Author Topic: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest: Congratulations JarJarJedi!
GuNgAnFaN3090  6699 posts
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Date Posted: 12/31/08 12:15pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 1 - Congratulations JEDIGUNSHIP!
Congrats JediGunship!!!!!!!!!! Your stories were awesome! You truly earned those colors!

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BigBoy29  762 posts
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Date Posted: 12/31/08 2:54pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 1 - Congratulations JEDIGUNSHIP!
Excellent job!

 

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jedimasterbac  6231 posts
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Date Posted: 12/31/08 4:53pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 1 - Congratulations JEDIGUNSHIP!
I plan to begin round two on Saturday, just to give some time after New Years.

 

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Rogue...Jedi  17307 posts
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Date Posted: 12/31/08 11:50pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 1 - Congratulations JEDIGUNSHIP!
Congrats, Gunny! Your first was quite good and the tiebreaker was hilarious.

 

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jedimasterbac  6231 posts
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Date Posted: 1/9 9:09am Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 1 - Congratulations JEDIGUNSHIP!
Sorry for the delay. I just had my wisdom teeth pulled the other day so I'm taking it easy. I hope to have the new scene up either today or tomorrow.

 

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GuNgAnFaN3090  6699 posts
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Date Posted: 1/9 3:57pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 1 - Congratulations JEDIGUNSHIP!
I can't wait to see what the next scene is. grin

 

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jedimasterbac  6231 posts
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Date Posted: 1/9 4:36pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 1 - Congratulations JEDIGUNSHIP! - Date Edited: 1/9 4:37pm (1 edits total) Edited By: jedimasterbac
The CT Scene Rewrite Contest, Game 2: I love you, Jenny

Now obviously "I love you, Jenny" is from the film Forrest Gump, but the name "Jenny" is also the name of a deleted character from Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope. Jenny is a girl that Han Solo hangs out with and kisses in the Mos Eisley cantina in the original cut of Star Wars. That's all that's really known, but here's a picture:



Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to write a scene or sequence with Han Solo and Jenny in Tatooine just before Chewbacca introduces Han to Luke Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi. You can write it however you want (script, narrative, haiku, whatever), so long as it meets the 100 word minimum, and you can write whatever you want. There are no restrictions other than what I've already told you.

Scenes are due in on Thursday, January 15th at 11:59pm BOARD TIME/PACIFIC STANDARD TIME, after which point a poll will be started to vote for the winner. If you have any questions, please let me know. Good luck!

I also just want to note that despite my previous challenge to him, TwiLekJedi did NOT enter the contest, despite his scene suggestion being what became the first round of this game. I am once again challenging him, in public, to enter this contest or face public humiliation for being a coward. Your choice, my friend. tongue

 

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GuNgAnFaN3090  6699 posts
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Date Posted: 1/9 5:41pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 2 - I Love You Jenny
Hmmmm, I'll have to meditate on whether or not to enter this one.... thinking

 

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TwiLekJedi  69989 posts
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Date Posted: 1/10 8:39am Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 2 - I Love You Jenny
Haiku, you say thinking

Solo kissed Jenny
Not wanting to be solo
Jenny felt the same

The twin suns shone down
Splitting their sweaty embrace
Seek shade, hand in hand

Chalmun's Cantina
Not at all a place of love
Solitude sufficed

Drinks to wet their lips
"We're gonna need'em today"
Cue lopsided grin

Then, a fight broke out!
Flashes of light, limbs flying!
But Han worried not

Chewie had their backs
Nothing would disturb the two
Just keep making out

This joy is fleeting
It's the Wookiee who disturbs
Big dumb hairy oaf

Unbelievable!
Jenny hightails at Han's words:
"Business comes first, babe"

 

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jedimasterbac  6231 posts
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Date Posted: 1/10 8:46am Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 2 - I Love You Jenny
TwiLekJedi posted:
Haiku, you say thinking

Solo kissed Jenny
Not wanting to be solo
Jenny felt the same

The twin suns shone down
Splitting their sweaty embrace
Seek shade, hand in hand

Chalmun's Cantina
Not at all a place of love
Solitude sufficed

Drinks to wet their lips
"We're gonna need'em today"
Cue lopsided grin

Then, a fight broke out!
Flashes of light, limbs flying!
But Han worried not

Chewie had their backs
Nothing would disturb the two
Just keep making out

This joy is fleeting
It's the Wookiee who disturbs
Big dumb hairy oaf

Unbelievable!
Jenny hightails at Han's words:
"Business comes first, babe"



Unfortunately, this entry is only 99 words. You're going to need to add in one more word in order for this to count. laugh

 

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TwiLekJedi  69989 posts
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Date Posted: 1/10 2:42pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 2 - I Love You Jenny
Do you know how hard it was to keep it barely under 100 words? tongue I needed a thesaurus. Damn phrasal verbs.

 

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jedimasterbac  6231 posts
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Date Posted: 1/10 6:54pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 2 - I Love You Jenny
No excuses! angry tongue

 

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Darth Dark Helmet  11247 posts
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Date Posted: 1/11 3:49pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 2 - I Love You Jenny
An entry of my own

Dear Jenny,

Hey, Babe. How have you been? Listen, I'm sorry I haven't written in awhile. Things just got kind of crazy, you know? I mean, I took that charter, you know the one, fly some old guy and his kid to Alderaan. I swear I thought it would be just a quick trip. Drop them off, get paid, and be back in bed with you, free and clear from Jabba in a week. Well, it took a bit longer. Who knew we'd have rescue a Princess? And you can't blame me for that. She's rich, and you know how much I like rich damsels in distress. So, long story short, rescued her, and got paid. Then, I got a little sidetracked. Had to help blow up the Death Star, and next thing you know, I'm a part of this thing. I just can't leave, and with all the travel, its been hard to get word to you, let you know what's going on. I meant to write, I really did. But then there was that Bounty Hunter at Ord Mandrell, and you know how it goes.

But, I finally got some time. Right now, I'm sitting in the Falcon, making a long trip at sub-light speeds to see Lando at Bespin. The hyperdrive's being a pain in my ass, and I hope he can fix it. I know, its Lando, but here's hoping he's let bygones be bygones. Besides, Chewie's really starting to stink. I mean, he's my life partner, but stick him in a cramped freighter for three months, and he's not near as fun to be around.

But, the real reason I'm writing here, is that I think we should break up. Its not you, you're great, I had a lot of fun with you. But, there's this Princess. The one I rescued. She can be a bit of a nag at times, wants to discuss everything as a committee, but other then that, she's not bad. Plus, she's rich. Look, I'm sorry to do this way, but things are hectic, I don't have time to stop by and see you. Maybe after I get done with Lando, I'll have some free time, and we can talk. Face to face. Just don't get all mushy on me.

So, I should finish up here. I hope we can still be friends.

Han.

 

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jedimasterbac  6231 posts
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Date Posted: 1/11 4:10pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 2 - I Love You Jenny
Awesome entry. laugh

 

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GuNgAnFaN3090  6699 posts
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Date Posted: 1/11 5:15pm Subject: RE: The Classic Trilogy Scene Rewrite Contest, Version 2.0: Game 2 - I Love You Jenny
Okay, you've got my vote Darth Dark Helmet! applause laugh applause laugh

That was hilarious!

 

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