same way, so she wasn’t surprised.
“All right. That’s all I have. Master Skywalker and I have broken you all into two teams. We’ll get you outfitted with some building plans and introduce you to the SWAT team and then we’ll be good to go.”
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Jag4Me
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Date Posted:
7/28 6:42pm
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RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 29 - updated 7-20
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HA! First!
Yay! They are going to send in the calvary again.
jadesabre75 posted:
“Nope. We’re just gonna be taking a little vacation to Myrkr after all this is over and wiping those little buggers out.” Jarik offered, garnering a laugh from the room.
Please! I wish someone would wipe those things out!! 
More, more, more!
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ccp
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Du dun du dun CHARGE!!
Great update!
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canadianjedimama
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7/28 9:00pm
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*hands Sab the butter knife*
Lather up, m'dear. 
So... they're riding to the rescue, are they? Nice.
I think it's lovely that Micah still cares for Sari. Poor girl. Couldn't help being born into a family of ne'er-do-wells and psychopaths.
Can't wait for more!
Cyn
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star_writer24
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Loved the line about the vacation to Myrkr.
Looking forward tomore J/K mush!
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