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jaina1415
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Date Posted:
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A New Hope: NJO Style (AU)
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Okay, I'm writing this for my friend because she loves to read my fan fiction. I'm new here and I decided that I was going to post this work-in-progress as my first. It's probably gonna suck because I'm making it up as I go and it's completely unplanned, but let me know what you think.
WARNING: I like to torture my readers with cliffhangers!!! MWA-HA-HA-HA-HA
So enjoy and tell me what you think.
Summary: Star Wars: Episode IV - A New Hope using NJO characters.
Characters: All the originals, plus Mara, the Solo kids and.... drumroll please.... the Fels. (Gee, what do you think that means?)
Here we go! Sorry, the posts are kind of short.
*Part 1*
The Tantive IV raced across space, a large Star Destroyer chasing after her, spitting multitudes of laserfire. On board the Tantive IV, two droids -a golden protocol one and a blue and white astromech one -shuffled and rolled down the corridor.
There was a huge BANG!
''Did you hear that?" asked the golden one, C-3PO.
The other one, R2-D2, beeped an affirmative
''They shut down the main reactor,'' Threepio continued. "We'll be destroyed for sure." He paused. "This is madness."
"You're telling me."
Both droids turned to see a seventeen-year-old girl with dark brown hair and brown eyes wearing an olive green jumpsuit. It was Jaina Solo.
"Get moving," she said. An invisible force was suddenly pushing the two droids along...
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"Stang!" said Jaina suddenly. "I can't do that right now or I'll be cooked!"
"Can't do what?" asked Threepio (3PO).
Jaina ignored him. Protocol droids -especially ones with big mouths like Threepio -were untrustworthy. She then physically pushed them.
They came to the entrance of another corridor. Jaina turned to Threepio.
“Stay here. And keep a look out,” said Jaina.
“Yes, Miss Jaina,” said Threepio.
Artoo had already entered the corridor. Jaina went in after her.
Leia Organa Solo, Princess of Alderaan and Jaina’s mother, crouched before Artoo. “There,” said Leia. She turned to Jaina. “The plans are in Artoo.” She put her hands on Jaina’s shoulders. “Get them to Luke. And don’t let anyone know who or what you are.”
Jaina’s placed her hand over her thigh pocket, where her lightsaber was safely hidden. “Right,” she said.
The two women hugged. “Get these droids out of here. And be careful,” said Leia.
“You too. I love you.”
“Love you, too.”
The two women parted. Jaina walked out of the corridor with Artoo right behind her. She walked up to Threepio, taking her blaster out of its holster and lifting it to face level, pointing it up. “Let’s go,” she said, and led the droids off.
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Alright, that's entry one!!! Oh, and don't think that this is predictable. I might kill someone, and maybe someone else! =O =_(
Like I said, I'm just making this us as I go.
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jaina1415
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ACK! Typos! I didn't notice! Sorry guys. I didn't notice. you'll survive, won't you? 
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paltonae356
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Interesting. I definatly want to see what this turns out to be.
Cliffhangers?? Got me scared.
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jaina1415
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Maybe... if you're lucky... another post tomorrow. I have about 8 posts already written and ready to go! But I'm gonna get scarce here soon. Hope it's not on a cliffhanger
of course, it probably will be.  (I'm so evil).
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jaina1415
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OK, all edited. Let me know if there are any more. Typos are kind of irritating to me.
*waits patiently for more to read and comment*
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Trickster-Lead
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Hmmm this is neat, I like the idea and the feel you are going for. Well done... I'll keep up with this one.
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TheOnlyJediPrincess
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This sounds very intresting! I will be intresed in reading more!
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Jerisa_Skywalker
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I like the start. This is definitely one, I'd want to follow. If there's a PM-list, would you add me?
P.S.: Don't worry! We don't die from typos
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Okay... so I'm currently at a screenwriting camp at UCLA. I leave tomorrow. That's when I'm gonna get scarce because I'll be on vacation. I'll try to get one out tonight and sometime tomorrow. But no guarentees. I'm not one of those awesome people who has this all scheduled out. I'll try not to leave you guys for too long. I promise. Just enjoy the post and be wary... a cliffhanger may pop up when you least expect it.
*Part 2*
Jaina led the droids back through the corridors, holding the blaster up and hugging the wall, expecting stormtroopers at any second. She opened the hatch to the escape pod. Then she felt a small stab of pain. Her mother was going to be captured and probably interrogated with that horrible technology the Empire used to inflict pain on the innocent.
That was why it was so important that she get this vital information into the hands of the Rebel Alliance, and right now, her uncle Luke was the only one who could help.
"Go," she told the droids. Artoo rolled inside.
"I'm going to regret this," said Threepio as he ducked inside awkwardly due to the lack of flexibility that was typical of protocol droids. Jaina ducked in after him. Then shut the door and pressed the launch button.
Now came the most important part. If she failed at this task, all would be for nothing. She took a deep, calming breath. It was shaky, so she took a couple more. She then closed her eyes and and accessed the Force, searching for the line where her body ended and the rest of the universe began. She sensed the individual molecules and saw how instead of a set boundary, her body blended with the universe. She let it... and disappeared.
She disappeared to all Force-users and the sensors searching for life signs. To everyone in the universe except the droids, she didn't exist. If the sensors discovered her, they'd be shot down. If Darth Vader sensed her, they would be shot down...
Or worse.
Thankfully, Threepio was remaining quiet.
Even though she was nonexistent, she could still sense everything around her... and then she was thrown slightly upward as the escape pod entered the atmosphere of Tatooine, and was thrown more when they landed... or, actually, crashed.
It was times like this where Jaina really wished all spacecraft had landing gear. It would save a lot of pain.
"I've forgotten how much I hate space travel," said Threepio, who had been similarly thrown. Artoo scolded him. Artoo was always scolding him... at least that's how it sounded. Jaina didn't speak droid too well.
Jaina opened the hatch. "Come on," she said. "Let's go."
Artoo obediently used his booster rockets to exit the pod.
Threepio looked at Jaina before exiting himself. "Excuse me, Miss Jaina, but might I inquire as to where we are going?"
"Uncle Luke's," said Jaina. "Remember the Lars moisture farm you were on about twenty years ago?"
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Oooh!! So, now you see where we're getting off, here. Luke was on the farm 20 years ago! Comments!! ASAP!!!!!
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I'm very curious about the charaters and how they came to be in this mess. I'm enjoying the story very much so far!
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Thanks for your amazing comments! I'm really excited! Anyway, the next post is coming here soon.
Also, wish me luck. A scene from my screenplay for camp is being performed tomorrow. I hope people like it. But if you guys like this stuff, then maybe the scene will be a success.
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All right... Part 3. I didn't want you guys to wait too long. Darn. I'm too nice for my own good.*Part 3*
The three of them trudged through the sand, under the two blazing hot suns. If it would've worked, Jaina would've shot them both down with her blaster. Reality was evil.
She closed her eyes and reached out to the Force, searching for her uncle. She found him
A long ways away. She groaned.
"Is there something I can do, Miss Jaina?" asked Threepio.
"No. Not if you can speed up time so that we can get of this rock!"
Threepio shut up.
Artoo whistled mornfully.
The suns began to set. Jaina sighed. "Alright, let's stop for the night." She unslung her survival pack and pulled out a small portable tent. She could've just slept right there on a blanket with the sky as a ceiling, but she liked having something between her and Sand People and Krayt Dragons... even if it was just fabric. She took her lightsaber out of her pocket and put it on her belt. Sometimes, her lightsaber was ten times better than her blaster. She layed down, leaving the droids to keep watch, and dozed off. Little did she know that as soon as she was asleep, the Jawas stunned and took the droids to sell.
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Luke Skywalker kicked the disobedient moisture vaporator, then instantly regretted it as he felt like his toe nail was ripped off. The galaxy wasn't made for toes.
Luke cursed. The vaporators never worked. Ever.
"What's wrong, Uncle Luke?"
Luke turned to see his nephew, Anakin Solo. His other nephew, Jacen, was off gallivanting around the galaxy somewhere with Han Solo and Chewbacca. His niece, Jaina, had been with Leia... until now.
"Nothing," said Luke. "Did you feel your sister, Jaina, last night?"
"Yeah. She's really far away."
"Something's wrong. I have a bad feeling about this." Suddenly, Luke felt Jaina's presence again and looked up to see her coming towards them, lightsaber hanging from her belt. Oh, yes. There was trouble. Now he really had a bad feeling about this.
Anakin smiled and ran up to hug his sister. Luke did the same.
Jaina looked frantic. "Uncle Luke! I have an important message for you. It's from Mom. I had the plans for the Death Star. We need to get them to Grandpa on Alderaan as soon as possible."
Luke held up a hand. "Wait, what do you mean by 'had?'"
"The plans were put into Artoo." She gritted her teeth. "And those stupid Jawas took him and Threepio last night!!!!"
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Ouch! Hate to leave it there.
Okay, no. Not really. =) I love to torture people.
Of course, you know what's gonna happen.....
or so you think...
MWA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!!!!!!
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oh gosh. I just realized how much this post sucked. What do you think? Honestly?
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I liked it.... So when do the Fels come in...huh? huh?huh?
More?
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I liked it too! I was wondering where the other Solo children were. do we get to see Han and Jacen? It's very intresting that they are split up. Is there a reason for that? can't wait for more.
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Expect more on the week of the 28th. The Fels are coming very soon.
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