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Tahi Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 7/1 6:07pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	Cool bananas - just peeping in in my lunch hour - will catch up later. -----signature----- Anahiri #6 http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/18446448/p33 The magazine for A/T fans Many Happy Returns http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/11018706/p81/?2011 Master to THE_PIED_PIPER
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Draconarius Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 7/1 7:41pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	I'm actually really sad she's going to have to take poor Wobbler apart. I hope she does rebuild him. Now, onwards to find out what that dream was about. Can't wait for the next post. -----signature----- Shattered Mirror - http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28487856/p1/?1 Proudly A/T and J/J Knighted by the wonderful SilSolo "Damned if I'm gonna lose to you!" "Then damned you shall be!" - my brother and I playing Smash Bros.
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Solo_and_Fel Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 7/1 8:37pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	and he seemed to think Jaina was a five-year-old child who needed looking after and lots of affection no matter how often she tried to explain otherwise. "Is it Jagged?" "What?" "You talk about him a lot," Wobbler replied. "I mentioned him once." Your descriptions are fantastic and I enjoyed the humor you've injected here. "Can I have a hug before you take me apart?" Aw! I'm attached and in only one post! -----signature----- "Hurling black lightning is one thing, but quoting Kyp Durron puts me lower than I ever expected to get." To Suffer & Be Strong: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28435487&brd=10477 Check profile for more fics.
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Sticks Registered: Jan '01	Date Posted: 7/1 10:05pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	I want a Wobbler! Great update. Man, if you can make a droid seem this interesting and realistic, I can't wait to see what you do with characters that aren't constructed from scrap! -----signature----- Resistance - NJO-era massive AU http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28474811
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carr3107 Registered: May '08	Date Posted: 7/1 11:07pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	This is a really compelling story--I'm still trying to figure out who "he" is. Poor wobbler sticks with me.
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jedi_princess18 Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 7/2 3:45am Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	Just came across this- I'm hooked already. I also believe "he" is Anakin..... Wonder what everyone's reaction will be when she shows up? Please add me to your PM list! -----signature----- Would it help if I got out and pushed?
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corran2 Registered: May '06	Date Posted: 7/2 10:22am Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	This has got to be a record for you! Killing a character off in the first chapter, even if it isn't organic. Someone must not have liked Wall:e Anyway great chapter. You wouldn't think this chapter would have much, but it does. Rarely do good things happen to Jaina's friends, and you show that here. She doesn't think that the he is Jag, but that could possibly be misdirection. I'm really enjoying this Yobs! -----signature----- He changed the rules-Benjamin Linus MacCain/Palin 08! God Loves You! Current TV Show I'm viewing on DVD: The X-Files Season 4 Currently Reading- Bag Of Bones By Stephen King
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TheOnlyJediPrincess Registered: Jul '06	Date Posted: 7/2 1:16pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	I Love Wobbler! even though he has to be taken apart. He kind of reminds me of 3PO in a very childish way. Great Job! -----signature----- "The truth is always greater then the words we choose to describe it." http://jediseeker1.deviantart.com/ http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/24991271/p5/?120 Padawan to Aiel The Key http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27627057/p1/?7
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Spike2002 Title: FF-UK RSA Arena Manager Registered: Feb '02	Date Posted: 7/2 3:52pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	That must be the weirdest droid, ever -----signature----- "It may be that our role on this planet is not to worship God, but to create him." - Arthur C. Clarke I agree with halibut Master to Louis_Skywalker
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Jedi-Ant Registered: Jan '07	Date Posted: 7/2 3:58pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	Spike2002 posted: That must be the weirdest droid, ever Weird, but oh so adorably cute! -----signature----- Solar Eclipse - Twilight/SW X-Over: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28626695/p1/?0 And it grew both day and night, Till it bore an apple bright, And my foe beheld it shine, And he knew that it was mine. - A Poison Tree, William Blake.
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Jaina_and_Jag Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 7/2 9:09pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	Wobbler is awesome! Sounds like just the kind of friend Jaina would need after everything she went through. Too bad she has to take him apart. Definitely interested in where you're taking this.
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 7/2 9:25pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	I'm enjoying this immensely, and I really find Jaya's droid friend amusing. A great post , and can I get on any pm list you've got going for this? Thanks! -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok No Krakana - http://nokrakana.wrighton.org Believe in the Constitution? Ron Paul '08
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TelannaTani Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 7/3 2:27pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	Quite the yarn you're building, filled with all sorts of interesting tidbits, as usual. So far, Dagobah, the cave, her burns, Wobbler, the mysterious "he" she must save... all adds up to more mysteries. I look forward to more. -----signature----- John 8:31-32 Callsign: "Voz" Padawan to BigFatty
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iamobiwan1970 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 7/3 4:13pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	OOOO I am so glad I found this! It's a very different take on what will Jaina do next: Instinctively she reached for her lightsaber and again felt silly. She'd dismantled the weapon when she left the Jedi Order and came to Dagobah to live in solitude. In order to defeat Darth Caedus— to kill her twin brother, Jacen Solo— Jaina had chosen to become something other than a Jedi. When it was over, there was no going back for her, and she was wise enough to know that if she continued, she would only be following her brother's path. She could feel that he had made a similar choice once, deciding that the Jedi way just wasn't enough, and that the ends justified the means to secure galactic peace... There would never be peace for her, she knew, but she needed to be alone. It didn't matter where, Dagobah was simply the first planet that came to mind. She left everything behind. Excellent! So sad, but realistic. The dream at the start was pretty intense. And I like Wobbler, she better not dismantal him, he's got personality. Can't wait to figure out how the blood trail got on her again. -----signature----- Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there, with open arms and open eyes.
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YodaKenobi Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: May '03	Date Posted: 7/3 5:02pm Subject: RE: Blood Trail (Post-LotF: Jaina, Tahiri, Ben, Jag, Han, Leia, Luke) Updated 7/1/08!
	zonzo: I IZ DA WINNER!!! Way to go Jaina is killing her only friend? How mean... Well, dismantling him Hopefully we'll see Wobbler again. Thanks for reading and your reply Ant: Dammit!! Second. Nothing wrong with that See, this is what happens when I take a 30-second chocolate break. I endorse chocolate breaks no longer how long they take Replying to some replies first.. I seem to be. Just in the right place at the right time, I guess (until now, that is). :-p You were still pretty quick! Well, you know what I'm talking about now! And yeah, I'd heard the news about Zekk. sighs Well, he was never a big favourite of mine, anyway. Me either really. Though I thought he was pretty good in LotF. Yeah, because he's awesome! Agreed Ah, ok, I'd not heard of that (should really read the books). Thanks for the clarification. No problem. It was one of my favorite parts of the book. Well, I've only read a handful of pages from the whole series, and what I read bored me. The NJO really kicked a* compared to LOTF. I think it had something to do with Anakin..* I think you're right Cool. I'm really looking forward to what you've got up your sleeve for Luke. If half the things I'm speculating about Luke come about in this 'fic, it's going to be an interesting ride, that's for sure. I really can't wait!! We'll see Luke in a little while. We've got a couple other stops to make first... Sil: Jaina Jaina... She's only doing what she has to Thanks for reading and replying! Jag4Me: Dang it! How did you get me all mushy over a droid?! I'm not sure He really won my heart when he asked her if it was Jagged. That must be it then Wobbler has a mind like a steel trap. I'm sure he won't be letting go of that. Excellent update! You gave me just enough to keep me wanting more! Thanks so much and thanks for reading Ant: I'm too lazy to do another edit I'm the same way hums LOST theme music Checks calender and sees that it's 7 months until Lost* comes back* Again, lovely opening paragraphs with amazing descriptions!! Feels like I'm on Dagobah, sweating my guts out with her. Thanks! I'll get you a towel While I'm on that train of thought, I'll make a random observation -- if Jaina's sweating this much, on a regular basis, she's kinda lucky she's in exile. I doubt after two years she's got much deoderant left, and those swamps don't exactly look like they'd cleanse the skin too well. Perhaps Jaina makes her own deoderant and even soap. She's kind of like the Tyler Durden of Dagobah But seriously, we all know girls don't smell bad when they sweat Not Anakin?!? is hopeful That would be cool... Oh.. it's just a droid.. Oh well (but it was great to read the descriptions of Jaina's electronic friend -- brilliant writing there!) Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to write about. Aww, this is really cute!! You're making me love a droid that's not R2 -- how dare you! lol. It took me some time to decide what personality to give to Jaina's sidekick, and I wasn't even sure whether to make it a droid or not, but I think this one will work otu best. Aww, again! Allana!! What a little sweetie! hugs for Allana We'll be seeing her later as well. This part made me LOL, though -- "having the voices in her head start answering" Hehe. Jaina wasn't planning on using the Force to keep her sanity so she had to do it another way than Yoda and Obi-Wan. LMAO!! Glad you liked that. snorts spits coffee all over computer screen This is great -- Wobbler is classic! Cool, I'm glad you like him so much Ooh, so that's what she's doing. She's getting out of there. Yep. I guess we can assume she believes that message from her brother, if that's what it was. The blood stains probably help... Ok, I just had a horrible thought. Wobbler's been constructed with various parts, right? Is Jaina going to have to destroy him - her only companion for two years - so she can get off the planet to save Luke? You're good Right on as usual. Little droid's got a stellar memory. We'll probably get into more of that later. Yep, I'm afraid I was right. She's gonna strip him. It'll be okay Look at those puppy-dog eyes!! Look at them! Ant imagines Wobbler looks like Wall-E Only a little more scrap-like. I haven't seen that yet, but it looks really cute. Definitely want to see Kung Fu Panda more though wipes away a tear I wasn't crying, honest!! Aww. Don't worry, I won't make fun of you... What a sweet, sweet little droid! Such a lovely creation there, YK. Thank you, glad you've taken a liking to Wobbler. I wasn't really sure what everyone's reaction would be. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! It had lots of snappy humour, and a few touching moments with Wobbler. I heart that little guy. Can't wait to read more! Aww, thanks Glad you enjoyed it so much and am honored you think so much of Wobbler. Thanks for reading and replying! Tahi: Cool bananas - just peeping in in my lunch hour - will catch up later. I hope you like it! Thanks for stopping in. Draconarius: I'm actually really sad she's going to have to take poor Wobbler apart. I hope she does rebuild him. Glad to see you're liking little Wobbler I'd say there's a high probability she does rebuild him. Now, onwards to find out what that dream was about. We'll find out what Jaina thinks it's about in the next post, at least... Can't wait for the next post. Thanks and thanks for reading Solo_and_Fel: Your descriptions are fantastic and I enjoyed the humor you've injected here. Thank you so much! I wasn't really sure how this would come off. Aw! I'm attached and in only one post! Glad to hear it. This works a lot better if you're attached to the characters. thanks for reading and your reply Sticks: I want a Wobbler! Ahh, my plan is working. I only introduced this character because I plan on selling Wobbler dolls for $29.95 in the Blood Trail gift shop. Get them while they're hot Great update. Man, if you can make a droid seem this interesting and realistic, I can't wait to see what you do with characters that aren't constructed from scrap! lol! We'll be seeing some more flesh and blood characters in the next update. One who is very well known to most of you Glad you liked Wobbler so much. Thanks for reading and replying carr3107: This is a really compelling story--I'm still trying to figure out who "he" is. Thanks. There are a lot of good possibilities, IMO... Poor wobbler sticks with me. Hehe, glad to hear it. Thanks for reading and your reply jedi_princess18: Just came across this- I'm hooked already. I also believe "he" is Anakin..... As an unabashed Anakin fan, this is by far my favorite guess. Seeing Anakin alive would bring warm feelings to my heart Glad to hear the story grabbed you. Wonder what everyone's reaction will be when she shows up? I'm sure they'll be surprised, but we'll get to see at least one person's reaction in the next post. Please add me to your PM list! Will do. Thanks for your interest in the story! And thanks so much for reading and replying corran2: This has got to be a record for you! Killing a character off in the first chapter, even if it isn't organic. Actually, I introduced and killed a character named Wylla Kor back in the first chapter of Exodus. It was from her PoV too, and the death was quite gruesome Someone must not have liked Wall:e Haven't seen it yet, but I'm hoping I'll get a chance. A couple others I'm more anxious to see at the moment. Anyway great chapter. Thanks! You wouldn't think this chapter would have much, but it does. Rarely do good things happen to Jaina's friends, and you show that here. Thanks, it was mostly just about showing Jaina's reaction to her "dream"— that she believes someone is actually in danger and is going to do something about it, but I also wanted to show more of what her life was like on Dagobah and that meant introducing Wobbler. I was considering making her "sidekick" a "Hit-Squib" who'd been stranded on Dagobah after trying to kill her (see Dark Nest if you haven't read it, the Squibs put a hit out on Jaina ) but a droid will work much better into the overall plot of the story for a number of reasons As you pointed out, I think it also reveals something about Jaina's character and her relationships with others. She doesn't think that the he is Jag, but that could possibly be misdirection. Very good point. We'll find out who Jaina thinks it actually is in the next chapter. I'm really enjoying this Yobs! Thanks, I'm glad to hear it, and thanks for reading TheOnlyJediPrincess: I Love Wobbler! even though he has to be taken apart. He kind of reminds me of 3PO in a very childish way. Hehe. That's an interesting comparison. Something about him reminds me of the teddy bear robot from AI Great Job! Thanks and thanks for reading! Spike: That must be the weirdest droid, ever That was my general reaction to the whole post, to be honest. When I was done I felt like the whole thing was just weird. My beta seemed to like it though and convinced me it was okay to post Thanks for reading and replying Ant: Weird, but oh so adorably cute! Gives Ant a 10% discount on a Wobbler doll™ Jaina_and_Jag: Wobbler is awesome! Yay, glad you like him! Sounds like just the kind of friend Jaina would need after everything she went through. Hmm, good point Too bad she has to take him apart. Hopefully she'll reassemble him someday... Definitely interested in where you're taking this. Thanks. I think you'll like the next post Thank you for reading and your reply Kidan: I'm enjoying this immensely, and I really find Jaya's droid friend amusing. Thank you, I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it all so much, and Wobbler as well. A great post , and can I get on any pm list you've got going for this? Sure thing, thanks for your interest And thanks for reading and replying as well. Telanna: Quite the yarn you're building, filled with all sorts of interesting tidbits, as usual. So far, Dagobah, the cave, her burns, Wobbler, the mysterious "he" she must save... all adds up to more mysteries. I look forward to more. Thanks! We'll probably have a lot more questions than answers for awhile, but we'll at least be learning what Jaina thinks is going on soon. Thanks so much for reading and your reply iamobiwan: OOOO I am so glad I found this! It's a very different take on what will Jaina do next: Thanks, I'm glad to have you on board Excellent! So sad, but realistic. Thanks again The dream at the start was pretty intense. Yeah, and it seems to have spilled over into Jaina's waking life. And I like Wobbler, she better not dismantal him, he's got personality. Well, it sounds like she's going to have to Can't wait to figure out how the blood trail got on her again. We'll find out eventually, along with the "why?" Thanks so much for reading and replying Thanks again, everyone -----signature----- FADA Therapist The Lands of the Dead: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28522077/p1/ Blood Trail: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28636429/p1 "We're Jedi, not assassins."— Anakin Solo
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