Author Topic: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 9/5/08!
YodaKenobi 
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Date Posted: 7/20 6:06pm Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
PointGiven: FIRST!!!

Great job applause

Now that I've read it.
I'm glad to see Jacen still hasn't become truely corrupted and that's he was suspicious of Malig for what he did to Anakin. Keep going for that feeling Jacen!


Thanks, it's really important to me that all of Jacen's decisions seem very natural and we don't feel like he's doing a 180 just because he's a Sith. He's still the same caring person we knew in the NJO...

You write beautiful duels, I can picture them right in my mind's eye.

Thanks, that's kind of you to say blush This one was just a little tease. The one at the end of this story will be epic nerd

*Shakes head at Lowie and Alema* Not you guys too...

Oh, there's more whistling

And explanations coming in future chapters.

And boy do I really want to find out Malig's identity...

All will be revealed in a couple years tongue The end of the 4th fic will have Malig's identity revealed.

Thanks for reading and replying grin






Cyn: Second! From work even!

Impressive... most impressive [face_Vader]

Okay on the EDIT:
Jacen seems woefully... inadequate to be a Sith Apprentice here.


Doesn't he? He cares too much...

But my guess is he'll be plenty pissed when he gets the short end of the lightsabre when Anakin comes for him. *shakes head* Jacen "The Dupe" Solo. Bah!

I think you might be on to something big here whistling

Have to wait and see how it plays out wink

After all these years and Callista is still hung up on Luke? Mara should have decapitated the body-snatcher when she had the chance. Again, gulliable enough to believe she'll acutally get to make her bargain.

You're assuming the deal she made with Malig was for Luke? mischief Interesting thinking

To borrow Tahiri here... Dummy.

lol! I love Tahiri.

Callista vs. Kirana/Octa was pure awesome! I had Duel of The Fates playing in my head the entire time I was reading it! Nice job!

Thank you! I love that song too love It's the best duel music.

Alema certainly seems to have taken to being a Sith acolyte here, Lowie not so much...

Great observation there. We'll be getting into the hows and whys of Alema and Lowie's conversions soon. Hopefully it will all make sense then.

Nice post Wes!

Thank you and thanks for reading grin






megacrafter: Woot second...nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I got beat by less then 20 seconds. WHHHHHHHHHHHY (third)

Still a very respectable finish peace

I think malig should be renamed to: The Jedi converter.

He seems to have some skill in that area. We'll find out how and why soon.

thats 2 more jedi he has converted. i wonder, did he show them his face as well?

Good question. While I'll be revealing how and why Lowie are helping Jacen soon, I'll go ahead and answer this one. Malig has not shown Lowie or Alema his face. Of the characters we've met so far, only Jacen, Callista, and Faybol know what's beneath the mask.

Does he have some hypnotic power that can be used when someone views his face, or is he someone that everyone recognizes.

It's not that he has some hypnotic power. That would be a little hokey, IMO, I promise it's nothing like that. peace

glad to see Jacen is upset about the anikian tahari thingy.

Yeah, Jacen still cares about his family and he was shocked to hear what Malig had done to Anakin, especially when he realized the implications for his own dealings with Malig.

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jagsredlady: Fourth!

Well, you were first to read it tongue

Thanks so much for reading and replying hugs And for betaing, of course wink








Tahi: Fourth - and way behind. But I hope to catch up over the next week. My little granddaughter is doing well so I might be able to get some ME time back again.

Glad to hear everything is going well with her grin Congrats again hugs Hopefully things will settle down for you soon.

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DARTH_MU: Sextus

That sounds filthy! shock

Why oh why must Callista be evil.

We'll find out the "why" eventually.

Who the hell is Malig? My bet is on Luuke.

Now that is a really interesting theory. I like it mischief

Thanks for reading!





iamobiwan: Man this gets good! "We didn't come to help you!" Utoh! So Alema and Lowbacca have gone bad?

Apparently. The last time we saw Alema, she was getting captured on the Rapture and spit in Jacen's face. Lowie got shot a bunch of times in the battle on Ossus and Malig told Jacen he was going to save his life... whistling

We'll find out more soon.

Oh yeh! Take down dumb ass Jacen! Take him down now!

laugh

Well, they had the upper hand for a few minutes at least silly

I have to say, Callista's pop up was long over due, but still a bit aof a surprise.

There's a lot more going on with her. I don't think we'll see another flashback, I just wanted to do that to establish that what happened to her actually happened since everything else from her has been lies, but I think Callista has some surprises for us in the future wink

Love the fighting action scenes which were all female and all crazy tough!

Kirana Ti and Octa Ramis are two tough cookies. I wouldn't want to fight them beatup

Glad you liked the duel!

Then we get Alema and Lowbacca at the end. Oh hell hath no fury like a dark sided wookie!

laugh

Explanations on Alema and Lowbacca's conversion will be coming in a little bit. As for Wookiee fury... We'll have to wait and see just how angry he is wink

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SilverWolf: Nice Chapter.

Thanks!

I liked having Castilla's POV, but with that one I now have even more questions!!

I know blush But don't worry, we'll be getting Callista's POV throughout now, and some answers with it!

How did she turn Lowie and Alema??

We're not sure who turned them yet, but we'll find out soon as well as why and how.

What is behind Malig's mask??

Answers to all your questions? tongue

Seriously, it's obviously the big question but one you're not going to have an answer for until the end of the series, I'm afraid.

I'm SOOOO confused!

All will be explained eventually hugs

Thanks for the PM!

No problem grin Thanks for reading and replying!







Draconarius: Alema! Lowabacca! You filthy traitors, you're as bad as Jacen!

Now now, we don't know that yet whistling

I'm not quite sure how much of Malig's story to believe. What is so important about his face that it convinced Jacen to betray his entire family?

Jacen had already betrayed his family before he'd seen Malig's face. He was persuaded by his arguments about the Force, more or less, and also his certainty that Luke and the Jedi Order were going in the wrong direction. Jacen felt betrayed when he learned about Luke's involvement in Lando and Karrde's election rigging back in Destiny's Way.

Seeing Malig's face "made everything make sense" for Jacen. We don't know why yet.

You're very good at confusing readers, Wes.

Thanks? tongue Hopefully everything will make sense when it's all said and done. If it makes you feel any better, I know exactly where everything is going, have it all plotted out. I know what the climax looks like, I know what the last scenes are, who lives and who dies, and all the hows and whys. I know the answer to every question that has been raised so far.

Can't wait for the next one.

Thanks, the next one should answer a few little questions wink

Thanks for reading and replying! grin






GrandMasterKatarn: I knew it from the last time we saw Kirana Ti and Octa Ramis with Jacen. I knew they were gonna be dead.

You sure about that? mischief

They should've listened to Jacen when they had the chance.

Probably, but you might be surprised whistling

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zonzo: I'm really off the ball today.

You're doing fine peace

Bow chika bow wow

laugh cry

Well, Cray Mingla was supposed to have incredible legs tongue Han comments on them.

Don't call me weird or anything, but I love it when evil wins.

"Evil will always win, because Good is dumb." tongue

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DARTH_MU: Meh, Octa Ramis died in canon, so I don't care about her.

Actually, Octa is alive and well in canon. You're probably thinking of Tresina Lobi getting killed in Tempest.

But Kirana Ti?
She's a red head dang it.


Is she? I always thought she had brown or black hair. Looks like it in her pictures at least.

and what with her last name, she has the potential of being Chinese.

tongue

I really prefer it if she lived and got back to the Jedi unharmed and unturned.

You just might get your wish wink

However, if the all mighty author wanted to mess around with Kirana Ti, FYI, I prefer her to be dead than to be turned like Alema and Lowie.

You'll have to wait and see wink

Thanks again.







Sil: oh no please don't kill Kirana

She's tough, she might make it out of this okay peace

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Magnuskn: Well, things were going too well for our heroes in the last chapters, but this incessant killing off of the old guard is very sad.

They aren't dead yet peace You never know, you might be surprised.

I hope you have a good explanation on how Alema and Lowie were turned.

I think it's good, hopefully you guys will agree. We'll be getting to that in a few chapters.

Thanks so much for reading and replying grin






Spike: Don't even know what number I am.
Great update.


Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

Were those Killiks on Faybol and Malig's asteroid???

Great question! This is never going to be addressed in the story, but there has been mention of a bug species in Raithian space, mostly back in Rénin chapters called the Dekkeds. They had a brutal war with the Raithians and were eventually conquered. They are a colony of Killiks grin

Thanks for reading and replying, nice catch!





DARTH_MU: it's very simple you see,
all you need to turn Alema would be promising her unlimited supplies of cloned, submissive hot bod! Anakin clones.


laugh

I'm not sure it would even have to be anyone hot with her tongue

for Lowie, just threaten him that you would kill Han Solo and every one of his spawn unless he joined you.

I think there's another reason, but we'll get to that...

Is it true that Tahiri Veila is dead, DEAD? like with a capital M?
I know I read it, and I read somewhere that everyone saw her 'corpse', but is she? Is she really?
Is there NO hope?


Tahiri is not dead. Faybol used the Vagaari stasis band (we see them in Survivor's Quest, the Vagaari were conquered by the Raithians) to make Tahiri appear dead. They kept her in a state of suspended animation. When Anakin saw her, she appeared completely dead.

Fear not people, Shira Brie will come and save the day, and kick Yoda Kenobi's Callista (tm)'s you know what.
NB: I refuse to believe that it is Callista who's doing these 'things'.


Maybe you'll end up being right? Anyway, we'll find out more about why she's doing the things she's doing later.





Thanks again, everyone hugs

 

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Date Posted: 7/20 6:14pm Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
Way behind as usual tongue But I'll catch up, I swear! grin

I want to say, just between us, that I don't approve of a forum banner that doesn't have Anakin and Tahiri tongue

 

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Date Posted: 7/21 4:01am Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
Hey, thanx again for the PM. Unfortunately, I am still not caught up all the way, but please keep me on the list, I am almost there.

When I started reading this, I had no idea how...colossal and awesome it all is...

 

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Date Posted: 7/21 6:09pm Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
Finally back. Don't ask what's been going on though. silly

YK:So much'a, I don't know'a where to start'ika

Pig-Mando'a? tongue


Cool. I wonder if it will just be the story from Metal Gear Solid or something completely new? It will probably be awful, but I'll still watch it

Can't be any worse than those live action Resident Evil movies. plain


Is that still canon? *holds head*

Funny thing, my brother just got through with LotF. I think the both of us had the same reaction. He also said he wasn't sure if he wanted to read anything set after that series. plain


Ah, you got your own conductor

Would it surprise you to know that the band always gets the notes right and keeps tempo? tongue


In a galaxy that was struggling with a thousand different skirmishes in the wake of the Yuuzhan Vong's destruction, the effort was a symbol of unity, the bright spot in the galaxy that warmed the chests of each of the GA's citizens with pride and filled them with a commodity that had been in short supply since Coruscant fell: hope.

Hope? What is this 'hope' of which you speak? confused


He let his gaze linger on the Jedi Master's hard stare only a moment before turning to his left to see if he could find more support there, but instead saw a similar look in Octa Ramis' eyes above the muzzle of the blaster pistol she kept pointed at him.

A Jedi using a blaster? How uncivilized.


"You don't understand," Jacen pleaded. "I didn't come here alone. You're putting yourselves in grave danger."

"So sweet of you to worry about us," Octa Ramis said, tightening her grip on the blaster she had pointed in his direction. "But we took care of your little escort of Raithian soldiers before we even hit you with that concussion grenade. They'll be waking up in a few hours, probably with a worse headache than you must have right now."

Jacen shook his head. "I wasn't talking about them."


He's got backup for the backup I bet. worried


"Did my parents know about this? That you planned to attack me?"

"No, none of the other Jedi do. This was Thrawn's idea. He—"

"Octa," Kirana Ti admonished, casting her warrior's glare at the other woman. "Enough."


Ah, so this was Thrawn's idea. Either A) They bring in Jacen or B) Their failure to do that will fullfil some other plan Thrawn has. Usually that's the way things work out...


Thrawn, Jacen thought, relieved that at least his family hadn't turned against him to the point where they were actively trying to hurt him. Jaina's announcement more than seven months earlier that the legendary Chiss strategist was still alive was at least one piece of information he had not shared with his new master.

I don't know, I somehow get the feeling he may already suspect that Thrawn is alive... thinking


Jacen wanted to save them. He wanted to save everyone.

Ugh, now he has the Anakin Skywalker Syndrome. You can't save everybody, you idiot. frustrated


He wasn't a traitor— if anything, it was the Jedi who were unknowingly betraying the galaxy and the Force they'd sworn to serve.

From your point of view. raised_brow


For Jacen, it was an epiphany, hearing exactly what he had felt was wrong since he was very young but having been unable to put it into words, or even understand it cognitively.

Maybe Malig just said what Jacen wanted to hear?


The little the Dark Lord told him of who he actually was went to further prove that he and Jacen were linked by fate. According to Malig, he had once been the secret apprentice of Sidious' master, Darth Plagueis— a being that could not only save people from death, but could create life with the Force. Malig claimed that Plagueis did this once, when he created Anakin Skywalker.

Ah yes, I remember this little insinuation from RotS. mischief And how Anakin Sr. completely ignores it. silly


They must hate me, Jacen though. Anakin, most of all...

Well, I don't think you'll get any Christmas cards from him...


Surely Tenel Ka would listen to him? If nothing else, he had to save her and his child.

He had to.


shock *Checks title*

Okay, just had to look and make sure this wasn't LotF. tongue


"I bet that Hutt-hugger got frightened and took off without us."

"No, this will all go according to plan. He'll be here soon."

"What if something happened to him?"

"Na'rul—"

"We're all going to die!"


Wow, he sure is jumpy. Too bad he's probably right... worried


Kirana Ti turned her attention to Jacen. "What do you know about this?"

"I tried to tell you..."

"Tell us what?"

"Just surrender now, please. I promise, I can protect you if you do—"

"Stow it," the Jedi Master snapped, before looking to Na'rul. "Stay here, we're going to go check it out."


*Readies Clonetroopers to help Kirana and Octa*


Her name is Callista.

Ah man, not her again. rolling_eyes Callista "Bad Penny" Ming.


Then he asks her what she wants more than anything in the galaxy and she tells him.

He says he can give it to her.


I want to say that it's Luke, but knowing luck, it's something else.


Darth Malig had told her this would happen, that he'd seen in the Force that Jacen would be attacked during his visit to Coruscant, but the Dark Lord did not want to warn his apprentice— Callista knew from experience that Malig could be a harsh teacher. Instead, he'd tasked her with making sure Jacen was looked after, and she snuck a fingernail-sized beacon onto his uniform.

*Tries to prevent joke from coming out. Fails*

Does this mean Jacen will think his uniform betrayed him? mischief


she even prepared herself to play the role of seductress if necessary.

Dear God NO! sick


Though she believed in Malig's cause, it didn't mean she trusted the Dark Lord— the Sith placed great value in treachery, after all.

Wow, that's the first smart thing she's done so far.


"Save your breath, Sith Witch," Octa Ramis seethed

I would've said something else... wink


"Very well, but you should know you don't stand a chance."

"I suppose next you're going to tell us to surrender?" Kirana Ti asked sardonically. "Your friend Jacen already tried that."

"No, I'm not Jacen," Callista smirked, before thumbing on the activator switch on the long cylinder in her right hand and letting her opponents take in the spectacle as a blade of scarlet energy exploded from each end with a dual snap-hiss. "I don't care if you surrender or not."


Callista has backup, doesn't she? plain Unless she's very sure of her skills...


"Alema? Lowbacca?" She said in disbelief. "Thank the Force! Where have you been?"
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"Oh," Alema smirked, the lightsaber in her hand snapping to life in a chilling flash of silver and reverberating hum as Lowbacca let out a sorrowful moan. "We didn't come to help you."



1)


2) I think my Clonetroopers have arrived...

devil Take that, traitors.

 

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Draconarius 
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Date Posted: 7/21 8:06pm Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
YodaKenobi posted:
Thanks? Hopefully everything will make sense when it's all said and done. If it makes you feel any better, I know exactly where everything is going, have it all plotted out. I know what the climax looks like, I know what the last scenes are, who lives and who dies, and all the hows and whys. I know the answer to every question that has been raised so far.


It was meant as a compliment... and I should hope you know where you're own fic is going. I'd be worried otherwise.

I like having to think about what's happening in movies/books/fanfics/etc, so when I say you're confusing me, it's a good thing. Things would be very... dull... if it was easy to figure everything out.

 

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Date Posted: 7/21 8:15pm Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
*peeks in*

Bah!!!!

 

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corran2 
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Date Posted: 7/22 10:11am Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
Wow! These last two chapters have to be some of the best you have ever done! Loved the Thrawn and Karrde reunion, with Soontir Fel and Voss Parck thrown in for good measure. So Jorj Car'das is going to have involvement. I'm getting ready to reread the Hand Of Thrawn Duology, so I guess the timing is perfect. One of my favorite parts from the last story was Han and Leia battling those Annihlaters, so I'm glad to see them back.

It's great to see Octa and Kirana Ti actually putting up a good fight. Now will they be assimilated, or will they be killed? I'm leaning more towards the latter, but anythings possible. I have to compliment you again on your treatment of Jacen's character. He has no doubt that he is right about his beliefs, and he is actually very convincing, reading his thoughts.

Two amazing posts! Can't wait for Friday!

P.S., how did Jacen and Callista recognize Malig? Have they been to the Island before? tongue

 

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Date Posted: 7/22 7:47pm Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
LosDosMos: Way behind as usual But I'll catch up, I swear!

No worries, of course grin It's good to see you.

I want to say, just between us, that I don't approve of a forum banner that doesn't have Anakin and Tahiri

You do realize that that this isn't just between us though, right? worried

And I kind of think Anakin and Tahiri should be on everything, even the Before banner tongue







L0B0: Hey, thanx again for the PM. Unfortunately, I am still not caught up all the way, but please keep me on the list, I am almost there.
When I started reading this, I had no idea how...colossal and awesome it all is...


Yeah, it's quite a lot ot read, sorry about that. I hope you enjoy it though grin Look forward to hearing your thoughts.







Wedge: Finally back. Don't ask what's been going on though.

Okay, I'll just create my own story about you being called away with your clone commando unit to fight those dirty seps tongue

Pig-Mando'a?

[Self censored] tongue

Can't be any worse than those live action Resident Evil movies.

I've never watched one of those. They look really, really bad though tongue

Funny thing, my brother just got through with LotF. I think the both of us had the same reaction. He also said he wasn't sure if he wanted to read anything set after that series.

That seems to be a fairly pervasive reaction when finishing LotF. At least on the intrawebz.

Would it surprise you to know that the band always gets the notes right and keeps tempo?

No. John Williams is the Kyle Katarn of conducting cool

Hope? What is this 'hope' of which you speak?

You'll have to look it up in your dictionary. There should be a picture of Anakin Solo next to it.

A Jedi using a blaster? How uncivilized.

Luke's Jedi seem to do that.

He's got backup for the backup I bet.

The real backup skull

Ah, so this was Thrawn's idea. Either A) They bring in Jacen or B) Their failure to do that will fullfil some other plan Thrawn has. Usually that's the way things work out...

Damn... You're good wink

You'll have to wait and see how this plays out whistling

I don't know, I somehow get the feeling he may already suspect that Thrawn is alive...

Yeah? Interesting thinking

Maybe Thrawn is Malig mischief

Ugh, now he has the Anakin Skywalker Syndrome. You can't save everybody, you idiot.

What if he can? What if Malig can? mischief

Maybe Malig just said what Jacen wanted to hear?

That was the impression I got from their little pow wow in the alchemy lab.

Ah yes, I remember this little insinuation from RotS. And how Anakin Sr. completely ignores it.

He was too busy trying to figure out how to save Natalie Portman... Can you blame him? raised_brow

Well, I don't think you'll get any Christmas cards from him...

*Jacen opens card only to be kicked in the nuts by a popout*

*Checks title*
Okay, just had to look and make sure this wasn't LotF.


Hey, just because Jacen is a Sith and married to Tenel Ka and they're having a baby... Meh. If it makes you feel any better, I can actually prove I had an outline of this in January of 2005 tongue

I have decided to change the sex of the baby since then though...

Wow, he sure is jumpy. Too bad he's probably right...

Yeah. Na'rul had a few short scenes with Kyp, Valin, and Mirax towards the end of Exodus.

*Readies Clonetroopers to help Kirana and Octa*

See if you can get those jetpack clones too.

Ah man, not her again. Callista "Bad Penny" Ming.

lol

I want to say that it's Luke, but knowing luck, it's something else.

I'm not gonna say, but I think you're wise to consider other possibilities...

*Tries to prevent joke from coming out. Fails*
Does this mean Jacen will think his uniform betrayed him?


laugh

Well, in this case, it looks like his uniform is going to save him tongue

Dear God NO!

laugh

She was prepared to do it. Jacen wasn't biting, it' not gonna happen silly

Wow, that's the first smart thing she's done so far.

Seeing as how she fooled almost everyone in AoH and a good chunk of Exodus, I'd say she's done several smart things.

I would've said something else...

laugh

Do tell mischief *Watches Spike's finger hover over the ban button*

Callista has backup, doesn't she? Unless she's very sure of her skills...

She kind of beat Kyp back in 8th Cortex. Wasn't entirely a fair fight, but that's nothing to sneeze at. Kyp is probably the strongest non-Skywalker descended Jedi... Well, other than Katarn of course cool

1)
2) I think my Clonetroopers have arrived...
Take that, traitors.


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Nice pics tongue

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Draconarius: It was meant as a compliment... and I should hope you know where you're own fic is going. I'd be worried otherwise.
I like having to think about what's happening in movies/books/fanfics/etc, so when I say you're confusing me, it's a good thing. Things would be very... dull... if it was easy to figure everything out.


I knew you meant it as a compliment, I was just kind of kidding tongue Though also trying to reassure you that I'm not just winging this.

I agree completely about "confusion." I really think mystery drives story more than anything else.

Thanks again grin







Whitey: *peeks in*
Bah!!!!


What the hell was that? tongue

Good to see you, Whitey grin Still following LDM around? tongue








corran: Wow! These last two chapters have to be some of the best you have ever done!

Wow, thanks grin I'm glad you enjoyed them so much.

Loved the Thrawn and Karrde reunion, with Soontir Fel and Voss Parck thrown in for good measure.

Hehe. I was kind of looking forward to that little scene, just because of the history involved.

So Jorj Car'das is going to have involvement.

Yep mischief

I'm getting ready to reread the Hand Of Thrawn Duology, so I guess the timing is perfect.

Yeah. That's one of those series that I go back to again and again for fanfic research...

One of my favorite parts from the last story was Han and Leia battling those Annihlaters, so I'm glad to see them back.

Cool! I think that was probably my favorite scene in the story in a lot of ways. I just had a ball writing it. grin

It's great to see Octa and Kirana Ti actually putting up a good fight. Now will they be assimilated, or will they be killed? I'm leaning more towards the latter, but anythings possible.

Yes, there are other possibilities wink

I have to compliment you again on your treatment of Jacen's character. He has no doubt that he is right about his beliefs, and he is actually very convincing, reading his thoughts.

That's really good to hear and a goal of mine. I really want everyone reading to understand why Jacen is doing what he's doing. I want him to remain a character you can relate to even if he's helping evil.

Two amazing posts! Can't wait for Friday!

Thanks again. Friday's post will provide some answers on things that have been hanging around in this one.

P.S., how did Jacen and Callista recognize Malig? Have they been to the Island before?

LOL. It's not actually said that they recognize him, but obviously there was something familiar about it, or at least convincing...

Anyway, I can't really go into that at this point. It will all make sense when it's done tongue

Thanks so much for reading and replying grin






Friday we finally return to Luke in his new location and find out why he said "Yoda" at the end of Chapter 2! We'll also learn a bit more about this Raithian world and what's going on, and maybe check in on Rodan on his unscheduled visit to Darth Malig's home devil

 

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TelannaTani 
Registered: Jun '05
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Date Posted: 7/23 12:57pm Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
So you can answer all the questions asked here, hum? I should try and come up with a question you CAN'T answer. That would be good.

Must think some more...

Great update. grin

 

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Clone_Cmdr_Wedge 
Registered: Mar '06
39854_Clone Commander Bly
Date Posted: 7/23 2:47pm Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
YK:I've never watched one of those. They look really, really bad though

Yeah, they make the games look good. When I've seen them though, I've just tried to laugh it off. Two things irk me about those movies though. One is that they have nothing to do with the games, and two, if they have any of the characters from the games (like Jill) they're only there to make the main character (who does not exist in the games btw) look good. frustrated


No. John Williams is the Kyle Katarn of conducting

Yep.*Bows before the awesome power of John Williams*


You'll have to look it up in your dictionary. There should be a picture of Anakin Solo next to it.

Wait, so if Anakin Solo is hope, does that mean...Del Rey has killed hope? shock worried


Damn... You're good

You'll have to wait and see how this plays out


This is what happens when you remember the Thrawn Trillogy. cool And yes, I can't wait to see how this plays out.


Yeah? Interesting

Maybe Thrawn is Malig


Now that would be an interesting twist...


He was too busy trying to figure out how to save Natalie Portman... Can you blame him?

No, but I do remember that by trying to save her, she ended up dying. At least, that's how I saw it. tongue


*Jacen opens card only to be kicked in the nuts by a popout*

laugh cry laugh

This needs to be added to the Lands of the Dead: Extended Edition.


Hey, just because Jacen is a Sith and married to Tenel Ka and they're having a baby... Meh. If it makes you feel any better, I can actually prove I had an outline of this in January of 2005

Nah it's okay, I believe you. I just sometimes think you're Aaron Allston or Troy Denning in disguise. tongue


Well, in this case, it looks like his uniform is going to save him

Yeah, after reading that part after Callista places the tracking beacon on Jacen, I just had to ask that. silly


Do tell *Watches Spike's finger hover over the ban button*

laugh

Oh, I just would've called her a Sith Female Dog. mischief


Nice pics

Figured it was about time I brought out my Order 66 .gif again. Glad I had a half-decent excuse to. cool

 

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YodaKenobi 
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Registered: May '03
23685_Anakin
Date Posted: 7/24 5:34pm Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
Telanna: So you can answer all the questions asked here, hum? I should try and come up with a question you CAN'T answer. That would be good.

Go for it mischief There are a few things I haven't made a final decision on yet. Mostly little stuff though. I like to keep a degree of elasticity to my outlines because there's always stuff that crops up during the actual writing process that you don't think of before hand.

Must think some more...
Great update.


Thank you and thanks for reading grin







Wedge: Yeah, they make the games look good. When I've seen them though, I've just tried to laugh it off. Two things irk me about those movies though. One is that they have nothing to do with the games, and two, if they have any of the characters from the games (like Jill) they're only there to make the main character (who does not exist in the games btw) look good.

Yeah, that sounds dumb. I hate it when things get twisted to the point they're no longer recognizable like that.

Now I'm trying to think of a video game that made a good movie... umm... this is hard thinking

Yep.*Bows before the awesome power of John Williams*

They both have kickass beards too.

Wait, so if Anakin Solo is hope, does that mean...Del Rey has killed hope?

Yep plain

This is what happens when you remember the Thrawn Trillogy. And yes, I can't wait to see how this plays out.

I'll just say to trust your instincts. Thrawn always has a plan mischief

Now that would be an interesting twist...

Wouldn't make any sense, but at least it would surprise people tongue

No, but I do remember that by trying to save her, she ended up dying. At least, that's how I saw it.

Yeah, that's the way I see it too.

This needs to be added to the Lands of the Dead: Extended Edition.

I'll try and fit it in mischief

Nah it's okay, I believe you. I just sometimes think you're Aaron Allston or Troy Denning in disguise.

I like both of them, but no tongue LotF would have had more Anakin.

Oh, I just would've called her a Sith Female Dog.

I'm not following. Could you be more specific? mischief

Figured it was about time I brought out my Order 66 .gif again. Glad I had a half-decent excuse to.

Don't worry, with the number of Jedi that get killed in this fic, you'll have plenty of opportunities mischief

 

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DARTH_MU 
Registered: Feb '05
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Date Posted: 7/24 8:52pm Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
I did it.
I printed the story out, and I read it from chapter 1.
Poor Callista, nobody ever understand her. No one ever does her justice, not even me.
The pain of it.

 

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Registered: Mar '03
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Date Posted: 7/25 12:16am Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
Okay, jacen is getting on my fricking nerves with his whole "I'm right, they're wrong". I want to punch him in the face.

Ahh, Alema and Lowbacca, why? I always felt bad for Alema in canon. She just kept getting the tough deal.

 

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DarthBellumSolo 
Registered: Mar '08
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Date Posted: 7/25 3:20am Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18 - Date Edited: 7/25 3:23am (2 edits total) Edited By: DarthBellumSolo
Hehe. Han has interesting thoughts on the Grand Admiral

Han is able to make laugh. At him interesting ideas concerning many.

I don't think I've said anything about Tahiri going over to the Dark Side
As for when we will see them: Very, very, very soon

Yes, it I was incorrectly expressed a little. Has mixed all in one heap:).
Callista and Alema we already saw.

Chapter 7

While what is it my liked chapter. Jacen is very good, me has struck, that he still in soul remains kind and does not want to do much harm to the family. He already sees, that Malig often does awful things. Interestingly, and Malig knows, what Jacen hides from him some things?
By the way, if Jacen on Coruscant and World Brain still there, why to him to not contact to it through vong perception and to not ask the help? It that he does not want to hurt Kirana and Octa?

Very much has liked Callista. The interesting woman. By the way, what all the same at Malig under a mask? At first Jacen, then Callista, having seen his person, were assured, that act correctly. Interestingly...

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Registered: Feb '08
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Date Posted: 7/25 1:14pm Subject: RE: The Lands of the Dead (Post-NJO AU: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, L/M, H/L, many more) Updated 7/18
(Lurking behind the chapter)

(spots chapter) (chapter tries to run)

(I pounce, and read)

 

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