Author Topic: A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2
Persephone_Kore  1057 posts
Title: TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor
Registered: Jan '06
40101_Jedi Temple
Date Posted: 8/23/08 11:08am Subject: A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2 - Date Edited: 8/23/08 11:09am (1 edits total) Edited By: Persephone_Kore
Title: A Rose in the Ashes
Author: Persephone_Kore
Timeframe: RotS-RotJ, mostly
Characters: Anakin/Vader, others referenced
Genre: Poetry
Keywords: Anakin, burn, thorn
Summary: A poem about Anakin (does anyone else start to feel I'm repeating myself?) and his sorrows, fall, and redemption.
Notes: Written for the Writer with the Force Challenge #2, to use one of the episode titles from the first season of Andromeda.

A rose in the ashes
A spark in the damp
Dry tears under lashes
And thorns in his grasp

A rose in the ashes
Lies redder than flame
And redder than torn lips
That shape a dead name.

A rose in the ashes
A red saber burns.
The lightning still flashes
And shadows still turn.

A rose in the ashes!
Not fallen, but grown.
From blood and the burning,
A bright son has shone.

A rose in the ashes,
In darkness, a light,
Below, thunder crashes,
A dawn to the night.

 

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ratna  1563 posts
Registered: Mar '07
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Date Posted: 8/23/08 1:02pm Subject: RE: A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2
Poetry is hard.

You did a nice job. rose

 

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earlybird-obi-wan  5884 posts
Registered: Aug '06
48019_Fan Art - Obi-Wan and Siri
Date Posted: 8/23/08 1:03pm Subject: RE: A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2
Lovely poetry applause applause

 

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Lady_Skywalker87  394 posts
Registered: Aug '08
48387_Anakin and Padme (50809)
Date Posted: 8/23/08 5:10pm Subject: RE: A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2
lovely, just lovely! love cry ...Well written too! applause

 

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5/19/09:10 Years of the Beginngi!4 Years of the End!
Attachment:a feeling that binds one to a person, thing, cause, ideal, or the like; devotion; regard.Attachment itself is not the problem.The prob is attaching yourself like Ani did!
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Persephone_Kore  1057 posts
Title: TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor
Registered: Jan '06
40101_Jedi Temple
Date Posted: 8/27/08 1:50pm Subject: RE: A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2
ratna: Thanks. happy I confess, in this particular case -- given the nature of the prompt phrases, and the word limit, and the ideas that came to my mind -- the poetry may have been easier than trying to produce an appropriate vignette. *grin*

earlybird-obi-wan: Thank you. happy

Lady_Skywalker87: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

 

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