Author Topic: Fan Fiction: New Ending
jengafett  1059 posts
Registered: Oct '04
6069_Jango Fett
Date Posted: 11/28/04 12:23pm Subject: Fan Fiction: New Ending - Date Edited: 11/28/04 12:44pm (1 edits total) Edited By: TwiLekJedi
NOTE: Carry on the story afterwards and we can make a brilliant infinities.

SCENE: DEATH STAR II. AS PALPATINE IS ELECTRICUTING LUKE, VADER WATCHES IN DESPAIR. EVENTUALLY HE PICKS UP PALPATINE AND THEN THROWS HIM IN THE SHAFT BY LUKE. VADER RECIEVES MINOR DAMAGE. LUKE CRUMBLES TO HIS FEET.

LUKE: Father...

VADER: Luke, you must go. Your friends are waiting for you.

LUKE: I'm not leaving without you father.

VADER: Luke, you cannot expect me to be welcomed in open arms by the rebellion.

*THE PLACE RATTLES*

LUKE: Your coming with me. I don't care what the rebellion thinks. Your a hero, you destroyed the Emperor. Now lets go.

SCENE: THE SHUTTLE AREA. AS VADER AND LUKE LEAVE. MOFF JJEROD SEES THEM. HE CRUMBLES TO VADER.

JJEROD: I'm sorry, m'lord. I...I,

VADER: Leave me. And leave this battle station. If we stay we will all die commander.

*CONFUSED, JJEROD RUNS OFF. VADER AND LUKE ENTER A SHUTTLE AND LEAVE THE DEATH STAR AS IT BLOWS UP*

SCENE: ENDOR. AS PEOPLE CELEBRATE. THE SHUTTLE LANDS IN THE DISTANCE. VADER AND LUKE LOOK THROUGH THE BUSHES AT THE PARTY.

VADER: Leia...

LUKE: Yes father. She's your daughter and my sister.

VADER: Funny, I only just realized how much she looks like your mother.

LUKE: Let's go a meet them...

PLEASE CONTINUE...


TLJ Edit: We do have a FanFiction Forum (several, actually). I'm not sure whether they allow this kind of writing a story though. If not, try Star Wars Community

 

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Manchester_City-X  107 posts
Registered: Oct '04
8032_Darth Vader
Date Posted: 11/28/04 12:26pm Subject: RE: Fan Fiction: New Ending
Luke walks through the bushes and hugs Leia and Han.

Luke: Hey everyone I brought a special guest to the party

Vader walks through the bushes........

 

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jengafett  1059 posts
Registered: Oct '04
6069_Jango Fett
Date Posted: 11/28/04 12:27pm Subject: RE: Fan Fiction: New Ending
*EVERYONE JUMPS. EWOKS JUMP. AND THE REBELS RELEASE THEIR BLASTERS AND AIM AT VADER*

LUKE: Stop...

 

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darthinweymouth 
Registered: Nov '04
23041_Anakin's Ghost<br>Hayden
Date Posted: 11/28/04 12:38pm Subject: RE: Fan Fiction: New Ending
"VADER: Funny, I only just realized how much she looks like your mother. "
sorry, that's a funny line.

 

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jengafett  1059 posts
Registered: Oct '04
6069_Jango Fett
Date Posted: 11/28/04 12:41pm Subject: RE: Fan Fiction: New Ending
well this is a great excuse to have Vader tell of Padme and tell Threepio that he made him.
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HAN: Stop? Luke what's wrong with you?

LUKE: You cannot touch him.

HAN: Why not?

LUKE: He saved us. *to everyone* It was this man...my father who killed the Emperor.

WEDGE: What!

LANDO: Your father....

 

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