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dancing_star
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Awesome post!!   
Suddenly, something lifted him upwards and he was catapulted into the air and forced backward into the crushed scaffolding.
In that instant, she felt it. She turned to where she had entered the construction site to see the red-haired form of her son standing there calmly.
Ben Skywalker announced, “Guess again, Sithboy!”
Woohoo! Go Ben!! 
It's so sad about Mara's hand though.   She lost her left and Luke lost his right. Evil sith lords! 
Wonderful, wonderful post!!
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The conversation between them at the beginning Agreed with everything Mara said. Their fight -- wow!!! Grip-ping!!! Lands, now Mara's lost a hand... better than her life needless to say. Loved how she confused Jacen with all her memories of Mary and Mobile That last line--SQUEE!!! (I've never given a nonmush SQUEE! before.)  Bravo and huggles!!!!
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oh my god, I so totally love Ben, he is just so wonderful. And that last line killed me!
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Yes!! Ben is there! Loved his line at the end of the chapter! You get him, Ben!
Mara lost her hand, that's too bad...
I really never liked what the EU did to Han and Leia's children; it makes Leia's concern about having them in the first place completely correct, and dashes all of Han's hopes for the future that he finally admitted to. And poor Jaina, what she had to do in the end was completely unconscionable. Bad EU!!
Your story, though, is very engaging, and I liked how Mara confused him with all of her images from the previous run through!
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Irish_Jedi_Jade posted:
! But yikes! Mara lost her hand?!?!!?!?? well....I guess now she and Luke match, huh?
Great update madman, kept me on the edge of my seat!
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You may just have something of a foreshadowing there, 42 (btw, I know the source of that number - the answer to everything!).
Um... it meant something else entirely (as I hadn't yet read that book), really, but good enough... And... oh my... foreshadowing? Uh-oh...
"Congratulations on adopting your husband's philosophy."
All this time, and Jacen STILL doesn't get it... And Mara's right. Going to the dark side is always a choice. Coming back to the light is also a choice. It's a choice you have to make all by yourself, even. It's "easy", it's seductive, and it FEELS like the right path, even if it isn't. But it's still a choice on which path to go down, and that choice can affect someone and wreak havoc with their mind, no matter if you're just going temporarily or not.
Loved the fight between them and Mara showing him what happened, and Ben showing up like that. (Ben! Save your momma!)
Well done and good post.
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Okay, not caught up yet. (Man, you're fast!) But I'm getting there!
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I've been lurking and I'm not quite caught up yet but please add me to the PM list 
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Oweeee.  That had to hurt! Poor Mara. Good thing Ben showed up this time. I sure hope one of those 'realities' has all the Solos and Skywalkers alive, happy and sane! (but that's probably asking a bit much.) 
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Awesome post! Loved the little duel and Mara's attempt at logic.  And Ben, yay! Can't wait for more.
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madman007
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Irish_Jedi_Jade - I"m dying to see what happens next....ps--that wasn't a figure of speech. I'm literally dying.. Uhh, hope not Irish. What would this world be without you? But yikes! Mara lost her hand? And you can bet I have several jokes in line when she sees Luke again. Thanks for...almost dying from reading my work. Yay for me?
dancing_star - Thanks! A little backstory about that last line: I had several to choose from that didn't have the same impact and when I was typing it in, the Sithboy line came from out of the blue. It sounded more teenage-ish.
Jade_eyes - Thanks for the praise about their convo. I got the idea from playing Mysteries of the Sith on PC which had Mara save Katarn the same way I mentioned in the story. I wonder how many noticed? Lands, now Mara's lost a hand... better than her life needless to say. True. Better to get a prosthetic for your hand than one for your entire soul. Ooooh, Prosthetic Soul. Cool title! WOW....I am honored with a non-mush SQUEEE!!!!
Skywalker277 - That last line killed me! Wait, Irish almost died from reading my stuff. What am I doing killing all of my readers?????!!!!!!
dm1 - I never thought of the parallel to Leia's concerns about having children in Tatooine Ghost. You're right; the LOTF did justify her worry. And Jaina having to do what she did....if I wanted this much bloodshed I would read Shakespeare. Your story, though, is very engaging. **bows** Thank you!
Myriad_Daydreams - Edge of your seat, huh? Just don't fall off!
DaenaBenjen42 - Sorry about the assumption on your 42. Whenever I see that number in someone's nic I just go to the Hitchhiker's Guide. And thanks for seeing my own view of the Dark vs Light side of the Force, which is purely about choice. I actually believe half of what Jacen was trying to convey after his stint with the Vong and Vergere; that the Force knows no difference between Dark and Light, yet it's how it's applied that makes that difference.
VaderLVR64 - Man, you're fast! Sometimes I wish I wasn't. It's all this creativity pouring out of me. Thanks for catching up.
Jedi_Aurelan_Carter - Ahh, a new recruit. Take your time in catching up; the words aren't going anywhere. Consider yourself added to the PM list. Thanks!
PonyTricks - I sure hope one of those 'realities' has all the Solos and Skywalkers alive, happy and sane! (but that's probably asking a bit much.) To the profic writers, it's asking waaaaaaayyyyy to much? A profic Happy ending in the DR Era? For fan fiction writers like us, a happy ending is always just a page away.
Jaina_and_Jag - Loved the little duel and Mara's attempt at logic. I like to mix some intelligence before a duel scene. Got that from one of my writing idols - some guy named Joss Whedon. He is my Master now!
I am taking a small hiatus from writing this. As you may can tell it's getting a mite complicated. I have to outline where I want to go with this as I have several options (unless you want me to do a Choose Your Adventure story - that'd be hard to do in here). I promise to update soon.
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Please make it VERY SMALL!!! Huggles!!!! 
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To my fellow readers, I am very close to adding the next chapter. Maybe this weekend! I have been very busy with work (summer is the height of our business) and DRL (can I get a Grrr? ).
Soon. Very soon!!!
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Here it is! Finally! My muse has returned to me from weeks of business. Hope you remember what went on before. Mara and Jacen dueled. Mara's hand was lopped off, a la Luke's way back when. But, rejoice as Ben returns.
As always, enjoy and review as you see fit.
Part 7: All In The Family
As Ben made a beeline towards his mother, Jacen rose from the crumpled flexiplast and struggled to stand.
He called out to Ben before he reached Mara and sneered, “So...the infamous son returns. How are you doing, killer?”
Ben ignored him and glanced at his mother and uttered, “Are you all right?”
She whispered back, “I’ll be fine.” She gestured toward Jacen. “Go kick his ass.”
“I don’t know if I can.”
Jacen injected himself into the conversation. “That’s right, son. You’ve already seen that I defeated your mother.”
Mara spat out, “You didn’t defeat me. You got a lucky cut.”
Ben rolled his eyes and sighed, “Whatever, mom.”
Jacen stirred the pot again. “This could have gone so differently, Ben. You could have realized our potential. Your mother’s sacrifice would have allowed me to ascend. And you could have been a part of it.”
Ben stood before his cousin a few meters away. “You know, there is something that I’ve wanted to say to you that I should have said a long time ago. Shut the kriff up! I want no part in your plans. You have had a twisted view of peace ever since Lumiya came on the scene.” There was a flutter of shock from Jacen that he couldn’t hide. “Yeah, I know about you and Lumiya. I overheard you two speak on the Anakin.” Ben cried out almost to himself, “Why couldn’t I see through that?”
Jacen replied, “You were too focused on your sense of duty to realize your true nature.”
Ben retracted, “Your true nature, not mine, Jacen.” Ben shook his head. “Jacen. Do you even deserve to own that name anymore? You’re certainly not the Jacen I remember.”
“We remember by our own perception. You never perceived me to be the bad guy. I’m still not. I am still the Jacen you remember.”
“Are you sure? The Jacen I remember would have never tried to shoot his own parents down. Oh, hey, how about the time you banished your own sister from doing what she loves the most. Face it, Jacen, you played us. And all for your own benefit. Yours and Lumiya's. We were all blind to your real purpose, just like the Jedi of the Old Republic was blind to Palpatine’s.” There was a slight pause and when he noticed Jacen raise an eyebrow, Ben stated, “Yes, I’ve read a history book.”
“Then you should remember that Palpatine wanted total control of the universe for his own enjoyment and power. My reign wouldn’t be like that.”
Ben cried out, “Listen to yourself! The fact that you called it your ‘reign’ says that it will be like Palpatine’s. It means you alone would have total control. That’s not peace, that’s a dictatorship. And while we’re exposing the truth here, there’s something I have to know. You killed Nelani, didn’t you?”
Jacen allowed a beat and replied, “Her death was necessary. You must believe me, Ben–”
“No! I don’t think I will ever believe anything else that you ever say again. You made me believe Nelani’s death was caused by another by giving me Force illusions. Was that your plan after you murdered my mother? Kill her and force us to believe it was Lumiya. Or Alema Rar?”
“Your heart would have blinded you. The Skywalker in you has too much compassion.”
Ben quickly shot back, “But the Jade in me gives me strength to filter the truth. Did you think I’d be that stupid to not figure it out?”
Jacen sighed. “Are you going to keep boring me with talk or are we fighting?”
“I already told you that I’m not fighting you.”
“Adopting your parents' philosophy, I see.”
“I’ll take that as a compliment.”
Ben continued his tirade over Jacen. Yet, underneath his words, and within the hidden Force, he sent an image to his mother. The crane. She caught the image but didn’t focus on it or even look at it. She wanted to make sure Jacen hadn’t caught it as well. She couldn’t tell anyway as Jacen was so well hidden inside the Force that she couldn’t tell where the air around him ended and his body started. Ben continued to berate Jacen, something her nephew should have received months ago.
There was another image secretly sent to her about the crane. He showed her the four thick metal pillars that held the crane’s base. Pinch those pillars and the crane would crash down. And because Jacen moved the crane to force her off the top of it, it was angled toward where Jacen was standing at the moment. Mara still couldn’t tell if Jacen knew. If he did, he was so full of ego that he would have been gloating by now. Instead, he was too busy trying to convince her son that killing his mother would save the galaxy.
Ben commented, “Now let me get this straight. You were shown an ancient tassel that was said to be Sith and you interpreted ‘immortalize his love’ to mean kill my mother and immortalize my love for her?” Ben took a reflective pause. “That’s kinda stretching it, don’t you think?”
Jacen replied as if he were apologizing. “It was the only way that fit. I hadn’t thought of it until Lumiya gave me the hint.”
Ben sniffed, “Lumiya again. You will listen to a former girlfriend-turned-enemy of my father’s over someone in your own family. I can interpret that tassel another way. If you go through with this, you will have lost every member of your family, including me. That is immortalizing your love for us. But, I will tell you this. If you become Sith, it will be my duty as a Jedi, not a GAG officer, to destroy you.”
“If that is your true destiny. You would not be the sacrifice I need, however.”
“No. The sacrifice is not Mara Jade, either. She is nothing to you. The sacrifice is your family.” Ben waited a beat to add, “That includes your daughter.”
Jacen suddenly shouted, “You know nothing about her!”
Ben shrugged, “True. But, if she’s anything like the Jacen I knew, then she can tell the difference between light and dark.”
“And I keep telling you there is no division of light and dark in the Force. There is only the Force.”
Ben sighed. "You’re too good at convincing yourself. You were convinced that killing my mom would help save the galaxy. What you don’t realize is that there are other options to bringing peace in the galaxy. Becoming a Sith Lord has never been a good option in the past.”
“I intend to rewrite history.”
“Until history repeats itself again.”
Jacen smirked. “You have a strange mix of your father’s optimism and your mothers pessimism.”
Ben looked over at his weakening mother and shrugged. “What can I say? I’m Luke and Mara Jade Skywalker’s son.”
Suddenly, Jacen’s lightsaber came to life. “And so you will die together as mother and son.”
Mara stuttered from her weakening state on the ground, “You...can’t. Luke knows. He is...on the way.”
Jacen nodded. “What better way to greet him as the murderer of his family. Maybe then he will realize his passive nature is not what this galaxy needs right now.”
“Now,” Ben repeated softly.
Jacen lowered his brow in confusion. “Yes, now.”
Ben turned quick to his mother and yelled, “Now!”
Before Jacen could react, Mara and Ben focused on the four metal pillars that held up the crane and used the Force to crush them all simultaneously. Immediately, the crane teetered and the front weight started to arc towards the ground. The metal whined and creaked as it lost it’s mooring and the crane came hurling down. Right where Jacen was standing.
Jacen saw their plan and reacted. It was too late. The last image of Jacen Solo they witnessed was his feeble attempt to jump backwards to avoid the monstrous crane. The sound of metal and flexiplast being crushed at such a great impact was deafening. Debris and dust flew in every direction. Ben quickly grabbed his mother who was still in pain on the ground as the debris scattered around them in a random pattern. It brought Mara more pain to her wound, but she figured it was worth not being crushed to death.
The scaffolding that had been constructed was destroyed, as well as the rest of the structure that was being renovated. The sounds of crunching metal and filtering debris were starting to end at wide intervals. Before them was a mess of destruction. And then silence.
Finally, Mara questioned, “Is he...?”
Ben replied, “I don’t know. I can’t sense him, but that doesn’t mean anything. I could never tell the difference if he was hiding in the Force or dead.”
“Neither can I. The best case scenario...is that he’s unconscious.”
Ben quipped, “Can’t see who that is best for.”
Mara tried a weak smile. “Why, Ben...showing ill will...of your former Master?”
“And trying to unlearn his lessons at the same time. I should have seen it before now. Why did I let him make me kill?”
Mara struggled to speak. “Because...he made you believe...that you were obligated to your duty as a GAG officer. He manipulated you...as much as Lumiya did to him. Don’t feel bad, son. I didn’t see it either. None of us did.”
“Dad did.”
“Yes, well, that’s why he’s the...Grand...Jedi Master.” She coughed several times.
“Don’t talk. Can you move?”
“Yes. Not going to be winning...any races anytime soon, but...I can manage. I am...a little cold.”
Ben shook his head in regret. “You’re in shock from the injury.”
“How do you know?”
“Mom, you are feeling cold on a desert planet.”
“That could be a reason.” She started to lift herself up and he helped her by her good arm to her feet. She looked over at the crane wreckage and said, “My bag. It has my stuff in it. And my lightsaber is around here somewhere.”
Ben walked a few paces around the debris and within seconds he bent down to pick up something. It was her lightsaber and it was intact. He raised it in the air. “That was too easy. Where was your bag?”
“Over by the bench which is no longer there.”
Ben walked closer to the crushed crane and spotted something. “Here it is.” He shifted some of the excess flexiplast off and lifted the bag. And then he froze. Instant sorrow entered his mind and Mara felt it.
“What is it? Is it him?” She slowly struggled to move closer to him, her one hand clutching her injured arm. She came up beside him and followed his gaze to what sparked his emotion.
It was her severed hand. It was crushed by the heavy weight of the crane. It could never be reattached in its current condition.
Mara said flatly, “There’s nothing that can be done about it now.”
“I know. I was just remembering all the times you ran those fingers through my hair.” He looked into her green eyes and it took her all of her strength to keep her tears from flowing. She wanted to tell him how she missed seeing his face for so long. How many times in Mobile had she wished she could see it just for a few seconds? It had been a month and a half of time for her. It would take too long to explain why. Instead, she willed herself to release her grip on her injured arm and ignore the pain. The result would be worth it. She ran her good hand and ran it through his hair. She softly stated, “I do have another hand.”
“I know. We can’t do this now. We have to go. We’ve got to get out of here. There are people coming. They’ll have questions. Can you make it to my shuttle? It’s just across the street on a landing platform.”
“My Stealth. It’s...up on the ridge...by an old factory.”
“Please tell me you were prepared and brought a recall remote.”
“When am I ever not prepared?”
Ben replied without thought, “When you go off and confront a potential Sith Lord by yourself.”
She winced at the pain of his words, which were worse than her injury. She slowly admitted, “I deserved that.”
“No you didn’t. I’m sorry. People make mistakes. Even the great Mara Jade.” He walked her forward and she almost stumbled to the ground. She was becoming more weak. “Ok, let’s go before I have to carry you.” He put his arm around her waist as she clutched her injured arm. Though a lightsaber cauterized the wound enough to stop the bleeding, the heat only lasted so long. Her sleeve was beginning to be drenched with her blood.
The scene now started to attract the citizens of Hesperia City. Ben directed his mother in the opposite direction of the growing crowd. They reached the borrowed shuttle with minimal staggering from Mara. He got her situated with medical supplies and proceeded to wrap the wound. He used a cold pack against the wrap so the nerve endings could be attached to an artificial limb eventually. She laid back on the bed as he fiddled more with the bandage.
“Itsh fine...Ben. Why am I...shlurring...”
“I gave you a sedative. Not strong, but effective.
“I don’t...remember...you doing that.”
“That because you’ve been going in and out. Now, get some rest and I’ll get you some professional help.”
“Ohh, no. I’ve already sheen a professhional quack. Dr. Markham. Don’t ask him to hypnotize me again.”
“Uh, who is Dr. Markham?”
“Never mind.” She looked down at her bandage and exclaimed, “Behold, the price for my mistake. Imagine me, charging in at Jacen to kill him like I was twenty again.”
“I’m just glad the price wasn’t higher.”
She chuckled. “Not in this time. There was a time when I did die and went to a far away land. I met some really interesting characters. And then there was Luke.” She forced the name out as if she were purging it from her mouth.
“You mean dad?”
“Ohhhh, no. This Luke was a far cry from our Luke. This was Mary’s Luke.”
“And who’s Mary?”
Mara paused in her current state and smiled. “A good friend.”
“You really don’t make sense when you’re drugged.”
“Jusht when I’m drugged? When do you ever listen to me when I’m not drugged?”
“I listen, mother. I may not always apply your wisdom, but I hear it.”
She tried to form a crooked smile but her eyelids were getting heavy. “Then...how’sh thish for nonshensh. I love you, Ben.” Her eyes closed and her consciousness fell away. She could feel the blanket that he moved over her shoulders. She could feel his soft kiss on her forehead. Just before she lost total control of being awake, she could hear his reply.
“I know.”
Coming Soon: The Gift of Pain
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You're back!! 
“You really don’t make sense when you’re drugged.â€
“Jusht when I’m drugged? When do you ever listen to me when I’m not drugged?â€
“I listen, mother. I may not always apply your wisdom, but I hear it.â€
She tried to form a crooked smile but her eyelids were getting heavy. “Then...how’sh thish for nonshensh. I love you, Ben.†Her eyes closed and her consciousness fell away. She could feel the blanket that he moved over her shoulders. She could feel his soft kiss on her forehead. Just before she lost total control of being awake, she could hear his reply.
“I know.â€
Awww, what a sweet way to end a terrific post!!
Great update!!
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