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A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2
Persephone_Kore
Title:
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Registered:
Jan '06
Date Posted:
8/23/08 11:08am
Subject:
A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2
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Date Edited:
8/23/08 11:09am
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Edited By:
Persephone_Kore
Title:
A Rose in the Ashes
Author:
Persephone_Kore
Timeframe:
RotS-RotJ, mostly
Characters:
Anakin/Vader, others referenced
Genre:
Poetry
Keywords:
Anakin, burn, thorn
Summary:
A poem about Anakin (does anyone else start to feel I'm repeating myself?) and his sorrows, fall, and redemption.
Notes:
Written for the Writer with the Force Challenge #2, to use one of the episode titles from the first season of
Andromeda
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A rose in the ashes
A spark in the damp
Dry tears under lashes
And thorns in his grasp
A rose in the ashes
Lies redder than flame
And redder than torn lips
That shape a dead name.
A rose in the ashes
A red saber burns.
The lightning still flashes
And shadows still turn.
A rose in the ashes!
Not fallen, but grown.
From blood and the burning,
A bright son has shone.
A rose in the ashes,
In darkness, a light,
Below, thunder crashes,
A dawn to the night.
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Protégé: Chosen:
http://boards.theforce.net/f/b1/28612428
Protégé: Padawans:
http://boards.theforce.net/f/b1/29531610
A Rose in the Ashes:
http://boards.theforce.net/f/b1/29028814
Lost Ones:
http://boards.theforce.net/f/b1/29061459
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ratna
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Mar '07
Date Posted:
8/23/08 1:02pm
Subject:
RE: A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2
Poetry is hard.
You did a nice job.
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“What we measure affects what we do. If we have the wrong metrics, we will strive for the wrong things.”
Joseph E. Stiglitz
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earlybird-obi-wan
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Aug '06
Date Posted:
8/23/08 1:03pm
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RE: A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2
Lovely poetry
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writer and Star Wars fan
FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link]
stories in my bio
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Lady_Skywalker87
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Aug '08
Date Posted:
8/23/08 5:10pm
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RE: A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2
lovely, just lovely!
...Well written too!
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5/19/09:10 Years of the Beginngi!4 Years of the End!
Attachment:a feeling that binds one to a person, thing, cause, ideal, or the like; devotion; regard.Attachment itself is not the problem.The prob is attaching yourself like Ani did!
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Persephone_Kore
Title:
TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor
Registered:
Jan '06
Date Posted:
8/27/08 1:50pm
Subject:
RE: A Rose in the Ashes (poem, Anakin/Vader); written for WWF Challenge 2
ratna:
Thanks.
I confess, in this particular case -- given the nature of the prompt phrases, and the word limit, and the ideas that came to my mind -- the poetry may have been easier than trying to produce an appropriate vignette. *grin*
earlybird-obi-wan:
Thank you.
Lady_Skywalker87:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
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Protégé: Chosen:
http://boards.theforce.net/f/b1/28612428
Protégé: Padawans:
http://boards.theforce.net/f/b1/29531610
A Rose in the Ashes:
http://boards.theforce.net/f/b1/29028814
Lost Ones:
http://boards.theforce.net/f/b1/29061459
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