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DarthBellumSolo Registered: Mar '08	Date Posted: 6/16 6:55am Subject: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU - Date Edited: 9/3 5:45am (1 edits total) Edited By: DarthBellumSolo
	Title: Heir to Skywalker Author(s): DarthBellumSolo Timeframe: post- Edge of Victory Rebirth, NJO, Legacy Era Characters: Jacen Solo, OC, Anakin Solo, Jaina Solo, Jag Fel, Kyp Durron, Anakin Skywalker, Tahiri Veila, H/L, L/M and others Genre: EU/AU. action, drama, romance Keywords: Jacen/OC, Order of followers of Unifying Force Summary: Jacen together with parents arrives on a remote planet where at Solo the meeting is appointed. It yet does not know, that there it is waited with a fatal meeting... Notes: It is the first fic which I have dared to put here... Probably, because it the most favourite from everything, that I have written... I Hope, that too it is pleasant to you. I describe many characters such with what they are seen by me, therefore much can not coincide with originals. Pleasant perusal, also I wait for your responses. I shall add whenever possible every week. Dramatis Personae Alema Rar; Jedi Knight (female Twi'lek) Allana; Chume'da, princess of Hapes (female human) Anakin Skywalker; Supreme Magister of the Uniform Order (male human) Anakin Solo; Jedi Knight (male human) Bellum Deleo; Force-sensitive-girl (female human) Ben Skywalker; Jedi Apprentice (male human) Boba Fett; bounty hunter (male human) C-3PO; protocol droid Cal Omas; President (Male Human) Charme Renderi; pilot of a squadron Fatal stars (Female Human) Corran Horn; Jedi Master (male human) Danni Quee; Scientist (Female Human) Ed Deleo; yuuzhan vong's slave (male human) Han Solo; captain, Millennium Falcon (male human) Jacen Solo; Jedi Knight (male human) Jagged Fel; Avangard squadron Commander (male human) Jaina Solo; Jedi Knight (female human) Jysella Horn; Jedi Apprentice (female human) Kym Ti-Nox; bounty hunter (female human) Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (male human) Lab Shtern; bounty hunter (male human) Lando Calrissian; entrepreneur (male human) Leia Organa Solo; NR diplomat (female human) Luke Skywalker; Jedi Master, prisoner (male human) Lumiya; Dark Lady of the Sith (female human) Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master (female human) Mara Solo;adept of the Force (female human) Matt Solo; adept of the Force (male human) Mirta Gev; bounty hunter (female human) Padme Amidala Skywalker; Knight of Force (female human) R2-D2; astromech droid Ran'naya'nuruodo; adept of the Force (female Chiss) Saba Sebatyne; Jedi Master (female Barabel) Shawnkyr Nuruodo; Colonel, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (female Chiss) Soontir Fel; Chief Syndic, Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet (male human) Tahiri Veila; Jedi Knight(female human) Talon Karrde; independent information broker (male human) Tark; the homeless child (male human) Tekli; Jedi Knight (female Chadra-Fan) Tenel Ka Djo; Jedi Knight(female human) Thrawn; former Imperial Grand Admiral (male Chiss) Valin Horn; Jedi Apprentice (male human) Velle'nnrra; adept of the Force (female Twi'lek) Vergere; former Jedi Knight (female Fosh) Wedge Antilles; retired general (male human) Zekk; Jedi Knight (male human) -----signature----- Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader and Jacen Solo/Darth Caedus - my love! Heir to Skywalker - http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28592350/p1/?0 All roads conduct in the Dark side! I grieve on Darth Caedus and I mourn over it...
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jaina-Fett Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 6/16 9:10am Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU
	Hmmm. Very interesting , I just love AU's so I can't wait for more . update soon. -----signature----- "When as old as me you where , look as good you didn't " -Pink Five
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TheOnlyJediPrincess Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 6/16 12:40pm Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU
	I agree with jaina-Fett, It sound very intresting! I'm always up for OC's. I know how it feels to post for the first time, I was very nurvious but I was plesently surprised! Good Luck! -----signature----- "The truth is always greater then the words we choose to describe it." http://jediseeker1.deviantart.com/ http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/24991271/p5/?120 Padawan to Aiel The Key http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27627057/p1/?7
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zonzo Registered: Dec '07	Date Posted: 6/16 12:43pm Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU
	WOOT, a new AU! Sounds interesting. -----signature----- Awesomesause. New word of the year. Making a Life (Legacy-era, 132 ABY)- http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28526177/p1 To Venture the Dark Places- Dark Luke AU- http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28652606/p1/?9
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DarthJacenSolo Registered: Jun '08	Date Posted: 6/16 5:11pm Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU
	Looks... Intresting Will be watching this one very close, yes very close.
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Lady_Misty Registered: Mar '07	Date Posted: 6/17 4:00am Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU
	I'm curious. What's the differance between a Jedi Knight and Knight of the Force? -----signature----- 'Lumious beings are we, not this crude matter.' Kenneth Cope and Yoda The Clone Wars is wicked good!!!! I got Kenneth Cope's autograph!!!
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DarthBellumSolo Registered: Mar '08	Date Posted: 6/17 4:42am Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU - Date Edited: 6/17 5:21am (4 edits total) Edited By: DarthBellumSolo
	jaina-Fett TheOnlyJediPrincess zonzo DarthJacenSolo THANKS all of you huge! It is a little about fic - as any girl, I love romantic... The truth, at me it will be a special sort, I would name it " fighting romantic "... Will be present Also both space battles, and duels on swords, and certainly opposition of the Dark and Light Side of the Force. And now - updating! Teaser trailer: Plays "Force Theme " "Millenium Falcon " flies in hyperspace. Jacen Solo opens eyes and thoughtfully looks in a window at white lines floating past …. Jacen (a voice for the staff): I always was am lonely … The Unknown planet. Among ruins there is a girl and looks at a decline. Scarlet patches of light play its green eyes … Bellum Deleo (a voice for the staff): I was always lonely … Plays " Return to Tattoine " "Millenium Falcon " comes nearer to a yellowy-brown planet. Jacen (a voice for the staff): I saw you earlier … Bellum (a voice for the staff): I never left a native planet … Plays "A New Hope" Bellum shakes hands smiling Anakin Solo. Anakin: you Can always count on me … Jacen: Brother, at it already is I … Plays "Padmé's Ruminations" Jacen hangs in embraces of a pain. Bellum cries above body Anakin. Jacen (a voice for the staff): I shall survive for the sake of you … Plays "Across the Stars" Bellum falls Jacen's arms. They cost together on a balcony, and around rustles the is bright-dark blue sea. They being dared run on a green meadow. Jacen: You will leave for me? Bellum: We forever together. Nothing will separate us … Plays "Enter Lord Vader" Bellum sits in armchair of the ship; on its cheeks tears run. Jacen sits at itself in a room and too cries. Anakin Skywalker (a voice for the staff): At each of you the destiny.. And the applicability … Plays "Imperial March" Jacen costs on the bridge of the star destroyer. Bellum near to it. Both look in a window at battle storming in space. Anakin Skywalker (a voice for the staff): Only together you can execute the applicability … Jacen (a voice for the staff): I shall bring the world in Galaxy! Bellum (a voice for the staff): I always with you, my master. Plays "Duel of the Fates" Jacen battles on swords with Jaina. It kills it. Bellum it is born on a corridor and in horror stiffens at a kind of a body favourite. Anakin Skywalker (a voice for the staff): Nobody knows, what its destiny … Again "Across of the Stars" Bellum and Jacen lay on a meadow, admiring the small children. Bellum (a voice for the staff): I live, that you were happy.. And that you have executed the applicability … Jacen (a voice for the staff): I shall not allow my dreams to come true … Plays "Battle of Heroes" Jacen meditates. Bellum conducts in fight a squadron. Jacen battles to Luke; Ben shoots in Jacen, but Bellum covers it with itself, and shot gets to it in a breast. Jacen in horror shouts. Plays "Force theme" Anakin Skywalker (a voice for the staff: Two things it is impossible to underestimate - force of love and Great Force. To these two forces under force absolutely all … Jacen kisses Bellum, they take on hands of the children. Jag embraces Jaina. Ben smiles to mother. Han and Leia embrace the come back sons. Plays "Final" A long time ago, in a Galaxy far,far away... STAR WARS: Heir to Skywalker Ruthless aggressors yuuzhan vong have attacked the Galaxy. At the height of their intrusion young Jedi Jacen Solo together with parents helps to create a safe corridor for refugees, in particular Jedi on which Warmaster Tsavong Lah has declared hunting. And during one of such missions it meets the girl who is intended to it by destiny. They should overcome many obstacles to rescue the Galaxy and to be happy … Prologue: the Presentiment Among the stars which have blurred in white strips flies the ship. Similar to a plate, it is known to the majority of inhabitants of this Galaxy - is " Millenium Falcon ". On it are three alive passengers and two droids. Two from these passengers peacefully sleep; the third has just woken up. Jacen Solo considers itself Jedi though till now and does not know precisely, that this such. It has joined this mission only because cannot, as its brother, the sister and friends to be on advanced and to destroy enemies. Cannot for the moral reasons. It its belief do not allow. But Jacen cannot and stand aside, looking as thousand people perish under impacts Vong. Therefore it here. Jacen has already got used to numerous reproaches. It even understands those who speaks it, that it the coward. It has got used to trust Force - and if it has sent it that vision, then, it should follow to its advice. But now it has woken up absolutely for other reason. A dream. Rather strange dream has dreamed it. Or it was vision? Jacen It did not know … Remembered only sad green eyes and passionate love with which it fed To the mistress. Love … Jacen knew only meek love. To a beauty-scientist Danni Quee, for example. It has rescueed it on Helska, and then has irresolutely hinted about the feelings … and has received soft, but firm refusal. Before was Tenel Ka. With it … likely, in all its indecision is guilty. Jacen has taken with bedside-tables lightssaber and made active it. Looking at a flickering green edge, it recollected eyes girl from the dream. " Really I nevertheless shall be sometime happy? - it has reflected. - Family, children … Favourite which will understand me … As mum understands the daddy … " The Mistrustful smile has arisen on its lips. Jacen was put also with a saber back on a little table. The ship has slightly begun to shake - they send from hyperspace. Jacen has seen a small planet of lurid color, and it as if something has pricked in heart. There should something happen, it has thought. Something serious. Just? Bellum has unexpectedly woken up also villages on the to a box from old cloths and stones. Something has dreamed it - but that, it did not remember. Remembered only, that in a dream it was happy - it is very happy. Also that there was not one … The girl has risen and, having approached to an opposite wall, has pressed absolutely indiscernible button. The wall slowly and with a scratch has driven off aside, and to face Bellum has struck a fresh and cool night breeze. The girl has cautiously made the way over fragments of a stone and plasteel, remained from the destroyed building, and has sat down on a piece of a wall, admiring a decline. Something disturbed it … Is not present, it was not usual feeling of danger which warned it of the approach of members of the Peace Brigade. It was … a presentiment something. Bellum has chilly shrugged shoulders in the torn up to pieces overalls. It did not like these presentiments. More precisely, it even was afraid of them. Because good they usually did not foretell anything. In the night sky there was a shone point, and bellum has broken from a belt the field-glass. It has looked in it and has frozen with surprise. " Millenium Falcon "??? The ship of Solo??? On this nobody necessary planet??? It has tracked a way of the ship and has noded. The local cosmodrome. It is necessary to track it. It has hung up the field-glass and has turned to come back in the refuge. Presentiments there or not presentiments, but it becomes interesting … -----signature----- Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader and Jacen Solo/Darth Caedus - my love! Heir to Skywalker - http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28592350/p1/?0 All roads conduct in the Dark side! I grieve on Darth Caedus and I mourn over it...
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DarthBellumSolo Registered: Mar '08	Date Posted: 6/17 5:24am Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU
	Continuation - next week! Enjoy, and I wait for responses! The chapter the first - as Jacen and Bellum have got acquainted.. As it gets on "Eclipse" and gets acquainted with Anakin Solo and also begins the training... -----signature----- Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader and Jacen Solo/Darth Caedus - my love! Heir to Skywalker - http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28592350/p1/?0 All roads conduct in the Dark side! I grieve on Darth Caedus and I mourn over it...
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DarthBellumSolo Registered: Mar '08	Date Posted: 6/18 4:00am Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU - Date Edited: 6/18 4:20am (4 edits total) Edited By: DarthBellumSolo
	And still something: my selection for characters^ Jacen Solo Jaina Solo Anakin Solo Or Tenel Ka Tahiri Alema Rar hehe. And you as think? -----signature----- Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader and Jacen Solo/Darth Caedus - my love! Heir to Skywalker - http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28592350/p1/?0 All roads conduct in the Dark side! I grieve on Darth Caedus and I mourn over it...
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DarthBellumSolo Registered: Mar '08	Date Posted: 6/18 5:32am Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU
	Lady_Misty posted: I'm curious. What's the differance between a Jedi Knight and Knight of the Force? The difference is... Unfortunately, while I cannot explain it... You will see. More precisely, you will read through Thanks for your response Bel -----signature----- Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader and Jacen Solo/Darth Caedus - my love! Heir to Skywalker - http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28592350/p1/?0 All roads conduct in the Dark side! I grieve on Darth Caedus and I mourn over it...
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morrison85 Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 6/18 10:33am Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU
	Nice start, keep me updated please.(and by the way Darth, I rather like the majority of pictures in the literature forum) -----signature----- e-sis of Darth Gangrenous
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Lady_Misty Registered: Mar '07	Date Posted: 6/19 4:05am Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU
	I'm slightly confussed by the term 'it'. It sounds like something is watching them. I say you use all six. I loved the 'No one knows anything about destiny.' Could you PM me when you update? -----signature----- 'Lumious beings are we, not this crude matter.' Kenneth Cope and Yoda The Clone Wars is wicked good!!!! I got Kenneth Cope's autograph!!!
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DarthBellumSolo Registered: Mar '08	Date Posted: 9/2 2:16am Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU - Date Edited: 9/3 5:43am (1 edits total) Edited By: DarthBellumSolo
	morrison85 Thanks for a response. I am glad that while it is pleasant to you. Lady_Misty Yes, certainly. Simply I have decided something to correct, and consequently so I detain updating. But in couple of weeks I promise to lay out first two heads! Thanks all! Bel -----signature----- Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader and Jacen Solo/Darth Caedus - my love! Heir to Skywalker - http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28592350/p1/?0 All roads conduct in the Dark side! I grieve on Darth Caedus and I mourn over it...
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DarthBellumSolo Registered: Mar '08	Date Posted: 9/9 5:23am Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU
	Part 1. Jedi Apprentice Chapter 1: Successfully unfortunate meeting Having gone down on a gangway of "Millenium Falcon” on a dusty airfield, Jacen Solo has gloomy looked round. For the still a short life it could visit on the various worlds, but, only it having appeared here, on Takan, tiny agricultural planet of Tion Gegemony , he has felt that there should be something. Just, and good it or bad, the young man could not tell. "You are assured, flyboy, what exactly here has been appointed rendesvous?" - The voice of his mother, the former princess Leia Organa Solo was distributed behind it. "Yes, a candy. Also we will hope that at least this meeting will pass successfully." Han and Leia hand in hand have descended on a gangway and have stopped near to Jacen. That has tried to represent similarity of a smile, but Leia has noticed an anxiety shade on his face. "That such, the sonny?" - It is disturbing she has asked. Young Jedi has negatively shaken a head, paternal the chestnut bang slept to it on eyes. "Everything is all right, mums. Simply … at me strange sensations. The anticipation something … something especial that should today happens …" The elder Solo cautiously was lop-sided on the offspring, but has kept silent, having come across a scathing look of the princess. "About, owner Han, princess Leia!" - the voice behind the Solo's back was distributed, and all three have wearily turned back. "Threepio, - has growled Han, - how many time to repeat that we are called by Rake and Layna! Remain together with Artoo by the ship, today your help is not required to us! To YOU it is clear???" The golden droid has shuddered and has nodded. "About yes, there is no place more clearly, the owner … uhhh … Rake." "So it is better, - has said Leia and has tenderly put a hand on a shoulder of the elder son. - well, can, we will already go?" Han has nodded and, having thrown last nasty look on Threepio who have remained by the ship, has stepped to their waiting officer of safety. " Means, Rake, Layna and Jes Owen, dealers with Tatooine … - lieutenant Shtell has mistrustfully stretched, looking through their false ID. - And what destinies on Takan?" "On affairs. - with a gruffish voice "Layna" has answered, easy movement of a head having scattered on shoulders blond hair. The lieutenant has frowned, but here Jacen by means of Force has softly concerned its reason, convincing that they should be passed. Bewilderment, then indifference was reflected in the person provincial soldier at first. " The maximum time of your stay for Takan - four days. After the lapse of them you should leave our planet." "Thanks, the mister the lieutenant." - has thanked its Han, exchanging understanding sights with the wife. "As you think, here there can be vong's spies? - In a whisper has taken an interest in Solo at Leia when they have left the cosmodrome. The princess has negatively shaken a head. "Hardly, the planet is insignificant both for us, and for them. And here Brigaders... Quite." Jacen tried not to twist a head, looking round on the parties. On dusty small streets almost there was no transport, and people too. The alarm smell aloud soared In air. The hand of the young man itself was pulled to the hidden sword. Apparently, Leia too has felt it. An instant later ten have from round the corner jumped out to the teeth armed Brigaders. Having destroyed brigader's blaster, Jacen has dexterously evaded from a shot of another and has made a jump to clean one more which has aimed at a back of Han. Nearby Leia coped with four at once, holding in one hand a saber, and in other blaster. But the young man knew that soon there will be a reinforcement and then it is necessary to them is unsweetened. "It is necessary to be washed off!" - he has shouted to the father. Han has nodded, without stopping to shoot. They have simultaneously dived into the nearest alley and, having waited Leia, have run along the street. Brigaders have rushed behind them. Leia and Han were on the run shot, but Jacen knew that is necessary to find as soon as possible shelter, or them will seize. His eyes feverishly rummaged around each centimetre of street, but did not find that searched. And here to it the idea has come to a head. "Mom! - has cried out Jacen, - Dad! has shouted! It is necessary to us it will be divided! "That?" - It is illegible has cried out Han. "I will not leave you one!@ - Leia has shouted. "Enemies will argue, whom from us it is more favourable to give vong and so we can win time. I will find you, mums! I promise!" And without waiting the answer, Jacen has dived into any dilapidated tunnel. TBC Bel -----signature----- Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader and Jacen Solo/Darth Caedus - my love! Heir to Skywalker - http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28592350/p1/?0 All roads conduct in the Dark side! I grieve on Darth Caedus and I mourn over it...
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Lady_Misty Registered: Mar '07	Date Posted: 9/10 11:36am Subject: RE: Heir to Skywalker - Jacen/OC, J/J, Anakin Skywalker, NJO- Legacy- AU
	YES!!! An update! I loved the action. BTW one of my sisters name is Layna. Not joking!!!! -----signature----- 'Lumious beings are we, not this crude matter.' Kenneth Cope and Yoda The Clone Wars is wicked good!!!! I got Kenneth Cope's autograph!!!
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