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Jag4Me Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 7/1 10:07pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 17 - updated 7-1 - Happy Canada Day
	So, will we get to see Jag's reaction to said kissing? Don't know. Haven't started the next chapter yet. Depends on what the muse wants to do. LOL Can she be bribed with chocolate? I do have a question, is there a chance the killer is following her? Or was it really just a nightmare? He's not following her. I can tell you that. Thank you. whew He is creepy enough without that. Geez, this is awesome and I love that Jarik more and more with each update. He is such a good kid!! LOL Yep. He's not too bad. LOL More soon!? Pretty please? LOL Spoiled. Yes. Thank you. -----signature----- "Jag4Me, the queen of the Forum Feud Flirt " - Inty "When facing a desperate situation dress with dash." - Archy McNally Get in here and chat up soundtracks! http://boards.theforce.net/the_amphitheatre/b10382/29017470/p1/?19
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Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 7/2 3:09am Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 17 - updated 7-1 - Happy Canada Day
	Oh, SQUEE!!! That was delicious!!! So sweet and tender. -----signature----- Whee!! I'm reading 10 drabble threads! Loving it too! Check out ginchy's gambit, Myriad's 10,000 words, path-seeker's kaleidoscope. "Take my Hand", "Tyranny Reborn"= sheer genius.
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canadianjedimama Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 7/2 8:19am Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 17 - updated 7-1 - Happy Canada Day
	And the resident Canadian is here, a day late but never a dollar short... I've just done a quick read through and I usually leave my replies till at least the second, but I wanted to post a quick note to say I'm loving this. And yes, I want to know how the Sith you get this done so frickin' fast. is way jealous BTW, Hubby and Darth Toddler loved the card. Thanks Dear One. Cyn -----signature----- Lucky member of the Jagateers, my e-sister's of Jag-love! "I like Princess Leia, but that's different Star Wars." Baby Girl on CW Proud co-corrupter of Flowerlady to Twilight... I Wobbler...
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/2 8:23pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 17 - updated 7-1 - Happy Canada Day
	Jag4Me posted: Can she be bribed with chocolate? Nummy... Dark is my favorite. Thank you. whew He is creepy enough without that. LOL Not sure how that is a relief. LOL More soon!? Pretty please? LOL Spoiled.[/i] I'm working on it now dear. Hopefully soon, but no guarantees. Yes. Thank you. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Jade_eyes posted: Oh, SQUEE!!! That was delicious!!! So sweet and tender. Thank you. It was soooo much fun to write too. LOL ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ canadianjedimama posted: And the resident Canadian is here, a day late but never a dollar short... Woot! I've just done a quick read through and I usually leave my replies till at least the second, but I wanted to post a quick note to say I'm loving this. And yes, I want to know how the Sith you get this done so frickin' fast. Yay! Glad you're liking it. I know you're busy, don't worry about not being able to post a reply to every chapter. Um...I just write when I get an idea. Can't explain it. is way jealous Jealousy is of the dark side... BTW, Hubby and Darth Toddler loved the card. Thanks Dear One. Yay! It's Hoops and Yo-Yo! A rock would laugh at those two. I'm glad the fam liked it. -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! 9-19-08 - Best Bloody Day of the Year! Savvy? - http://www.limestrong.com/ Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/3 4:07pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 17 - updated 7-1 - Happy Canada Day
	Hola everyone! Guess the muse wasn't quite done. Here's the next chapter. Kinda short but here nonetheless. Enjoy! ~Sab ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~! Chapter 18 ~~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Corran was leaning against the shuttle scanning the area around him when he felt them. A smile split his face and he snorted. He didn’t move as the two students got closer; he simply stood there and smiled. They were wading through some waist deep weeds when his brow crinkled. They’re holding hands! He suddenly realized. Interesting. He knew they were close friends, but maybe they were closer than everyone thought. Not that he had an issue with it. They were both good kids and well grounded. And they were adults, or at least close enough. He didn’t envy Jarik though. Having to go through Jag was not going to be fun. Their hands dropped back down to their sides as they exited the weeds and they smiled when they saw him. “Why am I not surprised you two are here first and are together?” He told them when they got close enough. “Just lucky I suppose.” Jarik responded, glancing over at Karissa. “Well hop in and I’ll run you two up to the Falcon.” “Grandpa’s here?” Karissa said excitedly, her previous . “Yep.” Corran told her, laughing at her enthusiasm. “He was in the neighborhood and Luke asked him to stop by and see if anyone needed picking up.” He and Jarik both watched as she ran towards the other side of the shuttle before he had even finished speaking. The older man turned back to the other and raised an eyebrow. “Everything went ok?” He asked, trying not to laugh when Jarik sighed. “Yeah. She had a little accident, but everything is fine.” He replied, wondering if Corran was fishing for something. “She’s Jaina’s daughter. There’ll always be trouble running into her. Best get used to it son.” He said, clapping Jarik on the back and starting his own trek towards the ramp. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ The airlock closed with a hiss and Han barely had time to brace himself before his granddaughter launched herself at him. Laughing as they fell into a wall behind him, he squeezed her tight and placed a kiss on her head. “Hey squirt.” He told her, then looked up to nod at Jarik. Jarik returned the gesture, then moved past the pair to stow their bags further back in the ship. The distinct sound of Corran’s shuttle separating came to them as they started their walk down to the cockpit. “Were you really just in the neighborhood, or did Uncle Luke send you after us?” Karissa asked as they entered one of her favorite places in the universe. She sat down opposite Han as he retracted the short bridge they had used to get on the ship. “Yes and yes.” He replied, shooting her a Solo grin. “I’m on my way to Coruscant to pick some things up and he asked me to swing by. I’m willing to bet he had a feeling you two were done already.” “Are you going to stay for a while?” She asked. Han and Leia didn’t get to Coruscant near as much as they wanted, but no one could blame them. They had made their home on Ossus with Luke and were content to let the world go by without them. “I’m staying for a couple days. Have to get some stuff back to Luke.” Jarik came in and occupied the seat behind Han, not saying a word. The aging Corellian flipped a few switches and they were headed back home. “So,” Han started, turning his chair around once they had entered hyperspace to look at both of them. “Should I assume you two both kicked butt?” Karissa laughed and nodded. “I think we’ll get a passing grade.” She responded, glancing at Jarik and winking. The only reason she would get a passing grade was because of Jarik. If he hadn’t found her, she probably would have had to quit. She fell into comfortable banter with her grandfather and in no time they were back on Coruscant. Jarik had remained silent, except for a few answers to simple questions from Han. As they touched down in the private Jedi hangar, she reached out through their bond and felt his reassuring touch. A smile formed on her face as he stood up to walk back and get their bags, not realizing Han had noticed. He filed the information away for later and they both walked through, shutting the Falcon down. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Luke took his time getting to the hangar. He knew that the Fel’s and Durron’s were both probably already there and it would take the better part of half an hour for them to welcome their children back. Chuckling to himself, he turned a corner and saw Ben walking towards him. So engrossed in his thoughts, Ben almost passed by his father without saying anything. Luke stopped and turned to watch his son walk a few steps past him then stop. He turned around and gave Luke an apologetic smile. “Sorry, dad.” “What’s occupying your mind so fully?” The older Skywalker asked as his son backtracked to join him in his journey to the hangar. “Just thinking about the tapes we turned over to Intelligence.” “Ok. What about them?” Ben sighed and shook his head. “I don’t know. Something feels weird about the whole thing. Like there’s something we’re missing.” He said, frustration seeping from his force presence. “Myri was quite clear in their theory.” “Yeah, they suspect one of us. But no one walks around in a cape anymore. Kyp used to, but that was so long ago I don’t even remember it. I just remember Uncle Han saying it when he was trying to embarrass him.” “We just need to keep our eyes and ears open. It might not be a Jedi.” “I know. Constant vigilance.” Ben joked, as they reached the hangar finally. As he had predicted both families were there to welcome their children back. Even the Obath’s were there and he couldn’t say that surprised him. Jared had become a good friend to the Fels over the years as well as the Durron’s. Sari would have been there, but she was currently serving detention for her own deception that happened the night Karissa was attacked. He hated her missing out on this, but knew he had to be tough due to the seriousness of the situation. Karissa and Jarik looked none the worse for wear and though slightly tired, seemed to be in good spirits. He walked over to the edge of the crowd and waited his turn to talk to the youngsters. After a few minutes, Jaina realized he was there and gifted him with a huge grin. Told you. He mouthed to her and was rewarded with a not-so-nice face from his niece. The two future Knights finally faced him and he couldn’t help but feel very proud of both of them. It made his urge to put them on the same shuttle settle that much more with him. The noise of the group died down and Luke waited until he had their attention before he spoke. “I take it you two had no problems.” Luke said, a grin plastered on his face. They glanced at each other and smiled. “Nothing we couldn’t handle.” Karissa told him, matching his grin. “I’d say this calls for a celebration.” Han announced. “Dinner at the very least.” Everyone concurred and the small group started towards the entrance. Micah fell into step beside Jarik and the two young men fell back to the rear of the group with no opposition. “What happened?” Micah asked, not wanting to waste time with small talk. “With what?” “Don’t give me that. You two are different.” Jarik laughed, momentarily garnering the attention of everyone. He waited until they were distracted again and smiled at his friend. “Let’s just say that things have changed.” Jarik offered as they crossed the street. “In a good way, I assume.” “Oh yeah. It’s definitely way past good.” ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ A few hours later, Jarik was definitely not a happy man. He felt a migraine threatening and he wanted nothing more than to go home and fall into bed. Well, actually that wasn’t true. He’d rather just be somewhere with Karissa…alone preferably. Fatigue was starting to catch up with him. Force knew sleeping on the ground didn’t do wonders for anyone. Couple that with the fact he was trying to not look at Karissa and he was waiting for his head to explode... Jag had thrown him more than one glance since they had arrived at the restaurant, making him uneasy. He closed his eyes, rubbing his temples when suddenly he felt a hand rub his back. Smiling, he took a deep breath, then leaned over to put his head on his mom’s shoulder. Of course she knew something was wrong, she always did. “You ok?” She asked, still rubbing his back. “Yeah. Just tired.” He responded, feeling Karissa brush him through the force lightly. Sighing, he reached back and let her know he was fine. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Two Hours Later… Karissa fell face down on her bed, the air from her lungs leaving with a loud swoosh. She was bone tired and could fall asleep now, but apparently someone else had other ideas. Her comm twittered annoyingly, tempting her to throw it against the wall. Instead she answered it. “So, how did it go?” Her friend's voice came over the line. Karissa chuckled. “Hi Sari. It went good.” She mumbled, her head moved to the side so she could actually be heard. “Just good? I’m assuming you passed since you’re back already.” “Yep. Thanks to Jarik.” “Uh oh. What happened?” Karissa launched into the story, telling Sari everything. By the end the younger girl had a wistful smile on her face and Karissa couldn’t help but laugh. “That’s so astral Kissa! I’m so happy for you guys.” “Yeah, well don’t say anything.” “What?” Sari said, disbelievingly. “Don’t say anything to anybody. I’m not ready to tell my parents yet.” “Oh. Ok. When are you going to tell them?” “Never if I have a choice.” Karissa snarked. “Come on, your dad won’t be that bad.” This garnered a snort from Karissa. “Yeah right. You do remember who my father is, don’t you? Jagged Fel. Mr. Badass himself.” Sari giggled and Karissa felt a smile come to her face. “I don’t wanna talk about that right now. Anything exciting happen while I was gone?” “Maybe…” Sari responded, trailing off with a grin on her face. This got her attention. Karissa sat up, her former exhaustion fading. “Tell me.” “Micah and I just might be dating now.” “Bout freaking time.” Karissa told her friend. “I was starting to think you two were never going to get together.” “Yeah, me too. But he asked me the day you guys left.” “And of course you said yes.” “Of course.” Sari said, then turned her head when a voice caught her attention. “Sorry Kissa. I have to go. Detention calls.” “Have fun.” Karissa told her sympathetically. “Something like that.” Sari said, then cut the connection. Her head fell back to the bed, then a knock sounded on her door. Groaning, she umbled some curses under her breath that her father would be ashamed to hear come out of her mouth and got up to answer the offending person. When the door slid open, Jarik and Micah both stood there solemn looks on their faces. “What’s wrong?” She asked, her senses sharpening. Jarik gave her a weak smile as he and Micah walked into the room. “Since when did my room become the meeting place?” She joked as the boys made themselves comfortable on her bed. “There was an attack while we were gone.” Jarik told her quietly, pursing his lips when her shock hit him. “It was around the same time as your dream.” Karissa felt her breath catch and her knees weaken a little. Both boys stood up to grab her just in case. Squeezing her eyes shut, she tried to block the images from assaulting her. It had been so real, so frightening. Taking a deep breath, she regained her composure and waved them off. Her feet started a trek across her room, adopting Jarik’s habit of pacing suddenly. “What happened?” She asked after a few minutes. She was sufficiently calm to hear the story now. “Well, he went back to his original gig. It was a petite brunette again, with only one difference. She’s not dead.” Her head shot up, her eyes as wide as the fabled Deathstar her grandparents had destroyed long ago. “Alive?” She asked shakily. “Yeah. They think that he was interrupted for some reason and never got a chance to decapitate her. He choked her and she passed out, but he left her there. Someone found her a few hours later, still passed out and horribly beaten, but alive.” She felt a hand on her back, halting her swirling thoughts. When she looked up Jarik was standing next to her, a worried expression on his face. “So my dream wasn’t just a dream.” She whispered. “It’s possible it was a little of both.” Jarik told her. “You could have been feeling his ‘urges’ at that time and just transferred them to your current surroundings.” “Maybe. But why would I pick up on his feelings all of a sudden? That didn’t happen with any of the other attacks.” Jarik looked over at Micah, which caused her eyes to dart back and forth between the two. “What?” She asked, feeling their hesitation. “Micah has a theory.” Jarik offered, moving away from her to look out the window. The younger boy cleared his throat and ran his palms down his thighs. She wasn’t used to seeing Micah nervous and it didn’t sit well with her. “I think he might be obsessed with you. It’s just a theory and I don’t think he started out like that. I just think it’s evolved into an obsession with you. You fit his profile, but you were the only one he didn’t kill, until the last victim. You haven’t felt anyone fixating on you lately, have you?” He asked, hoping against hope she said no. “At dinner tonight. I felt like someone was watching me. I’ve felt it a few other times, though not as intense. I just dismissed it as the normal 'oh my gosh, there’s Fel’s daughter’ type of thing.” She glanced over to Jarik as she finished talking and saw his back stiffen. “It’s probably a good idea that you don’t go anywhere alone Kissa.” Micah told her, wincing when her head snapped around and she glared at him. “Look, I know you hate that but the alternative is not something I want to think about. I’d rather you be mad at us than dead.” He paused and smiled slyly. “Plus, I would think you won’t complain too much considering recent developments.” Her eyebrow rose at his jest and she grinned mischievously herself. “I could say the same to you.” She snarked, laughing when a slight blush broke out on his cheeks. It wasn’t often she got to rattle Micah and she loved it. Her smile faded slightly and she sighed, sitting down on her bed. “Has she said anything?” “No. She’s unconscious. They’re not sure if she’s going to wake up or not. Luke sent over a couple of healers to see if maybe they could help. There was some head trauma, but again they won’t know how bad the damage is unless she wakes up.” “Apparently, aunt Myri is hoping she’ll be able to give a description if she does.” Jarik interceded, not turning around. “That would help.” Karissa said, thoughts starting to swirl in her head again. “Well, it’s late. I’m gonna go and let you get some rest.” Micah told her, coming over to plant a kiss on her forehead. “Make sure you get some sleep.” He joked, jumping back when her hand reached out to smack him. Micah winked at her, cast a glance at Jarik, then left. She sat there for a moment, thinking, then stood and walked over to Jarik. His walls were shored up when she reached out to him, confirming that he was extremely worried as she had guessed. Her arms wrapped around his waist and she rested her head on his back, feeling him relax slightly. Jarik laid his hands over her forearms and sighed deeply. “Stop worrying.” She told him, sending a slight burst of annoyance through their bond. He chuckled and she smiled as the sound echoed through his chest. “I can’t. I’m a Durron.” “Well try.” Jarik turned, forcing her to loosen her hold on him and reached up to trail his fingers down her cheek. She turned her face into his touch and wondered how she had lived without this before now. It had been less than a day since they had admitted their feelings and she didn’t think she had ever felt more content. His breath whispered across her cheek and when she turned to face him he captured her lips in a gentle kiss. The urge to deepen the kiss and ask for more from her was strong, but he tampered it down as he remembered where they were. And who was in the next room. When he pulled back, her face was still turned up and there was a blissful look on her face. His anxiety eased just a little more at the sight. “I don’t think I’m ever going to get tired of that.” She whispered, her eyes opening and the smile on her face deepening. Jarik laughed and kiss the tip of her nose. “I’m gonna remind you of those uttered words the next time you get mad at me.” He told her, pulling her close again. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ He had seen the looks that Durron brat had been stealing of her all night. Anger coursed through his veins and he bit his lip to keep from voicing his frustration. The coppery taste of blood permeated his mouth and he groaned as the comforting tang settled in. The old man had not been happy at his screw up, but he wasn’t worried. Everything was going according to plan, it was just going to happen sooner than the slime bucket had wanted. His eyes flicked to the holos that littered one side of the wall. He felt his body tighten and a rush of pleasure shoot through his system. Nothing like a change of plans to keep him on his toes. He would still possess her, but it would be different than his original plan. Cutter wanted more than her soul now. He wanted everything. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ If that didn't creep you out about Cutter some more, then we need to have a chat... -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! 9-19-08 - Best Bloody Day of the Year! Savvy? - http://www.limestrong.com/ Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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iamobiwan1970 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 7/3 4:18pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 18 - updated 7-2
	Oh Cutter is plenty creepy! But I thought he hated Jaina? Doesn't matter, still dangerous and in need of death! Jagged Fel. Mr. Badass himself Like the imagery! Those kids are doomed. How will they date with Jedi paretns around, no privacy! No sneaking around. You gave Jarik a headache. Is this like what his brother and father are experiencing? Cool update! -----signature----- Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there, with open arms and open eyes.
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Ceillean Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 7/3 4:29pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 18 - updated 7-2 - Date Edited: 7/3 4:30pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Ceillean
	“I know. Constant vigilance.” Ben joked, as they reached the hangar finally. This seemed soooo familiar and it took me a moment but "Constant Vigilance" sounds a whole lot like Professor Moody. If that didn't creep you out about Cutter some more, then we need to have a chat... Creepy doesn't even cut it. Who is this guy? And he has a boss? Interesting. I loved the normal teenagers scenes. And Jariks "fear" of Jag. But Jaggie's not dumb, I bet he knows or at least suspects. And Jarik's headache? Like his Dad and his little brother? Great update! -----signature----- I'm having trouble dealing with the fact that Kyp Durron is a fictional character Stress -- The reaction created when the mind overrides the body's desire to choke the living sh** out of somebody who desperately needs it http://ceillean.blogspot.com/
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Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 7/3 5:28pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 18 - updated 7-2
	Hee!!! Han and Corran do not miss a thing!!! Hope this latest victim survives so they can get some first hand information--it's always great when the perp thinks the last victim didn't make it so they get sloppy or careless and their would-be victim helps set a trap--yes LOL I like watching "crime" dramas Jarik and Karissa are fit to bust with joy aren't they? -----signature----- Whee!! I'm reading 10 drabble threads! Loving it too! Check out ginchy's gambit, Myriad's 10,000 words, path-seeker's kaleidoscope. "Take my Hand", "Tyranny Reborn"= sheer genius.
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melino Registered: Apr '08	Date Posted: 7/3 5:55pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 18 - updated 7-2
	Loved the last couple of posts and you will NEVER see me complain about that! I'm so happay that Jaik and Karissa finally admitted their feelings for each other...it definatly makes for good reading! Todays post though i think was my favorite “She’s Jaina’s daughter. There’ll always be trouble running into her. Best get used to it son.” SO TRUE!!!!! “I know. Constant vigilance[/i[i]].” Ben joked, as they reached the hangar finally. “What happened?” Micah asked, not wanting to waste time with small talk. “With what?” “Don’t give me that. You two are different.” Jarik laughed, momentarily garnering the attention of everyone. He waited until they were distracted again and smiled at his friend. “Let’s just say that things have changed.” Jarik offered as they crossed the street. “In a good way, I assume.” “Oh yeah. It’s definitely way past good.” So typical of guys lol nice interaction! “What?” Sari said, disbelievingly. “Don’t say anything to anybody. I’m not ready to tell my parents yet.” “Oh. Ok. When are you going to tell them?” “Never if I have a choice.” Karissa snarked. “Come on, your dad won’t be that bad.” This garnered a snort from Karissa. “Yeah right. You do remember who my father is, don’t you? Jagged Fel. Mr. Badass himself.” Best conversation of this chapter by far!!! and the last line is so perfect!!! “There was an attack while we were gone.” Jarik told her quietly, pursing his lips when her shock hit him. “It was around the same time as your dream.” Creepy His eyes flicked to the holos that littered one side of the wall. He felt his body tighten and a rush of pleasure shoot through his system. Nothing like a change of plans to keep him on his toes. He would still possess her, but it would be different than his original plan. Cutter wanted more than her soul now. He wanted everything. I do not like this part because it makes me think that Micah is right and Cutter is obsessed with Karissa...not a good thing and way to freaky! Definatly leaves me unsettled... Great post and i can't wait for more!
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/3 7:09pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 18 - updated 7-2
	iamobiwan1970 posted: Oh Cutter is plenty creepy! But I thought he hated Jaina? Doesn't matter, still dangerous and in need of death! No, he doesn't hate Jaina. He's kinda using her and Karissa as an end to a means. It will be clear later. Jagged Fel. Mr. Badass himself Like the imagery! I had to put that in there. Those kids are doomed. How will they date with Jedi paretns around, no privacy! No sneaking around. Either that or they are going to be spending a lot of time at Jarik's. LOL You gave Jarik a headache. Is this like what his brother and father are experiencing? No, I realize now that probably made things more confusing. This was just a normal headache. Cool update! Thanks! ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Ceillean posted: “I know. Constant vigilance.” Ben joked, as they reached the hangar finally. This seemed soooo familiar and it took me a moment but "Constant Vigilance" sounds a whole lot like Professor Moody. I can't remember what it's from. I don't know if it's HP or something else. I just happend to remember it and it fit. LOL If that didn't creep you out about Cutter some more, then we need to have a chat... Creepy doesn't even cut it. Who is this guy? He's bad news....you won't find out everything until the end. And he has a boss? Interesting. Maybe... I loved the normal teenagers scenes. And Jariks "fear" of Jag. Well, he grew up with Jag and knows he's a good guy, but you also have to guess he's seen his 'uncle' mad. But Jaggie's not dumb, I bet he knows or at least suspects. Considering he's already asked Jaina about it, yeah, I think he knows something. And Jarik's headache? Like his Dad and his little brother? Again, my bad. Nothing fancy there, just a real headache. LOL Great update! Thanks! ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Jade_eyes posted: Hee!!! Han and Corran do not miss a thing!!! Hell no. They remember what it's like to be a teenage boy. LOL Hope this latest victim survives so they can get some first hand information--it's always great when the perp thinks the last victim didn't make it so they get sloppy or careless and their would-be victim helps set a trap--yes LOL I like watching "crime" dramas That should be coming up soon. I started writing the end today. Mwaaaaahhhhhh! Sorry. I'm done. Jarik and Karissa are fit to bust with joy aren't they? Oh yeah. To be young and in love... Welcome to the Jagateer's by the way. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ melino posted: Loved the last couple of posts and you will NEVER see me complain about that! I don't think I've had anyone complain yet. LOL I'm so glad you've enjoyed the last couple posts. Lots still to happen. I'm so happay that Jaik and Karissa finally admitted their feelings for each other...it definatly makes for good reading! Todays post though i think was my favorite Thanks. I've been in a mushy mood lately. Not that I'm complaining. “She’s Jaina’s daughter. There’ll always be trouble running into her. Best get used to it son.” SO TRUE!!!!! These apples didn't fall far from the trees, that's for sure. “I know. Constant vigilance[/i[i]].” Ben joked, as they reached the hangar finally. So typical of guys lol nice interaction! Thanks! “Yeah right. You do remember who my father is, don’t you? Jagged Fel. Mr. Badass himself.” Best conversation of this chapter by far!!! and the last line is so perfect!!! Well, I worked the Imperial Red Swim Trunks into the last story...had to work the badassedness of Jag into this one. “There was an attack while we were gone.” Jarik told her quietly, pursing his lips when her shock hit him. “It was around the same time as your dream.” Creepy Yeah, just a tad. His eyes flicked to the holos that littered one side of the wall. He felt his body tighten and a rush of pleasure shoot through his system. Nothing like a change of plans to keep him on his toes. He would still possess her, but it would be different than his original plan. Cutter wanted more than her soul now. He wanted everything. I do not like this part because it makes me think that Micah is right and Cutter is obsessed with Karissa...not a good thing and way to freaky! Definatly leaves me unsettled...It ain't gonna get any better, I can tell you that. Great post and i can't wait for more! Thanks! Hopefully I should have the next post done soon! -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! 9-19-08 - Best Bloody Day of the Year! Savvy? - http://www.limestrong.com/ Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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Jag4Me Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 7/3 9:07pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 18 - updated 7-2
	jadesabre75 posted: “Well hop in and I’ll run you two up to the Falcon.” “Grandpa’s here?” Karissa said excitedly, her previous . Wooo Hooo!! Love it!! jadesabre75 posted: “She’s Jaina’s daughter. There’ll always be trouble running into her. Best get used to it son.” He said, clapping Jarik on the back and starting his own trek towards the ramp. Ain't that the truth! jadesabre75 posted: Jarik had remained silent, except for a few answers to simple questions from Han. As they touched down in the private Jedi hangar, she reached out through their bond and felt his reassuring touch. A smile formed on her face as he stood up to walk back and get their bags, not realizing Han had noticed. He filed the information away for later and they both walked through, shutting the Falcon down. Corran and Han are now on to them. jadesabre75 posted: “I know. Constant vigilance.” Ben joked, as they reached the hangar finally. What the heck? When did Professor Moody start teaching at the Jedi Temple? jadesabre75 posted: "Yeah right. You do remember who my father is, don’t you? Jagged Fel. Mr. Badass himself.” ROFL!! Excellent way to tuck that in!! jadesabre75 posted: He had seen the looks that Durron brat had been stealing of her all night. Anger coursed through his veins and he bit his lip to keep from voicing his frustration. The coppery taste of blood permeated his mouth and he groaned as the comforting tang settled in. The old man had not been happy at his screw up, but he wasn’t worried. Everything was going according to plan, it was just going to happen sooner than the slime bucket had wanted. His eyes flicked to the holos that littered one side of the wall. He felt his body tighten and a rush of pleasure shoot through his system. Nothing like a change of plans to keep him on his toes. He would still possess her, but it would be different than his original plan. Cutter wanted more than her soul now. He wanted everything. Sab, you are so good at this disturbing stuff! He creeps me out. Incredible update - as always! -----signature----- "Jag4Me, the queen of the Forum Feud Flirt " - Inty "When facing a desperate situation dress with dash." - Archy McNally Get in here and chat up soundtracks! http://boards.theforce.net/the_amphitheatre/b10382/29017470/p1/?19
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/3 9:36pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 18 - updated 7-2
	Jag4Me posted: jadesabre75 posted: “Well hop in and I’ll run you two up to the Falcon.” “Grandpa’s here?” Karissa said excitedly, her previous . Wooo Hooo!! Love it!! No reason, just felt the need to have Han in there. To show he's still alive and kicking. LOL jadesabre75 posted: “She’s Jaina’s daughter. There’ll always be trouble running into her. Best get used to it son.” He said, clapping Jarik on the back and starting his own trek towards the ramp. Ain't that the truth! This seems to be the general concensus. LOL jadesabre75 posted: Jarik had remained silent, except for a few answers to simple questions from Han. As they touched down in the private Jedi hangar, she reached out through their bond and felt his reassuring touch. A smile formed on her face as he stood up to walk back and get their bags, not realizing Han had noticed. He filed the information away for later and they both walked through, shutting the Falcon down. Corran and Han are now on to them. Not necessarily a bad thing. jadesabre75 posted: “I know. Constant vigilance.” Ben joked, as they reached the hangar finally. What the heck? When did Professor Moody start teaching at the Jedi Temple? It just felt right. LOL jadesabre75 posted: "Yeah right. You do remember who my father is, don’t you? Jagged Fel. Mr. Badass himself.” ROFL!! Excellent way to tuck that in!! LOL Yep. Jag is a Badass and even his daughter knows it. jadesabre75 posted: He had seen the looks that Durron brat had been stealing of her all night. Anger coursed through his veins and he bit his lip to keep from voicing his frustration. The coppery taste of blood permeated his mouth and he groaned as the comforting tang settled in. The old man had not been happy at his screw up, but he wasn’t worried. Everything was going according to plan, it was just going to happen sooner than the slime bucket had wanted. His eyes flicked to the holos that littered one side of the wall. He felt his body tighten and a rush of pleasure shoot through his system. Nothing like a change of plans to keep him on his toes. He would still possess her, but it would be different than his original plan. Cutter wanted more than her soul now. He wanted everything. Sab, you are so good at this disturbing stuff! He creeps me out. You know, I think maybe I should be worried I write psycho's too well. LOL Thank you for the compliment, I'm glad he's believable. Incredible update - as always! Thank you! -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! 9-19-08 - Best Bloody Day of the Year! Savvy? - http://www.limestrong.com/ Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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angry_bendu1 Registered: Apr '07	Date Posted: 7/6 8:10am Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 18 - updated 7-2
	These last two posts were completely awesome! Great job! Jarik and Kissa finally figured it out, eh? Good for them. Can't wait for Jag's take on this! And Cutter... he was exponentially creepified in that last post! Heyll-O! Fantastic job! -----signature----- Ramblings of a Jedi (snarky Jesika's diary- filled w/ romance, sarcasm, etc.): http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28753761/p1/?0 I was staring at the orange juice because it said "concentrate". Proud owner of a '96 Geo Metro. "To the Crapmobile!"
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 7/6 11:21am Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 18 - updated 7-2
	Excellent! Can't wait to see Jag freak out. -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/6 12:57pm Subject: RE: Sins of the Father - Sequel to Jedi & the Ambassador - Chap. 18 - updated 7-2
	angry_bendu1 posted: These last two posts were completely awesome! Great job! Thank you very much! Jarik and Kissa finally figured it out, eh? Good for them. Can't wait for Jag's take on this! LOL I haven't quite decided which way I'm gonna go with that. Should be fun either way. And Cutter... he was exponentially creepified in that last post! Heyll-O! LOL Psycho alert! Fantastic job! Thank you! ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~ ccp posted: Excellent! Thanks!! Can't wait to see Jag freak out. I'm starting to think you all WANT him to freak out. LOL -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! 9-19-08 - Best Bloody Day of the Year! Savvy? - http://www.limestrong.com/ Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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