G__Anakin posted:Looks interesting!
star_writer24 posted:You caught my attention! Looking forward to more.
Jek_Windu posted:I'd like to see where this goes.
Jade_eyes posted:Oh I like this already!!! Looking forward to more & of course to the mush
Cei posted:“Emperor’s black bones.” “Dammit, Jaroth!” Piani balled her hand into a fist. “One more time and I will punch you in the face.” Jaroth laughed. “You’ll have to reach me first.”
PrincessBrookSolo posted:ok this deserves an anakin solo grin =T great post can't wait for more
ImperialSolo posted:Ooohh, naked Anakin... Yep, naked Anakin. I knew you'd like that. LOL Intriguing start. Loved the bitchy banter and the unapologetic attitude! I don't usually like OCs that much, but those guys seem like fun. They are fun. At least in my head they are. I have one question, though. What nature is that guaranteed mush of and when will we get it? Well I can't tell you that now! That would ruin everything, wouldn't it? Oh, another question: When is this set? I honestly don't know. Sometime after the Vong War. Cei posted:“Emperor’s black bones.” “Dammit, Jaroth!” Piani balled her hand into a fist. “One more time and I will punch you in the face.” Jaroth laughed. “You’ll have to reach me first.” When can we expect more? Soon I hope. I'm working on it right now but life has been very, very stressful. Edit: A whole lot of mush? Bring it on! *bringing it* S
Maggy posted:I suppose you leave me no other chance to stop by Of course not. I would annoyed until you dropped by anyway. It was my pleasure to help you and as I can see you write so very quickly shocking!!! Seriously. Fly by anytime you need help, pondering and bouncing ideas is always helpful It really is. Of course there are times, like right now, that my muse takes a loooong break. But she'll be back. It’s for sure not Reila’s day. I like how the irony bites here with her sending moisture evaporators to Tattoine XD. I’m sure she wants to punch this Mister Hunter for his rudeness Too bad that she turns down this Jensen he sounds cute and nice But then I know whom you had in mind while you wrote that *chuckles* Of course! Come on! Jensen Ackles is so frickin adorable, I just needed him in a story. “Where am I?” It’s a void, nothing and everything - some call it the Force She whispered softly, hugging herself against an imaginary cold. Shivering she took a few steps forward, her bare feet touching warm ground. Her eyes wandered upward and even above her, where she would have expected to find a ceiling or perhaps a sky, there was only white. Reila being more the woman she is usually - barefooted. Boots got invented by the Sith after all I can relate with her. I don't like shoes either. “Where am I.” She said again, feeling fear creep up her spine. “Everywhere.” Isn’t that what I said? Reila whirled around, shocked to hear a new voice echo through the vast nothingness. A deep, male voice – a voice she’s heard before. A voice she had thought she’d never hear again. Her heart raced beneath her chest. “Who are you?” Silly question when she already recognized the voice But she doesn't believe it. Or doesn't want to believe it. “You know who I am.” A hand touched down on her shoulder and she shied away, turning around to glare at the stranger. But all the fight left within her died when she saw the young man coming toward her. It was like he walked straight out of her memory. The same handsome face, the same disheveled brown hair, the same cocky smile… Tears stung her eyes, blurring her vision. Her hands shook as she let her arms fall to her sides. “This can’t be real.” She whispered shaking her head. “You’re dead.” Is he? XD he can be in her dreams, can’t he not ... silly girl “Am I?” A crooked grin surfaced on the young man’s face, his light blue eyes twinkling with mischief. By the Gods, she’d missed that smile. “This isn’t real.” Reila hardly heard her own voice. “I saw you die …” Did she? And then, just like that, she broke down and began to cry. She fell to her knees, overwhelmed by the tidal wave of emotions threatening to tear her apart. Why would her mind conjure up such a dream? “There’s always a second chance.” He crouched before her and reached out with a hand, lifting her chin with the tip of his fingers. “Everyone deserves a second chance.” I am all for it “I messed up.” Reila croaked, tears streaming down her face as she stared into the light blue eyes of the man she loved, of the man who’d given his life to save his friends. “We all mess up. But we can make it right again. I… have to make it right again. And I need your help.” Remember - You two are better than the sum of your parts. Together, you two could Oh yeah, that's right. The furry little white animal Jedi Master thing said this, right? Reila frowned and wiped her cheeks with the back of her hand. “I don’t understand.” He smiled. “Find me and you will.” Yes yes listen to him you should “Find you? I don’t –“ In a blink of an eye, he vanished leaving Reila alone in a world of white nothingness. She knelt for a long moment hugging herself, not daring to move, not daring to make a sound. All she did was breath. All is set into motion now Mhm. *** Find me…I need your help… Help me, Reila Hivita, you’re my only hope .... Ha ha ha. It was time for Tahiri Veila to return. Let the adventure begin ... fantastic. Thank you.
star_writer24 posted:Thank you for the PM! This looks awesome! You're welcome and thanks!
Jade_eyes posted:Yum! Yay! Delightful update. Great closing line there. Thanks for the update PM. Yes, please keep me on the list. Thanks. Glad you liked the update.