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THE_EVIL_CLIFFIE
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Title: The Legacy Of Gallifrey
Author: THE_EVIL_CLIFFIE
Timeframe: 21 ABY, some time after the conclusion of DW seiries 4.
Characters: tenth Doctor, Jenny (his Daughter) Jack Harkness, assorted NJO Characters... I'm keeping shtum about the other DW ones! 
Summary:The TARDIS brings The Doctor, Jenny and Captain Jack to Myrkr in the fated jedi mission there, but why? What is the sinister plot behind the Yuuzhan vong war? And why are the seers of the priest caste predicting the fall of the great one? It's up to the Doc to find out... and maybe save a couple of universes along the way!
Notes: Posts will probably be reallysporadic, so brew that tea! (i'll try to post on saturdays but no guaruntees) I probably won't be doing PMs, as this is my first fic. I haven't actually read edge of victory or sbs yet *shakes fist at wookieepedia* so any inconsitencies are blamed on AU-ness. PS; as you've probably noticed, I can't spell. As I'm English I'll use the english spelling for most things exept lightsaber. 
The usual Disclaimer.
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Prologue
In the empty space between dimensions, something stirred. Nothing was meant to be here, but something was. It had been pulled here from one of the many realities that made up the confines of its nonexistent prison. It could not see, or hear, or feel. It was, for the purposes of the universes, dead.
But it could think. And it thought. It thought of the beings that had defeated it and sent it here. It thought of revenge. It thought of the agent that was even now infiltrating the target universe and opening the barriers. It had waited a long time for this, even if time was irrelevant here. It cast it thoughts to the galaxy, which, even now, was being torn apart by war that was ripping th galaxy apart. It thought of the weak-minded and superstitious individual the agent was manipulating to engineer the war. It thought of these jeedai, as the infiltrator called them. It thought, and a thought appeared in the mind of the infiltrator.
Seek.
Locate.
Exterminate.
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Intriguing start. I'd like to see where you go with this.
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Hi, I just thought, what the hell, heres the first bit of chapter 1.
Chapter one
The TARDIS
The diffuse glow of the TARDIS interior highlighted the curves and eccentricities of the hexagonal control panel, Jenny thought as she handed the Doctor – her father - his sonic screwdriver. On the other side of the console worked Captain Jack. With a blizz! the screwdriver glowed blue and the bit of console it was pointed at bleeped.
“Couldn’t throw me the sonic, could ya?” asked Jack, looking up from his pet project, the extrapolator.
As the Doctor chucked Jack the sonic, Jenny asked, “so no more fluctuations or random destinations, then?”
“No” replied the Doctor, “now the TARDIS should go where we tell it to. Should. That’s not considering fused co-ordinates, time paradoxes, temporal shifts, anomalies or Dalek-transmitted distress signals. Or chains.”
“Chains?” asked Jenny, sceptically.
“Well” said the Doctor “someone could hook us to a chain and pull us along. Or a gravity lock.” cut in Jack from across the console. “I’ve finished with the extrapolator for now. We’ve got a fully functional shield.”
Suddenly, with an immense Bang! The TARDIS console exploded with sparks as the ship lurched into the Time Vortex.
“Where are we?” shouted the Doctor, who had been spilled halfway across the room by the ship’s bucking.
“Andromeda galaxy. Local date, 27 ABY.”
“Destination?” asked the Doctor.
“Myrkr” Replied Jenny.
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Anyone wanna be on the PM list?
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Have I scared any readers off? 
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If I seem to be posting at stupid times, its cos i live in belgium and so i'm 9 hrs ahead of u guys
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don't worry, I'll be on the PM list if you want
however, don't get too discouraged if people don't leave replies.
I think the most important thing you can do is finish the story, even if no one seems to be reading
I guess people will only take you seriously if you finished a story or something.
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Thanks! I'll post the bits of the story that ive done first, but then it'll be pretty sporadic.
Maybe people just don't like crossovers?
Yuuzhan Vong Worldship
Baanu Rass,
Myrkr orbit,
Voxyn cloning Grashal
Anakin Solo was about to die. He could feel blood leaking through the hole in his abdomen from his ruptured spleen. The Thermal Detonator hung in the air in front of him. He swallowed, tried to steady his mind, and floated the Baradium-filled sphere towards the cloning vat. His mental hand held the grenade above the bubbling green mass of liquid, and let go.
The Det splashed into the bubbling green goo. Three seconds later the vat exploded from the inside, spattering Anakin with Voxyn birthing fluid. The shrieks of the baby monsters filled the air and grated against his ears.
He sagged against the wall of the Grashal and let a little sob escape his lips.
I’m not going to see Tahiri again.
All he had wanted to do was to say goodbye. But she hadn’t known how serious the wound was. None of them had, except Anakin. He realized how stupid he’d been.
The others could’ve finished the mission.
No. They couldn’t have. He had destroyed the lab so they could destroy the Voxyn Queen.
Tahiri!
He tried to touch her mind through the Force, but he was too weak for even that.
He knew what happened now.
Anakin Solo, Jedi Knight, sat back and waited for death.
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This is intriguing. The prologue scares me a bit though...  I don't know that much about Doctor Who, but it seems interesting enough. I guess I'll learn something while reading this. You could put me on the PM list, please, it would really help me keep track of the updates.
Like MU said, don't worry too much about the replies. I don't think it's about people not liking crossovers, this kind of stories might just be a little harder to grasp if you're not familiar with the other fandom. I guess it just takes a while for a new writer to grab readers' attention here. Just keep at it and at some point more people will start to respond. This is good writing, I like your style so far. I'd say it's just a matter of time.
And the time zone thing - I'm in Finland which is in +2 GMT. So either my posting is at weird times or my sleeping rhythm is way out of track. Mostly it's been the latter!
Any way, good work. Do keep posting!
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Aleria - you're on the list. as for the not knowing stuff, don't worry, i'll probably have the Doc explaining stuff as we go along. It's probably best to have seen at least series 4, but i'll give you background information if you ask. thanks for the reply!  In belgium we're on GMT+1, but TFN runs on GMT-8! So Everyone Asks me do i really stay up that late! LOL
EDIT: the prologue is supposed to be scary! Look at the last few lines! 
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New Post!
Yuuzhan Vong Worldship
Baanu Rass,
Myrkr orbit,
Seer’s Grashal
The Yuuzhan Vong seer Es Chis cast the entrails of the pathetic infidel once known as Ulaha Kore. Peering at the Bith guts, she saw something she would never dreamed of seeing. Murmuring in terror, she ran to the Priest. The mighty one looked down at her.
“What?”
“Master, I have seen something terrible”
“What?”
“The – the – the”
“Yes?”
“The Oncoming Storm”
I'll put more up later today as this is really short.
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here's the next post!
CHAPTER TWO
Yuuzhan Vong Worldship
Baanu Rass,
Myrkr orbit,
Voxyn breeding section
Tahiri’s world had ended. She couldn’t feel him in the Force. He was gone. Her Anakin was gone. And her world had ended. She looked across at Jaina. How could she look so focused? All Tahiri wanted was to curl up into a ball and cry. Actually, all she wanted was to have Anakin back. He floated into her mind as he had been before the mission. Smiling,
loving. Dead now. She wailed at the thought. Anakin. Gone. Forever. A dry sob escaped her parched and bleeding lips.
“Come on, Tahiri” Called Jaina.
“I’m coming.”
Bruised battered and dying inside, Tahiri walked down the passage to the queen’s lair. After all, if she died, she could be with him in whatever afterlife existed.
Yuuzhan Vong Worldship
Baanu Rass,
Myrkr orbit
The Doors of the TARDIS creaked open with a snap of the Doctor’s fingers.
“Well, this is cheerful.” commented Jenny, stepping out into the dark interior of the Worldship.
“Last time I buy my room when I arrive.” joked Jack, walking out of the police box after her.
“Must happen to you a lot.” said the Doctor emerging and closing the doors by snapping.
“Where’s the signal coming from?” asked Jack.
“There’s no signal.” replied the Doctor.
“But then why did the TARDIS bring us here?”
“It found a shatterpoint in history.”
“What’s that?” asked Jenny, before the conversation swept the subject away.
“It’s a kind of – well, a kind of hinge in time. It’s when a single choice changes the whole course and layout of history. Like, say, if Davros had been turned away from creating the Daleks. Sometimes, universes end because of shatterpoints. Sometimes, they’re created because of shatterpoints.”
“So, where is this shatterpoint?” asked Jenny.
“Guide us to it.”
“What?”
“Search around in your psyche, you’ll find it.”
“Doctor, I’m not a care bear.”
“What is a care bear anyway?” This was from Jack.
“It’s a kid’s cartoon.” The Doctor turned to Jenny. “Imagine your mind as the C attic in the TARDIS. Right? Now imagine that you’re looking for the Cybus chestplate cap. That’s the shatterpoint”
Jenny reached her hand out, whirled around several times, and set off.
“This way!”
“Very good, Jenny! Allons-y!”
Jenny ran off, closely followed by The Doctor. Jack looked around.
“Shouldn’t someone guard the TARDIS?” he asked.
“You want to stay here?” asked The Doctor from around the corner.
“Fair enough.”
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Just for the record, I have no knowledge at all of the Doctor Who Franchise
anyone something of interest for me here is the existence of a Yuuzhan Vong Seer class, something unexplored up to this point.
What is a Gallifrey?
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MU- thanks for replying! I like to think that the seers are part of the priest caste. As they're kept mostly away from the front, the new republic haven't found out about them. Gallifrey was the planet of the time lords. the doctor is a time lord, as, by extention, is Jenny. However Jenny was Progenated (a machine took a skin sample from the doc and grew Jenny) AFTER the time war, where the time lords fought a species called the Daleks. At the end of the time war, the doc set - something - off which destroyed the time lords, the Daleks, Gallifrey and Skaro (the Dalek's home planet). Quite a few Daleks survived, however .
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Sorry there's been no post today, but i've been ill. i'l do a double-up tommorow.
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Here's the Promised double-up!
Yuuzhan Vong Worldship
Baanu Rass,
Myrkr orbit,
Voxyn breeding section
Tahiri’s world had ended. She couldn’t feel him in the Force. He was gone. Her Anakin was gone. And her world had ended. She looked across at Jaina. How could she look so focused? All Tahiri wanted was to curl up into a ball and cry. Actually, all she wanted was to have Anakin back. He floated into her mind as he had been before the mission. Smiling, loving. Dead now. She wailed at the thought. Anakin. Gone. Forever. A dry sob escaped her parched and bleeding lips.
“Come on, Tahiri” Called Jaina.
“I’m coming.”
Bruised battered and dying inside, Tahiri walked down the passage to the queen’s lair. After all, if she died, she could be with him in whatever afterlife existed.
Yuuzhan Vong Worldship
Baanu Rass,
Myrkr orbit,
Voxyn cloning lab
Anakin could feel something strange in the Force. Two somethings, no, three. One was calm and self-assured, with none of the sense of mortality that permeated any other beings Anakin had met. The other two were… strange. One of them was curious, and full of life. The other was like fire and ice and rage, he was like the night and the storm and the heart of the stars. He bore a terrible sadness, and, at the same time, a bright, manic energy. He seemed like the centre of the universe, and at the same time, its destruction. He scared Anakin. They both burned brightly in the Force, as though they were power sources for it. As soon as he probed them, unbreakable Psychic barriers slammed down, preventing his entry.
“Well, someone’s been in here.” observed a dry female voice.
“Must’ve been one hell of a party.” said another voice, male this time.
“Yeah,” said a third voice that Anakin identified as coming from the scary one. “This is cloning technology. And organic – this galaxy isn’t supposed to have organic technology. At least, not now. That was the Triangulis galaxy.”
“What about the Triangulis galaxy?”
“Subjugated by a race using completely organic technology.”
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Triangulis is gone?”
“Yep. Well, not gone, just desolate and barren. Unless you’re a warlike technology-hating humanoid who is part of this species of technology-hating warlike humanoids.”
“Pity. Those droid species used to mix a good drink.”
“Is that all you think about?” asked the female voice.
“And proud of it-whoa!”
“What-aah!”
“What?” asked the female voice
“There’s a dead body on the floor!”
“There are lots, actually.”
“Why didn’t you tell me?”
“Nothing but a soldier, remember?”
A shadow fell across Anakin. He looked up into the grey eyes of a tall male human. He was the one who didn’t seem mortal.
“Doctor, we got a live one!”
There was a clatter, and a man ran over. He had bright blue eyes and scruffy brown hair. He was dressed in a brown pinstriped suit with only the top button of the jacket done up. He also wore battered sneakers, a long brown trenchcoat and a serious and slightly frowning expression. He was the scary one.
“It’s OK, I’m the Doctor, I can help.”
“Anakin Solo”
“Okay, Anakin. It’s alright.”
“You need to warn the others.”
“The others?”
“Doctor, he has a nasty hole in his stomach.”
“I know, Jenny. The others?”
“The team I led here. My brother and sister. Other Jedi. Tahiri… oh, Tahiri…”
“Who’s Tahiri?”
“My… my girlfriend.” Said Anakin, forcing the word through his lips. He’d never thought of her like that. “They went on.”
“On to what?”
“They need to kill the Queen.”
“The Queen?”
“The Voxyn Queen.”
“Right.”
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The Doctor stood up and turned to Jenny and Jack.
“He’s the shatterpoint.” The Doctor said quietly, so that Anakin couldn’t hear.
“What now?”
“We save him. Originally, the Time Lords would watch any shatterpoints and make sure history ran its correct course. Any tiny thing can set it off course.”
“So we make sure he does what he’s supposed to?”
“Fulfill his destiny.” cut in Jack.
“Hmmph. Time Lords don’t believe in Destiny.”
“Oh? I thought Time Lord society was based around Destiny.”
“Why are you pronouncing destiny with a capital D?”
“Because I am, Jenny. We do believe in Destiny, but we don’t believe in Destiny. Half the time, we make it happen. Used to, anyway.”
Jenny could tell that he was slipping into the sad and nostalgic tone and mood he got when he thought about the Time Lords. No wonder. He was the last Gallifreyan Time Lord in the Universe. Jenny was one of the species, too but she hadn’t been raised on Gallifrey. That made a difference.
“Doctor? Doctor!”
“Hmm? Oh, yeah. I need you two to help this team kill the cloning template. The Voxyn Queen.” He said, seeing the confused look on Jack’s face.
“Doctor, we’re going to need firepower to kill this thing.” She waved her hand at the corpses littering the battlefield that was the cloning lab.
The Doctor nodded.
“What’re you going to do?” asked Jack, oblivious to this exchange.
“I’m going to save him.” He said, indicating Anakin. He said this with the conviction in his voice and the glint in his eye that meant he was absolutely sure about something. It seemed to Jenny that he was only really the Doctor that was recorded in the mythology of so many cultures when he was like this. The avenging demon. The Ka Faraq Gatri. Time’s Champion. The Oncoming Storm.
“Anakin Solo isn’t supposed to die.”
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