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Klimt_Of_Tornesdal Registered: Dec '99	Date Posted: 9/15/08 3:42am Subject: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	This was my ownn small attempt at a response to the latest MMM, which contained a First Sentence Challenge, and I just felt like working with something a little different. Hope you enjoy it. ============================== Of all the people he had hoped to see walk through that door, she was the very last one he had imagined would come to his rescue. After all, Iella had made it perfectly clear to Wedge before he went in that if he got himself in trouble, she wasn’t going to save him this time. Force knew she’d done it often enough in the past, but he was bound and determined that this time was going to be different, that this time the problem was one he could deal with on his own. He really should have known better. He was in over his head, and there were no two ways about it. Despite how easy others had made it look in his briefings, the components he needed to assemble to complete his mission just wouldn’t fit together the way they were supposed to. To make matters worse the very air seemed to be growing more toxic, his stomach twisting at the stench in the air. He spared a glance at his wingman, laying in front of him and gazing at the roof with a sort of dreamy fascination, and Wedge gave her hand a gentle squeeze. “Hang in there, buddy. We’ll get you cleaned up and out of here good as new.” A soft gurgle was the only response he got, and he felt a fresh sense of despair. All the training he had done, all the missions he had served, none of it was doing him any good in his current environment. He could hear fresh voices from the room next door and the sound of approaching footsteps, and knew his luck had run out. Scrabbling through the supplies next to him until he found what he was looking for, he was bringing it to bear when he was betrayed by his own body. He let loose with an almighty sneeze and his hands convulsed around the container he was holding, causing a cloud of white powder to erupt from within and coat his face. He coughed and waved his hands desperately, trying to clear the air, and by the time he had done so the door to the room he was in had hissed open and a familiar form in white was standing in the doorway. He knew he was out of options, and there was only one thing he could do. He raised his hands in surrender as he shrugged and smiled weakly. "...help?..." Iella stood there shaking her head in disgust, a hand on her hip. "Unbelievable. You can fly through a black hole without scratching the paint on your ship and take over the most defended planet in the sector with a handful of pilots and four snubfighters, but ask you to change one dirty diaper..." “It isn’t exactly something they train you to deal with in the New Republic Armed Forces.” Wedge observed dryly, as his wife bumped him to one side and took over. Lifting Syal’s feet with one hand, she wiped away the mess and slid a clean cloth into position, deftly securing it with the ease only mothers can have. She slid a new pair of pants on her daughter and bent down over her, rubbing their noses together before lifting her off the table as Syal squealed with delight. “Silly daddy, not knowing how to change your bottom.” She looked at Wedge with a raised eyebrow. “I’ll leave you to clean up the mess. You could do with the practice.” “Yes dear.” He began moving around the room putting things away as Iella and Syal exited, and being distracted meant it took a few seconds for him to register what she said as she left. “Besides, you’ll need to know how to do it properly if we’re having another one.” <...wipes go on the middle shelf, powder next to them, dirty clothes go... another one...?> -----signature----- "It's not, 'Oh, they killed Anakin Solo and I always loved that character,' it's 'Oh, they broke a story engine that could have told a thousand stories in order to publish a single 'important' one.'"
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KELIA Title: The Pretty in Pink Fan Fic Manager Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 9/15/08 3:49am Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	That was wonderful! Silly daddy, not knowing how to change your bottom Or smart daddy doing what ever he could to get out of it! Great response to the challenge -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no try." Master Yoda A Light In The Darkness: http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28150602/p1/?8 NaNaWriMo Progress: 11,018
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Abeja Registered: Apr '07	Date Posted: 9/15/08 4:00am Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	Oh...I loved this! Poor Wedge, of course, but changing baby diapers is really not so nice... And it's nice how you build the first sentence in the story. Well-done! -----signature----- e-sister of Rosa-Belle "Give every day the chance to become the best day of your life." http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=27935778&brd=10476&replies=0 Shadow Bird "It's worse than that." - Hobbie Klivian
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Mira_Jade Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 9/15/08 5:13am Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	I rarely read Pilot fics - just because I know so little about them, and then I clicked on this one, and I was glad I did. That was just too cute for words. I can see the whole scene playing out in my mind. Thanks for sharing with us! ~MJ -----signature----- E-sib to the utterly adorable and inspiring Jade_eyes!! . . . because Squee!s are better in pairs.
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earlybird-obi-wan Title: PT Scene Contest Winner Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 9/15/08 9:58am Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	Loved the humor in this one. A daddy changing a diaper. -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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Jade_eyes Registered: Aug '04	Date Posted: 9/15/08 11:53am Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	Oh, KLIMT!!!!! Too funny!!!! I kept thinking: what is Wedge gotten himself into??? Huggles!!! -----signature----- Spock/Nyota, woven forever together in gorgeous bonds of Nyota's "Cherished Moments" diary's gonna be hawt, hawt, melty! Squggles! [face_melting into 10 buckets!]
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MarasFire Registered: Jun '07	Date Posted: 9/15/08 4:34pm Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	I was wondering why Iella said she wouldn't rescue him, given their friendship and all that, and was expecting Wedge to be trapped in a life-or-death situation. Now Wedgey: after all you've been through, diaper changing is proving to be such a problem? This reminded me of that dad in Daddy Daycare who was traumatized after he changed his son's diaper. I really enjoyed this. -----signature----- It's better to laugh than to cry, don't you think? I do. Even when the world is scary and sad. Especially when the world is scary and sad. That's when you need to laugh. —Marco
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ginchy Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 9/15/08 7:47pm Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	Oh, poor Daddy!Wedge. His girls have got him over a barrel. Course, he wouldn't have it any other way! -----signature----- Positivity. ** Okay, seriously. It’s a Rebel Alliance t-shirt. It is NOT a fleur-de-lis.
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Irish_Jedi_Jade Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 9/16/08 10:54am Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	<...wipes go on the middle shelf, powder next to them, dirty clothes go... another one...?> LOL! So funny! You have such a talent to push me down a road, then YANK me to the ground, roll me down a hill and into the waters of an entirely different conclusion! I LOVED the beginning--so clever! Loved loved loved it! Irish -----signature----- Trading in my heels and dresses for combat boots and camouflage . . . Feb 17th - April 10th: Air Force Basic Military Training All stories, posts, and mushyness will be on hold until I get out - see you on the flip side! ~**~ Lots of love to everyone!
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Klimt_Of_Tornesdal Registered: Dec '99	Date Posted: 9/21/08 5:40am Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	Hey guys, glad to see everyone enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun writing this one. KELIA: Silly daddy, not knowing how to change your bottom... Or smart daddy doing what ever he could to get out of it! I'm just gonna stick with pleading the fifth on that one. Abeja: Oh...I loved this! Poor Wedge, of course, but changing baby diapers is really not so nice... Luckily I'm just an uncle, so I haven't had to worry about it so far. Mira_Jade: I rarely read Pilot fics - just because I know so little about them, and then I clicked on this one, and I was glad I did. That was just too cute for words. I can see the whole scene playing out in my mind. Hey Mira, thanks for choosing to stop by and read. Hopefully you can find some more to enjoy. earlybird_obi_wan: Loved the humor in this one. A daddy changing a diaper. Yeah, I really like the idea of going with the simple everyday moments and making stories out of them. It can make for some of the best fics IMO. Jade_eyes: Oh, KLIMT!!!!! Too funny!!!! I kept thinking: what is Wedge gotten himself into??? LOL You can never be too sure what that boy will get up to next. MarasFire: I was wondering why Iella said she wouldn't rescue him, given their friendship and all that, and was expecting Wedge to be trapped in a life-or-death situation. Now Wedgey: after all you've been through, diaper changing is proving to be such a problem? Heck, even as good as he is, Wedge still has his limitations. Or so he says. ginchy: Oh, poor Daddy Wedge. His girls have got him over a barrel. I would imagine you could say that about most guys with daughters. Irish_Jedi_Jade: So funny! You have such a talent to push me down a road, then YANK me to the ground, roll me down a hill and into the waters of an entirely different conclusion! I LOVED the beginning--so clever! Thanks mate, it's nice to know I cann still surprise people with what I come up with. -----signature----- "It's not, 'Oh, they killed Anakin Solo and I always loved that character,' it's 'Oh, they broke a story engine that could have told a thousand stories in order to publish a single 'important' one.'"
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divapilot Registered: Nov '05	Date Posted: 9/21/08 2:59pm Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	This was precious! I loved how you misdirected there at the beginning. It took me a little while to figure it out. -----signature----- Never tell me the odds. UConn: Huskies forever! RIP Jasper Howard, #6 "Focus on what matters. It's about the GAME, not each other. Dumb humans."
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Klimt_Of_Tornesdal Registered: Dec '99	Date Posted: 12/2/08 4:08am Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	divapilot posted: This was precious! I loved how you misdirected there at the beginning. It took me a little while to figure it out. Hey diva, thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it. -----signature----- "It's not, 'Oh, they killed Anakin Solo and I always loved that character,' it's 'Oh, they broke a story engine that could have told a thousand stories in order to publish a single 'important' one.'"
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Jag4Me Title: C&G and FCC Game Hostess Registered: Jan '08	Date Posted: 12/2/08 1:31pm Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	This is darling! I love Wedge and Iella and your story sounds just like something that would happen in their home. -----signature----- The Other Innocent Diva Twin Master to EnviousSerious-Rue "I only have moral and ethical objections to something if I'm not being included." - Darth_wanderguard Darth_wanderguard is mine
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thusspakezarathustra Registered: May '06	Date Posted: 12/3/08 9:11pm Subject: RE: Rescue Me - Wedge/Iella - MMM VIII
	Iella stood there shaking her head in disgust, a hand on her hip. "Unbelievable. You can fly through a black hole without scratching the paint on your ship and take over the most defended planet in the sector with a handful of pilots and four snubfighters, but ask you to change one dirty diaper..." Of course not, he's just a bloke. “It isn’t exactly something they train you to deal with in the New Republic Armed Forces.” Yeah - pack of sissies. They can't handle the really tough jobs. (no pun intended) Cool job. -----signature----- Life is just one damned thing after another - Jerome K. Jerome
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