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Author Topic: Coloring Outside the Lines (Jariah Syn/Deliah Blue) Thanks! 10/17
ginchy 
Registered: May '05
44408_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 10/6/08 7:39pm Subject: RE: Coloring Outside the Lines (Jariah Syn/Deliah Blue) * Update 10/6 *
*sneaks in*

I know you saw my post in Diva's thread... *shifty eyes* Still haven't quite made it to the comic store, though, gal! shock

But reading this, I just feel so darn bad for Deliah. I know the heart wants what it wants, but dang it, can't she just want this Syn guy instead? He seems... good.

Now I need to go and sneak a peek over at SWFF. devil

Hooray for the update! Great job!!

 

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karebear214 
Registered: Sep '02
46804_2008 Winter Holidays
Date Posted: 10/6/08 9:28pm Subject: RE: Coloring Outside the Lines (Jariah Syn/Deliah Blue) * Update 10/6 *
Still amazing!

I love every part of this, from the way you are able to convincingly write Deliah's emotional turmoil to the way Syn can follow the erratic shifts in her female logic enough to make her feel better (well done, sir, that is almost never possible!)

I love Deliah and Corde facing off, it was written excellently.

And then there's Syn's suggestion to toss Calixte out an airlock... a great little comment.

Your attention to detail makes the whole story feel very real. I think I both laughed out loud and cried with the desire to give Deliah a big hug... Lucky for me Jariah is there to do that. wink

 

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VaderLVR64 
Title: Fan Fic Manager in Combat Boots
 Registered: Feb '04
40219_Obi- Wan<br>and Beru
Date Posted: 10/8/08 7:11pm Subject: RE: Coloring Outside the Lines (Jariah Syn/Deliah Blue) * Update 10/6 *
Your writing never fails to inspire me, and amaze me! You really bring these characters to vivid life.

applause

 

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TNPredsFan 
Title: FF Chapter Rep
Memphis, TN
Registered: Nov '04
43245_Jarael
Date Posted: 10/8/08 9:56pm Subject: RE: Coloring Outside the Lines (Jariah Syn/Deliah Blue) * Update 10/6 *
How do you manage to continually amaze me? You used the canon framework and made this so believable.

I loved this. I can't pick out one thing that I loved more than another. Cade may start getting jealous, though, if you keep writing Blue/Syn so well. tongue

Great job, Trace! hugs

 

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Jedi Trace 
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 Registered: Dec '99
46275_Morrigan Corde
Date Posted: 10/17/08 4:12am Subject: RE: Coloring Outside the Lines (Jariah Syn/Deliah Blue) Thanks! 10/17 - Date Edited: 10/17/08 4:36am (1 edits total) Edited By: Jedi Trace
diva: What things might have been if she had picked the other "brother" instead...

*nods* Maybe, someday, hopefully, we’ll find out why she didn’t. *burns incense to Legacy gods for a hint of Deliah’s back story* praying

Your connections between the characters are really great. I like how even the secondary characters are highlighted, like how Morrigan gets between Blue and the holo so Blue can't see Talon and Cade. Even Kee is very in character, and unique.

Thank you so much! The Claws of the Dragon arc was where I started reading the monthly comics. Being new to the genre, it felt like a looooooooong wait between those six issues and I read and re-read the monthlies to pass the time. No, I’m not obsessed at all! blush laugh



CJM: You're rapidly turning me into a Jeriah/Deliah shipper here, Trace!

Sorry!!! I gotta write some Cade/Blue and make it up to them. batting

This was even more awesome than the last... And I loved Morrigan here.

Thank you! grin I miss Morrigan…



ginchy: I know you saw my post in Diva's thread... *shifty eyes* Still haven't quite made it to the comic store, though, gal!

*waves hand Jedi mind trick style* Your LCS misses you… mischief

But reading this, I just feel so darn bad for Deliah. I know the heart wants what it wants, but dang it, can't she just want this Syn guy instead? He seems... good.

He is a great guy. In the canon story, they have a really nice dynamic and fun friendship. If Cade/Blue doesn’t work out (*sticks tongue out at Cade’s old girlfriend who just showed up*), I’d be happy with a Syn/Blue pairing. Jariah’s gal back ‘home’ might not like it, though.

Thanks for reading, chica! hugs



karebear: I love every part of this, from the way you are able to convincingly write Deliah's emotional turmoil to the way Syn can follow the erratic shifts in her female logic enough to make her feel better (well done, sir, that is almost never possible!)

blush Cade’s as dense as they get when it comes to that kind of thing so I figure one of them has to be able to make sense out of living with a girl, LOL.

I love Deliah and Corde facing off, it was written excellently.

Thank you! Have I mentioned that I miss Morrigan?

And then there's Syn's suggestion to toss Calixte out an airlock... a great little comment.

Hee! Couldn’t resist. grin

Your attention to detail makes the whole story feel very real. I think I both laughed out loud and cried with the desire to give Deliah a big hug... Lucky for me Jariah is there to do that.

Thank you very much! You’re too sweet. hugs We all need a Jariah, don’t we?



NanaV: Your writing never fails to inspire me, and amaze me! You really bring these characters to vivid life.

You’re making me blush. blush Thank you!!



Nicki: You used the canon framework and made this so believable.

Thank you! hugs The mental gymnastics were fun – I’m glad it ‘worked.’ silly

I loved this. I can't pick out one thing that I loved more than another. Cade may start getting jealous, though, if you keep writing Blue/Syn so well.

blush I really gotta make it up to Cade… mischief He deserves some love after having the decency to be miserable about almost losing his girl and for putting on his big boy britches to talk it out with her. wink



Thanks again to everyone who stopped by! rose




 

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