Author Topic: Kiyuuchan's Anime *update 3/23*Mother's day theme, Leia/Jaina, others. And Ben Skywalker ^^
HanSolo29  14559 posts
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Date Posted: 12/8/08 9:18pm Subject: Kiyuuchan *Han, leia, Allana - scene from fury. Concrit needed, please help loooool !*
Argh! This is too weird!

I was hoping the image would work in this thread, but when I click on it, all I see is a big "X". I'm guessing Imageshack doesn't like me. sad

 

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Kiyuuchan  274 posts
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43748_Princess Leia
Date Posted: 12/8/08 11:59pm Subject: Kiyuuchan *Han, leia, Allana - scene from fury. Concrit needed, please help loooool !* - Date Edited: 12/28/08 8:10am (1 edits total) Edited By: Kiyuuchan
Thank U earlybird, I will take your advice and work more on Allana ^____^

HanSolo29 posted:
Argh! This is too weird!

I was hoping the image would work in this thread, but when I click on it, all I see is a big "X". I'm guessing Imageshack doesn't like me. sad


Woooooooooow ! hypnotized this is weird
For you I have photobucket link praying

 

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Idrelle_Miocovani  8992 posts
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Date Posted: 12/9/08 6:58am Subject: Kiyuuchan *Han, leia, Allana - scene from fury. Concrit needed, please help loooool !*
Wow, I can't wait to see what this looks like when coloured!

Han looks like the portrait you just finished, which is great. I love Leia and the details in her hair (the braids). Allana is adorable already. love

My only concern would be that -- and I guess this depends a lot on the colouring when you add that -- is that Leia and Han look a little young. Like ANH young. Again, that could totally change with the colouring, but right now I'm seeing Tenel Ka and Jacen more than Han and Leia. tongue

 

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HanSolo29  14559 posts
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Date Posted: 12/9/08 6:23pm Subject: Kiyuuchan *Han, leia, Allana - scene from fury. Concrit needed, please help loooool !*
Argh...still wasn't showing up. I finally gave up and gave the link to my cousin to see if he could see it. Sure enough, it worked for him so he ended up sending it back to me via e-mail. So, after all of that, I was able to finally see it. wink

With that said, I agree with everyone else's assessment so far. Han pretty much looks like the last image you have of him, so no worries there. What does bother me somewhat is the age you made him in this image. If they are supposed to be grandparents, they look way too young. I think a major part of that is the length and style of Han's hair and the lack of any lines on his face. I know it's nice to believe that the characters(and ourselves tongue ) never age, but that's not realistic. Then again, I know you're not going for perfect realism with your style, so maybe that's part of it. But going back to what Idrelle said, maybe things will change once the color goes down. I'll save judgment until I see the final piece. wink But overall, great composition and of course, I love the subject matter. Can't wait to see it finished! happy

 

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AzureAngel2  9807 posts
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Date Posted: 12/10/08 2:46pm Subject: Kiyuuchan *Han, leia, Allana - scene from fury. Concrit needed, please help loooool !*
I can not see it either.

 

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Kiyuuchan  274 posts
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Date Posted: 12/10/08 2:54pm Subject: Kiyuuchan *Han, leia, Allana - scene from fury. Concrit needed, please help loooool !* - Date Edited: 12/28/08 8:20am (3 edits total) Edited By: Kiyuuchan
I'm worried now that more people can't see it... I have no idea how to fix this sad

Thank U very much Idri-chan and Han-sama, what you said is very helpful ^___^

I was thinking they look too young... well, no doubt on that loooool ! ^^
In my colouring I give them a few wrinkles lol ^___^

Han-sama> your story amazes me ! tongue Truly I am very grateful for you going to so much trouble to help me hugs

 

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FalconFan  3727 posts
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Date Posted: 12/11/08 7:39pm Subject: Kiyuuchan *Han, leia, Allana - scene from fury. Concrit needed, please help loooool !*
**is heartbroken**

Oh, my! I can't bring up either picture of the "Grandparents" piece, and I so wanted to see it! cry I'm not certain, but I do know my own browser can be very "glitchy" when it comes to addresses, and sometimes has a problem "getting there..." It could be just the wrong time of night for me--I'll certainly try again at a later time!

Not to worry, Kiyuuchan--this can sometimes happen!

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Kiyuuchan  274 posts
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Date Posted: 12/12/08 1:56pm Subject: Kiyuuchan *Han, leia, Allana - scene from fury. Concrit needed, please help loooool !*
Whooooooaaaaa !! now even I can't see it !
too weird, too funny laugh I'm so confused

It seem to be just the one. Still I am afraid for the future sad

sorry falcon-sama, I will go back try to change the links.

 

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Idrelle_Miocovani  8992 posts
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Date Posted: 12/13/08 10:29am Subject: Kiyuuchan *Han, leia, Allana - scene from fury. Concrit needed, please help loooool !*
I'm confused too, since I have always -- and still can -- see it perfectly. laugh

 

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Kiyuuchan  274 posts
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43748_Princess Leia
Date Posted: 12/13/08 11:42am Subject: Kiyuuchan *Han, leia, Allana - scene from fury. Concrit needed, please help loooool !* - Date Edited: 12/14/08 1:25pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Kiyuuchan
^^ laugh

hope this works praying

Grandparents


from a scene in LotF: Fury the solos see their granddaughter for the first time ! love
I been wanting to draw the scene for a long time ^__^

I want to say thank you > arigatouuuuuuuuuuu wink to everyone who support me here. U motivate me to do fan art !! This is for U kiss

The Jedi are like shinobi in my imagination, so yes that is a kimono Leia wears wink

well I wait anxiously for your response worried and if U can see it

 

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Tahi  5750 posts
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Date Posted: 12/14/08 9:25pm Subject: Kiyuuchan *update 12/13 grandparents color**solos,allana*
I like Leia in the kimono - it suits her somehow. happy Her eyes are beautifully done. I can see relief but also hidden pain - even a little shock, maybe at the fact she hasn't known she has this lovely granddaughter. (I'm thinking of how in Betrayal she told Jacen she was ready for grandkids.) Anyway - there are a number of emotions in there. happy

Alana is very cute - mischievous looking, and so happy to feel safe and be held. Poor wee girl. I like that she's holding the soft toy and the way you've drawn it clutched between her and Leia is very real. Alana doesn't want to let that toy go even now. It emphasises the warmth she needs and has often missed out on.

Han - I love the look in his eyes. It's pure wonder and awe - and his hand is touching Alana's hair as if he cannot believ she's real. That's so poignant. I like the pose with Han's arms around both Leia and Alana. It's very protective and loving. happy (The one thing I would note is that possibly Han's face could be aged a little more.)

I also noticed the stars around Leia and Han and on their hair - a kind of symbol of hope and love. happy

It's a very warm picture - and emotional. Very lovely. applause

 

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HanSolo29  14559 posts
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Date Posted: 12/14/08 11:01pm Subject: Kiyuuchan *update 12/13 grandparents color**solos,allana*
Yup! This one works! grin


This really came out great, Kiyuuchan! The method in which you colored it and the colors themselves really bring it alive. The light glow and the stars you placed around each character's head works really well. That was a nice touch! Overall, nicely done! Instantly one of my favorites! happy

 

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earlybird-obi-wan  5852 posts
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Date Posted: 12/15/08 10:25am Subject: Kiyuuchan *update 12/13 grandparents color**solos,allana*
Now it's real with that sweet colours and stars. Great job on this and matching the others in that style.

 

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Kiyuuchan  274 posts
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Date Posted: 12/16/08 12:46pm Subject: Kiyuuchan *update 12/13 grandparents color**solos,allana* - Date Edited: 1/7 10:21am (3 edits total) Edited By: Kiyuuchan
Ohhhhhhhh can't say how happy I am that it works !! I was nervous lol
I'm so grateful for the thoughts on the sketch... and now the final... thankyouuuuuuuuuuu !! hugs

I have a plan for a little fanart for christmas mischief

Tahi-san > The Solos need Allana as much as she need them... they lost two sons cry to have a granddaughter it must bring hope for the future.

Han-sama > It's your favourite !! shock well I am most happy about that ^__^

 

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NYCitygurl  28182 posts
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Date Posted: 12/17/08 6:00pm Subject: RE: Kiyuuchan *update 12/13 grandparents color**solos,allana*
Yes, this one works for me! (the others didn't) LOvely piece happy

 

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