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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 7/11 8:10am Subject: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina - Date Edited: 7/11 6:54pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Flowerlady
	Okay... I know I should be updating my other fics, but over the weekend I was doing some repainting and redecorating and this song kept being played on the local station here...And, well, this was the product of what happens when you spend five days painting. Not sure if it's a good thing or bad...You decide. Title: You Look Good in My Shirt Author: Flowerlady Genre: Silly, flirty mush, humor? Timeframe: Post LotF Characters: Jag/Jaina Disclaimer: The universe belongs to the great GL. The song “You Look Good in My Shirt” belongs to Keith Urban. Summary: I think the genre and the characters say it all… Author’s Note/ Dedication: I don’t often do this, but I have to dedicate this fic to several of my friends and fellow readers. First, to the three Jagateers…you’ll see where you come in, though the spellings may be different… Next, I have to recognize Ceillean, because her fic Emergence of the Kyp Clones and the way she in which she brings in the Kyp Durron fan club, inspired me to do the same here with real life Jag fans. You Look Good in My Shirt For the past six months I worked as the main wrangler of the rancors and gundarks that make up the Moffs’ Council. Finally, I felt that I could trust them enough not to form a coup while I was gone, though I still wasn’t totally confident that some of them wouldn’t try something. So, to ensure my interests, I called in a trustworthy spy, someone that no one even knew was connected to me—my younger brother Cem. He had been the Fel family shadow child and grew up with a family my parents chosen who were loyal to the Empire and to the ideals of Thawn. Not that the great Admiral’s ideas were mine, but I knew I could trust Cem. So, after a fifteen minute run down on whom to watch the most among the Moffs, I bounded up the ladder of the X-wing I somehow acquired while with the Jedi, and headed for Coruscant. There was someone I desperately wanted to see. I landed in the Jedi Temple hangar, surprising the control officer with my request to keep my arrival a secret. Well, only secret from a certain Jedi Knight that was residing there. I knew it was a futile hope, but it was worth a try. I grabbed my duffle and climbed down the ladder of my ship to find Luke Skywalker standing in the midst of the hangar. It didn’t surprise me to find the Grand Master, who really became the grand master of post-Caedus galactic politics, waiting for me. I knew he’d been informed the moment I contacted the Temple requesting permission to land. I also got the feeling that he would probably want a report of how his handpicked Imperial head of state was doing. I really still had a rather large bone to pick with him. Although, things were going well, and overall, I think, I turned out to be a good choice to keep the Empire in line; it still infuriated me that Luke played me like a Dejarik piece. He stood there, hands tucked into the sleeves of his robe, in that aloof manner I think all Jedi Masters are trained from birth to stand in. “Ahh…Grand Moff Fel, what a pleasant surprise,” Luke said with a bow. “Master Skywalker.” I sat down my bag and returned the bow. “It’s good to see you, as well.” “I didn’t know you were coming to Coruscant.” He smiled and there was definitely a twinkle in his eyes. “Usually, where you are concerned, the HoloNet would have had news of your visit all over the galaxy.” I grinned back and simply said, “This isn’t an official visit. The HoloNet still thinks I’m tucked away in that palace that I still am having trouble calling home.” Luke chuckled and then looked as if he was about to say something as if his eyes caught sight of something or someone else behind me, but he quickly switched his attention to me and said, “Yeah, I guess Pellaeon’s mansion would take some getting used to. Leia has told me that it is rather impressive and that was even before the Yuuzhan Vong attacked Bastion.” Before I could form an answer, two very small and callused hands covered my eyes. I wasn’t sure what to think until I heard whispered in my ear, “Guess who.” My heart leapt at the sound of that voice, but I decided to have some fun. Obviously, she was. “Oh…emm…let me see…it’s either Kick or Kris. Wait. No. It might be Cynn or Ceil. No? Oh, I know it must be Rose!” When you walked up behind me and covered my eyes, And whispered in my ear, guess who, I rattled off names like I really didn't know, But all along I knew it was you. “Jagged Fel!” she yelled and spun me around. I laughed at the indignantly incredulous expression on Jaina Solo’s face. “I cannot believe you!” “Well, I’m a popular guy these days. You know women all over the galaxy suddenly think I’m the most eligible bachelor. And rather hot, too. I even have a fan club on Bastion. Can you believe that? They call themselves the Jagateers. Or something like that.” She stared at me as if I’d grown another head. Eventually she said, “You’re joking, right?” “Nope. They even claim I wear red swim trucks.” Suddenly, Luke coughed; I completely forgot he was there. Then he quickly said, “I think I’ll leave you two to catch up. See ya later.” After he left, Jaina grinned mischievously as she repeated almost seductively, “Red swim trucks. I wonder how they found out about those.” I matched her grin as I remembered that wonderful vacation on Chandrilia before we broke it off and I had gone back to the Chiss. “But I definitely remember that gold string bikini…and I remember when you seemed to have lost it in the Silver Sea as well.” She blushed a beautiful shade of crimson and chided, “You are the one who lost it, not me. Sweet Force, I had never been so embarrassed in all me days as I was when that jogger found my top washed up on shore while we were otherwise occupied further out in the water.” “At least we were too far out for him to get a good look at just what we were doing.” She groaned self-consciously, and I laughed as I wrapped my arm around her shoulders and headed toward the exit of the hangar. Once we reached the main area of the Temple, she asked, “So, where are you staying?” I looked down into her deep, soulful, brown eyes and replied, “I don’t know. I was hoping that you’d have some idea.” She gave me a smile that made my heart race and then she said, “Why don’t you come back to my place. I can fix us something to eat and we can catch up on what you’ve been up to that would warrant having a fan club of half crazed women who want to see you in red swim trunks and call themselves Jagateers.” I leaned down and whispered in her ear, “You can be the goddess of the Jagateers if you want. I’ll even dig out my red swim trunks.” She gave me a wicked smirk that just set my blood boiling. “Maybe.” And the longer we talked, the more we laughed, And wondered why we didn't last, It had been a long time, but later last night, Baby, we caught up real fast. Jaina allowed me to take a much needed shower while she fixed us something to eat. Jaina was far from a great cook, but the simple meal of spiceloaf and baked tubers was just what I needed after eating far too exotic foods back on Bastion. But it wasn’t the food that I realized I enjoyed most, it was Jaina. We laughed and talked, catching up on the past months in a way brief holocalls could never achieve, and I began to wonder why we weren’t like this before. Sure, there were moments she would grow sad, especially if something regarding Jacen was mentioned. Although, I knew she’d never fully understand why he did what he did, or why things ended the way they did, she was beginning to accept what happened and was beginning to move on. Of course, I knew there was another reason for her recovery, as well. Two days after Jaina came out of bacta and following the inauguration of Daala, Zekk was finally found. He was nearly dead, having been floating in space for days in a hibernation trance. But after a week in bacta, he was no worse for wear. He was truly a wonderful friend to Jaina, and to me, and I owed him big time for being there for Jaina while I had to play politics with my Moffs and Chief of State Daala. It helped that I didn’t feel jealous of him anymore. If I did, I’m not so sure I’d been so willing to spend months away, leaving Jaina with him as her main support outside of her family. It seemed amazing to me, but the Jedi had made a lasting impression on Tenel Ka’s cousin, Taryn Zel. She never left his side while he hung in the balance between life and death. In fact, she became instrumental in locating him. Now six months later, the two of them were talking marriage. I took a drink of my ale l and couldn’t help to drink in the sight of her across the table from me. She had removed her outer tunic and was dressed only in a black tank top that I think had to be the lowest cut tank top I’ve ever seen her wear. Jaina had always had a great body, but she was looking even better then I remembered at that moment. “Jag? Did you hear what I said?” “Huh?” I quickly met her gaze and she instantly realized where my attention had been. To my surprise she didn’t blush, or become angry at me, instead she raised her dark brow in questioning, and I wondered what she was thinking. “I said that I can’t help but wonder if there’s something more to the Zel twins than they’ve left us know.” “Oh. Yeah.” I stammered and then got my mind back onto our conversation. “Well, what if they aren’t Tenel Ka’s cousins. I mean, what if they are more closely related.” “How can they be more closely related…” she let the sentence trail and then she grinned. “Well, now, that would be interesting. No wonder they’re so loyal to Tenel Ka.” I shrugged and took a drink of my ale; after swallowing, I said, “It’s not a new concept. No one in the Empire realizes one of my advisors is my brother. Cem was our shadow child and grew up in the Empire with a foster family. No one would ever know that his real name is Cem Fel.” She sniggered as she lifted her ale bottle. “I wonder if Zekk knows more details and he’s been sworn to secrecy. But really, I’m tired of talking about Zekk and everyone else. I’d much rather talk about us,” she added as she pulled her eyes from mine and let them travel over me much in the same way I was looking at her only moments before. It was enough to send my emotions spiraling in a way they hadn’t in more than ten years. However, it was when she stood up and reached for my hand that I realized she felt the very same way. I took her hand and let her lead me to the couch. She pushed me down and she climbed onto my lap. “Jaina…” I was breathless. She never was this forward. “What are you doing?” She ran her hands through my short hair and then over the sides of my face, down to the buttons on my shirt. She gave me a wicked look that could have spoke volumes, but also only said three little words…I want you. Then she kissed me. Within moments my shirt was open and her hands were running over me, setting my skin aflame. I quickly lifted her top and let my hands, and then my lips, devour what I’d been admiring earlier. It didn’t take us long to catch up real fast. Well now I'm not sayin' that we solved overnight, Every way that we went wrong, Oh, but what I'm seein' I'd sure love seein', Every mornin' from now on. The sun was bright as it shown through her small window of her bedroom. I squinted against the glare as the memories from the night before came drifting back. And I suddenly wanted to replay some of those memories in the most literal of ways. But when I reached for her, she was gone. I frowned and sat up, wondering where she could be. Then I smelled caf and knew. I was about to get out of bed, when she came through the bedroom door carrying two cups of the necessary brew. However, it wasn’t the caf that I noticed the most. I’ve seen Jaina dressed in many things in the years I’ve known her. I still vividly remember the red gown she wore on Hapes and the gold colored swimsuit we lost in the Silver Sea. I’ve seen her in flightsuits and in work coveralls, and I’ve seen her in nothing at all. However, as she stood there leaning on her hip provocatively against her door frame, holding two steaming cups of caf, and with her hair a tangled mess from our activity through the course of the night, I don’t think she ever looked as good as she did right then—or as sexy. “Good morning, flyboy,” she purred with a smile, but she didn’t move. She was content to let me take in the sight before me. “Good morning, Goddess.” I grinned at the way she narrowed her eyes at me, but not before they twinkled. We stared at each other for a few moments. I have no idea if this will work. We still have a lot of things that we just never talk about, but should. However, as she stood there wearing only my shirt from the night before, I knew this was how I wanted to wake up every morning for the rest of my days. And maybe it's a little too early, To know if this is gonna work, All I know is you're sure lookin', Good in my shirt. Fin… ~~~~~~~~~~~~ FL -----signature----- I used to dream of Kyp or Jag, now it's Edward Cullen...I blame Cyn and Saber.. Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr
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Idrelle_Miocovani Title: Solar Power loving Scattergories Hostess Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 7/11 8:24am Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	Awwww... the mush! Loved it, Sara! -----signature----- "He said, 'Don't die under my command, you're enough of a pain without the paperwork.' That was it." "Tell him, 'Fine, there's no way I'm dying before you do, you morally bankrupt Colonel with a God complex.'" Padawan of DarthIshtar
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Jedimaster_JainaSolo Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 7/11 9:12am Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	aww, how sweet Dana -----signature----- Excited padawan of NYCitygurl Behind the Durasteel Mask: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28439445 "Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young..." 1 Timothy 4:12
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Aleria Registered: Apr '07	Date Posted: 7/11 9:13am Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	That was all snugly! And certainly provoked my imagination... Liked the light humour and Jag's first person POV! A different way of looking into his thoughts. -----signature----- Burden of the Throne - http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28365918/p1/?0 Liaison to the House of Fel of the Corellian FC "You know, sometimes I amaze even myself." - Han
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JAGSGURL15 Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 7/11 9:16am Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	pure mush... how lovely! -----signature----- Mush Queen of TKL's LOMIN ALE WRAITHS Living In DE'NILE i <3 JJ REDICK ~&NY YANKEES&~ (((DUKE BLUE DEVILS)))
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Jag4Me Title: Bet Your Knowledge and Man Bites Dog Hostess Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 7/11 10:10am Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	This is exactly how imagine Jag's sense of humor that he keeps locked inside. What a fun piece!! -----signature----- "Your new nickname, especially in the TIS circle, is the Stoner." - Trika_Kenobi "All biologists know that the peacock with the most extravagant tail wins the peahen." Archy McNally
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Jainasolo101 Registered: Dec '07	Date Posted: 7/11 10:42am Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	Great Job. I'm glad Zekk was found and is happy with Tenel Ka's cousin. I am really glad Jaina and Jag are together again! Please keep writing more! -----signature----- " Do or do not. There is no try." Jagged Fel ROCKS! I love Twilight.
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ccp Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 7/11 10:46am Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	Very nice -----signature----- Padwan to Big Fatty If someone says, "Have a nice weekend," I never say, "You too." Because I never know if, perhaps, by the time the weekend rolls around, I will have other plans for that person. Come Friday, I may wish to have them slain. - George Carli
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canadianjedimama Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 7/11 11:28am Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina - Date Edited: 7/11 11:31am (1 edits total) Edited By: canadianjedimama
	looks around and sees that she's the first Jagateer through the door I've been immortalized in one of your fanfic's Sara... Life is now complete! Jaina standing in the doorway in Jag's shirt... And I mean that in a totally hetero fangirl sort of way. 'Cause it means Jag didn't have it on. This made me smile. A lot. Great job! Cyn ETA: For the past six months I worked as the main wrangler of the rancors and gundarks that make up the Moffs’ Council Now this right here... got me good and distracted. Jag as a cowboy. Cowboys wear chaps. Assless chaps make me think Cade. Thinking about Cade and Jag together... See what you did! Now my 'puter is covered in drool! -----signature----- Lucky member of the Jagateers, my e-sister's of Jag-love! Current avatar is a homage to my first ban.... I stink at Shelf of Shame! But I'm playing again!!!
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Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 7/11 12:15pm Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	Sweetness!!!!! Yumness!!!! You can also officially add my name to the newest list of crazed fans LOL--and the marvel of it all is that this loveship didn't come about through profic first and then fanfic--fanfiction is solely responsible for the depth and deliriousness of my J/J admiration. My L&M obsession started with profic and then took off with fanfic--so I also owe a debt of lovitude to the Jagateers -----signature----- Luke/Mara--without end forever ginchy, Irish =I Squggles before I read a word
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Solo_and_Fel Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 7/11 3:24pm Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	For a moment I thought the title line said "Fun, Filthly Mush". How could I not read it after that? Nice job. This was mushtastic indeed. -----signature----- "Hurling black lightning is one thing, but quoting Kyp Durron puts me lower than I ever expected to get." To Suffer & Be Strong: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28435487&brd=10477 Check profile for more fics.
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Myriad_Daydreams Registered: Jun '07	Date Posted: 7/11 4:49pm Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	Loved this! -----signature----- And if the answer is no / Can I change your mind? Bring on the drabbles: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29099025/p1/?12
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jedi_princess18 Registered: Jun '05	Date Posted: 7/11 6:56pm Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	I loved this! I already liked the song, this made me like it even more!! -----signature----- Would it help if I got out and pushed?
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jadesabre75 Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 7/11 9:10pm Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	Flowerlady posted: Okay... I know I should be updating my other fics, but over the weekend I was doing some repainting and redecorating and this song kept being played on the local station here...And, well, this was the product of what happens when you spend five days painting. Not sure if it's a good thing or bad...You decide. Honey, it's always a good thing when you write. I don't care what it is!!!!! Summary: I think the genre and the characters say it all… Author’s Note/ Dedication: I don’t often do this, but I have to dedicate this fic to several of my friends and fellow readers. First, to the three Jagateers…you’ll see where you come in, though the spellings may be different… Next, I have to recognize Ceillean, because her fic Emergence of the Kyp Clones and the way she in which she brings in the Kyp Durron fan club, inspired me to do the same here with real life Jag fans. OMG! You are so freaking cool!!!!!!!! Woot! Imperial Red Swim Trunks!!!!! Yeah baby! FL J/J mush....man it's a wonderful thing. This was brilliant as always my dear. I'm humbled to have made my way into one of your fics...He He. -----signature----- Stories are in my bio! Have at it! "Writers block is when your characters get tired of everything you do to them and go on strike." Lucky Member of the Jagateers: Jagateer of the Imperial Red Swim Trunks
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Ceillean Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 7/12 12:28pm Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	Oh wow. I've been turned. I like Jag now, too! This was so great! I completely enjoyed it and at the end there...yeah, big big smile on my face. Next, I have to recognize Ceillean, because her fic Emergence of the Kyp Clones and the way she in which she brings in the Kyp Durron fan club, inspired me to do the same here with real life Jag fans. It's fun bringing in the FanClub, isn't it? I'd love to read more about the Jagateers. That is one hilarious name. Thanks so much for the PM! -----signature----- I'm having trouble dealing with the fact that Kyp Durron is a fictional character
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THE_PIED_PIPER Title: Chapter Rep Knoxville, TN Registered: Jun '06	Date Posted: 7/12 6:15pm Subject: RE: You Look Good in My Shirt--Oneshot Songfic, Fun, Flirtly Mush--Jag/Jaina
	Oh my goa' Sarah. I've had a hell of a day at sea, I'll be back. Kick -----signature----- "I'm going to be like Leia." - Me at age four "You're the Yen to my Yang." - My husband Roan Fel's badassery knows no bounds! Jagged Fel
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